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人教版（新课标）必修二UNIT2wildlife protection +单元话题写作（含解析 高分句型 词汇）
考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共15小题，共375分。
1.假如你是李华，为响应世界自然基金会（WWF) 关于保护濒危动物的号召，你和同学们做了研究北极熊（polar bear）的课题。现在请你用英文写一封信向该组织汇报你们的研究成果。内容主要包括：
（1) 北极熊的生存现状（全球温度升高，海冰融化）；
（2) 你的建议（至少两点）。
注意：
（1) 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals.
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I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals. ①We especially focus on polar bears and find that the habitat of polar bears is disappearing because the global temperature is getting higher and the sea ice at the North Pole is melting. I worry that when the ice totally disappears, there will be nowhere for polar bears to live.
After discussion, we have some suggestions on saving polar bears. First, I suggest we should be very careful with the energy we use. We could think about traveling by bus or by train instead of using cars. ②Second, we should punish those who do harm to polar bears. Anyone who hunts polar bears must be heavily fined and even be put in prison.
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达要求以保护北极熊为主题写一篇有关北极熊的研究成果，介绍北极熊的生存现状和建议。写作时注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点内容都需要包括。注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用亮点短语和高分句型，使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点词汇】
①do harm to伤害
②be put in prison被关进监狱
【高分句型】
①We especially focus on polar bears and find that the habitat of polar bears is disappearing because the global temperature is getting higher and the sea ice at the North Pole is melting.（that引导宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②Second, we should punish those who do harm to polar bears.（who引导限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：北极熊的生存现状
中心：具体建议
结尾：表达愿望
【拓展词汇】
①awareness意识
② call on/appeal to sb. to do sth.号召/呼吁某人做某事
【拓展句型】
① Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the endangered animals. 应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护濒危动物的重要性。
②There is no immediate solution to the problem, but doing a bit by everyone must make a difference. 没有解决问题的快速办法，但每个人从小事做起会有作用。
2.假定你是李华，家乡有一片湿地（wetland），每到春天，有很多鸟类，包括一些珍稀、濒危鸟类。请根据下列要求和你的想象给WWF（世界野生动物基金）写一封信。
(1)鸟类经常受到伤害；
(2)湿地面积减少；
(3)提出你的建议。
Dear WWF,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear WWF，
There are wetlands in my hometown. And every spring, many birds come to live here, including several rare and endangered ones. ① With various birds everywhere,my hometown looks very beautiful. However, the birds are being badly affected by our human activities.
The harm to the birds is various. Eggs are often picked up. Worse still, people even catch or poison birds for meat. The size of the wetlands is becoming smaller and smaller due to farming. Pollution from chemical factories is also a big problem. Fewer birds arrive here each year.
I strongly suggest taking action to save the birds. ②A wetland reserve should be set up to make sure no one shall harm the birds. We human beings should live with birds peacefully and happily.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇关于书信的应用文写作。写作时注意准确运用时态，使用合适的连词使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，写全要点，可适当增加细节，注意字数要求。
【亮点词汇】
①rare稀有的；珍贵的
②due to由于
③peacefully安详地
【高分句型】
① With various birds everywhere,my hometown looks very beautiful. (With的复合结构作原因状语)
②A wetland reserve should be set up to make sure no one shall harm the birds. (动词不定式作目的状语)
【结构布局】
引言：说明鸟类受到伤害的现状
中心：鸟类受人类行为影响的具体表现
结尾：提出建设湿地保护区的建议
【拓展词汇】
①awareness意识
② call on/appeal to sb. to do sth.号召/呼吁某人做某事
【拓展句型】
① Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the endangered animals. 应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护濒危动物的重要性。
②There is no immediate solution to the problem, but doing a bit by everyone must make a difference. 没有解决问题的快速办法，但每个人从小事做起会有作用。
3.假如你是高三学生李华，你们学校举行了一场演讲比赛，主题为：保护野生动物，就是保护人类自己。请你根据人们近些年因贪吃野味导致疾病跨物种传播为例写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.题目自拟。



【答案】Distinguished ladies and gentlemen,
I am greatly honored to stand here and give a speech about saving ourselves by stopping hunting and eating wild animals.
① Late last year, an unknown new coronavirus crept through the population, turning into a pneumonia outbreak that put the country on high alert in just a month or two.Throughout human history, the consumption of wild animals and the destruction of their living habitats by human beings have greatly increased the contact between humans and animals, causing the deadly viruses of all kinds to spread from wild animals to human populations.
②All in all, only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature, can we stop being a threat to wildlife, to our planet and to ourselves!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇演讲稿，主题为：保护野生动物，就是保护人类自己。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①turning into a pneumonia outbreak演变成一场肺炎爆发
②throughout human history纵观人类历史
【高分句型】
①Late last year, an unknown new coronavirus crept through the population, turning into a pneumonia outbreak that put the country on high alert in just a month or two.（动词-ing作结果状语，that引导定语从句）
②All in all, only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature, can we stop being a threat to wildlife, to our planet and to ourselves!（only+when引导时间状语从句，倒装句）
【结构布局】
引言：演讲主题；
中心：吃野味导致疾病跨物种传播；
结尾：表达愿望。
【拓展词汇】
①arouse/raise people's awareness of environmental protection激发人们的环保意识；
②call on/appeal to sb. to do sth.号召/呼吁某人做某事
【拓展句型】
①If we don't take action to protect animals, we will have to face an increasingly terrible situation.如果我们再不采取措施保护动物，我们将不得不面对越来越糟糕的情况。
②Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the animals.应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护动物的重要性。
4.随着工业的发展，环境问题成了一个非常严重的问题。请你以“如何保护环境”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对环境保护的看法。
要点：
1.环境污染的主要原因；
2.我们应该怎样做来保护环境。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to Protect Our Environment
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【答案】How to Protect Our Environment
①With the development of modern industry, more and more garbage is produced, much of which is hard to recycle. Many rivers and lakes, even oceans are badly polluted.②In addition, many people cut down trees to make money, which has a bad effect on the atmosphere. Unfortunately, some of us have done nothing but complain.
How to protect our environment is a major problem today. And most people are very concerned about this problem. To protect our environment, we should deal with the garbage properly and plant more trees.③ We should start a campaign in which every citizen takes action. In a nutshell, it is urgent that every one of us do something to protect our common homeland.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇命题作文，要表达的主题是关于如何保护环境，首先阐明环境遭到破坏的现状，然后在说明目前人们的环境保护的认识，接下来提出一些保护环境的方法，最后发出号召携手保护我们共同的家园。
【亮点词汇】
①with the development of modern industry随着现代工业的发展
②has an effect on对......有影响
③in addition另外
④be concerned about关心
【高分句型】
①With the development of modern industry,more and more garbage is produced, much of which is hard to recycle. (介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句)
②In addition, many people cut down trees to make money,which has a bad effect on the atmosphere. (which引导的非限定性定语从句)
③We should start a campaign in which every citizen takes action. (介词+which引导的限定性定语从句)
【结构布局】
引言：环境遭到破坏的现状
中心：人们的环境保护的认识和保护环境的方法
结尾：发出号召携手保护我们共同的家园。
【拓展词汇】
①awareness意识
②attach importance to重视
③take measures/steps/action采取措施
【拓展句型】
①If we don't take action to protect the environment on which we are relying, we will have to face an increasingly terrible situation.如果我们再不采取措施保护我们赖以生存的环境，我们将不得不面对越来越糟糕的情况。
②Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the environment.应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护环境的重要性。
③We'll have nowhere to live in the future unless we take action to protect the earth now.如果我们现在不采取措施来保护地球，将来我们会无处生存。
5.假定你是李华，寒假期间，你参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护冬令营。请你写一篇博客分享这段有意义的经历。
(1)活动的时间、地点及内容；
(2)你对野生动物保护的看法和感悟。
注意：短文词数不少于100（题目已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：冬令营：winter camp
A Week In the Wild
This winter holiday, instead of celebrating the Spring Festival with family, I,
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【答案】A Week In the Wild
This winter holiday, instead of celebrating the Spring Festival with family, I, together with 30 other students, went to Yunan and took part in the Wildlife Protection Summer Camp held by WWF.
①We spent one week in the wild rainforests learning about endangered animals from wildlife professionals. We observed how different species of monkeys adapted themselves to their natural habitats. Plus, various activities to help protect them has been organized, such as picking up plastics, removing nets and traps and putting up posters. We were amazed by the tireless efforts that the locals were making.
②The camp not only raised our environmental awareness, but also deepened our understanding of wildlife protection. ②Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we enjoy a better future together.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本题为命题作文，根据已给题目“A Week In the Wild”，分享参与野生动物保护冬令营活动的经历，故回忆叙事部分应采用一般过去时。应包含以下要点，(1)活动的时间、地点及内容；(2)你对野生动物保护的看法和感悟，做到要点齐全，表达清晰，流畅。表达看法以及感悟部分应采用一般现在时。
【亮点词汇】
①instead of代替，而不是
②together with和……一起
③take part in 参加，参与
④pick up挑选
⑤put up张贴
⑥in harmony with 与...和谐相处
【高分句型】
①We spent one week in the wild rainforests learning about endangered animals from wildlife professionals.（动名词短语作宾语）
②The camp not only raised our environmental awareness, but also deepened our understanding of wildlife protection. （not only...but also...连接并列句）
③Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we enjoy a better future together.（only置于句首使用部分倒装）
【结构布局】
引言：简要介绍冬令营活动
中心：介绍活动经历
结尾：分享自己的感悟与看法
【拓展词汇】
①appeal呼吁，恳求
②call on呼吁，号召
③be responsible for/take responsibility for对……负责
④take measures/steps采取措施
⑤attach importance to重视
【拓展句型】
①We'll have nowhere to live in the future unless we take action to protect the earth now.如果我们现在不采取措施来保护地球，将来我们会无处生存。
②Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the environment.应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护环境的重要性。
6.现在动物的数量日渐减少，如果不采取措施，有些动物会有绝迹的危险。作为野生动物保护的成员，李华和他的同学发起了一项活动，号召人们保护濒临灭绝的野生动物。海报内容如下：
(1)比赛目的：提高公众保护动物的意识；建立动物保护区；制定保护动物的法律；
(2)报名手续：凡愿意参加者可到各班班长处报名；
(3)活动时间：5月4日下午2点；
(4)活动地点：校会议室；
(5)举办单位：学生会；
(6)海报发布时间：3月20日。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)涵盖所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当增加细节。
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The Students' Union
March 20th
【答案】 With the animals' habitat destroyed, many wildlife animals are in danger of dying out. If measures aren't taken, they will be in danger of extinction.
In order to raise people's awareness of protecting endangered wildlife animals, we will start a campaign in the meeting room of our school at 2 p.m. on May 4th. ①We all hope that laws concerning animals protection should be made to punish those illegal hunters. Besides, it is necessary to set up natural reserves. ②Anyone who is willing to take part please go to your monitor to sign up. ③There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments are more likely to survive.
All are welcome to be present at the activity. It will be wonderful and you can't miss it.
The Students' Union
March 20th
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为保护濒临灭绝的野生动物，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①in danger of处于……危险之中
②die out灭绝
③raise people's awareness of提高人们对……的意识
④sign up报名
【高分句型】
①We all hope that laws concerning animals protection should be made to punish those illegal hunters.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Anyone who is willing to take part please go to your monitor to sign up.（who引导的限制性定语从句）
③There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments are more likely to survive.（that引导的同位语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明活动主题，交代活动的时间和地点
中心：具体阐述活动的内容
结尾：发起号召，要求参加
【拓展词汇】
①a knowledge of……方面的知识
②broaden/widen one's horizons拓宽某人的视野
③make use of/take advantage of利用
④participate in参加
【拓展句型】
①We'll have nowhere to live in the future unless we take action to protect the earth now. 如果我们现在不采取措施来保护地球，将来我们会无处生存。
②Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the environment. 应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护环境的重要性。
7.假定你是李华，你校“关爱动物”社团在校公众号英语专栏刊登了一则招聘志愿者启事，请你写一封应征邮件。内容包括：
(1)写信目的；
(2)个人优势；
(3)希望获准。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：公众号official account
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【答案】Dear Sir,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. ①I've read the advertisement that you have posted in our school official account and I am interested in it. Now I'm writing to apply for the job as a volunteer.
First, as an active participant in various volunteer work, I have a lot of experience in serving others. Most importantly, I love animals and I have been involved in some campaigns of caring for animals. As we know, volunteers are playing an increasingly important role in raising awareness of protecting animals. Protecting them means protecting ourselves. ②Therefore, I would truly appreciate it if you could give me the chance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为应聘校“关爱动物”社团志愿者。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确适用，可适当增加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①apply for申请，请求
②be involved in参与，被卷入
【高分句型】
①I've read the advertisement that you have posted in our school official account and I am interested in it.（that引导的定语从句）
②Therefore, I would truly appreciate it if you could give me the chance.（if引导的条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：介绍个人优势
结尾：希望获准
【拓展词汇】
①be qualified/suitable/fit for适合
②live up to one's expectations不辜负某人的期望
【拓展句型】
①If you think I am the perfect person for..., please contact me at your earliest convenience.（如果您认为我是……的最佳人选，请尽早联系我。）
②I have been working in... since..., and have gained rich knowledge and experience in this field.（自从……以来，我一直从事……，获得了与该领域相关的丰富的知识和经验。）
8. 假如你是李华，得知藏羚羊（Tibetan antelope）因非法捕猎而濒临灭绝。请你在“世界野生动植物日”来临之际用英语给《英语周报》写一封关于如何保护藏羚羊的建议信。
内容包括：
(1)藏羚羊现状及原因；
(2)提出至少两个保护该动物的建议。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
With World Wildlife Day approaching, _______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir,
With World Wildlife Day approaching, I'm writing to offer some suggestions on protecting the Tibetan antelope.
①As is known, Tibetan antelopes, one of the rare animals in China, are sharply decreasing in number due to illegal hunting, making them close to extinction. Therefore, immediate measures must be taken. Firstly, we must draw public attention to the problem, making people understand the severity of the problem. ②Secondly, more strict laws should be passed to make killing them against the law, allowing their population to recover slowly.
I hope these suggestions could help solve the problem before it's too late.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求写一封建议信，话题为保护藏羚羊。书写时注意运用高级词汇和正确句式的使用，可适当增加衔接词以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①close to extinction濒临灭绝
②draw one's attention to引起某人的注意
【高分句型】
①As is known, Tibetan antelopes, one of the rare animals in China, are sharply decreasing in number due to illegal hunting, making them close to extinction （as引导的非限制性定语从句；动词的-ing形式作状语）
②Secondly, more strict laws should be passed to make killing them against the law, allowing their population to recover slowly.（动词的-ing形式作状语）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的；
中心：介绍藏羚羊现状及原因，给出保护该动物的建议；
结尾：表达愿望，希望建议采纳。
【拓展词汇】
1. practical实用的
2. as far as sb. be concerned依某人来看
3. give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人建议
4. be of some help to对……有所帮助
5. take action采取行动
【拓展句型】
1. I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。
2. You have asked me for my advice about ..., and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条建议。
9.假设你是李华，世界自然基金会（WWF）是世界上最大的从事自然和野生动物保护的国际组织。请你给他们的负责人发一封邮件，指出野生动物面临的危机并提出建议。
内容包括：
(1)表明写信目的；
(2)猎杀野生动物的后果；
(3)提建议。
注意：
(1)词数100词左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a senior high school student.
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a senior high school student. ①Learning that many wild animals are being killed and become extinct due to merciless human activities, I'm writing to express great concern and offer you some suggestions.
Undoubtedly, hunting wild animals will cause the imbalance of our ecosystem and give rise to the spread of infectious diseases from animals to human beings. ②From where I'm standing, never should we have wild animals for food, since they are part of environment. Additionally, the government are supposed to introduce relevant regulations to punish the hunters severely.
Sincerely hope you could take my proposals into consideration. Looking forward to your immediate reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇建议信的应用文，话题为向世界自然基金会的负责人发一封邮件，指出野生动物面临的危机并提出建议。要点提示已给出，动笔前应明确写作要点，不能遗漏，并对要点做适当的思路拓展，以充实文章内容。写作时，要注意词汇的使用和句式的选择。
【亮点词汇】
①due to由于
②give rise to导致
③be supposed to应该
④take...into consideration把……纳入考虑范围
【高分句型】
①Learning that many wild animals are being killed and become extinct due to merciless human activities, I'm writing to express great concern and offer you some suggestions.（动词-ing形式作状语；that引导宾语从句）
②From where I'm standing, never should we have wild animals for food, since they are part of environment.（倒装句；since引导原因状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：表明写信目的
中心：说明后果并提出建议
结尾：期待回复
【拓展词汇】
①arouse/raise people's awareness of激发人们……的意识
②appeal to sb. to do sth.呼吁某人做某事
③make an effort to do sth.努力做某事
【拓展句型】
①Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the environment. 应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护环境的重要性。
②Confronted with this situation, we should take a series of effective measure to solve it. 面对这种情况，我们应该采取一系列有效的措施来解决它。
10. 假设你是李华，你参加了一次以“野生动物保护”为主题的讲座，请给你的美国朋友David写一封邮件，分享这次讲座。内容包括：
(1)讲座内容；
(2)讲座后的感想。
注意：
(1)词数80词左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear David,
How are you going these days Last Friday I attended a lecture about wildlife protection. I'd like to share this lecture with you.
Wild animals are man's close friends. ①Not only do they provide us with fun, but also they play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. However, they are being over hunted and some species are becoming extinct every day. If it keeps on, we, human being are to be punished sooner or later.
Fortunately, we have taken immediate actions. ② The government takes effective measures to safeguard wildlife. Reserves are set up to protect them from attacks. Volunteers also watch over them day and night. With the joint efforts of the government and local volunteers, some, such as antelopes, finless porpoise were removed from the endangered species list.
Wild animals are part of the world. Without variety, our earth can't survive. We are supposed to shoulder the responsibility to preserve them and live in harmony with them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为野生动物保护，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①attended a lecture听讲座
②sooner or later迟早
③live in harmony with和……和谐共处
【高分句型】
① Not only do they provide us with fun, but also they play a key role in keeping the balance of nature.（not only提前的部分倒装句）
②The government takes effective measures to safeguard wildlife.（不定式短语作目的状语）
【结构布局】
引言：礼貌问候，说明写信目的
中心：介绍讲座内容
结尾：表达听讲座后的感想
【拓展词汇】
①awareness意识
②call on/appeal to sb. to do sth.号召/呼吁某人做某事
【拓展句型】
①If we don't take action to protect the wildlife with which we are living, we will have to face an increasingly terrible situation.如果我们再不采取措施保护我们共同生存的野生动物，我们将不得不面对越来越糟糕的情况。
②Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the wildlife.应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护野生动物的重要性。
11.假定你是李华，你所在的城市将举办《生物多样性公约》第十五次缔约方大会（COP 15），主办方正在招聘志愿者。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.口语能力；
2.相关经验；
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that you need volunteers for COP15, I'm writing to apply to be one of them.
I think I'm suitable for the job. ①At first, I'm fluent in English, which will help me communicate with foreign guests. More importantly, I once worked as a volunteer in our school.②Because of the experience, not only can I adapt to the job quickly, but also I can deal with the problems easily. In addition, I'm outgoing and always get along well with others and I believe I can be a good helper.
③I really hope that I can get the chance.④I'd appreciate it if you could reply me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求写一篇请求当志愿者的信。写作要点已经给出。写作时要注意格式，紧扣主题。时态用一般现在时，以第一人称为主。写作时，可以适当增加一些细节内容，以使行文连贯充实。准确使用一些连接词，让文章更紧凑，层次结构清晰。尽量运用自己熟悉的词汇和句型准确而得体地表达。可以使用一些高级词汇和复合句，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点词汇】
①apply to be申请成为
②be suitable for适合
③adapt to适应
④in addition另外
【高分句型】
①At first, I'm fluent in English, which will help me communicate with foreign guests. (which引导非限制性定语从句）
②Because of the experience, not only can I adapt to the job quickly, but also I can deal with the problems easily.（not only放在句首的倒装句）
③I really hope that I can get the chance. (that引导宾语从句）
④I'd appreciate it if you could reply me soon. (if引导宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：写信目的
中心：介绍自己的情况
结尾：期待回复
【拓展词汇】
①be qualified/suitable/fit for适合
②live up to one's expectations不辜负某人的期望
③have a good command of精通
【拓展句型】
①Learning from... that you are looking for a(an)..., I would like to apply for the position/job.从……那儿得知您需要一名……，我想申请这个职位/工作。
②I am confident that I am suitable for.../I am qualified to do.../I am equal to doing...我相信我适合……/有做……的资格/能胜任做……
③If you think I am the perfect person for..., please contact me at your earliest convenience.如果您认为我是……的最佳人选，请尽早联系我。
12.你在英国的笔友Jim想要向你了解中国野生动物的具体情况。请根据下面内容，给Jim写一封信。
1.目前野生动物的生存状况堪忧。
2.请阐述状况所产生的原因。（至少2个方面）
3.解决办法。（至少3种办法）
可适当调整内容的顺序和增加细节，使其连贯。词数100词左右。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Nowadays, the number of wildlife species decreases faster and faster. What's worse, more and more wild animals are in great danger.
①It is our human activities that should be responsible for it. On the one hand, they have no place to live in due to climate changes and people destroying their natural habitats. On the other hand, people kill them for their fur and meat, which can be made into different products, making great profits.
As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we took some effective measures to protect wildlife from extinction. First of all, the government should found some nature reserves to provide natural habitats for wild animals. ②Meanwhile, the government should get tough with the people who kill endangered species. Besides, we should raise people's awareness of protecting animals. Only by doing these things can we live in harmony with animals.
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇提纲类作文写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点词汇】
①be responsible for对......负责
②On the one hand..., on the other hand一方面......另一方面......
③As far as I am concerned就我而言
【高分句型】
①It is our human activities that should be responsible for it. (强调句式It is…that强调主语our human activities)
②Meanwhile, the government should get tough with the people who kill endangered species. (关系词who引导定语从句kill endangered species，指代先行词the people)
【结构布局】
引言：目前野生动物的生存状况堪忧
中心：野生动物现状和减少原因
结尾：解决办法
【拓展词汇】
①awareness意识
②call on/appeal to sb. to do sth.号召/呼吁某人做某事
③make an effort to do sth.努力做某事
【拓展句型】
①Confronted with... , we should take a series of effective measure to do sth.面对……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……
②At the same time, we should realize that there are some problems caused by sth.与此同时，我们应该意识到存在一些由某事引起的问题。
③To improve the situation, it is advisable for you to take the following measures.为了改进这种情况，您最好采取以下措施。
13.假定你是李华，你从网上得知志愿者组织GoEco正在招募去巴厘岛(Bali)保护海龟的志愿者。请你给该组织写一封邮件申请参加，内容包括:
(1) 写信目的；
(2) 个人优势；
(3) 希望获准。
注意：
(1) 词数80左右；
(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a 16-year-old high school student from China. I'm writing to apply for the job to help protect sea turtles in Bali.
I think I am qualified for this work. ①First, I've learnt much about sea turtles and know how to take care of them. Besides, I have relevant experience—I've volunteered twice overseas, so I can adapt to the new environment quickly.
I'd appreciate it if you accept me. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
此篇书面表达是写一封申请信。在写作提示的基础上，可适当增加一些细节，但须确保文章的连贯性。写作时用一般现在时，人称用第一人称。一些亮点词汇和短语能提升作文档次。
【亮点词汇】
①apply for申请
②be qualified for胜任
③take care of照顾
④relevan相关的
⑤adapt to适应
【高分句型】
①First, I've learnt much about sea turtles and know how to take care of them.（how引导的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：写信目的
中心：个人优势
结尾：希望获准
【拓展词汇】
①live up to one's expectations不辜负某人的期望
②have a good command of精通
【拓展句型】
①Learning from ... that you are looking for a(an) ..., I would like to apply for the position/job.从……那儿得知您需要一名……，我想申请这个职位/工作。
②It seems to me that this experience, together with my education, has given me ideal preparation assume the role of ... in a firm such as yours.对我来说，这些经验加上我的学历，是我具备了担任贵公司……职位的条件。
③If you think I am the perfect person for ..., please contact me at your earliest convenience.如果您认为我是……的最佳人选，请尽早联系我。
14.你被自己所在的城市选为“动物代言人”，请你用英语发表一篇120字左右的演讲稿，呼吁人们保护野生动物。内容包括：
1.野生动物的现状堪忧；
2.如何保护野生动物；
3.号召人们增强保护动物的意识。


【答案】 ①As we all know, our planet is our beautiful home, where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously. However, more and more wildlife is faced with extinction. Their habitats are becoming smaller with more new roads and railways being built. Even worse, to make profit, hunters are killing wildlife.
It's high time that we should change our way of life and stop hunting wildlife. "When the buying stops, the killing can too." If everyone boycotts buying any products made from wildlife, the killing can be stopped. ②Only when we enhance our awareness of animal protection can we stop being a threat to our planet.
That's all. Thank you.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍野生动物的现状以及如何保护野生动物，并呼吁人们保护野生动物。时态以一般现在时为主，注意文章衔接紧密、逻辑通顺，尽量多使用高级词汇、短语和句式，提高文章得分档次。
【亮点词汇】
①be faced with extinction面临灭绝
②even worse更糟的是
③make profit牟利
【高分句型】
①As we all know, our planet is our beautiful home, where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously.（where引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Only when we enhance our awareness of animal protection can we stop being a threat to our planet. （部分倒装）
【结构布局】
引言：野生动物的现状
中心：如何保护野生动物
结尾：号召人们保护动物
【拓展词汇】
①have an effect/influence/impact on对……有影响
②do great harm to/be harmful to对……非常有害
③call on/appeal to sb. to do sth.号召/呼吁某人做某事
【拓展句型】
①If we don't take action to protect the environment on which we are relying, we will have to face an increasingly terrible situation.如果我们再不采取措施保护我们赖以生存的环境，我们将不得不面对越来越糟糕的情况。
②Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the environment.应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护环境的重要性。
15.将下面5个句子按括号内要求翻译并连成一篇微作文。
1.现如今，大量的野生动物正在被杀戮，这严重破坏了自然的平衡。（现在进行时）
2.全世界范围内的非法猎捕使得许多物种濒临灭绝. (die out)
3.各种各样由食用野生动物引发的疾病也在威胁着人类的生存. (threaten)
4.幸运的是，关心环保的人们正在采取有效的措施。（定语从句; be concerned about)
5.我们只有与自然和谐相处，才能过上幸福的生活。(only+倒装句；harmony）
【答案】 Nowadays, a large number of wild animals are being killed, which seriously destroys the balance of nature. ①Not only has illegal hunting around the world brought many species to be dying out, but also a variety of diseases caused by eating wild animals are also threatening human survival. ②Fortunately, people who are concerned about environmental protection are taking effective measures. Only when we live in harmony with nature can we live a happy life.
【解析】略【思路点拨】
本文是一篇微作文写作，话题为保护野生动物。写作时注意词汇的选择和句式的准确运用，可适当添加一些衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①die out灭绝；消失
②be concerned about关心；挂念
③take effective measures采取有效措施
【高分句型】
①Not only has illegal hunting around the world brought many species to be dying out, but also a variety of diseases caused by eating wild animals are also threatening human survival.（部分倒装句）
②Fortunately, people who are concerned about environmental protection are taking effective measures.（who引导的定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍现在野生动物的状况
中心：影响人们的解决措施
结尾：呼吁人们与自然和谐相处
【拓展词汇】
①as is known to all众所周知
②take action采取行动
【拓展句型】
①Every effort counts/makes a difference.（一切努力都很重要。）
②Confronted with the disappearance of wildlife, we should take a series of effective measures to solve this problem.（面对野生动物的消失，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来解决这个问题。）
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