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续写：Jobie的幸运鞋
“Number 7, Jobie Nymble, takes the lead（领先）,” cried the announcer. “Just one more hurdle （跨栏）and -- ” Cheers erupted. “Jobie Nymble from Riverside Middle School takes first place in the girls’ 100-meter hurdles!”
The crowd went wild as Jobie’s teammates screamed and yelled.
Determined to go all the way to County championships（锦标赛）, Jobie patted her worn（穿旧的）neon-green track spikes（钉鞋）. They were bursting at the seams（接缝处）, but she didn’t care. They were her lucky shoes and she loved them. “Next Saturday, we’re taking the gold home,” Jobie whispered to her spikes, excitedly retying（重绑）them.
“Don’t forget, guys.” said Marisol, one of her teammates cheerfully. “My birthday party is next Friday at Hidden Park.”
“Beep. Party recorded in calendar,” joked Jobie in her best robot voice.
Jobie brimmed with excitement all week long. At track practice, she leaped over those hurdles faster than she’d ever leaped before.
The day of Marisol’s party came. Jobie put on her favorite outfit: her fancy blue shorts, an old track T-shirt from her dad, and her lucky spikes.
The party was in full swing（如火如荼地进行）when Jobie arrived at Hidden Park. Music and the smell of grilled food filled the air. Two of Jobie’s teammates rushed toward her, breathless and barefoot, asking her to try the slide. Jobie’s eyes darted toward the party area. Suddenly, she saw it. The BIGGEST inflatable（充气的）slide she had ever seen was on the far side of the park. Smiling kids zoomed（快速移动）down the slide at unspeakable speeds.
Without thinking twice, Jobie took off her spikes and rushed toward the slide. Its ladder stretched to the sky like Jack’s magical beanstalk（杰克的魔法豆茎）, but she reached the top in no time. She sat down, slipped to the edge, and closed her eyes as she let go. Jobie couldn’t get enough, conquering the slide over and over again. When it was finally time to go home, she reluctantly made her way back to the track where she’d left her shoes.
Para1: As she eyed the area from a distance, panic set in.
Para2: The next day, without her lucky spikes, Jobie was among the best track teams gathering for the championships.
（一）预设情节
1. Jobie Nymble wins the girls’ 100-meter hurdles at Riverside Middle School.
2. Jobie is determined to win at the County championships with her lucky shoes.
3. Marisol invites the team to her birthday party at Hidden Park.
4. On the day of the party, Jobie wears her favorite outfit and lucky spikes.
5. Jobie arrives at the party, sees the inflatable slide, and decides to try it.
6. When it's time to leave, Jobie goes back to where she left her shoes.
（二）问题思考
1. Why did panic set in when Jobie eyed the area from a distance
Panic set in because Jobie could not see her lucky spikes where she had left them; they seemed to be missing.
2. What significance did the lucky spikes have for Jobie
The lucky spikes were significant to Jobie as they were considered her good luck charm and she believed they played a part in her success in track events.
3. How did Jobie and her teammates react to the realization that the spikes were missing
Jobie likely felt a rush of worry and disappointment, realizing the importance of her spikes for the upcoming championships, while her teammates might have shared her concern and possibly helped look for them.
4. In what state of mind was Jobie when gathering with the best track teams for the championships without her lucky spikes
Jobie was probably feeling nervous and less confident without her lucky spikes, given their sentimental value and the belief in their luck.
5. How did the absence of her lucky spikes affect Jobie's performance at the championships
Initially, Jobie might have felt disadvantaged without her spikes, but her participation among the best track teams suggests she still performed well.
（三）续写情节概述
第一段：As she eyed the area from a distance, panic set in.
解释panic原因。Jobie到处找鞋，同学也加入进来，但是没找到。Jobie失去鞋后的感情。
第二段：The next day, without her lucky spikes, Jobie was among the best track teams gathering for the championships.
一开始Jobie很消极，后来她对自己说只能靠自己了！然后比赛开始了。Jobie尽全力向前冲，努力跨过一个个栏。当她第一个冲过终点线时，全场欢呼。那时她意识到是她的实力让她成为冠军，而不是鞋子给她的运气。
（四）范文
Paragraph1: As she eyed the area from a distance, panic set in. She failed to catch the sight of her spikes! Jobie searched frantically for her spikes, scanning the track field where she remembered leaving them. Her teammates, noticing her distress, joined the hunt, but their search ended up in failure. As the sun set, the park emptied, leaving Jobie and her friends disheartened. For Jobie, those shoes, more than just footwear, were a symbol of success. Jobie couldn't help but feel a mix of sadness and anxiety about the upcoming championship without them.
第一段：当她从远处注视着这个地区时，恐慌开始了。她没能看到她的spikes！乔比疯狂地寻找她的spikes，扫视着她记得把spikes放在那里的田径场上。她的队友注意到她的痛苦，加入了搜寻，但他们的搜寻以失败告终。太阳落山后，公园里的人都走了，留下了乔比和她的朋友们，他们都很沮丧。对乔比来说，那双鞋不仅仅是鞋子，更是成功的象征。对于即将到来的没有鞋子的锦标赛，乔比不禁感到悲伤和焦虑。
Paragraph2: The next day, without her lucky spikes, Jobie was among the best track teams gathering for the championships. As she warmed up, the fact of losing her lucky spikes weighed heavily on her. "Now, it's all up to me,"she told herself, endeavouring to shake off the unease. When the starting whistle blew, she took a deep breath and launched herself forward with determination. The moment she crossed the finish line earlier than anyone else, the crowd's cheers erupted around her. At that moment, it dawned on Jobie that it was her skill and determination that made her a champion, not the luck from shoes. She grinned from ear to ear, with her mind filled with a newfound confidence.
第二段：第二天，没有了她的幸运钉鞋，乔比成为了聚集在一起参加锦标赛的最好的田径队之一。当她热身时，失去幸运鞋钉的事实给她带来了沉重的负担。“现在，一切都由我来决定，”她对自己说，努力摆脱这种不安。当发车哨声响起时，她深吸一口气，坚定地向前冲去。当她比任何人都早冲过终点线的那一刻，她周围响起了欢呼声。在那一刻，乔比明白了，让她成为冠军的是她的技术和决心，而不是鞋子带来的运气。她笑得合不拢嘴，心里充满了新的自信。

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