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【2024·四川泸州五中】假设你是李华，在一个礼品网站为你的姐姐订购了一份生日礼物。礼物是一个标有姓名、生日及祝福语的有卡通动物形象的粉色杯子。收到礼物后你和姐姐都很满意。请给你的英国笔友Tom发一封邮件。
内容：
1.描述网购的礼物；
2.介绍网上支付及配送情况；
3.谈谈你对网上购物的看法。
注意：
1.词数不少于120个；
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Tom,
I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高级备用单词及词组搭配：
1. Exquisite craftsmanship - 精湛的工艺
2. Personalized customization - 个性定制
3. Delicate design - 精美设计
4. Intricate details - 精细的细节
5. Premium quality - 高品质
6. Bespoke item - 定制品
7. Sophisticated appearance - 复杂的外观
8. Elegant finish - 优雅的表面
9. Exclusive edition - 独家版
10. Lavish packaging - 奢华的包装
11. State-of-the-art technology - 先进技术
12. Exclusively crafted - 专门制作
13. Impeccable presentation - 无可挑剔的呈现
14. Luxurious feel - 奢华的触感
15. Opulent design - 华丽的设计
16. Tailored to perfection - 定制至完美
17. Exotic materials - 异国情调的材料
18. Artisanal creation - 工匠创作
19. Exquisite detailing - 精湛的细节处理
20. Handcrafted masterpiece - 手工精制的杰作
21. Unparalleled craftsmanship - 无与伦比的工艺
22. Exclusive collection - 独家收藏
23. Bespoke craftsmanship - 定制工艺
24. Artistic design - 艺术设计
25. Luxe packaging - 豪华包装
26. Immaculate finish - 完美的表面处理
27. Premium materials - 优质材料
28. Limited edition - 限量版
29. Exquisite embellishments - 精美装饰
30. Fine artistry - 精湛的艺术技巧
31. Intricate patterns - 复杂的图案
32. Sumptuous texture - 华丽的质感
33. Handpicked selection - 精心挑选的系列
34. Tailored fit - 量身定制的合适度
35. Premium craftsmanship - 顶级工艺
36. Artisanal touch - 工匠之手
37. Lavish display - 奢华的展示
38. Exquisite finish - 精致的完工
39. Exclusive design - 独特设计
40. Opulent appearance - 奢华的外观
41. Intricate craftsmanship - 复杂的工艺
42. Bespoke design - 定制设计
43. Premium edition - 优质版
44. Luxury packaging - 奢侈的包装
45. Exquisite taste - 精致品味
46. Handpicked materials - 精心挑选的材料
47. Impeccable quality - 无可挑剔的品质
48. Elegant presentation - 优雅的呈现
49. Artisanal details - 工匠细节
50. Exotic touch - 异国情调的触感
51. Tailored craftsmanship - 定制工艺
52. Exclusive production - 独家生产
53. Luxurious finish - 奢华的表面处理
54. Premium selection - 优质选择
55. Exquisite materials - 精美材料
56. Handcrafted design - 手工设计
57. Impeccable craftsmanship - 无可挑剔的工艺
58. Artisanal quality - 工匠品质
59. Lavish detailing - 奢华的细节处理
60. Bespoke creation - 定制创作
2. 模板套句：
开头：
1. Having recently made a purchase online, I am thrilled to share my delightful experience with you. (最近在网上购物，我非常高兴与你分享我的愉快经历。)
2. It gives me great pleasure to recount the fantastic shopping journey I recently had on the internet. (我非常高兴地回顾我最近在互联网上的美妙购物之旅。)
3. I am writing to recount the delightful experience I had while shopping online for a special occasion gift. (我写信来讲述我在网上购物为特殊场合购买礼物时的愉快经历。)
4. I'm excited to share my recent online shopping experience with you, which left me thoroughly impressed. (我很高兴与你分享我最近的网购经历，这让我留下了深刻的印象。)
5. Reflecting on my recent online purchase, I am compelled to share the exceptional service I received with you. (回顾我最近的网购，我感到有必要与你分享我所收到的出色服务。)
中间行文：
1. Not only was the item exquisitely crafted, but it also arrived promptly, exceeding my expectations. (这件物品不仅做工精湛，而且送到得很及时，超出了我的期望。)
2. From the moment I placed my order to the instant it arrived at my doorstep, the entire process was seamless and efficient. (从我下订单的那一刻到它送到我的门口，整个过程都是无缝的，高效的。)
3. The customization options provided by the website allowed me to tailor the gift to my sister's preferences perfectly. (网站提供的定制选项让我能够完美地根据我妹妹的喜好定制礼物。)
4. The attention to detail evident in the packaging further added to the overall appeal of the product. (包装中明显的细节处理增添了产品的整体吸引力。)
5. What truly impressed me was the personalized touch evident in every aspect of the purchase, from the item itself to the packaging. (真正让我印象深刻的是在购买的每个方面都能看到的个性化处理，从物品本身到包装。)
结尾：
1. In conclusion, my online shopping experience has reaffirmed my belief in the convenience and reliability of e-commerce. (总之，我的网购经历再次证实了我对电子商务的便利性和可靠性的信念。)
2. Overall, I am
thoroughly satisfied with my online purchase and would highly recommend the website to anyone seeking quality products and exceptional service. (总的来说，我对我的网购非常满意，并且强烈推荐这个网站给任何寻找优质产品和出色服务的人。)
3. To sum up, my recent online shopping experience has left me convinced that e-commerce offers unparalleled convenience and efficiency. (总的来说，我最近的网购经历让我深信电子商务提供了无与伦比的便利和效率。)
4. All in all, my encounter with online shopping for this particular gift has been nothing short of exceptional, and I eagerly anticipate future purchases. (总的来说，我为这个特别礼物网购的经历绝对是非常出色的，我迫不及待地期待着未来的购物。)
5. To conclude, my online shopping venture for this birthday gift has been a resounding success, leaving me with a newfound appreciation for the convenience of digital transactions. (总之，为这个生日礼物进行的网购尝试取得了巨大成功，让我对数字交易的便利有了新的认识。)
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago. The gift is a pink cup with a cartoon animal image, which is labeled with her name, birthday, and a wish. We are both satisfied with the gift after receiving it.
I made the payment online using my credit card. It was very convenient and safe. The cup was delivered to my house by the courier service within a week. The delivery was faster than I expected.
I think online shopping is a great convenience. It saves time and effort compared to going to physical stores. With just a few clicks, I can buy gifts for my loved ones and have them delivered to my doorstep. However, there are also some risks associated with online shopping, such as the possibility of encountering fraudulent websites and having personal information compromised. Therefore, it is important to be cautious and choose reputable websites for online shopping.
I hope you find my experience with online shopping interesting. Looking forward to hearing about your experiences too.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
这篇文章的用词比较准确，语法结构也比较复杂，表达清晰。但是在句法搭配上，可以尝试使用更多的高级词汇和词组，比如“labeled with her name, birthday, and a wish”可以改为“embellished with her name, birthday, and a heartfelt wish”。另外，文章的行文流畅度可以进一步提高，比如可以将第二段合并到第一段中，使文章更加紧凑。
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Dear Tom,
I recently ordered a birthday gift for my sister via an online shopping platform. The item is a pink cup adorned with a cartoon animal design, personalized with her name, birthday, and a heartfelt wish. Both my sister and I were delighted with the gift upon receipt.
The payment process was seamless, conducted through a secure online transaction. Subsequently, the cup was dispatched promptly and arrived at our doorstep within a week, much faster than anticipated.
Online shopping, in my opinion, is a convenient and efficient means compared to traditional retail. It spares time and energy, allowing me to select and purchase presents for my loved ones from the comfort of my home. However, it is crucial to exercise caution and patronize reputable websites to mitigate risks such as encountering fraudulent entities or compromising personal information.
I hope you find this overview of my online shopping experience insightful. I eagerly await your tales of online shopping adventures.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
这篇文章的用词更为准确，语法结构也更加复杂，表达更加清晰。文章的行文流畅度有明显提升，句法搭配也更加高级，如“adorned with a cartoon animal design”和“mitigate risks such as encountering fraudulent entities or compromising personal information”等。整体来说，这篇文章在用词、语法、句法搭配和行文流畅度方面都表现得很好。

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