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读后续写平安夜
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When my boys were younger, going out with them was difficult. My heart sank during the holiday season every time I looked at the long line of kids waiting to meet Santa. This was not an activity our family could enjoy. The noise and crowds caused sensory (感官的) overload for my five-year-old son Noah, an autistic( 患自闭症的) child. I also had a younger son, Henry, who needed an extra hand. Waiting in line was hardly possible.I always hoped for the best but planned for the worst when I took the boys out of the house, but I knew that attempting to get a picture with Santa wasn't worth the risk. If we had attempted to stand in line for even a few minutes, I would have been chasing Noah, and Henry would have experienced an emotional breakdown. It was easier to stay at home.On the afternoon of Christmas Eve a year ago, the phone rang. The voice on the other end of the line said, “If you're at home this evening, I'd like to arrange for Santa to stop by.” It was Denny, the friendly owner of a company, who had helped us with our do-it-yourself project. In a short time he was at our home, Denny's kindness and ability to relate to our kids were evident.I felt nervous and excited about having Santa come to our home. Denny told me it would be well arranged. Would our kids even notice Would they be frightened by a stranger in a red suit Would they cry A few minutes before I was planning to cook dinner on Christmas Eve, Santa tapped gently on the living-room window. Noah was speechless, and his jaw dropped. Henry, two years old, waved and said, “Hi, Santa!"
My heart sank during the holiday season every time I looked at the long line of kids waiting to meet Santa. 在假期里，每当我看到等待与圣诞老人见面的长队孩子时，我的心都会沉下去。
The noise and crowds caused sensory (感官的) overload for my five-year-old son Noah, an autistic( 患自闭症的) child.噪音和人群导致我五岁患自闭症的儿子诺亚的感官超负荷。
an extra hand额外的帮手
an emotional breakdown情绪奔溃
In a short time he was at our home, Denny's kindness and ability to relate to our kids were evident.不久他就到了我们家，丹尼的善良和与我们的孩子相处的能力是显而易见的。
Noah was speechless, and his jaw dropped.诺亚惊呆了说不出任何话。
注意:
续写短文的词数应为150左右;
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1 :
Excited and nervous, I opened the door and Santa stepped inside.
Paragraph 2:
Santa left after staying. for only a few minutes and tears streamed down my face.
参考范文：
Excited and nervous, I opened the door, and Santa stepped inside. “Ho, ho, ho! Merry Christmas, boys!" He greeted my sons in a voice that couldn't scare them. His long white beard and bright red suit attracted the boys so much that they approached to watch him carefully. Santa didn't seem to be disturbed, instead, he quietly sang Jingle Bells for them. And it was the first time that our home had been filled with festive atmosphere. Then, Santa took a seat on our couch and each boy sat on his lap while I took pictures.
Santa left after staying at our home for only a few minutes, and tears streamed down my face. A mixed feeling of thrill and gratitude took hold of me. As an autistic kid's mother, I knew how difficult it was for Noah to accept an entire stranger, but he made it. Witnessing the bright smiles on kids' faces, I was grateful to Denny. Without his generous love and kindness, my boys wouldn't have enjoyed meeting Santa in our own home. So warm and special was the Christmas Eve that it would remain one of our most treasured holiday memories.
续写译文
我又兴奋又紧张，打开门，圣诞老人走了进来。“嗬，嗬，嗬！圣诞快乐，孩子们！他用一种不吓到我儿子的声音向我的儿子们打招呼。他长长的白胡子和鲜红色的西装吸引了男孩们，他们走近仔细地看着他。圣诞老人似乎没有被打扰，相反，他悄悄地为他们唱了铃儿响叮当。这是我们家第一次充满节日气氛。然后，圣诞老人在我们的沙发上坐下，每个男孩都坐在他的腿上，而我则拍照。
圣诞老人在我们家只待了几分钟就离开了，泪水顺着我的脸流了下来。内心充满了激动与感激。作为一个自闭症孩子的母亲，我知道诺亚接受一个完全陌生的人是多么困难，但他做到了。目睹孩子们脸上灿烂的笑容，我很感激丹尼。没有他慷慨的爱和善良，我的孩子们不会喜欢在我们自己的家里见到圣诞老人。平安夜是如此温暖和特别，它会一直是我们最珍贵的假期回忆之一.
续写亮点
He greeted my sons in a voice that couldn't scare them.
运用了定语从句。
His long white beard and bright red suit attracted the boys so much that they approached to watch him carefully.
运用了so...that结构。
And it was the first time that our home had been filled with festive atmosphere.
运用了it was the first time that 主 had done.
As an autistic kid's mother, I knew how difficult it was for Noah to accept an entire stranger, but he made it.
运用了it be adj for sb to do.
Witnessing the bright smiles on kids' faces, I was grateful to Denny.
运用了现在分词短语作状语。
Without his generous love and kindness, my boys wouldn't have enjoyed meeting Santa in our own home.
运用了虚拟语气。
So warm and special was the Christmas Eve that it would remain one of our most treasured holiday memories.
运用了so+adj放于句首句子倒装。

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