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I was eight years old and wasn't aware of all the arrangements being made for our journey as a family to London in 1950. My mother was in great pain and wished to visit specialists in London. My father reluctantly had to sell our property in Queensland. The day before we boarded the ship, Father unwillingly said goodbye to his five-year-old cattle dog, Spider, who was loved by us all. Father's friend Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas, as he had been getting to know Spider for many weeks.
我当时八岁，不知道1950年我们全家去伦敦的旅程所做的一切安排。我母亲非常痛苦，希望去伦敦看专家。我父亲不情愿地卖掉了我们在昆士兰的房产。在我们登船的前一天，父亲不情愿地向他五岁的牛头犬Spider道别，它受到了我们所有人的喜爱。我们在海外时，父亲的朋友桑迪将成为他的监护人，因为他已经认识蜘蛛好几个星期了。
Six weeks later, an airletter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. Sandy had advertised constantly on ABC radio and other regional newspapers. Despite many“sightings ”, the dog was never found. It seems Spider just kept running and searching for us. As he was cattle dog, my father thought he would be shot or dingo-trapped, because of his appearance. But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was still alive.
六周后，桑迪发来了一封航空信，告诉我父亲蜘蛛在我们航行两周后就逃跑了。桑迪经常在美国广播公司电台和其他地区报纸上做广告。尽管多次“目击”，这只狗始终没有被发现。蜘蛛好像一直在跑，一直在找我们。由于它是一只牛头犬，我父亲认为它会被射杀或被困，因为它的外表。但我们的家人认为父亲对蜘蛛还活着抱有秘密的希望。
We sailed back to Australia two years later and re-established our home. My father immediately began his own search for Spider. One cold winter's Saturday morning eight months after our return, my father had a call from an elderly lady living on her own on the outskirts of the town. As she told my father on the telephone, it was “just glimpses of a dingo-type dog in the shadows”of her disused tennis court. That was enough for my father to interrupt my homework.
两年后，我们乘船返回澳大利亚，重新建立了我们的家园。我父亲立即开始自己寻找蜘蛛。在我们回来八个月后的一个寒冷的冬天的周六早上，我父亲接到了一位住在城郊的老太太的电话。正如她在电话中告诉我父亲的那样，这“只是在她废弃的网球场的阴影中瞥见一只野狗”。这足以让我父亲打断我的家庭作业了。
We set off in his blue and black Jensen car which he had brought back from England. It was hardly the right vehicle for the rough roads we travelled that day. Five and a half hours later, we found the run-down old property. Sadly, she told my father that the “dingo dog”hadn't been around for a few days. My father had a strange look in his eye. He put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle for Spider.
我们乘坐他从英国带回的蓝黑简森轿车出发。对于我们那天行驶的崎岖道路来说，这辆车几乎不是合适的。五个半小时后，我们找到了破旧的房子。不幸的是，她告诉我父亲，这只“野狗”已经好几天没来了。我父亲的眼睛里有一种奇怪的表情。他把两根手指放在嘴唇上，为蜘蛛吹了一声特别的口哨。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.
Paragraph 2: Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles (刺) off him.
文本分析：
故事大意：
八岁那年，我们全家从昆士兰搬到伦敦。全家都舍不得我们原来的家，五岁的斗牛犬Spider留给了父亲的朋友照管。六周后，桑迪发来了一封航空信，告诉我父亲Spider在我们航行两周后就逃跑了，它一直试图找我们。很久都没有Spider的消息，我们都因为它死了。两年后，我们乘船返回澳大利亚，重新建立了我们的家园。我父亲立即开始自己寻找蜘蛛。一位老太太的电话，让我们重新燃起希望。到了Spider可能出现的地方，却没有狗的踪影。父亲把两根手指放在嘴唇上，为Spider吹了一声特别的口哨。
续写情节发展：
--长大了，Spider飞奔到了我父亲的怀里。我父亲的眼睛闪闪发光，我和老太太站在那里，眼里噙着泪水。他不停地舔我父亲的脸，发出令人窒息的声音。当我们开车回家时，他从来没有把目光从我父亲身上移开过。
--我们用肥皂轻轻地把他清洗干净。Spider坚忍地站在那里，我父亲也检查了他的牙齿和耳朵。多年来，蜘蛛一直在我家前廊度过余生总是等着我和妹妹放学回家。我们再也没有把他单独留在任何地方。
官方范文，
Suddenly there wars a soul in the bush. Out of the growth flew this battered dog right into my father's arms. Spider had leaped over the tennis court fence with great force and certainty. My father's eyes shone , and the old lady and I stood there with tears in our eyes. He kept licking my father's face and making choking noises. He smelt dreadful. We wrapped him in an old blanket and I held him on my lap on the way back. He never once took his eyes off my father as we drove home. Every so often I received a lick of gratefulness.
Once home we had the task of getting all the prickdes (刺) off him. Before he was put in a tin tub,we gently cleaned him up with soap. Spider stood stoically through all this as my father also examined his teeth and ears. Spider spent the rest of his days-years--on the front porch, content and satisfied, always in wait for my sister and me coming home from school where he would give us a lot of licks to make sure we were all right. He then waited for my father by the garage door. We never left him anywhere alone again
参考范文一，
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. It was familiar yet rough. A sensation of disbelief mixed with anticipation overwhelmed us. I felt a lump in my throat. My father stared directly at the bush, his eyes glittering with anxiety and expectation. Was it a miracle Was this was what we had expected. Soon a yellow fury figure dashed from the bush, barking loudly. The moment it saw us, it threw itself onto my father, with tail wailing wildly. It circled around every one, licking and barking enthusiastically yet bitterly. Though it was dirty and substantially thin, we knew it was Spider instantly. Dad hugged it and tried to kiss it back, but let out a cry. It turned out that his body was covered by dirt and prickles.
Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles (刺) off him. Although it let out a cry now and then, it just licked us all the time. When it was clean, so thin was it that its ribs could be seen clearly. Mom couldn’t help shedding tears and all our heart bled for it. It was hard to imagine what difficulties he had overcome. It was also hard to guess what had inspired it to keep waiting with constant disappointments. We really wished that we should have taken it with us to England. What a brave and loyal dog! From that day, we wore that we would never leave it again and be together eternally.
参考范文二，
Suddenly there wars a sourl in the bush. It was faint at first, but as we strained our ears, the sound grew clearer and familiar. Could it be Was it possible that Spider had finally found us after all these months My heart raced with anticipation as my father and I exchanged hopeful glances, daring to believe that our beloved companion was near. There he was, emerging from the shadows of the trees, his tail wagging furiously and his eyes shining with joy. It was a moment of sheer disbelief and overwhelming happiness as we rushed to embrace him, showering him with hugs and kisses.
Once home, we had the task of getting all the prickles off him. It just stood there, licking us all the time. With each gentle stroke, Spider's eyes sparkled with sensation, reflecting the love for us. It was a bittersweet moment, knowing that Spider had endured hardships in his quest to reunite with us. His return filled our home with joy and warmth, like a missing piece of our family puzzle had finally found its place. As we basked in his company, it was clear that Spider's unwavering devotion had woven its way into the fabric of our hearts, and we would never leave him behind again.

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