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八年级英语下册 Unit 1 作文原题及例文
“总——分——总”法提建议
总：首先介绍总体存在的问题；
分：然后分别提出建议；
总：最后总结，表达祝愿，画龙点睛。
典例一
假如你是Peter的好朋友Li Lei，你听说Peter近来因为考试而忙碌，并且得了重感冒，头疼得厉害。请给他写封信，建议他去看医生，并告诉他要注意身体。要求80词左右。
范文典例
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a bad cold and a headache .I think you should go to a doctor and take some medicine. I know these days you are very busy studying for the exam, but you should look after yourself. It’s important for everyone to be healthy. If you want to study better, you must keep in good health. I hope you’ll feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
添彩点：1.恰当应用本单元所学的should，go to a doctor ，take some medicine
等词汇表达自己的建议；2.I think ，be busy doing，look after， It’s important for everyone to be healthy. 和if引导的条件状语从句运用的恰到好处。
典例二
你的朋友Jack由于长时间在手机（mobile phone）上玩游戏，现在头痛、眼睛疼、背痛，并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并且请给出他的建议。
要求：1.内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2.书写认真，句子通顺；
3.词数：80词左右
范文典例
Jake is my friend.He likes playing games on mobile phones very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes, and a sore back.He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day. I think he should take breaks away from the mobile phone .He shouldn’t use the mobile phone for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night. I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.
添彩点：1.恰当应用本单元所学的 sit in the same way, without, sore ,should 和shouldn't等词汇表达自己的思想。2.so,do eye exercises, I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.等词句运用的恰如其分，使文章增色不少。
本单元以健康与急救为话题，围绕这一话题主要谈论健康问题与意外事故，以及如何合理的提出建议。
素材积累
健康急救类常用句型
I have … …
Why don’t you… …
You need to … …
You should / shouldn’t… …
You’d better (not)… …

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