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专题04 热点话题预测之提出建议
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2023新高考全国Ⅰ& Ⅱ卷
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan
I’m Li Hua from Class ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
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Passage 1 2023年2月四省联考
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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【答案】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
Passage 2 湖北十一校2024届第一次联考
假如你是李华，你校交换生Harvey在校园网上发布了一则广告，寻找一个合适的寄宿家庭 (host family) , 以更好地体验当地人的生活和提高他的中文水平。请你给他写一封邮件，推荐自己的家，
内容包括：
1、推荐的理由：
2、学习中文的建议。
注意：
1、词数80词左右：
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Harvey,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Harvey,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. Having noticed your advertisement for a host family on the school website, I’m writing to recommend my home, which I think is the perfect place for you.
My home is located in a beautiful neighborhood, and it’s just 5 minutes’ walk to a city park, where many people often play traditional instruments, Chinese chess and Tai Chi. Furthermore, every morning on the street there are various freshly made local snacks with reasonable price, which are authentically delicious as well as great for your budget. As for my family, they’re all friendly and easy-going. My dad is intensely interested in Chinese calligraphy while my mother is good at cooking, which means you’re able to practice Chinese and learn some Chinese recipes if you live with us
By the way, the best way to improve your Chinese is communicating as often as possible with natives and I’d much like to help you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3 2023·浙江省·期中考试
随着网络的普及，网络诈骗，网络欺凌等青少年网络安全问题成为大家关注的一个焦点，李华所在的班级围绕“网络安全问题”召开主题班会，假定你是李华，以“How to stay safe online”为标题，写一篇发言稿。主要包括以下内容：
1. 强调网络安全的重要性；
2. 提出建议（如保护好个人隐私、文明上网等）；
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
How to stay safe online
Good afternoon, my dear classmates/fellow students!
With the wide spread of the Internet, we have easy access to almost everything we want to know. Meanwhile, there are also hidden/potential dangers that we can't see through. Then what should we do to stay safe online
First of all, don't click on any strange link so as to avoid property loss. Second, protect your privacy. Don't give away your personal information like name or address, and never see strangers you meet online. Finally, always be polite in the virtual world. Try not to be a target for a cyberbully.
Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world.
Thank you!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为一篇命题写作，话题为随着网络的普及，网络诈骗，网络欺凌等青少年网络安全问题成为大家关注的一个焦点，李华所在的班级围绕“网络安全问题”召开主题班会，假定你是李华，以“How to stay safe online”为标题，写一篇发言稿。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①access to获得
②click on点击
【高分句型】
①Meanwhile, there are also hidden/potential dangers that we can't see through.（that引导的定语从句）
②Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world.（部分倒装句）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍写作的目的
中心：强调网络安全的重要性及提出建议
结尾：表达期望
【拓展词汇】
①be of great importance很重要
②in face of面对
③take measures/steps/action采取措施
【拓展句型】
①I'm appealing to all of you to do sth. as a way to fight with/against sth.我呼吁大家做某事来作为抵制某事的一种方式。
②As far as I'm concerned, everyone should obey the rules and government should take relevant measures to regulate the management and solve these problems.在我看来，每个人都应该遵守纪律，并且政府也应当采取相应措施来规范管理并解决问题。

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