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读后续写四步走
第一步：巧用情感句：读后续写一般富有故事性，所以基本要涉及各种情感。
情绪类形容词和名词：
快乐happy--happiness
兴奋excited--excitement
羡慕envious-一envy
宽慰relieved--relief
恼怒annoyed-annoyance
尴尬embarrassed--embarrassment
失望disappointed一disappointment
恐惧horrible-horror
忧虑anxious--anxiety
孤独lonely--loneliness
惊诧amazed--amazement
高兴delighted-delight
满意，satisfied--satisfaction
渴望Eager---eagerness
生气angry---anger
悲伤sad-sadness
羞愧ashamed--shame
绝望hopeless-hopelessness
无聊bored-boredom
困惑puzzled--puzzlement
惊讶surprised→surprise
遗憾regretful--regret
万能结构：sb.felt a great sense of+情绪名词+welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.（某人感到一股强烈...在内心升腾,奔涌）
例:He felt a great sense of sorrow welling up in his heart and surging through him.他感到强烈的悲伤涌入心头。
情感句积累：
①The smile on his face shone like a diamond笑容如宝石般闪闪发光<开心>
②wild with joy欣喜若狂<喜悦>
③With tears of guilt flowing down her cheeks,..... 流下内疚的眼泪<内疚>
With tears of sorrow rolling down her cheeks,...... 流下伤心的眼泪〈伤心〉
④His mouth dropping open in astonishment. 他惊奇地张大嘴<惊讶>
⑤His anger was within his eyes, burning like a fire.愤怒在眼里像火一样 （愤怒）
⑥His face went white and a flood of fear welled up in his heart.<害怕>
他脸色苍白，一股恐惧涌上心头
⑦The initial sadness gave way to joy最初的悲伤变成了喜悦<快乐>
第二步：巧用对话：读后续写因为具有比较强的故事性，其中可穿插对话，写对话时会出现“×××说”,这时要我可多用其他说法来代替“×××said”,使得对话情境，人物情绪更加丰满。
①表示“说”的有: (一般都是用过去式）
said/uttered说
shouted/screamed大叫
repeated重复
nodded点头
continued继续说
emphasized强调
Answered/replied回答道
explained解释道
begged乞求说
whispered轻声说
murmured低语
yelled大叫道
②修饰“说”的副词与短语
sadly 伤心地
bitterly 伤心地
gloomily忧郁地
proudly 骄傲地
politely 礼貌地
quietly 轻声地; 温和地
softly 轻轻地;温和地;柔和地
gently 温柔地;温和地
eagerly 渴望地；热切地
vaguely心不在焉含糊地
meekly 温顺地;逆来顺受地
in a kind voice 以亲切的声音
in a loud, firm voice 以响亮、坚定的声音
in a sweet, musical voice 以她甜美悦耳的嗓音
in a husky voice 低沉沙哑地轻声说话
in a comforting voice 以安慰的声音
in amazement 吃惊地
in desperation 绝望地
写作时将①和②结合起来写
例:"we can't go out", she emphasized in a firm voice.
对话积累：
①Jack cleared his throat and spoke in a low,polite tone.
Jack清了清嗓子,低声有礼貌地说,
②The little girl murmured softly,trying to explain what happened to her mother.
小女孩轻声低语，试着向妈妈解释发生了什么。
③She whispered to her father,softly and gently.
她轻声地对父亲说…
第三步：动词，形容词，名词等多个并列使用＜为避免语句单调，我们在写作的时候可以并列使用一些词汇,比如“漂亮的女孩”可以将“a beautiful girl”加长为“a kind and beautiful girl”还可以用定语从句再次修饰女孩."a kind and beautiful girl who wears glasses.
积累：
①表示“又…又…”:
又累又饿→tired and hungry
又惊又怕→shocked and frightened
既失望又伤心→disappointed and sad
例:Tired and hungry,they decided to have a rest.
②与其说....不如说(more....than)
More upset than worried与其说担心,不如说不安
More proud than happy与其说高兴,不如说自豪
③多个动词并列：
He reached out a hand, grabbed her by the arm and dragged her back,他伸出一只手,抓住她的胳膊,把她拖回来
She gave me a comforting smile and nodded while listening with patience、她给了我一个安慰的微笑,一边点头,一边耐心听着
第四步：万能结尾句<读后续写一般会涉及到相应地主题,如“帮助他人”“变得自信”等,相应的结尾开华就出来了＞
万能结构:That experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it那次经历深深刻在我的脑海中,什么都不能擦除它。
①以哲理结尾:
I believe God is glad to help someone who wants to help himself我相信自助者天助
Life is full of dilemmas and conflicts, but we should smile and never give up生活充满矛盾与两难,但我们不该放弃.
Many years has gone by, but whenever I look back to that day, I am still grateful for the lesson in forgiveness that she taught me.许多年过去了，但每当我回想起那一天，我仍然感激她教给我的宽恕。
②以景结尾:
No matter how cold the winter was,all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth.不管冬天多冷,他们现在感受到的是温暖
In the heavy snow, passion and love burnt as they hugged and smiled.在大雪中，他们拥抱着，微笑着，激情和爱燃烧着。
The wind murmured in the trees and the sunlight flooded in through the window, warming the whole room, as if the freezing ice was all melted.
风在树间沙沙作响，阳光透过窗户照进来，温暖了整个房间，仿佛冰封的冰都融化了。
③自然而然结尾:
Many years later,she still remembered the lesson that she learned许多年后,她仍然记得那一刻。
With tears dropping from his eyes, he ran to his mum’s warm hug, smiled and said gently, “Mum, thank you.”他泪如雨下，跑向妈妈温暖的拥抱，微笑着温柔地说:“妈妈，谢谢你。”
Satisfied, Mom nodded at Emma, with a joy bubbling from her heart.
妈妈满意地朝艾玛点了点头，心里充满了喜悦。

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