2024届高考英语二轮复习:2024年合肥一模英语读后续写 课件 (共14张PPT)

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2024届高考英语二轮复习:2024年合肥一模英语读后续写 课件 (共14张PPT)

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读后续写原文
Catherine had stayed at home all her life to look after her three children, but now, she, who lost her husband in a car accident, had to step out and earn money to make ends meet. With zero work experience and no professional degree, her chances of getting hired for a well-paid job were next to zero.
One day, after dropping her children at school, Catherine spotted a construction site. "I think I can work here," she thought and approached the manager.
"Hi, are you hiring " she asked. "Yes, we are," the manager looked at Catherine from head to toe. "Are you sure you can work here This job requires a lot of hard work." "I'm ready for it," she told the manager and signed a contract to work a 12-hour shift.
However, Catherine kept her new job a secret from her children. She thought they would feel embarrassed after learning their mother worked at a construction site.
Every morning, after dropping her children to school, she would go to the construction site and work until her shift ended. She would pick up heavy bricks on her shoulder to transport them from one part of the site to the other.
One evening, Catherine's son, Peter, told her about an upcoming contest in school that required mothers to participate. In the competition, students will wear blindfolds and have to recognize their mothers without looking at them. "That sounds like such a cool event, Peter!" Catherine said excitedly. "I can't wait for it!" "I won't go there with you, mom," Peter replied. "But why " What her son said next was something Catherine wasn't prepared to hear.
"Mom, I would have to touch your hands to recognize you, and everyone would look at them,"
Peter explained. "Your hands are so ugly. They're so hard and rough," he added. "I will feel so embarrassed when my classmates look at your hands," the boy said. "I won't attend the event." Catherine felt terrible but couldn't say anything in her defense.
读后续写原文
注意:续写词数应为 150左右
Para.1 A few weeks later, Peter was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention.
Para.2 On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother.
Para.1
衔接句:What did Peter see?
1. 他看到一群建筑工人正在休息,其中一位妇女坚定地扛着沉重的砖块。(定从)走近一看,彼得才发现那是自己的母亲凯瑟琳。
微场景-看到妈妈
He saw a group of construction workers taking a break, among whom a woman was carrying heavy bricks with determination. After a closer look, Peter recognized that the woman is his mom.
2. 他的目光盯到一个正在一个建筑工地上辛苦劳作的熟悉身影。(非谓)“是妈妈!”他惊呼道。
His gaze was fixed on a familiar figure laboring at the construction site. “It’s my mom!” He exclaimed in shock.
Para.1
过渡句:What did his mother do in the construction site?
1.凯瑟琳满身汗水和灰尘,用饱经风霜的双手搬起沉重的砖块。(非谓语)在灼热的阳光下,她的脸涨的通红,显得疲惫不堪,发出一声声沉重的叹息。(独立主格,非谓语)
微场景-妈妈辛苦搬砖1
Catherin, covered in sweat and dust, lifted heavy bricks with her weathered hands. In the scorching sun, she seemed very weary with her face flushing red,breathing heavy sighs.
Para.1
过渡句:What did his mother do in the construction site?
2. 他的妈妈很努力地将砖抬起来,把它们扛到肩上,跌跌撞撞地艰难前行。
汗水浸湿了她的衣服,但她来不及擦拭,仍然来回奔跑着。
微场景-妈妈辛苦搬砖2
His mum struggled to lift the bricks, carried them on her shoulders and staggered forward painstakingly. She kept rushing back and forth, ignoring the sweats which had soaked her dirty shirt
Beads of sweat were dripping down her face.
Para.1
衔接句:How did Peter feel?
Peter 震惊地站在那里,一句话也说不出来。与此同时,一股内疚和悔恨涌上心头。他懊悔自己不该说出那些伤人的话。
微场景-愧疚、懊悔情绪描写
Peter stood rooted to the spot in suprise, unable to utter a word. Meanwhile, a wave of guilt and regrets flooded over him. He was remorseful/regretful about saying those hurtful words.
Guilt washed over him as he recalled his earlier words and the sad expression flashing across his mother’s face.
Para.1
衔接句:How did Peter feel?
看到这个, Peter 留下懊悔的泪水, 他意识到他之前是多么愚蠢。
微场景-愧疚、懊悔情绪描写
Seeing this, Peter can’t help shedding tears of regret. He realized how foolish/selfish/cruel he had been.
Para.2
衔接句:What did he think about/do?
微场景-下定决心1
After careful consideration, Peter decided to take advantage of the upcoming contest in school, where he can express his apologies officially.
1.在认真思考后,Peter决定利用即将到来的学校的比赛来正式表达他的道歉。
Para.2
衔接句:What did he think about/do?
微场景-下定决心2
2. Peter 决定等妈妈一回来他就要当面诚恳地道歉。
Peter decided that he would make apologies in the presence of his mother sincerely as soon as she came home.
Para.2
过渡句:How did Peter finally apologize?
微场景-道歉1
In the competition, Peter recognized his mother immediately the referee announced the start. He held his mother’s hands in triumph, introducing his mom to his classmates proudly. Then, he wrapped his arms around his mother and murmured,“Sorry, mum.Now I know the reason why your hands are rough. They are a testament of your sacrifice. Thank you.”
1.在比赛中,Peter 在裁判员一宣布比赛开始后就认出了他的妈妈。Peter 得意洋洋地举起妈妈的手,骄傲地向朋友们介绍自己的妈妈。之后,他搂住妈妈,楠楠地说道:“对不起。现在我知道你手粗糙的原因了。他们是你为家奉献的见证。谢谢。”
Para.2
过渡句:How did Peter finally apologize?
微场景-道歉2
The moment Catherine stepped into the house, Peter rushed up to her and took her hands firmly.“Mom,sorry,” He murmured, with tears rolling in his eyes,“I have witnessed your arduous work at the construction site. Now I know they are the most beautiful hands in the world, holding up a piece of sky for us.
2. 凯瑟琳一踏进家门,彼得就冲上去,紧紧握住她的手。“妈妈,对不起。”他喃喃地说。泪水在眼眶里打转。“我看到你在工地上干活了。现在我知道您的双手是世界上最美丽的双手,给我们撑起一片天.
Para.2
结尾句和主题
“There’s no walking on sunshine except someone managing to crack a silver lining in the clouds.” Peter felt it deep in his heart, making a silent vow to support his mother in every way he could./in every way possible.
1.“哪有什么岁月静好,只不过有人在负重前行。”Peter深刻地感悟到这一点,默默地决定以后要尽可能地去帮助母亲分担一些。
主题升华
Para.2
结尾句和主题
主题升华
“There’s no walking on sunshine except someone managing to crack a silver lining in the clouds.” Peter felt it deep in his heart, making a silent vow to support his mother in every way he could./in every way possible.
1.“哪有什么岁月静好,只不过有人在负重前行。”Peter深刻地感悟到这一点,默默地决定以后要尽可能地去帮助母亲分担一些。
Para.2
结尾句和主题
Catherin was surprised by the sudden embrace and words, but soon her face cracked into a wide/brilliant smile. With all the burden unloaded, she gazed at his son lovingly and enjoy this moment to her heart’s content.
2.Catherin被这突来的拥抱和话语惊到,但她的脸上很快就流露出灿烂的笑容。她卸下所有的负担,宠爱地看着孩子,尽情享受着这温馨的一刻。
主题升华

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