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阅卷老师在评卷中的原则是
亮点主要包括：
-、 语言中的亮点第一位 文章的亮点是的
语言地道，词汇丰富，句式多样；小词 小句过渡词也是高级的表达形式。definitely ultimately challenging tough
profound（1深远的far-reaching深刻的深奥的have a profound effect on 2.knowledgeable ） 高分的关键。
2、语法结构多样(虚从强被倒非 )
3、文章连贯然自然
1. 高级短语单词2. 固定的句式 句型3. 灵活的过渡词 插入语I have great difficulty in keeping words in mind.
He failed to pass the college entrance examination
二、要点齐全, 自然分段，三段，层次分明（12行 3+7 +2 ）
三、卷面整洁美观，蠢错无迹。Chinglish 不要留白,写满
75--85 中号， 不要有拐弯 有空隙 字母大小一致
I am will to help you out heared heard frist first
Writting written writing
1. 审题后有个清晰地思路然后打个简单的草稿，可以减少错误，书写也比较清晰整齐
2. 好的开头-凤头和好的结尾-豹尾，会首先吸引阅卷老师的眼球，中间段落表述正确 恰当使用过度词语，结构严谨自然流畅，文章的总体档次就上去了。
3. 一定要认真检查注意不要出现低级错误，such as单词拼写，标点，大小写，主谓一致，时态语态，单复数等等。 划一道，
要点要全面 内容要简单 结构要清晰 语言要精彩 书写要美观
开头语
1. As we all know// As is well known/ / /As is vividly栩栩如生 shown in the image /cartoon above，+小写a great many graduates are occupied in seeking =hunting for jobs nowadays.= at present= currently
As we can see, currently a large / an increasing number of teenagers are addicted to chatting on line, which is definitely harmful to their study and life. does harm to
As we can see, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, which have a bad effect on our life and environment.
2. With the increasing=growing日益 development of science and technology, the Internet is playing an important/ a vital /a key role=part in our daily life.
With the increasing=growing日益 development of economy and society, great/dramatic/striking changes have taken place in our hometown in the past few years.
increasingly popular//rely=depend=count on the Internet
Obviously=apparently, the mission is increasingly tough=difficult= challenging=demanding =tricky棘手
…………………….. of industry工业 and agriculture农业, more and more waste has been produced.
With the increasing improvement of the living standard, people are now paying special attention to the quality of their life.
3. Currently, there is a widespread concern that global warming has a bad/ negative/an awful effect/ impact/ influence on our surroundings.
surrounding adj surrounding schools
4. I am writing to express=convey my opinion/idea /view
concerning = about=regarding the current education /
the severe pandemic.
I am writing to express=convey my sincere=heartfelt =hearty gratitude= appreciation /apology to you.
I am writing to apply for the position/job posted online. I sincerely /do hope that I can seize/grasp the valuable/ precious chance/ opportunity
I am writing to invite you to a lecture =speech concerning /regarding Chinese culture to be held in our school hall at 4 this Friday afternoon.
to a meaningful=rewarding activity/event called “the silk road” to be launched this weekend.
5. I am more than=pretty glad(glade X) = delighted/cheerful to receive your letter, asking about=mentioning/referring to my plan for the coming=approaching summer holiday. Now I’d like to share it with you.
I am more than=pretty delighted to learn/hear that you are eager to improve/boost/enhance your calligraphy. Now I am willing/ready to recommend/ introduce a meaningful= rewarding activity/event to you.
saying/ reading/ bearing you have trouble in learning the words by heart. Here are my suggestions for you to deal with it.
6 . I am extremely /awfully/bitterly/painfully sorry to hear/learn that you are unhappy/ in low spirits/ in a bad mood/ feel frustrated /discouraged / upset/depressed/down /gloomy郁闷 because of/ owing to/due to your poor results = grades/ overweight=obesity. Here are my relevant=related/valuable suggestions /tips for you to lose weight/ keep up a good state of mind// relieve/ease your stress/anxiety. enhance your study. advice
7.Knowing that you are keen on// crazy about / attracted to / have a passion for travelling, I am more than delighted to recommend a variety of attractive /splendid/ charming /breathtaking/amazing tourist attractions/ scenic spots/ places of interest. The detailed arrangements are as follows.
8.The moment/instant I hear that you won the first prize in the E speech contest, you can’t imagine how excited=thrilled/ overjoyed I am! Congratulations on your success!
Words fail to convey my heartfelt/sincere gratitude /appreciation to you for what you did for me during my stay with you.
.欢迎词 We feel greatly honored to be here with Mr. Smith. Please allow me to express our warm welcome to him on behalf of /representing all the teachers and students.
I am more than delighted to know you will study in our class for 3 months as an exchange s. Now I'd like to introduce my class to you briefly/in brief.
10. Aimed at getting close to nature, a spring outing was organized=launched by our class last Sunday.
Last Sunday witnessed (目睹) an extraordinary （非凡的）5-kilometer cross-country running race, which turned out to be a great success.
Aiming to /To help the students have a better understanding of NCP肺炎, the school plans to invite Mr. Zhang from Huashan Hospital to give us a fantastic lecture online.
Aimed to promote the “double reduction” policy, a composition contest is scheduled to be launched. The details are as follows.
二.、中间段落表达句式和词汇
1. At first======at last 　×
First of all /above all,/to begin=to start with ,/ first and foremost
To begin with, it is a good idea to take an E course, where you can follow the teacher and get help from your classmates.
besides(此外), =what’s more ,
=in addition=additionally
=furthermore=moreover=plus此外 …….
At the same time=meanwhile同时
Last but not least, 最后但是很重要的是
=Most importantly,
Ultimately =eventually = in closing= at length 1 2 in detail
Last but not least, if possible, make some local friends, so that you can learn languages from each other with ease.
2. There are diverse.=various /varieties of reasons accounting for it .
The reasons are as follows.
Below are the detailed arrangements for you.
Here are the tips /suggestions for you to ease your stress
Anyone who is eager to apply for the job must meet=satisfy the following requirements.
Anyone who desires to sign up for the activity needs to click/visit the website/link.
When it comes to the issue/ hot topic, different people hold different opinions/ views/ ideas.
4. Every time you feel like playing games, you may as well remind yourself of various harm and make a list of the benefits you will get after you quit it.
5. What parents say and do has a lifelong /profound深远的/great effect on kids. 1. far-reaching 2. knowledgeable
6. There is no doubt that it is the experiences that really enrich our life and widen our horizons/view /vision.
Undoubtedly, 毋庸置疑，it is unwise of parents to arrange everything for their kids /meet=satisfy the needs of their kids..
Our earth is definitely becoming warmer and warmer and it is human activities that result in global warming.
No one can deny that study/ safety =security comes first.不可否认
7. For one thing..... For another....一则 再则
You may as well go abroad for further education. For one thing, you can have a good understanding of the foreign culture and customs. For another, it definitely contributes to developing your independence. Further your cause/education 推动
It is time for us to say goodbye to the city. It is your friendliness, warmth and your enthusiasm that make me feel at home.宾至如归
however,= nevertheless(然而,不过) ,
anyway= anyhow,
for example,=for instance例如 ==say =like adv.
Take .... for instance take sth seriously
what is/ was worse/ =to make things/matters worse= worse still (更糟糕的是)
better still,
in fact = in reality，in effect，as a matter of fact， 事实上
Sure enough,果然果真her mother still sat in the same position, so she felt pretty relieved.
9.Otherwise 1) (否则)=or,
2)In some way
3)On the contrary
10.Obviously=evidently=apparently
=It is clear / obvious that
Apparently, it is via his tireless efforts 不懈的努力and dogged顽强的 determination that he achieved his aim/goal. Joint efforts
surprisingly= amazingly=to my great surprise
to one’s great sorrow=grief / disappointment/
=much to one’s joy/ guilt
hopefully, 但愿=hoping that=in the hope of = it is my sincere hope that=it is hoped that our graduation ceremony is a great success.
11.if only= I wish I hadn’t quarreled with my dear mother the other day.
But for your timely help and consistent support, I wouldn’t have achieved/fulfilled my dream.
Were I you, I would be pretty self-discipline, never sleeping in睡过头 and going all out to manage my time.
12.that is,=that is to say（也就是说）=in other words
on the contrary=instead（相反）
After all（毕竟,别忘了）,your birthday is in two days/ two days away.
After all, it is up to you to decide what path you will choose/opt.
instead of doing而不是= rather than +平行结构,
not 。。。 but
The deadly issue is not whether we can stop the climate change but whether we are willing to and able to slow it.
It is not your intelligence but your attitude that resulted in your failure.
in spite of=despite(尽管)+n ./ regardless of不管不顾
/even if =even though即使
Although/ though/while/as
as/so long as 只要 Since= now that=when 既然
In case以防+句子 in case of以防万一+n
Bring your umbrella in case it rains/ in case of rain.
三、结尾段落表达句式和词汇
1.Personally,=As for me=in my opinion= As far as I am concerned,就我而言
2 In short, / In conclusion / To sum up/ 总之
3.As a result=therefore=hence, it is (high/about) time that more attention should be paid to protecting the environment.
4.I strongly=firmly believe坚信= I am convinced that all your efforts will pay off = be rewarded有好的结果、不会白费eventually .
……..reading is bound/sure to widen/ broaden your horizons / vision
Be in vain徒劳的
5. Only in this way, can you make it sooner or later.
Only when you keep a balanced diet and work out regularly, can you lose weight/keep a good figure
6. It is your confidence, diligence and determination that really count/ matter/ make a great difference in this increasingly competitive society.
I do/ sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into account/consideration.
I do hope that you can benefit a lot from the meaningful=rewarding activities.
Count 1/discount counter encounter
2.count on =depend on=rely on
7. I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience./ accept my sincere apology./invitation/
8. If you are in need/you have any further questions, don’t hesitate to turn to me for help.
Without hesitation=without thinking twice
9. Eventually/ultimately, I am determined to grasp the opportunity to improve/promote/ enhance/boost myself.
11谚语As a famous saying goes //proverb says,
individuals个人 together make a difference. 众志成城众人拾柴火焰高,
actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩
God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助之
a thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.
nothing is too difficult, if you put your heart into it.世上无难事只怕有心人
no pains, no gains.不劳无获=No sweat, no sweet!
where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
two heads are better than one.
practice makes perfect. Self-discipline
attitude is everything.
nothing is impossible.一切皆有可能
all roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马
Wish you a pleasant / enjoyable trip=journey
Best wishes to you顺遂

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