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求助信1.-诗歌比赛
写作路径 首段 请求帮忙
中段 遇到的问题
末段 表达感激
格式模板:
【 模板一】
Dear_______,
I’m ______, one of the students from______________________. I’m writing to tell you something about__________________(写信的原因）and I’d like you to do me a favor.
As you know,____________________________. （语句一） To make things worse,_______________________.(语句二）
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me some advice on________________.(写信的目的）and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hu
万能句型：
首句
I am writing to you for some help.
I am sorry to bother you, but I really need your help with...
The reason why I write this letter is that I have trouble when I...
I find it difficult for me to...
I am now confronted with the following difficulties.
So to bother you, but I really get some problems recently.
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help.
I am wondering if you could spare some time...
衔接句
Could you please give me some advice
I really don’t know what to do and expect you to give me your advice.
I have no idea what I should do and long for your advice.
I would appreciate anything you can do to help me with this matter.
I wonder how to deal with the problem.
I would be grateful if...
I would appreciate it if you could help me.
Would you like to give me some useful advice
尾句
Looking forward to your reply and I’ll be grateful for your help.
I’m sure I can make great progress with your help.
I’m waiting for your early reply.
Thank you for your attention to these requests.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your kind assistance.
What should I do Please give me some advice, thank you!
I wish I hadn’t put you so much trouble.
Thanks for your kindness in advance.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me some advice on...and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
话题写作 求助信
假定你是李华，正准备参加校英文诗歌朗诵比赛。请给外教Mr. Brown 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.介绍比赛
2.请他推荐英文诗歌
3.请他帮忙指导。
English Poetry Recitation Competition
Dear Mr. Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to ask for your help with an upcoming English poetry recitation competition at my school.
Yours,
Lihua
短语积累:
比赛目的 be designed to do=aim to do= intend to do=in order to=with the hope of
需要... be required to do sth./be asked to do/be expected to do sth
我将非常感激如果...
I’ll be grateful to you if...=I will appreciate it if...
4. 我想知道是否... I wonder if...
5. 这是我的荣幸... It’s my honor to...
6. 作为一个...专家，您拥有很多经验
As an expert in ...you possess great experience in...
7. 我不熟悉... I’m not familiar with...
8. 如何有感情的读诗歌 how to read the poem with emotion
9. 如何像当地人一样读诗 how to read the poem like a native speaker
10. 我做...很困难
I have difficulty in...=I have trouble in...=I struggle to do...
11. 展示天赋 showcase the talent of students
12. 提升英语语言流利度 improve their English language proficiency
13. 培养公众演讲技巧 develop public speaking skills
14. 从一系列的 from a range of
15. 展示诗歌的美和意义 showcase the beauty and meaning of the poem
16. 评估每个选手的表现 evaluate each participant’s performance
17. 基于准确性，流利度，舞台表现和整体印象based on their accuracy, interpretation, stage presence, and overall performance quality.
18. 获奖选手 winners of competition
19. 受到表彰和得到奖品 receive recognition and prizes
20. 一个有趣的和吸引人的活动 a fun and engaging activity
21. 提升语言和演讲技能 develop their language and presentation skills
基础写作:
1.英语诗歌背诵比赛是一个能够展示同学们读和背诵经典的和当代的英语诗歌能力的比赛。
2.这个比赛给同学们提供了一个机会去提升他们的英语流利度以及练习公众演讲技巧。
3.参赛者需要从一些列作家里选择他们最喜欢的诗歌。 每个选手都需要准确，流利，感情充沛的传递诗歌的美。
4.评委们需要基于语言的流利度，准确性，发音，语音语调等进行评价。
5.获奖选手将会受到表彰和得到精美的礼物。
6. 英语诗歌比赛不仅是一个有趣的活动，还提供了一个平台给同学们提升语言能力和演讲能力。
7. 参赛选手们既增长了自信又欣赏到了诗歌的美，这次活动对所有参赛人员都是有意义的。
English Poetry Recitation Competition Introduction
The English Poetry Recitation Competition is an event that showcases the talents of students in reciting classic and contemporary English poems. The competition provides an opportunity for students to improve their English language proficiency while also developing their public speaking skills.
（比赛意义和目的）
Participants are expected to recite selected poems from a range of authors, including Shakespeare, Wordsworth, Frost, Yeats, and Angelou, among others. Each participant is required to deliver the poem with the correct pronunciation, intonation, and expression to showcase the beauty and meaning of the poem.
（比赛要求，提到了几位大名鼎鼎的诗人，这是学生可能想不到的，想到也不一定能写对。）
Judges will evaluate each participant's performance based on their accuracy, interpretation, stage presence, and overall performance quality. Winners of the competition will not only receive recognition and prizes, but they will also have the chance to perform at school events and other local community functions.（评价标准，）
The English Poetry Recitation Competition is not only a fun and engaging activity for students, but it is also an excellent platform for them to develop their language and presentation skills. Participants will gain confidence in their abilities and appreciation for English poetry, making this competition a significant achievement for all who take part.
（比赛的意义）
Dear Mr. Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to ask for your help with an upcoming English poetry recitation competition at my school.（写作意图明确）
As a non-native English speaker, I would greatly appreciate any recommendations you may have for English poems that would be suitable for the competition. Additionally, I was wondering if you would be willing to assist me in preparing for the competition by providing guidance on how to effectively recite poetry in English.（这些句子较长，学生不太可能写出来，如果打算背诵句子要简化。）
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二
Dear Mr. Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to seek your advice and guidance for an upcoming English poetry recitation competition that I will be participating in at our school.
The competition is open to all students, and I am excited to be a part of it. However, I am struggling to choose the right poem to recite. As an experienced English teacher, I would greatly appreciate it if you could recommend some classic poems that are suitable for recitation.
Additionally, I would be honored if you could help me by providing guidance on my delivery and performance. I believe that your expertise would be invaluable in helping me improve my recitation and make it more impactful.
Thank you so much for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua

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