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Module 2 Experiences
话题写作
1.话题分析：
本模块以“个人旅行经历”为话题，以“描述个人旅行经历”为语言目标。本话题常考查的作文题目是“描述个人旅行经历”、“难忘的旅行经历”、“特别的旅行经历”。
语篇类型：记叙文
话题分析
第一段： 概括旅行经历
第二段：描述旅行经历（看到的景色、遇到的事情、尝到的美食等）
第三段：表达旅行感受或收获或对未来的启示
话题分析
过去时
现在时、将来时
文章结构
时态
审题
假如你是李华。今年暑假和父母去了不同的地方旅游。请根据你的旅行经历及内容提示，以“My Great Trips”为题，写一篇80词以上的英语短文，介绍一下你的旅行情况。
第一段，简要概括旅行经历
第二段，看到的景色、遇到的事情着重写
第三段，感受+启示
开头：Life is a journey to experience, to learn and to enjoy. This... I went to... with... I have travelled to many places. It was the trip to ... last autumn that was special.
中间段：
◎This is the most beautiful city that I have ever been to.This is a city with a long history.◎... leave a deep impression on sb.◎It's especially famous for...◎As soon as we arrived there, we enjoyed the beautiful view.
常用句型
成长至今，你是否去过很多美丽的地方？你校校刊英语栏目正在开展以“Travelling”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的内容提示，以“My special trip”为题，写一篇英文短文投稿。内容提示：
（1）Where did you go？ (2) Why was the trip special
例题 1
审题
语篇类型：记叙文
主题语境：my special trip
写作要点：
（1）Where did you go？ (2) Why was the trip special
时态：一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅
语篇结构：三段式
第一段： 概括旅行经历
第二段：描述旅行经历（看到的景色、遇到的事情、尝到的美食等）
第三段：表达旅行感受或收获或对未来的启示
注意事项：具体事例的选择要能表现这次旅行的特别之处。
范文 1
The trip to Zhangjiajie last summer was very special because I not only enjoyed the beauty of the nature but also learnt an important lesson.
Zhangjiajie is a magic land of mountains, forests and rivers. It's famous for the strange shape of its tall rocks. We climbed to the top of Mount Tianzi and saw the mountain tops above the clouds. It was just like a Chinese painting! I was amazed at the nature! On the way back to the camp, I pulled a leaf off a plant, but my father said, "It is wrong to do so and we should protect everything here." I felt so sorry.
It was in Zhangjiajie that I realised the importance of protecting the environment! Don't you think the trip is special
My special trip
范文 1
The trip to Zhangjiajie last summer was very special because I not only enjoyed the beauty of the nature but also learnt an important lesson.
My special trip
点评：整体概括旅行经历
范文 1
Zhangjiajie is a magic land of mountains, forests and rivers. It's famous for the strange shape of its tall rocks. We climbed to the top of Mount Tianzi and saw the mountain tops above the clouds. It was just like a Chinese painting! I was amazed at the nature! On the way back to the camp, I pulled a leaf off a plant, but my father said, "It is wrong to do so and we should protect everything here." I felt so sorry.
My special trip
点评：详细描述旅行经历、看到的景色：山、森林、河流、岩石。
It was just like a Chinese painting！使用比喻，增强画面感。
点评：遇到的事情：从树上摘下树叶，用I feel sorry表达自己心中的愧疚、感到非常抱歉。从而突出环保的重要性。
范文 1
It was in Zhangjiajie that I realised the importance of protecting the environment! Don't you think the trip is special
My special trip
点评：结尾段表达旅行感受和收获：从欣赏到的美景和自己做错事的反思中，理解到保护自然环境的重要性。
点评：结尾I realised和第一段I learnt an important lesson形成呼应。
结尾用反问句即可加强语气又再次点题。
相关写作素材：
与环境保护相关的特殊事件： 摘花、摘树叶、到处扔垃圾、建筑上乱写乱画等。
感悟：应该保护环境、爱护自然
范文 2
I have travelled to many places. It was the trip to Beijing last autumn that was special. The journey by train took eight hours and when we arrived it was still dark. We went directly to Tian' anmen Square to see the flag raising ceremony. When the soldiers walked by, I held my breath. The national flag was rising slowly while the sun was rising. I couldn't help singing the national song loudly with the music. I felt the touch of something proud and special rising from the bottom of my heart. I have realised our country is becoming stronger and stronger, just like the flag rising higher and higher. I am so proud to be a Chinese.
My special trip
范文 2
I have travelled to many places. It was the trip to Beijing last autumn that was special. The journey by train took eight hours and when we arrived it was still dark.
My special trip
开篇点题；
以强调句“It is...that...”点题，表明一次特别的旅行史去年秋季的北京之行、
范文 2
We went directly to Tian' anmen Square to see the flag raising ceremony. When the soldiers walked by, I held my breath. The national flag was rising slowly while the sun was rising. I couldn't help singing the national song loudly with the music. I felt the touch of something proud and special rising from the bottom of my heart.
My special trip
介绍旅游经历，着重写出旅游过程中的特殊事件----升旗仪式，用felt the touch of something proud and special表达内心受到的触动。
范文 2
I have realised our country is becoming stronger and stronger, just like the flag rising higher and higher. I am so proud to be a Chinese.
My special trip
抒发爱国情怀，并写出身为中国人而自豪的原因。
总结全文
例题 2
假期是快乐的、充实的。你是否曾度过一个完美的假期？你是否对假期旅行的经历还记忆犹新？你校英语校刊本期主题为“完美的假期”。请以“My Perfect Holiday”为题，写一篇短文分享你假期中的旅行经历。（1）Where have you been during your holiday （2）What can you learn from it
My Perfect Holiday
范文
I had a wonderful time during the National Day holiday. My family and I took a trip to Maple Valley, which is located in Liaoning Province. As soon as we arrived there, we were impressed by the fresh air and red maple leaves. Walking along the path in the mountain, I lost myself in it. It was like a picture, and I walked in the picture. I couldn't describe how beautiful it was. It was just at that moment that I realised how important the good environment was. If we want to enjoy the beautiful scenery and live a happy life, we should protect the environment.
思考：该习作是如何体现“perfect”的？圈出词语
你一定有一些难忘的旅行经历，要么是远距离的旅游，要么是近距离的郊游。哪一次旅行经历给你留下了最深刻的印象？请你跟老师和同学们分享一下，并谈谈你的感受。内容提示：（1）When and where did you go？ (2) What was the special experience (3) How did you feel
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
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