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读后续写心灵的艾莉森
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The annual Halloween arrived,during which kids dressed in traditional clothes went to neighbors houses to ask for candy.
Allison lived in a small town.That day after dinner,Allison put on her dress her father had just bought for her.The dress was cheap and second-hand because her family was poor. But Allison still thanked her dad and said,”Everyone will love my dress!”Then she left for neighbors houses to ask for candy.
On the way, she came across Anna and her friends and wanted to join them.”No! Look at your dress!It’s ugly!”Anna said.Her friends also laughed.“Look at our dresses, especially mine! It’s new and beautiful,”Anna added.Her friends nodded and in some way they were right. Anna's dress was shiny and looked expensive.She always had the best clothes because her parents were rich.
Allison was shocked and sad. The kids not only disliked her dress but made fun of it.”You can't come with us!”Anna stressed.”We would never hang out with you!”The other kids agreed and laughed.They all left to start collecting candy for the night while Allison was left alone, embarrassed in the middle of the street.
Anyway,she knew all the neighbors. She often helped around carrying their groceries and helping them with their gardens.People around there knew her.She didn’t need to hang out with Anna or her friends.”I’ll go just alone,”the little girl said to herself and started walking.
She as well as Anna and her friends walked in the same direction: towards their first neighbor Mrs Vaughan’s house.But Allison walked behind and kept her distance from them. And she stopped when Anna and her friends were near Mrs Vaughan’s house.
Just then,Mrs Vaughan looked out of her window.She noticed that Allison was being excluded by Anna and her friends. She knew it was probably because of Allison’s poor dress. She immediately felt pity for Allison, who often helped her and other neighbors.She decided to give Allison much more candy as a reward and teach Anna and her friends a lesson.
When Anna and her friends knocked on her door,Mrs Vaughan opened it.
Anna looked up and said,”Our clothes are more beautiful!Bat you gave Allison more candy! Why ”
续写范文
When Anna and her friends knocked on her door Mrs Vaughan opened it. The girls greeted her, showed off their beautiful clothes and asked for candy. Mrs Vaughan,who held a bag of sweets, asked them to wait for a moment. Then, she waved to Allison, calling out,” Dear, come here!” When Allison came Mrs Vaughan said,” Oh, how beautiful you are today!” Then, she gave Allison most of her candy although the girl declined. When Allison walked away, Mrs Vaughan divided the rest of the candy among Anna and her friends, who were a little angry and confused.
Anna looked up and said,” Our clothes are more beautiful! But you gave Allison more candy! Why ” Mrs Vaughan looked down calmly and explained that Allison was always friendly to neighbors.” She has great inner beauty. Inner beauty is more important. Why not be friends with her ” Mrs Vaughan added.Hearing that, Anna and her friends’ faces turned red and they realized they had done something wrong. They said goodbye to Mrs Vaughan, caught up with Allison, and sincerely invited Allison to join them. Allison nodded gladly and had new friends, who would no longer judge her by her clothes.
续写翻译
当安娜和她的朋友们敲门时，沃恩夫人打开了门。女孩们向她打招呼，炫耀着她们漂亮的衣服，并要了糖果。沃恩夫人拿着一袋糖果，让她们稍等一下。然后，她向艾莉森挥手，喊道：“亲爱的，过来！”当艾莉森到来时，沃恩夫人说：“哦，你今天真漂亮！”然后，尽管艾莉森拒绝了，她还是把大部分糖果给了艾莉森。沃恩太太走开了，把剩下的糖果分给了安娜和她的朋友们，安娜和她的朋友们有些生气和困惑。
安娜抬头说道：“我们的衣服更漂亮了！”但你给了艾莉森更多的糖果！为什么？”沃恩夫人平静地低下头，解释说艾莉森对邻居总是很友好。“她有很强的内在美。内在美更重要。“为什么不和她做朋友呢？”沃恩夫人补充道。闻言，安娜和她的朋友们脸都红了，他们意识到自己做错了。他们告别了沃恩夫人，追上了艾莉森，并诚挚地邀请艾莉森加入。艾莉森高兴地点点头，有了新朋友，他们也不再以衣着来评判她。
续写亮点
The girls greeted her, showed off their beautiful clothes and asked for candy.
运用了and连接并列谓语。
Mrs Vaughan, who held a bag of sweets, asked them to wait for a moment.
运用了主从复合句，定语从句。
Then, she waved to Allison, calling out,” Dear, come here!”
运用了现在分词短语作状语。
When Allison came, Mrs Vaughan said,”Oh, how beautiful you are today!”
运用了主从复合句，时间状语从句。
Then, she gave Allison most of her candy although the girl declined.
运用了主从复合句，让步状语从句。
When Allison walked away, Mrs Vaughan divided the rest of the candy among Anna and her friends, who were a little angry and confused.
运用了主从复合句，时间状语从句。主句里面包含非限制性定语从句。
Mrs Vaughan looked down calmly and explained that Allison was always friendly to neighbors.”
运用了主从复合句，宾语从句。
Hearing that, Anna and her friends’ faces turned red and they realized they had done something wrong.
运用了现在分词短语作状语，以及宾语从句。
They said goodbye to Mrs Vaughan, caught up with Allison, and sincerely invited Allison to join them.
运用了and连接并列谓语。
Allison nodded gladly and had new friends, who would no longer judge her by her clothes.
运用了主从复合句，定语从句。

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