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人教版（新课标）必修一UNIT3sports and fitness +单元话题写作（含解析 高分句型 词汇）
副标题
考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号 一 总分
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一、书面表达：本大题共15小题，共375分。
1.假定你是某国际学校学生会的负责人李华，最近学校发起了”阳光乐跑（Sunshine Fun Run）“打卡活动，你将在晨会上发言，号召全校同学参加。请就此写一份发言稿，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）乐跑要求；
（3）发出倡议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：打卡 punch in
Dear fellow students,
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear fellow students,
I hope you're all doing well. ①Today, I would like to talk to you about an exciting event that our school is organizing—the Sunshine Fun Run.
The purpose of this event is to promote physical fitness and a healthy lifestyle among our students. ②To participate in the Sunshine Fun Run, all you need to do is punch in your attendance at the designated checkpoints around the school track. I would like to take this opportunity to encourage every single one of you to join in the Sunshine Fun Run. Let's make this event a memorable one, and show everyone our enthusiasm for fitness and well-being.
Thank you for your attention, and I look forward to seeing you all at the Sunshine Fun Run.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇提纲作文。学校发起了“阳光乐跑（Sunshine Fun Run）”打卡活动，你将在晨会上发言，号召全校同学参加。请就此写一份发言稿，内容包括所给内容。以一般现在时为主，可以适当发挥。
【亮点词汇】
①participate in参加
②join in加入
③look forward to盼望
【高分句型】
①Today, I would like to talk to you about an exciting event that our school is organizing—the Sunshine Fun Run.（that引导的定语从句）
②To participate in the Sunshine Fun Run, all you need to do is punch in your attendance at the designated checkpoints around the school track.（不定式作目的状语；省略关系代词的定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：活动目的；
中心：乐跑要求；
结尾：发出倡议。
【拓展词汇】
①appetite食欲，胃口
②build up one's body/strength强身健体
③take an active part in/get actively involved in physical exercise积极参加体育锻炼
④be of some help to对……有所帮助
【拓展句型】
①Getting rid of bad habits like staying up late is an important way to keep healthy.戒掉像熬夜这样的坏习惯是保持健康的重要方式。
②I firmly believe, with your effort, you can manage to get over/overcome these difficulties.我坚信，通过你的努力，你会成功克服这些困难的。
2.假定你是高中生李华。最近，你的英国笔友Amy给你来信，说她因发胖感到非常苦恼。请根据下列写作要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括：
1. 表示安慰；
2. 你的建议；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数 120词左右，开头和结尾已为你写好；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Amy,



Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Amy,
I am really sorry to hear that you are very upset about gaining weight. I quite understand how you feel, since I have been there before. Therefore, I am writing to offer you some tips on how to get back into shape.
②To begin with, I strongly recommend that you should have a balanced diet, because you are what you eat! Say no to junk food and add more healthy foods to your meals, such as vegetables, fish and dairy products. ①In addition, if I were you, I would begin to work out on a regular basis. Start out small by jogging for 30 minutes or doing 30 push-ups every day. Most importantly, always think about fitness rather than weight. There is no point in comparing yourself with the slim people on TV all the time.
Every small change in your lifestyle can make a big difference. Just take the first step towards health and fitness! Wish you luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因发胖感到非常苦恼的英国笔友Amy回一封信，给她一些建议。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：表示安慰
中心：给予建议
结尾：表达祝愿
【高分词汇】
①therefore因此
②in addition除此之外
③recommend推荐
【高分句型】
①In addition, if I were you, I would begin to work out on a regular basis.（if引导的虚拟条件句）
②To begin with, I strongly recommend that you should have a balanced diet, because you are what you eat!（that引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
【拓展词汇】
①keep a good state保持良好的心态
②a positive attitude积极的态度
③lose/recover heart失去/恢复信心
【拓展句型】
①The most important thing is that you should always think about fitness rather than weight.最重要的是，你应该总是考虑健康而不是体重。
②All in all, on the way to success, one should bring his patience as well as perseverance.总之，在成功的道路上，一个人需要耐心和毅力。
3.假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Wilson想向你了解一项具有中国特色的体育运动。请你写一封信向他推荐太极。具体内容应包括：
1. 对太极的简单介绍；
2. 打太极的好处。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Wilson,
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Wilson,
①Hearing that you want to know some sports with Chinese characteristics, I strongly recommend tai chi to you.
②First, tai chi is said to be invented by a Taoist called Zhang Sanfeng in the 13th century, who was inspired by a fight between a snake and a bird. Behind it are deeply rooted rich Chinese culture and philosophy. Most importantly, practicing tai chi has a positive effect on your body both physically and mentally. It enables you to sleep better at night and be more energetic during the day.
I hope you will give it a try and enjoy the benefits it brings to your health.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。你的英国朋友Wilson想向你了解一项具有中国特色的体育运动。请你写一封信向他推荐太极写作。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：对太极的简单介绍及打太极的好处
结尾： 表达希望
【亮点词汇】
①be inspired by受到……激发
②give it a try试一试
【高分句型】
① Hearing that you want to know some sports with Chinese characteristics, I strongly recommend tai chi to you.（that引导的宾语从句）
②First, tai chi is said to be invented by a Taoist called Zhang Sanfeng in the 13th century, who was inspired by a fight between a snake and a bird.（who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【拓展词汇】
①take...into consideration/account考虑……
②enjoy increasingly high popularity越来越受欢迎
③have a good taste of好好体验
【拓展句型】
①Glad/Pleased/Delighted to know that..., I think it a good choice to do sth.（很高兴得知……，我认为做某事是个不错的选择。）
②I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.（我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。）
4.假如你是校学生会主席李华，你校学生会定于近期举行一次“习惯与健康生活”的主题活动。请你以校学生会的名义发一则相关通知，内容包括：
1. 活动目的、时间与地点；
2. 活动主要内容；
3. 呼吁积极参加。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
The Students' Union
【答案】Notice
①In order to give students a better understanding of habits and healthy living, the Students' Union will hold an activity whose theme is "Habits and healthy living".
The event is scheduled to be held in the school cafeteria from 8 a.m. to 12 a.m. on Sunday morning. At that time, we will invite some health experts to give us a talk on this topic. ②In addition, the students' Union will arrange a wonderful performance related to this topic.
Hopefully, all students and teachers will join in it actively.
The Students' Union
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为一篇应用文写作，话题为假如你是校学生会主席李华，你校学生会定于近期举行一次“习惯与健康生活”的主题活动。请你以校学生会的名义发一则相关通知。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①in order to为了
②be scheduled to预定，预期
③in addition另外，此外
【高分句型】
①In order to give students a better understanding of habits and healthy living, the Students' Union will hold an activity whose theme is "Habits and healthy living".（whose引导的定语从句）
②In addition, the students' Union will arrange a wonderful performance related to this topic.（动词的-ed形式作定语）
【结构布局】
引言：活动目的、时间与地点
中心：活动主要内容
结尾：呼吁积极参加
【拓展词汇】
①broaden/widen one's horizons拓宽某人的视野
②make use of/take advantage of利用
③participate in参加
【拓展句型】
①We should take every possible opportunity to acquire more useful knowledge and get fully developed.我们应利用一切可以利用的机会去获取更多有用的知识并得到全面的发展。
②There are varieties of out-of-class activities in our school, which we can take part in after class.我们学校有各种各样的课外活动，我们课后可以参加。
5.假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom来信说，因为学习忙、锻炼少，他最近经常生病，这影响了他的学习，请你给他写一封信，要点包括：
(1)锻炼的重要性；
(2)锻炼有利于学习；
(3)提出锻炼的建议。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you have been sick for days. ①You have studied so hard that you have no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health. It would be of great benefit to your health if you do more exercise.
Actually, exercise can improve your physical conditions and relax your mind. ②Only when you are in good health can you ensure and improve your study efficiency.
③Therefore, I suggest that you take at least one hour's exercise every day. I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇书信，话题为你的笔友Tom来信说，因为学习忙、锻炼少，他最近经常生病，这影响了他的学习，请你给他写一封信，主要以一般现在时和第二人称。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①do harm to对......有害；
②be of great benefit to your health对你的健康大有好处；
③do more exercise多做运动；
④in good health身体健康；
⑤improve study efficiency提高学习效率。
【高分句型】
①You have studied so hard that you have no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health. （so...that...引导的结果状语从句；不定式作定语；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Only when you are in good health can you ensure and improve your study efficiency.（部分倒装）
③Therefore, I suggest that you take at least one hour's exercise every day. （that引导的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明锻炼的重要性
中心：锻炼有利于学习
结尾：提出锻炼的建议
【拓展词汇】
①appetite食欲，胃口
②build up one's body/strength强身健体
③take an active part in/get actively involved in physical exercise积极参加体育锻炼
④be of some help to对……有所帮助
【拓展句型】
①Getting rid of bad habits like staying up late is an important way to keep healthy.戒掉像熬夜这样的坏习惯是保持健康的重要方式。
②I firmly believe, with your effort, you can manage to get over/overcome these difficulties.我坚信，通过你的努力，你会成功克服这些困难的。
6.假如你是高一学生李华，你校英文报Sports栏目正在开展以My Favorite Sport为题的征文比赛。请你向英文报投稿。内容包括：
(1)你喜欢的运动；
(2)你喜欢该运动的原因。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Sport
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【答案】 My Favorite Sport Of all the sports, I like table tennis best. I became interested in it when I was very young. ①I think it is not only a sport but also an art, because it is a game that needs strength and skill.
②The reason why I like it very much is that it is our national ball as well as of great benefit to us. Playing table tennis can build us up, keep us healthy and train our brains. What's more, it can help us to learn to cooperate with each other.
In a word, I like it very much. Though I can't play it well, I still try my best to practise it.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为一篇征文比赛，面向全体学生组织题为My Favorite Sport的征文比赛。要点已给出，写作时应注意用准确的语言将要点表达出来，并适当添加拓展，充实文章内容。写作时，要注意添加适当的衔接词，使行文连贯，另外，可以添加一些高级词汇及句型结构为作文添彩。
【亮点词汇】
①become interested in对……感兴趣
②build up增进；加强
③ cooperate with与……合作
【高分句型】
①I think it is not only a sport but also an art, because it is a game that needs strength and skill. （that引导的定语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
②The reason why I like it very much is that it is our national ball as well as of great benefit to us.（why引导的定语从句；that引导的表语从句）
【结构布局】
开头：交代写作目的
中心：喜欢该项运动的原因及该项运动给的好处
结尾：总结主题
【拓展词汇】
①inform sb. of sth.告诉某人某事
②arouse one's interest激发某人的兴趣
③for sure/certain一定地
【拓展句型】
①I like it in that it can not only broaden my horizon but also enrich my mind.（我喜欢它，因为它不仅能开阔我的视野，而且能丰富我的思想。）
②Not only does the activity arouse students' interest in reading, but it also cultivates students' love for knowledge.（活动不仅激发了学生的阅读兴趣，而且培养了学生对知识的热爱。）
7.健康一直是人们关注的话题。假定你是李华，最近你校要举行以“How to Keep Healthy ”为题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿。
要点：
(1)保持健康的重要性；
(2)保持健康的方法，如：多锻炼，强身健体；多吃水果、蔬菜，保持饮食平衡；摒弃不良习惯等。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
How to Keep Healthy
Dear boys and girls,
I'm Li Hua.
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【答案】
How to Keep Healthy
Dear boys and girls,
I'm Li Hua. As students, under the great pressure of studying, we shall attach importance to good health.
Here are some of my suggestions. First, we'd better take more exercise such as playing basketball, running or swimming to build up our body. ①Second, it is advised that we keep a balanced diet and eat more fruit, as well as vegetables. Last but not least, it is of great importance to form good living habits. ② Keep in mind that we shouldn't stay up late because it is extremely harmful to our health.
I hope we all live a healthy and happy life. Take action now!
Thank you!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。文章以How to keep healthy 为题，写一篇演讲稿。所要写的内容已以简要提纲的形式给出。必须确保要点齐全，句子通顺，写作时应该注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可以适当增加一些衔接词，以便行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①attach importance to重视；着重于……
②such as比如
③as well as也
④keep in mind 记住
【高分句型】
①Second, it is advised that we keep a balanced diet and eat more fruit, as well as vegetables. (that引导的主语从句，it是形式主语）
② Keep in mind that we shouldn't stay up late because it is extremely harmful to our health.（that引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：保持健康的重要性；
中心：保持健康的方法；
结尾：表达希望。
【拓展词汇】
①first of all首先
②besides此外
③most importantly最重要的是
【拓展句型】
①As we know, keeping healthy is of great importance for our students. (我们知道，保持健康对我们的学生来说非常重要。)
②Besides/in addition/additionally, it is advised that we keep a balanced diet and eat more fruit, as well as vegetables. (此外，建议我们保持均衡饮食，多吃水果和蔬菜。)
8.一家英语报社向中学生征文，标题是“Let's live a healthy life"，请用英文写一篇征文。
投稿内容包括：
(1)课余时间加强锻炼；
(2)注意饮食，合理搭配；
(3)以正确的方式来对待来自各方面的压力。
注意：词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Let's Live a Healthy Life

①It's important for us to pay attention to our health which is the foundation of our work and learning.
How to live a healthy life To begin with, we should do more exercise after class, such as jogging, swimming and other outdoor activities. It's of great benefit to both our body and our mind. What's more, a balanced diet will also contribute to our health. ②Finally, we may meet daily pressure coming from every aspect, so we should try to learn how to deal with it in proper ways in order to protect our physical and mental health. ③Only by doing so can we build up our body and live a healthy life.
If you have any other effective way to live a healthy life, please share it with me.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是命题作文，要求以“Let's live a healthy life"为题写一篇征文。写作要点已经给出，写作时不要遗漏要点。本文以第一人称写作，以一般现在时为主。尽量用自己熟悉的词汇和句型来表达，同时也要适当运用一些高级词汇和复合句，为文章增添色彩。
【亮点词汇】
①contribute to有助于，促成
②build up one's body增强体质
【高分句型】
①It's important for us to pay attention to our health which is the foundation of our work and learning. (which引导的限制性定语从句）
②Finally, we may meet daily pressure coming from every aspect, so we should try to learn how to deal with it in proper ways in order to protect our physical and mental health.（动词-ing形式作后置定语）
③Only by doing so can we build up our body and live a healthy life. (only修饰状语放在句首的倒装句）
【结构布局】
引言：提出话题；
中心：保持健康生活的具体措施；
结尾：欢迎其他观点。
【拓展词汇】
①release stress释放压力
② have a positive effect on对……有积极影响
【拓展句型】
①As we all know, taking exercise every day can help build up a strong body and regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy. 众所周知，每天锻炼可以帮助增强体质，定期锻炼是我们保持健康的重要组成部分。
②When it comes to keeping healthy, playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people. 说到保持健康，体育运动受到人们的广泛欢迎。
9.假定你是中学生李华，你的英国笔友Mary写信告诉你，她因为节食减肥生病了。请你根据以下要点用英语给她回一封邮件，鼓励她加强锻炼，早日恢复健康。
(1)表示关心；
(2)给出你的建议；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Mary,
I'm sorry to hear that you are ill. I understand your concern about your weight. But you should take the right way to lose weight.
Firstly, ①you should follow a balanced diet that you like. It will help you maintain a healthy weight and prevent obesity. Secondly, make an exercise plan that you can stick to. ②It'll lift your spirits and make you sleep better at night if you work out regularly.
I hope that you find my suggestions helpful and get well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为应用文书信，主题是鼓励笔友加强锻炼恢复健康，写作时应注意词汇的准确使用和句式的运用，以及适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①take the right way to do...选择正确的方法做某事
②follow a balanced diet保持饮食均衡
③work out锻炼
【高分句型】
①You should follow a balanced diet that you like.（that引导的限制性定语从句）
②It'll lift your spirits and make you sleep better at night if you work out regularly.（if引导的条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：对笔友的情况表示关心
中心：给出建议
结尾：表达祝愿
【拓展词汇】
①as far as sb. be concerned依某人来看
②build up one's body强身健体
【拓展句型】
①You may as well/had better do...你不妨/最好做……
②Only in this way will you...只有用这种方式，你才能……
10.为了让同学们远离疾病，保持身体健康，你班将举行一次班会，主题为“How to be strong and healthy ”。请你根据提示写一篇英文发言稿。
要求：
(1)指出存在问题；
(2)给出解决办法。
注意：
(1)词数80左右（开头已给出，但不计入总数）；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和班级信息；
(3)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to be strong and healthy
It is obvious that some students are neither in good health nor full of energy.
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【答案】
How to be strong and healthy

It is obvious that some students are neither in good health nor full of energy. ①Therefore, I'd like to offer some suggestions on how to keep healthy and energetic.
First of all, to get enough sleep, we'd better form the habit of early going to bed and early rising instead of staying up late. In addition, we ought to take more exercise and do more outdoor activities to strengthen our bodies. ②Last but not least, make sure we keep a balanced diet, which will be beneficial to us.
Follow these suggestions, and we will be strong and healthy and stay away from illnesses.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇命题类作文，要求以“How to be strong and healthy ”为题写一篇发言稿，指出同学们存在的健康问题并给出解决方法。写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。
【亮点词汇】
①stay up熬夜
②keep a balanced diet保持均衡饮食
③be beneficial to对……有益
【高分句型】
①Therefore, I'd like to offer some suggestions on how to keep healthy and energetic.（“疑问词+不定式”作宾语）
②Last but not least, make sure we keep a balanced diet, which will be beneficial to us. (which引导非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：指出存在问题
中心：提出解决办法
结尾：进行总结
【拓展词汇】
①make a big difference意义重大，产生很大影响
②take action采取行动
【拓展句型】
①As you can see, seldom can we see us students work out in the gym or play soccer on the playground. 正如你所看到的，我们很少能看到我们学生在体育馆锻炼或在操场上踢足球。
②Besides, it is exercise and outdoor activities that can give us strength and energy. 此外，锻炼和户外活动可以给我们力量和能量。
11.假设你是李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王来信说自己偏胖，想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给他回一封信，谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下:
（1) 身心健康比漂亮的外貌更重要；
（2) 学生应以学习为主，不要过于注重外表和他人的看法；
（3) 可以通过锻炼身体来保持健康，要改变不良的饮食习惯和生活习惯等等；
（4) 保持健康的心态，自信也很重要。
注意：
（1) 词数100-120；
（2）可适当增加细节及理由，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：心态state of mind；外貌appearance；内在品质inner quality
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【答案】Dear Xiao Wang,
①I have received your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
②It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than pretty appearances. As a student, you should put your study in the first place and not let others' opinions affect your normal life. ③Keep in mind that it is a person's inner qualities that really count. However, if you do want to lose weight, you are supposed to use scientific methods. It is a good idea to achieve your goal by working out regularly and changing unhealthy eating habits and lifestyles. ④What matters most is that you ought to keep a healthy state of mind and stay confident, which will help you with your studies and overcome difficulties in dieting as well.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to you next letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封有关节食减肥建议的回信，提示内容已经给出。写作的时候使用第一人称，以一般现在时为主，注意把提示内容写清楚，尽量使用高级词汇和高级句型，同时要使用合适的衔接词，让文章看起来有条理。
【亮点词汇】
①put... in the first place把……放在第一位
②be supposed to应该……
③work out锻炼
【高分句型】
①I have received your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.（介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful.（that引导的主语从句）
③Keep in mind that it is a person's inner qualities that really count.（that引导的宾语从句，强调句）
④What matters most is that you ought to keep a healthy state of mind and stay confident, which will help you with your studies and overcome difficulties in dieting as well.（what引导的主语从句；that引导的表语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的。
中心：表明对注重外貌问题的看法，提出具体建议。
结尾：希望建议有帮助，期待回复。
【拓展词汇】
①give/offer sb advice/tips/suggestions on sth在某方面给某人建议
②be of some help to对……有所帮助
③take action采取行动
【拓展句型】
①I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。
②You have asked me for my advice about..., and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条建议。
③You may as well/had better do...你不妨/最好做……
12.假设你叫李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Emily来信谈论了她最喜爱的体育运动，并希望了解你最喜爱的体育运动。请根据以下提示用英语写一封回信。要点如下：
1.最喜欢的运动是什么；
2.为什么喜欢这项运动；
3.运动给你带来什么好处。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Emily,
I am so delighted to hear from you. As for my favorite sport, I'd say it's badminton.
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Li Hua
【答案】Dear Emily,
I am so delighted to hear from you. As for my favorite sport, I'd say it's badminton.
①Watching Lin Dan playing badminton at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by his excellent skills and I decided to be just like him. I fell in love with badminton as soon as I started playing it and formed the habit of playing it with my friends at weekends. As time goes by, I have greatly improved my skills. ②Now I am on my school badminton team, which makes me very proud.
Not only does playing badminton build up my body, but also it helps me make a lot of new friends. It makes my life more enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
根据题目要求可知这是一篇书信类的应用文，你的澳大利亚朋友让你介绍你最喜爱的运动。时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。写作要点文章已给出，文章结构要合理，注意分段，要做到层次清晰，表达准确、流畅。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语。
【亮点词汇】
①be deeply impressed by给……留下深刻的印象
②form the habit of形成……的习惯
③build up加强
【高分句型】
①Watching Lin Dan playing badminton at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by his excellent skills and I decided to be just like him.（动词的-ing形式作状语）
②Now I am on my school badminton team, which makes me very proud.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
开头：引出喜欢的运动
中心：喜欢该项运动的原因
结尾：运动带来的好处
【拓展词汇】
①one of the most popular sports 最受欢迎的运动之一
②play an important role 在……中扮演重要角色，起重要作用
③on a weekly basis 以周为单位
【拓展句型】
①Swimming is a fantastic sport, which helps us to relax muscles and strengthen our heart function.（游泳是一项很棒的运动，它可以帮助我们放松肌肉，增强心脏功能。）
②I love swimming because it not only helps me keep fit and healthy, but also it proves an effective way to manage my stress.（我喜欢游泳，因为它不仅帮助我保持健康，而且它证明了一个有效的方法来管理我的压力。）
13.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：
(1)学校的体育场馆；
(2)主要的运动项目；
(3)你喜欢的项目。
注意：(1)词数100左右：
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
①To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. ②Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. ③As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
根据要求和提示信息合理安排篇章中各个部分内容的比例。要做到详略得当、条理清楚、过渡自然、文字简练。此外，要准确使用语法和词汇，尽可能地使用一定的高级句型、词汇和特殊句式，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。恰当选用过渡词，使文章更流畅。要注意句型的多样化。本文主要用一般现在时。
【亮点词汇】
①exceedingly delighted to hear from you很高兴收到你的来信
②a wide range of各种各样的
③as for me对我来说
【高分句型】
①To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. （which引导定语从句）
②Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.（which引导定语从句）
③As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.（since引导状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信意图
中心：介绍运动会的项目及自己喜欢的项目
结尾：发出邀请
【拓展词汇】
①deepen加深
②charm魅力
③build up one's strength强身健体
【拓展句型】
①Near the playground stands the newly built stadium, where various sports events including basketball, table tennis and football matches can be held.新建的体育馆矗立在操场附近，包括篮球，乒乓球和足球等各种运动项目都可以在那里举行
②Delighted to know you show great interest in ..., I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details.（很高兴得知你对……感兴趣，我写信来告诉你一些相关细节。）
③A wide variety of interests and hobbies will broaden our horizons, enrich the school life and make us relaxed.丰富多彩的兴趣爱好让我们开阔眼界，充实学校生活，还能是我们得到放松。
14.假定你是李华，乒乓球是你校传统运动项目。你的英国朋友Terry来信想了解相关情况，请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1.开展历史；
2.课程和活动；
3.受欢迎程度。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
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Li Hua
【答案】Dear Terry,
①I know you are interested in table tennis in our school, and I want to tell you some details.
Table tennis is a traditional sport in our school. Since the establishment of the school, our school has offered table tennis lessons. We have table tennis lessons twice a week, and the school organizes a table tennis match every term. Table tennis is very popular among our students. We can not only get pleasure from playing table tennis, but also become stronger.
②I hope you can join us and have fun. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为假定你是李华，乒乓球是你校传统运动项目。你的英国朋友Terry来信想了解相关情况，请你写一封回信。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be interested in对......感兴趣
①not only... but also...不仅......而且......
【高分句型】
①I know you are interested in table tennis in our school, and I want to tell you some details.（省略that的宾语从句）
①I hope you can join us and have fun.（省略that的宾语从句)
【结构布局】
引言：开展历史
中心：课程和活动
结尾：受欢迎程度
【拓展词汇】
①a wide range of多种多样的
②enjoy great popularity广受欢迎
【拓展句型】
①Delighted to know you show great interest in ..., I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details.（很高兴得知你对……感兴趣，我写信来告诉你一些相关细节。）
②Aimed at promoting/improving/providing..., the activity is to be held/was held...（致力于促进/改善/提供……，活动将于/已于……举行。）
15. 现在，越来越多的年轻人喜欢在网上点餐或打电话叫外卖，不愿意自己做饭，就这一现象结合下面的提示，写一篇短文。
1.陈述现象；
2.说明此现象的原因（至少2点）；
3.你个人的看法和选择。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.行文连贯，语篇完整；3.文中不得透露个人真实信息.
参考词汇：外卖店，外卖餐馆 take-out restaurant
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【答案】 ①Nowadays, a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home.
It's not surprising for them to do so. For one thing, with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, time is quite precious. In their eyes. it is unnecessary to take time to cook. ②For another thing, home cooking food is simpler in kind and less delicious, especially for those who are particular about food.
In my view, our health is closely related to what we eat. The busier we are, the more attention we should pay to food. Therefore, I prefer to cook food at home and go on a balanced diet.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇关于外卖的作文。根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态。
【亮点词汇】
①would rather…than……同……相比，宁愿做某事
②For one thing...For another thing...一方面……另一方面……
【高分句型】
①Nowadays, a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home.（would rather…than……同……相比，宁愿做某事）
②For another thing, home cooking food is simpler in kind and less delicious, especially for those who are particular about food.（句子里For another thing，和上句的For one thing对应，表示“一方面……另一方面”；修饰先行词those，关系词who引导定语从句are particular about food。）
【结构布局】
开头：陈述现象
中心：说明此现象的原因
结尾：个人的看法和选择
【拓展词汇】
①enjoy great popularity广受欢迎
②a wide range of多种多样的
③have a taste/fancy/preference for喜爱
【拓展句型】
①In my opinion, in order to be healthier and safer, we shouldn't eat too much Take-out food．（在我看来，为了更健康和安全，我们不应该吃太多的外卖食品。）
②What's worse, too many food boxes cause much pollution to our environment．(更糟糕的是，太多的食品盒对我们的环境造成了很大的污染。)
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