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I sat in my parents’ car. Mom had insisted I go with her to pick up Dad from work. Across from Dad’s office is a bike store. That was the day my eleven-year-old eyes first saw the purple BMX Mongoose bike. From that day on, all I could think about was that bike. I even drew pictures of the bike in class.
Every evening afterward, at five thirty, I eagerly went along with Mom to get Dad.And every day I told my parents,“I want that bike!” But they disagreed and replied that I had already had a perfectly good bike at home. I’d argue it was old and ugly, thinking that my happiness depended on that purple bike.
Days later, I found the store had sold that bike. I knew I’d never be happy again.
A week later, returning home from school, I tripped over something. Lying in the weeds near a river and some wooded lots, was a bike— the exact bike from the store. “Hey, whose bike is this ” I shouted, scanning the area. No one replied, and there was no one in sight. Maybe its owner didn’t want it any longer. I couldn’t leave it lying in the weeds. So I took it home and hid it behind the garage. Every day after school, I sat there, admiring it. But I didn’t feel like riding and didn’t feel as happy as I had thought. Thinking about the bike made my stomach tighten and uncomfortable.
A few days later, during lunch at school, my friend said,“Did you hear about Tyler, in the other fifth-grade class He lost his new purple BMX Mongoose bike he had just gotten for his birthday. He left it by a river while playing in the woods. It got dark, and he couldn’t find it.”
“I’d never go off and leave a new bike like that. He doesn’t deserve to have that bike,” I replied. My friend added, “Kids say he’s nice. And they say Tyler is upset because his dad worked overtime to buy the bike for him.” For the rest of the day, I couldn’t stop thinking about Tyler.
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After school, Ireturned home and dragged to my room.
“I know Tyler’s house,” Mom said. “I’ll drive you there.”
文本分析：
第一段讲作者的内心挣扎；第二段是故事的结尾，还车+承认错误。
主旨是诚实。
参考范文一，
After school, Ireturned home and dragged to my room. However, my friend’s words kept echoing in my mind, reminding me that the bike I found belonged to Tyler. Tossing and turning, I struggled mentally. I was dying for a new BMX Mongoose bike, but deep down, I was also clear that it was wrong and dishonest to keep what wasn’t mine. Finally, the conscience took the upper hand and I decided to follow my heart. I went downstairs and told mom everyting. Surprisingly, the moment the words came out, I felt a great burden lift from my shoulders and days of stress was gone instantly. Mom listened, criticizing me for hiding Tyler’s bike and urging me to return it.
“I know Tyler’s house,” Mom said. “I’ll drive you there.” Without hesitation, we took the bike, hopped in the car, and arrived at Tyler’s door. When seeing the bike, Tyler’s eyes lit up. Screaming and laughing, he sprang to his bike and then hugged me tightly. I explained to him that he had misplaced it near my room, not by a river. His father was also grateful to me for saving his loss. The most scaring thing was to confess my secret, but everbody, after the initial surprise, forgave me and praised me of my honesty and bravery. It was an unforgettable expeirence, reminding that honesty was the best policy and a clear conscience was invaluable.
放学后，我回到家里，拖着步子走进我的房间。然而，朋友的话一直在我的脑海中回响，提醒着我找到的自行车是属于Tyler的。我辗转反侧，心里挣扎着。我非常渴望一辆新的BMX Mongoose自行车，但内心深处，我也清楚保留不属于自己的东西是错误和不诚实的。最终，良心占了上风，我决定听从内心。我下楼告诉妈妈了一切。令人惊讶的是，当话语出口的那一刻，我感到一股巨大的压力从肩膀上解脱了，数天的紧张瞬间消失了。妈妈听了，批评我隐瞒了Tyler的自行车，并敦促我归还它。
“我知道Tyler家在哪里，”妈妈说。“我会开车送你去。”毫不犹豫，我们拿起自行车，跳进车里，来到了Tyler的门口。看到自行车，Tyler的眼睛亮了起来。他尖叫着笑了起来，跳到了自行车上，然后紧紧地拥抱了我。我向他解释，他把自行车遗失在我房间附近，而不是在河边。他的父亲也感激我挽救了他的损失。最可怕的是坦白我的秘密，但每个人，在最初的惊讶之后，都原谅了我，并称赞我诚实和勇敢。这是一次难忘的经历，提醒我诚实是上策，清白的良心是无价的。
参考范文二，
After school, I returned home and dragged to my room.The image of the purple BMX Mongoose bike lingered in my mind, but now it was accompanied by a nagging sense of guilt and shame. I couldn't shake off the thought of how hard Tyler's father must have worked to buy him that bike. Imagining him putting in extra hours at work, sacrificing time with his family just to see the joy on his son's face, made my stomach churn with guilt. That bike wasn't mine to claim. Finally, after a long conflicting thinking, I made up the mind to return the bike. Then I went down and confessed everything to mom, expecting a scold.
“I know Tyler’s house,” Mom said gently. “I’ll drive you there.”Relief flooded me when I heard it and lasted until we arrived at Tyler's house. With a heavy heart, I knocked on his door and explained what happened, apologizing profusely. Tyler's eyes widened in disbelief, then softened with gratitude. Returning the bike felt like lifting a weight off my shoulders. It wasn't about the bike anymore; it was about doing what was right and understanding the value of honesty and empathy. From that day on, I learned that true happiness comes from integrity and kindness, not material possessions.
表示作者紧张的心情：
1.Feeling a stab of guilt overwhelming me, I threw myself on the bed and buried my face in the pillow.感觉内疚在扎着我，我爬到床上，把脸埋在枕头里。
2.feel my stomach ached badly from the shame 因为羞愧感到胃痛
3.Tossing and turning, I struggled mentally.
4.accompanied by a nagging sense of guilt and shame，伴随着一种烦人的内疚和羞愧感
5.couldn't shake off the thought of 不能摆脱这种念头
表示作者放松的心情：
1.gathered all my courage and confessed everything 鼓起勇气，坦白一切
2.lift a weight off my shoulders 卸去重担
3.true happiness comes from integrity and kindness, not material possessions.真正的幸福来自于正直和善良，而不是物质财富

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