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Rising to reach for the book on the desk in the living room,Gudrun fell over her little brother,who had crawled out from underneath her chair.“Arnar!Why do you always have to be right under me ”
The five-year-old giggled."I was hiding,"he said,"and you found me."
“I'm not playing,”Gudrun scolded.“I'm knitting.And its time for you to go to bed.”Her parents had gone out for the evening,leaving Gudrun in charge.
“Let me hide once more,”Arnar begged.“Then I'll go to sleep,I promise.”
Gudrun couldn't help smiling.“Oh,all right.”She turned back to her knitting.“T'll look for you when I've finished this row.”
“Here's a clue,”Arnar called as he skipped away.“Look for me where I always am.”
But Gudrun was already absorbed in her work.
Gudrun wasn't sure what had awakened her in the middle of the night.Was it the urgency in Mamma's voice or the frightening and low rumble that rolled through her room Gudrun found herself suddenly wide awake,drawn to the window by a strange and unfamiliar brilliance outside.“An eruption,”Mamma said as she began to gather Gudrun's clothes.“Maybe Helgafell,maybe a new volcano.We must leave the island quickly."
“Tonight How ”Gudrun asked,her heart pounding.“Where will we go ”
“We're lucky.The fishing boats will take us to the mainland.”Mamma turned to face Gudrun.“Pabbi has already gone to the harbor.I'm going to help Margret."Their elderly neighbor lived alone.Mamma proceeded,“can you dress Arnar and take him to the harbor by yourself ”
“Of course,”she declared.Everyone would help tonight.Icelanders had always worked together to survive in a land ruled by volcanoes,glaciers,and ocean.
Gudrun dressed and ran to her brother's room.“Arnar!”she cried,“Wake up!”Hearing no response,Gudrun hurried to the bed and pulled back her brother's thick cover.
Paragraph 1:Arnar was't there!
Paragraph 2:There,curled around a worn stuffed bear,was Arnar,sound asleep.
参考范文1（官方范文）
Arnar wasn’t there! A knot of guilt formed in Gudrun’s stomach as she began to remember Arnar had run off to hide one last time. Soon after, she had fallen into her own bed, completely forgetting the game and her brother. “Arnar!” Gudrun screamed, looking under the child’s bed and in his closet. Tears burned her cheeks as the noise outside reminded Gudrun that this was no game. She raised a foot to stamp her fury into the floor, then froze as Arnar’s clue suddenly echoed through her mind: “He’s always right under me!” With a shout she dashed back to her own room. Falling to the floor, Gudrun peered under her bed.
There, curled around a worn stuffed bear, was Arnar, sound asleep. Without thinking twice, Gudrun dragged him out, scooped him up and rushed to the harbor. Hardly had she arrived there breathlessly when she spotted her anxious parents and Margret. Hours later, Pabbi’s boat pulled up to a harbor on the mainland. The deck was bustling with activity as the islanders prepared to go ashore. Arnar, still clutching his bear, slept peacefully in Gudrun’s lap. Gudrun shook him to wake up gently. Arnar rubbed his eyes, struggling to stand up and lost his balance, causing both of them to stumble. “I’m always right under you,” Arnar whimpered, half-asleep. Gudrun smiled and bent to whisper in his ear. “Never mind. You’re just where you belong.” The little boy reached for her hand. Gudrun grasped it firmly. Together, they followed Mamma off the boat.
阿纳尔不在那儿!当古娟想起阿纳尔最后一次跑去躲藏时，她的胃里形成了一种负罪感。没过多久，她就倒在了自己的床上，完全忘记了游戏和哥哥。“Arnar !”古德伦尖叫着，看了看孩子的床底下和壁橱里。当外面的噪音提醒古娟这不是游戏时，她的眼泪烧得脸颊通红。她抬起一只脚，愤怒地踩在地板上，然后僵住了，因为阿纳尔的线索突然在她脑海中回响:“他总是在我下面!”她大叫一声，冲回自己的房间。古娟倒在地板上，往床底下看了看。
阿纳尔蜷缩在一只破旧的毛绒熊周围，睡得很熟。不假思索，古德伦把他拖了出来，把他捞起来，冲进了港口。她刚到那儿当她看到焦虑的父母和玛格丽特时，她上气不接下气。几个小时后，帕比的船停在了大陆上的一个港口。当岛民准备上岸时，甲板上热闹非凡。阿纳尔仍然抱着他的熊，在古娟的腿上安详地睡着了。古娟轻轻地摇醒他。阿纳尔揉了揉眼睛，挣扎着站起来，却失去了平衡，两人都绊了一跤。“我总是在你下面。”阿纳半睡半醒地呜咽着说。古娟笑了笑，弯下腰在他耳边低语。“没关系。你就属于这里。”小男孩伸手去拉她的手。古娟牢牢地抓住了它。他们一起跟着妈妈下了船。
参考范文2（ChatGPT）
Arnar wasn't there! Panic surged through Gudrun as she scanned the room frantically. Then she remembered his hint from earlier in the evening – "Look for me where I always am." It was their little game, a phrase he used whenever he hid in his secret spot. Without wasting another second, Gudrun dashed to the linen closet, flung open the door, and there, nestled among the piles of blankets and pillows at the bottom of the closet, was Arnar, a contented smile on his lips as he slept in his favorite hideaway.
There, curled around a worn stuffed bear, was Arnar, sound asleep. Gudrun let out a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding. She gently shook her brother's shoulder. "Arnar, we have to go, now," she whispered urgently. His eyes fluttered open, confused at first, then wide with alarm as he sensed the urgency in his sister's voice. Quickly, he scrambled out from his cozy nest, clutching his bear tightly. Gudrun helped him into his warmest clothes and boots, explaining the situation as they went. "We're going on a little adventure," she said with a brave smile, hoping to ease his worries as they prepared to face the cold night and the uncertain journey ahead.
阿纳尔不在那儿!古娟疯狂地扫视着房间，一阵恐慌涌上心头。这时她想起了晚上早些时候他的暗示——“去我常去的地方找我。”这是他们的小游戏，每当他躲在他的秘密地点时，他都会用这个词。古德伦没有再浪费一秒钟，就冲到亚麻衣柜前，猛地打开门，在衣柜底部成堆的毯子和枕头中，阿纳尔躺在那里，嘴唇上挂着满足的微笑，他正睡在他最喜欢的藏身之处。
阿纳尔蜷缩在一只破旧的毛绒熊周围，睡得很熟。古娟呼了一口气，她没有意识到自己一直憋着。她轻轻地摇了摇哥哥的肩膀。“阿纳尔，我们得走了，现在。”她急切地小声说。他睁大了眼睛，一开始很困惑，但当他感觉到妹妹声音里的急迫时，便惊恐地睁大了眼睛。他迅速地从舒适的窝里爬出来，紧紧地抓着他的熊。古德伦帮他穿上最暖和的衣服和靴子，一边走一边向他解释情况。“我们要进行一次小小的冒险，”她勇敢地笑着说，希望能减轻他的担忧，因为他们准备面对寒冷的夜晚和未来不确定的旅程。
参考范文3（ChatGPT）
Arnar wasn't there! A sense of panic washed over Gudrun. Her mind started to race, thinking about what her little brother said earlier, "Look for me where I always am." She quickly glanced around the room, realizing that Arnar's favorite hiding place was the small closet in the corner. With a racing heart, she rushed over and threw open the door, praying that her little brother was inside and safe.
There, curled around a worn stuffed bear, was Arnar, sound asleep. A wave of relief swept over Gudrun, and she let out a breath she didn't realize she had been holding. "Oh, Arnar," she sighed, picking up the sleeping boy with a strength she didn't know she possessed. With her brother in her arms and determination in her heart, she raced towards the harbor, the ominous rumble of the volcano echoing in the distance. The night was filled with fear and uncertainty, but Gudrun knew they had each other and that was enough to brave any storm.
阿纳尔不在那儿!一阵恐慌席卷了古娟。她的思绪开始加速，想起了她弟弟之前说过的话:“去我常去的地方找我。”她迅速扫视了一下房间，意识到阿纳尔最喜欢的藏身之处是角落里的小壁橱。她的心怦怦直跳，冲过去打开门，祈祷她的弟弟在里面安然无恙。
阿纳尔蜷缩在一只破旧的毛绒熊周围，睡得很熟。古娟如释重负，她松了一口气，自己都没有意识到自己一直在屏住呼吸。“哦，阿纳尔。”她叹了口气，用一种她自己都不知道自己拥有的力量抱起熟睡的男孩。她抱着弟弟，下定了决心，奔向港口，火山不祥的隆隆声在远处回荡。这个夜晚充满了恐惧和不确定，但古德伦知道他们拥有彼此，这足以让他们勇敢面对任何风暴。

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