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读后续写可爱动物
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One day, when my sister Jane and I were having fun in our yard, a homeless dog came to us and then stopped several meters away from us. She looked at us as if she wanted some food.
So I went inside and returned with some food for her I left the food before us, but she was afraid to get it. Her eyes were filled with fear and it seemed she would escape any minute, Seeing it, Jane and I stepped back. It was then that she tried walking ahead. When noticing that we meant no harm, she began enjoying the food crazily.But while having the food, she still kept raising her head, fearing we'd harm her. When she finally ate up all the food, she took a look at us and then ran away.
We didn't expect to see her again.But to our surprise, in the following week, she visited us every other day,and we continued offering her food. Later, she even visited us each day. With time going by, she looked much healthier because of the food we gave her. But each time she ate up the food,she'd escape, She still feared humans. We didn't know what caused her to be so timid. Maybe she was once abandoned(遗弃) by a human. Whatever it was, Jane and I had great pity for her and decided to continue showing her love as long as she would come. Our parents supported us and we named the dog Chanel.
When winter came, the temperature became lower and lower. We began inviting Chanel to have food inside our room. Amazingly, she followed, and each time she finished eating, she'd sit by the fireplace comfortably for a while. She had more trust in us but was still timid. Once we came closer to her, she'd escape. Still, we loved her. But suddenly, after one day in May, she stopped visiting us. We were worried about her, fearing she might have come across something bad. Finally, one morning, she visited us again.
本文注意积累对动物的描述积累
1.a homeless dog came to us and then stopped several meters away from us. She looked at us as if she wanted some food.一只无家可归的狗向我们走来，然后在离我们几米远的地方停了下来。她看着我们，好像想要一些食物。
2.Her eyes were filled with fear and it seemed she would escape any minute.她的眼睛里充满了恐惧，似乎随时都会逃脱。
3.When noticing that we meant no harm, she began enjoying the food crazily.But while having the food, she still kept raising her head, fearing we'd harm her. When she finally ate up all the food, she took a look at us and then ran away.当注意到我们没有伤害的意思时，她开始疯狂地享受食物。但是在吃东西的时候，她仍然不停地抬起头，担心我们会伤害她。当她终于吃光了所有的食物时，她看了我们一眼，然后跑开了。
4.With time going by, she looked much healthier because of the food we gave her.But each time she ate up the food,she'd escape, She still feared humans. 随着时间的流逝，由于我们给她的食物，她看起来更健康了。但每次她吃完食物，她都会逃跑，她仍然害怕人类。
5.Each time she finished eating, she'd sit by the fireplace comfortably for a while. She had more trust in us but was still timid. Once we came closer to her, she'd escape.每次吃完饭，她都会舒服地坐在壁炉旁一会儿。她对我们更信任，但仍然胆小。一旦我们靠近她，她就会逃跑。
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We were shocked to find Chanel looked so sick and weak.
At last, we reached an abandoned house and found four baby dogs there.
续写范文
One possible version:
We were shocked to find Chanel looked so sick and weak.She tried hard to balance her body while walking. Jane and I offered her food but she showed no interest at all.She just looked at us and made some special noise.We didn't know what had happened to her. Surprisingly, the once timid dog bravely got close to us and touched us with her feet. Then she tried to go outside and kept turning back. We guessed she wanted to lead us somewhere. So we followed her.
At last, we reached an abandoned house and found four baby dogs there. To our surprise, they looked as weak as Chanel. We suddenly know why she led us there. She wanted us to take care of her babies because she was ill. Seeing this, we decided to take the babies home. With the help of our parents, we took good care of Chanel and her babies. We could see that Chanel felt much closer to us.Before long, they all recovered health and we lived happily ever after.
续写译文
我们震惊地发现夏奈尔看起来如此病态和虚弱。她边走边努力平衡身体。简和我给她食物，但她一点兴趣都没有。她只是看着我们，发出了一些特别的声音。我们不知道她发生了什么事。令人惊讶的是，曾经胆小的狗勇敢地靠近我们，用脚触摸我们。然后她试图出去，一直回头。我们猜她想带我们去某个地方。所以我们跟着她。
最后，我们到达了一座废弃的房子，在那里发现了四只小狗。令我们惊讶的是，他们看起来和夏奈尔一样虚弱。我们突然知道她为什么带我们去那里了。她希望我们照顾她的孩子，因为她生病了。看到这种情况，我们决定带小狗回家。在父母的帮助下，我们照顾好了夏奈尔和她的孩子。我们可以看到夏奈尔感觉离我们更近了。不久，他们都恢复了健康，我们从此过上了幸福的生活。
续写亮点
She tried hard to balance her body while walking.
运用了状语从句的省略。
She just looked at us and made some special noise.
运用了and连接并列谓语动词。
We didn't know what had happened to her.
运用了宾语从句。
Surprisingly, the once timid dog bravely got close to us and touched us with her feet.
运用了and连接并列谓语动词。
Then she tried to go outside and kept turning back.
运用了and连接并列谓语动词。
We guessed she wanted to lead us somewhere.
运用了宾语从句。
We suddenly know why she led us there.
运用了宾语从句。
She wanted us to take care of her babies because she was ill.
运用了主从复合句，原因状语从句。
Seeing this, we decided to take the babies home.
运用了现在分词短语作状语。
We could see that Chanel felt much closer to us.
运用了宾语从句。

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