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浙江省新高考研究卷1：读后续写二次开发: 慢跑偶遇小狗
情节建模： ①情节设计(conflict; 伏笔；升华) ②情感变化(最擅长) ③环境描写(1-2个句子) ④心理描写 ⑤四处衔接句(务必要精彩)
读后续写：句型建模 句型1： Doing...,主+谓... 或者 主+谓.., doing... (①表主动；②表进行) 句型2 : Done..., 主+谓... / 主+谓..., done... (①表被动；②表完成) 句型3: 动作链：主+谓1...，谓2...，and 谓3... 句型4：强调句型① it is/was +被强调部分 + that +其他 强调句型 ② It is/ was not until + 被强调部分+ that + 其它部分 句型5：with的复合结构：with + 宾语 + 宾补( adj/adv/介词短语/v-ing/v-ed/to do/ n) 句型6：独立主格结构：主1+谓语动词, 主2+ to do/v-ing/v-ed/n/adj/adv/介短 句型7: 形容词/形容词短语作状语 句型8：方式副词(ly)，主＋谓... 句型9：无灵主语 句型10：倒装句 句型11: 定语从句与非限制性定语从句 句型12：名词性从句(主从；宾从；表从；同位语从句) 13. 使用漂亮的形容词和副词 14. 眼神、笑容、眼泪、拥抱描述一定有！ 15. 经典连词一定要有！
Version 1:
Para 1: As the rain poured hard, I made the decision not to leave this adorable animal out in the rain. I broke into a jog, but the little stray never left my side. Together, we jogged the final half-mile home in the rain. When I opened the door, the Terrier rushed in and ran straight to Megan in the family room. She and her dad rapidly fired questions(连珠炮似的提出问题) regarding the little dog. Who What Where None of my answers mattered once this bundle of energy jumped into Megan’s lap and claimed her for her own. They seemed to share an instant connection, and Megan's eyes lit up with delight.
Para 2: With the days going by, the presence of the dog brought about a positive change in our home. Megan and I found ourselves bonding over caring for the new addition to our family. We took turns walking her and teaching her tricks. Through these shared experiences, we discovered a newfound understanding and appreciation for each other. The Terrier became a constant source of comfort and companionship for both Megan and me. We would often find ourselves sitting together on the couch, stroking her soft fur and sharing stories about our day. The dog's unconditional love and unwavering loyalty reminded us of the importance of forgiveness and the power of acceptance.
Version 1: 检测版本
Para 1: As the rain poured hard, I made the decision not to leave this adorable animal out in the rain. I _______________
_____________________(我开始慢跑), but the little stray_________________________________(从未离开我的身边). Together, we jogged the final half-mile home in the rain. When I opened the door, the Terrier _________________(跑了进去) and ________________________________(直接跑向)Megan in the family room. She and her dad rapidly ______________________________________________________________(连珠炮似的提出关于这只小狗的问题) . Who What Where None of my answers mattered once this bundle of energy jumped into Megan’s lap and ____________
__________________________(把她占为己有). They seemed to _________________________________________(似曾相识), and Megan's eyes______________________________________________________(闪烁着喜悦).
Para 2: With the days going by, the presence of the dog brought about a positive change in our home. Megan and I _______
____________________________________________(发现我们变得更加亲密) over caring for the new addition to our family. We ___________________________________(轮流遛狗) and teaching her tricks. Through these ___________
(share) experiences, we discovered _______________________________________________________________(一种新的相互理解和欣赏) for each other. The Terrier _________________________________________________________ (不断安慰和陪伴的源泉)for both Megan and me. We would often find ourselves sitting together on the couch, stroking抚摸 her soft fur and sharing stories about our day. The dog's ___________________________(无条件的爱) and ___________
____________________(坚定的忠诚) reminded us of _____________________________________________(宽恕的重要性) and ________________________________________(接纳的力量).
Version 2:
Para 1: As the rain poured hard, I made the decision not to leave this adorable animal out in the rain. Looking into her pitiful/pathetic look, I squatted down, embraced her to my chest and rushed her home in the heavy rain. After what seemed like ten minutes, we arrived home and were totally soaked through from head to toe, but when our loving eyes met, a trace of warmth submerged me completely. It was at that moment that my daughter, Megan, caught sight of the tiny creature and asked sorts of questions frantically as if she had totally forgotten the unpleasant argument with me. And with that, I poured out what had happened and suggested adopting the cute and homeless dog. Upon hearing that, Megan’s eyes glittered in amazement with lips curving into a beaming smile. Meanwhile, the new member circled around us, barking cheerfully with its tail wagging as if to show sincere gratitude to us.
Para 1句型建模：①动作链 ②无灵主语 ③强调句型 ④虚拟语气 ⑤宾语从句 ⑥现在分词作状语 ⑦with的复合结构 Para 1情节建模：①环境描写(雨景) ②情感描写(困惑、惊讶、开心) ③心理描写(温暖) ④情节设计(抱狗回家-- 雨中描写-- 女儿困惑-- 解释并建议收养 --女儿和小狗都很高兴)
Para 2: With the days going by, the presence of the dog brought about a positive change in our home. Every day, my daughter and I walked the younger, livelier dog together, chatting and laughing cheerfully along the way. Every night I arrived home from stressful work, Terrier would leap at me excitedly, licking me nonstop, who definitely drove my troubles away. Days turned into weeks, we took turns caring for the dogs, from which my daughter gradually gained a sense of responsibility and built a closer bond with me. Facing my daughter’s total transformation, my husband and I cracked a reassuring smile and felt more freedom than ever before. Thanks to the new addition, not only did she bring us joy and companion but also bridged the mother-and-daughter gap and helped us understand and appreciate each other better.
Para 2: 句型建模：①现在分词作状语 ②非限制性定语从句(..., from which...) ③not only...but also...引导的倒装句 Para 2: ①情感描写 ②心理描写 ③环境描写: 无 情节建模：女儿、我和小狗的相处 -- 女儿的改变 -- 母女之间的关系越来愈融洽-- 感谢小狗带来的变化 注意四处衔接！！！
Version 2: 检测版本
Para 1: As the rain poured hard, I made the decision not to leave this adorable animal out in the rain. _______________
_______________________________________(看着它可怜的表情 现在分词作状语), I _____________________(蹲下来), _____________________________________(把它抱在胸前) and _______________________________________(冒着大雨匆忙把其送回家 动作链).___________________________________________________(大约十分钟), we arrived home and ________________________________________________________________(从头到脚全部湿透), but when our loving eyes _________(相遇), ____________________________________________________(一股暖流涌上心头 无灵主语). ________________________________________________________(也就是在那个时刻 强调句型)my daughter, Megan, _______________________(看到)the tiny creature and asked sorts of questions __________________(疯狂地) as if she had totally forgotten the unpleasant argument with me. __________________(随即), I _________________________________________________________(倾吐发生的事情 宾语从句) and suggested________(收养)the cute and homeless dog. Upon hearing that, Megan’s eyes glittered in amazement with lips curving into a beaming smile. Meanwhile, the new member___________________(围着...转) us, barking cheerfully _____
______________________________________(尾巴不停地摇摆 with的复合结构) as if __________________________
___________________________________(对我们表达感谢 省略句).
Para 2: With the days going by, the presence of the dog brought about a positive change in our home. Every day, my daughter and I walked the younger, livelier dog together, ___________________________________________________(一路上，开心地有说有笑地 现在分词作状语). Every night I arrived home from stressful work, Terrier would _______________________(扑到我身上) excitedly, licking me nonstop, ________________________________________
(驱走我的烦恼 非限制性定语从句). ________________________________(日复一日), we took turns caring for the dogs, _______________________________________________________________________________________(从中我的女儿逐渐获得了责任感，并与我建立了更紧密的联系 非限制性定语从句). Facing my daughter’s total___________
_____(转变), my husband and I ________________________________________(露出欣慰的笑容) and felt more freedom than ever before. Thanks to the new addition, ______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________.(她不仅给我们带来了欢乐和陪伴，还弥合了母女之间的隔阂，帮助我们更好地理解和欣赏彼此. not only... but also...引导的倒装句)

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