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专题04 如何设计续写情节
情节一般包含了“情景回顾”、“道歉”和“接受道歉”三个部分:
【情景回顾】That image immediately brought back memories of...
【道歉】I want to apologize for.../I'm really sorry if it hurt your feelings./"It is I who should say sorry," he murmured, his face burning with shame.
【接受道歉】With a smile, I stepped forward and patted him on his shoulder, signaling to him to.../Tyler didn't misbehave...
【共同成长】=【心有不解】+【理清思路】+【共同成长】
老师可能在教学过程中产生一些困惑,但在与学生相处的过程中,渐渐理清思路,豁然开朗。学生也可能在学习过程中遇到各种问题,但在老师的悉心教导和帮助下,勇敢面对困难,实现了自我突破。
【心有不解】
sb felt so nervous that my whole body was shaking.
某人感到非常紧张,全身都在颤抖。
sb fell into silence and had no idea how to deal with it.
某人陷入了沉默,不知道该如何处理。
Faced with sb/sth, sb was overwhelmed with deep depression.
面对某人、某事,某人感到深深的沮丧。
Standing at a crossroads in my life, I didn't know how to do sth.
站在人生的十字路口,某人不知道如何做某事。
【理清思路】
1. Hearing sb’s words, sb realized it was time to make a change. sb made up my mind to throw off sb’s shy cloak.
听到某人的话,某人意识到是时候做出改变了。某人下定决心要脱掉害羞的斗篷。
Though faced with lots of difficulties, sb wouldn't give up.
尽管困难重重,某人也不愿放弃。
【共同成长】
1.sb looked at sb and said with a big smile,〝……〞.
某人看着某人,笑着说〝……〞.
2.Little as I remembered about……,……would never be forgotten.
尽管我对……记忆甚少,……永远都不会忘记。
3.sth had brought the best out of me.
某事激发出了我最好的一面。
【收获友谊】=【初来乍到】+【伸出援手】+【收获友谊】
关爱同学的情节时常会发生在新生和老生之间,一些偶然事件的发生让他们相遇,并向对方伸出援手,由此改变了对彼此的最初看法。同时,他们自己也收获了珍贵的友谊或者得到了成长。
【初来乍到】
1.sb give a second glance at the newcomer.
某人多看这个新同学一眼。
2.Hearing his mean and rude words, I was overwhelmed with extreme anger, tears streaming down my face.
听到他那些刻薄粗鲁的话语,我被极度的愤怒淹没了,眼泪顺着我的脸流了下来。
3.Picturing a scene where I might be……, I felt a fire of rage burning in my heart.
想到自己可能会……的场景,我感到一股怒火在心中燃烧。
I felt my throat tighten, as if a rock were stuck in it.
我喉咙发紧,好像有块石头卡在里面。
【伸出援手】
1. Dead silence spreading across the classroom,sb determined to do sth.
教室里一片死寂,某人决定举做某事。
2. Luckily, sb helped sb get through the tough time.
幸运的是,某人帮助某人度过了艰难时期。
3. My classmates burst into wild applause and yelled encouragement at me. Grateful to them, I knew deep down in my heart that it was their trust that allowed me to embrace my new self.
同学们爆发出热烈的掌声,并大声鼓励我。我很感谢他们,深知正是他们的信任让我能够接受新的自己。
With a determined expression, sb decided to have a sincere talk with sb, believing that communication should always be the best policy.
带着坚定的表情,某人决定和某人真诚地谈一谈,某人认为沟通总是最好的策略。
With tears swirling in sb’s eyes, sb blinked hard to fight them back, feeling a mixture of regret and guilt.
泪水在某人的眼睛里打转,某人使劲地眨着眼睛,想要把泪水击退,心里又后悔又内疚。
【收获友谊】
1. Good friends are just like stars. You can't always see them, but you just know they are there.
好朋友就像星辰。他们不是时时可见,但是你知道他们就在那里。
2. Seeing a gleam of determination in sb’s eyes, I smiled and knew kindness and friendship were blooming in our hearts.
看到某人眼中坚定的光芒,我笑了,我知道善良和友谊之花正在我们的心中盛开。
3. It was the friendship between us that made me realize how unique I was. At last I came out of my shell, with my heart filled with the light of friendship
正是我们之间的友谊让我意识到自己是多么独特。最终我走出了自己的世界,心里充满着友谊的光芒。
4. Generally, close friendships have three“fruits": they may comfort the heart, advise the head and help us achieve the goals we set for ourselves. Through friendship, we can become happier, wiser and more satisfied humans.
通常,亲密的友谊可以结出三种“果实”:它们可以抚慰心灵,提供建议,帮助我们实现自己既定的目标。友谊可以让我们变得更快乐、更睿智、更满足。
5. Grateful for his firm support and timely assistance, I hugged him tightly. I finally realized we were best friends.
我很感激他的坚定支持和及时帮助,紧紧地拥抱了他。我终于意识到我们是最好的朋友。
6. I agreed with sb's words and believed deeply in my heart that both love and trust are the foundation of all relationships.
我同意某人的话,从内心深处相信爱和信任是所有关系的基础。
7. This unforgettable incident, long stuck in my memory, made me realize that honesty is the valuable principle that guides our friendship forward.
这一难忘的事件一直刻在我的记忆里,让我意识到诚实是引导我们友谊前进的宝贵原则。
1.【2023 新高考I&II卷】
【导语】作者上中学的时候,社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作,于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下,作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽然很累,但是没有放弃,坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时,作者感到写作让他很快乐,他已经不在乎输赢了。
【续写】
比赛消息传来——作者获奖——高兴——颁奖典礼感谢老师——颁奖后来到老师办公室——老师告诉作者坚持写作——作者表达了对写作的喜爱——作者写作取得了成功——感激老师
2.【2022新高考I&II卷】
【导语】作者是一名特殊教育教师,在大型越野赛跑那天,发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因,他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知,因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫,所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心,不理会别人的看法,大卫最终参赛,尽管遇到困难,他战胜了自己,这已经无关名次,而是他的勇敢和坚定让这一切成为可能。
【续写】
鼓励大卫——心理变化——决定参赛——克服困难——加油助威——完成比赛
【感恩父母】=【矛盾产生】+【主动解决】+【关系修复】
感恩父母的常见情节是孩子在父亲节、母亲节等节日,为表达对父母的爱而做一些事来
感谢父母,比如为父母做早餐或者给辛苦工作的父母送礼物。误会或矛盾可能是由于父母和子女之间缺乏沟通导致的不理解,可能是由于父母错把自己的意志、想法等强加给子女引发抵触,但最后某一方会主动让步,努力解决误会或者矛盾,结尾往往是双方之间相互理解,彼此体谅。
【矛盾产生】
sb was filled with excitement as sb thought of sth.
一想到某事,某人就充满了兴奋。
Seeing sth reminded sb that……
看到某事,某人想起了某事。
What always frustrated me was that ……. His words hurt worse than any physical blow could have done.
让我感到沮丧的是,……他的话比任何身体上的打击更伤人。
【主动解决】
1.A month later, I was on my way to the cinema when I saw something in a shop window
that set my heart racing.
一个月后,在去电影院的路上,我在一家商店的橱窗里看到了一件让我怦然心动的东西。
In a severe moment of desperation, it suddenly occurred to me that……
在这个极度绝望的时刻,我突然想到……
【关系修复】
1.Tears began to blur her vision as she accepted the flowers.
当她接过鲜花时,泪水模糊了她的视线。
2.……has made the tough stuff more manageable and life sweeter.
某事让我更能应对困难,生活也变得更加甜蜜。
【共克难关】=【遭遇困境】+【齐心协力】+【手足情深】
共克难关通常讲述兄弟姐妹生活中共同遭遇困难并一起克服困难,或者兄弟姐妹之间因为某些事情产生隔阂甚至发生争吵,但是过程中因为父母的调解或者相互间的磨合,最终他们之间的隔阂消失,关系变得更加亲密。并且在这个过程中人物有了新的感悟,感情进一步加深。
【遭遇困境】
1.I slammed the door shut behind me.
我砰地关上了身后的门。
2.sb stood uncomfortably with an embarrassed look and then ran towards the restroom.
某人局促不安地站着,一脸尴尬,然后问洗手间跑去。。
3.sb shouted loudly, panic filling sb’s small chest.
某人声喊道,他小小的胸膛里满是恐慌。
【齐心协力】
1.When sb looked at sb’s innocent face covered with snot and tears, sb realized that sb didn't mean any harm and then sb apologized to sb for getting angry and explained …….
当某人看着某人那张满是鼻涕和眼泪的无辜的脸时,某人意识到某人并没有任何恶意,于是某人为自己的生气向某人道歉,并解释了某事。
2.When sb saw tears welling up in sb’s eyes, sb’s anger quickly disappeared. sb bent down and patted sb gently on the head.
当某人看到某人眼中涌出泪水时,某人的愤怒很快消失。某人弯下腰轻轻地拍了拍某人的头。
【手足情深】
1.I had a better understanding of our relationship.
我对我们的关系有了更好的理解。
2. “Sis, I love you, too,” she said heartily, and the smile on her face shone like a diamond.
“姐姐!我也爱你。”她由衷地说,脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
I patted sb on the back to comfort sb. I made a mental note to be more patient with sb and try to take better care of sb.
我拍了拍某人的背安慰某人,在心里记下要对某人更有耐心,试着更好地照顾某人。
sb began to cry in relief, throwing sb ‘s arms around sb and hugging sb tightly.
某人如释重负地哭了起来,某人伸出双臂,紧紧抱住某人。
【2021新高考I&II卷】
【导语】双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自己动手,做起饭餐来,但是不幸的是,他们连连失败的故事。
【续写】
指导——积极——献礼——感动
【与人为善】=【偶然事件】+【相识结缘】+【互助双赢】
人与人之间难免会产生矛盾和冲突,但更多的时候人们之间会相互关爱、相互帮助。
【偶然事件】
On our way back home, the car broke down and we were stranded in the middle of the
road.
我们回家的路上汽车抛锚了,我们被困在路中间。
While walking in the park, I came across ……
在公园散步时,我偶遇了……。
Upon hearing the bad news, she knit her brows into a deep frown, totally at a loss.
听到这个坏消息时,她皱起了眉头,完全不知所措。
【相识结缘】
They offered to give me a ride, which I gratefully accepted.
他们主动提出载我一程,我感激地答应了。
Seeing deep guilt on his face, I decided to take a different approach to deal with the
issue.
看到他脸上深深的愧疚,我决定采取另一种方式来处理这个问题。
【互助双赢】
From this moment on, I would prepare myself to help others because kindness lifts the
cloud.
从这一刻起,我将做好帮助别人的准备,因为善良能驱散乌云。
In fact, words failed to convey my heartfelt gratitude to them.
事实上,言语并不能表达我对他们由衷的感谢。
A genuine friendship gradually grew between Jane and Fred.
Jane 和 Fred之间慢慢建立起了真挚的友谊。
This difficult time has brought our families closer together.
这段艰难的时期让我们两家的关系更亲密。
【救人于危】=【意外发生】+【伸出援手】+【转危为安】
救人于危主要讲述主人公在日常生活中目睹或亲身经历的各种意外事件(如交通事故、火灾、突发疾病等),期间主人公或者其他人挺身而出,帮助遇险者或被困者转危为安,展现了普通人不平凡的一面。
【意外发生】
sb stumbled upon the heartbreaking sight of a homeless family huddling in a cold alley.
某人偶然看到无家可归的一家人挤在寒冷的小巷里,画面令人心碎。
It saddened me to think ……
一想到某事,我就很难过。
3. Flames danced menacingly, threatening to engulf the wreckage.
火焰凶狠地舞动着,威胁着要吞没残骸。
4. The water seemed to grow deeper, and his arms and legs began to feel heavy. Panic set
in as he realized he was struggling to stay afloat.
水似乎越来越深,他的胳膊和腿开始感到沉重。当他意识发生到自己正挣扎着保持漂浮时,他恐慌了起来。
【伸出援手】
Nervous as I felt, I did my best to keep myself calm, and packed bread, salad and meat
to those in need.
尽管感到紧张,但我尽力保持冷静,并给那些需要帮助的人打包了面包、沙拉和肉。
We began to line up everything for the donation.
我们开始为捐赠活动做一切准备。
Sensing the danger, sb rushed to his aid.
某人感觉到了危险,冲过去帮助他。
【转危为安】
1. Their faces lit up with smiles as they thanked sb for sb’s companionship and support.
他们的脸上洋溢着微笑,感谢了某人的陪伴和支持。
2. Since that day, I have spared more of my time to do charity work.
从那天起,我抽出更多的时间做慈善工作。
3. Despite the challenges we faced during the activity, the gratitude expressed by these children made us feel that all our efforts had been worth it.
尽管我们在活动中面临着挑战,但这些孩子们表达的感激之情让我们觉得所有的努力都是值得的。
The sound of sirens grew louder, signaling the arrival of professional rescuers to
secure the scene.
警笛声越来越响,预示着专业救援人员即将到来,以确保现场安全。
5. She was overwhelmed with gratitude to the strangers who had come to her rescue, especially Jack, whose quick thinking had saved her life.
她对那些赶来救她的陌生人充满了感激之情,尤其是Jack,他的敏捷思维救了她。
It was a hard-fought victory that showed the courage and dedication of these brave
men and women who risked their lives to save others in need.
这是一场来之不易的胜利,展现出勇敢的人们冒着生命危险拯救其他需要帮助的人的勇气和奉献精神。
【2020新高考I&II卷】
【导语】善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里,他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床,女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱,家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情,生活十分困难。后来,Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意--制作爆米花,让Bernard去卖爆米花。
【续写】
1:Mrs Meredith 对John 想法的反应
2:Harry, Clara 和John 各自分工去帮助制作爆米花
3:Bernard 对 孩子们帮助的反应
4:Bernard和小伙伴 一起卖爆米花
5:结果没卖掉,大家很伤心
6:John 突然有个想法,把爆米花拿到电影院门口卖或是买二送一
7:卖光爆米花,孩子们很开心
8:主题升华
【险境求生】=【意外遇险】+【求救自救】+【化险为夷】
面对大自然的不可抗力,主人公积极尝试逃脱避险,同时力所能及地救助他人,在敬畏自然的同时也学会了保护自己。
【意外遇险】
An unfortunate incident took place.
不幸的事情发生了。
As they awoke the next morning, they discovered that their situation had worsened
overnight.
第二天早上他们醒来时,发现自己的处境一夜之间恶化了。
They came to the terrifying realization that they were in danger!
他们惊恐地意识到自己处于危险之中!
The dirt and sand stung my skin like a thousand bees.
泥土和沙子像上千只蜜蜂一样刺痛着我的皮肤。(沙暴)
5.Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another.
被风吹着的火焰从一棵树的树顶跳到另一棵树上。(山火)
6.Waves about twelve meters high came rushing in, drowning everything.
大约 12米高的海浪涌了过来,淹没了一切。(海啸)灾害
7. I could hear what sounded like a million car alarms ringing from the ground.
我能听到地面上好像有100万辆汽车的警报器在响。(地震)
【求救自救】
1. And then, from somewhere further down, she heard a weak cry for help.
然后,她听到从更深的地方传来一声微弱的呼救声。
2. Climbing over the mountains ourselves to search for help seemed to be our only chance of survival.
自己翻过山去寻求帮助似乎是我们唯一的生存机会。
3. Instead of coming down the roof, the two sisters cheered each other up and took turns to shout loudly to try and attract their parents’ attention.
两姐妹没有从房顶上下来,而是互相鼓励,轮流大声喊叫,试图引起父母的注意。
【化险为夷】
1. I will never forget that terrifying experience.
我永远不会忘记那次可怕的经历。
2.They had eventually escaped from their nightmare.
他们最终逃离了噩梦。
3.It was not until the third morning that the rescuers finally arrived.
直到第三天早上,救援人员终于赶到了。
No words can describe my excitement when I realized I was somehow still alive.
My parents hugged me tightly in their arms as tears of joy ran down our cheeks like rivers
that wouldn't stop flowing.
当我意识到我还活着时,我的兴奋之情难以言表。父母紧紧把我抱在怀里,喜悦的泪水顺着我们的脸颊流下来,像滔滔不绝的河流。
【人与动物】=【偶然事件】+【帮助陪伴】+【暖心结局】
和谐互救主要讲述主人公在某种情况下遇到受困或受伤的动物并采取行动帮助动物脱困或康复,或者在某种情况下主人公遇到了困难或危险,动物出现救人脱困的故事。家有萌宠主要讲述家养宠物的趣事或是家人和宠物之间相互治愈的故事。常见的宠物有猫、狗、鹦鹉等。故事情节可能涉及收养流浪小动物、宠物生病离去、宠物给家里带来欢乐或者麻烦等,故事的总体基调温馨治愈。
【偶然事件】
I saw a baby deer lying on the ground, who was obviously suffering from thirst
and heat.
我看到一只小鹿躺在地上,显然它正遭受着口渴和炎热的折磨。
2. The cat suddenly jumped up and yowled. It stood there with its fur standing straight up.
那只猫突然跳起来,哀嚎了一声。它站在那里,毛都竖了起来。
3. With their eyes fixed on the ground, they moved cautiously forward, watching out
for the hunter’s traps.
他们的眼睛盯着地面,小心翼翼地向前移动,提防着猎人的陷阱。
4. As Bobby opened the box, his eyes widened with delight at the sight of the tiny, fluffy
ducklings his father had brought him.
当Bobby打开盒子,看到爸爸送给他的毛茸茸的小鸭子们时,他高兴地睁大了眼睛。
【帮助陪伴】
A group of hikers quickly gathered, working together to free the animal and provide it with much-needed water and food.
一群徒步旅行者迅速聚集了起来,共同解救了这只小鹿,为它提供了急需的水和食物。
2. As Mike gently released the trapped bird, it spread its wings and took flight.
The successful rescue made him sigh in relief.
当Mike轻轻地将这只被困的鸟放飞时,它张开翅膀飞了起来,救援成功令他松了一口气。
3.The firefighters were glad to hear the joyful barks of the rescued puppy, which was
safely reunited with its owner.
消防员们很高兴听到这只被救出的小狗欢快的叫声,现在安全地与主人团聚了。
【暖心结局】
1.The minute I arrived home after a long day, my dog greeted me with an enthusiastic
wagging tail and showered me with unconditional love.
漫长的一天结束,我回到家的那一刻,我的狗热情地摇着尾巴迎接我,让我沐浴在毫无保留的爱中。
2. As I approached the parrot's cage, it eagerly hopped over and greeted me with a joyful squawk, hoping for games and conversations.
当我走近鹦鹉的笼子时,它急切地跳过来,用欢快的叫声迎接我,希望和我玩游戏和对话。
The little dog gradually changed from timid to lively and active, adding much sunshine
to my boring life.
小狗渐渐从胆怯变得活泼好动,给我枯燥的生活增添了许多阳光。
【2023 浙江1月卷】
【导语】作者被邀请去一个农场野餐,发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了,作者把蜂鸟救了,把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走,当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时,它开始动了,但是却不肯飞走,徘徊着,后来终于飞走了,当作者准备离开时,蜂鸟又飞到作者面前,好像是在和作者告别。
【续写】
想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想
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