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人教版（新课标）必修三UNIT4space exploration +单元话题写作（含解析 高分句型 词汇）
考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号 一 总分
得分
注意事项:
1.答卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。
2.回答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡对应题目的答案标号涂黑；如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时，将答案写在答题卡上，写在试卷上无效。
3.考试结束后，本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
一、书面表达：本大题共12小题，共300分。
1.假定你是李华，你的英国网友Tom即将参加一个主题为“Life in the future”的演讲比赛，来信和你探讨对未来生活的设想。就此请你用英语给他回封信。内容包括：
（1）饮食方面；
（2）交通方面；
（3）教育方面。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
①I'm glad to hear that you will take part in a speech contest whose theme is "Life in the future". Now let me offer you some opinions about it.
②What we will eat may be different from now. We will have some food planted in space to enjoy. Interestingly, we will travel to different places by jet bag. At the same time, paying a visit to space may become a reality. Most importantly, there will be robots playing the role of teachers at home to teach us all the subjects.
I hope that my ideas can do a favor for you and you will win the contest. Good luck!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作，话题为未来生活畅想，写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。
【亮点词汇】
①take part in参加，参与
② play the role of扮演，担任……角色，起着……的作用
【高分句型】
①I'm glad to hear that you will take part in a speech contest whose theme is "Life in the future". (that引导的宾语从句; whose引导的定语从句)
②What we will eat may be different from now. (what引导的主语从句)
【结构布局】
引言：说明写作目的
中心：对未来生活的设想
结尾：给予祝福
【拓展词汇】
①technological revolution科技革命
②remote control遥控
③beyond imagination无法想象
【拓展句型】
①Future is actually like a secret, some areas of which are beyond the reach of our imagination.未来事实上就像一个谜，有些领域我们简直无法想象。
②When we fall ill, there is no need to go to hospital because our robots can examine us and send our information to the hospital.生病时，没有必要去医院，因为我们的机器人能给我们做检查并将信息发到医院。
2.假定你是李华，你们学校上周组织了一次“参观太空科技馆”的实践活动。请给英国笔友Jackson写一封信分享你参加本次活动的经历。内容包括：
1. 活动的时间和地点；
2. 活动的内容；
3. 活动的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jackson,
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jackson,
I am genuinely delighted to tell you of my "Visit to a Space Science and Technology Museum" organized by our school last weekend.
We set off for the Space Museum in Guangzhou at 8:00 am on Sunday. On arrival, some volunteers gave brief introduction of the astronaut life, before our looking through photos of human exploration in space. Then we joined in VR games of walking on the moon joyfully. ①We were given opportunities to observe stars by a huge telescope, which greatly satisfied our curiosity.
②Through the activity, not only did I realize the bravery of astronauts, but also I experienced some scientific tools for space exploration. I do hope you have the chance to take part in such a rewarding tour.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作，要求给英国笔友Jackson写一封信分享“参观太空科技馆”实践活动的经历。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be genuinely delighted to由衷地高兴
②have the chance to有机会…
【高分句型】
①We were given opportunities to observe stars by a huge telescope, which greatly satisfied our curiosity. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Through the activity, not only did I realize the bravery of astronauts, but also I experienced some scientific tools for space exploration. (部分倒装句)
【结构布局】
引言：活动的时间和地点
中心：活动的内容
结尾：活动的感受
【拓展词汇】
①memorable难忘的
②be engraved in my mind刻在我的脑海里
③outstanding杰出的
④apply myself to全身投入于……
⑤make contributions to对……做出奉献
【拓展句型】
①Not only does the activity broaden my horizons, but also inspires me to work harder.这次活动不仅让我大开眼界，而且激励我更努力地学习。
②A wide variety of interests and hobbies will broaden our horizons, enrich the school life and make us relaxed.丰富多彩的兴趣爱好让我们开阔眼界，充实学校生活，还能使我们得到放松。
3.假定你是李华。最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探险的意义。请结合下表内容，给校报用英语写一篇文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
一些同学赞同 一些同学反对 你自己的观点
获得新的知识 耗资巨大
从太空取得 新资源 宇航员的 安全问题
扩大人类的 生存空间
注意：
(1)词数80～120；
(2)标题与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
提示：astronaut宇航员； resource资源
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. ___________________________________________________________________
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【答案】 Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
①Some of us think it important to research the outer space because, first of all, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human life.
However, others think very differently. ② They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.
In my opinion, people should be pioneering and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题作文，话题为Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO 写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①first of all首先
②in my opinion按照我的观点
③bring about带来
④be worth trying out值得尝试
【高分句型】
①Some of us think it important to research the outer space because, first of all, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. (think it+形容词+to do句型)
②They said this kind of exploration is much too costly.（省略that的宾语从句)
【结构布局】
引言：引出讨论的主题
中心：介绍同学们的观点
结尾：表达自己的观点
【拓展词汇】
①potential潜在的
②breakthrough突破
③beyond imagination无法想象
【拓展句型】
①Future is actually like a secret, some areas of which are beyond the reach of our imagination.未来事实上就像一个谜，有些领域我们简直无法想象。
②Everything has two sides and ... is not an exception.任何事情都有两面性，……也不例外。
4.假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim观看了中国的太空授课，发来邮件和你讨论太空探索（space exploration）的话题。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.观看的方式及感受；
2.太空授课的意义。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to share more details with you about space exploration.
①I was so proud when I saw the live science lecture delivered from the Tiangong space station via the Internet, which was interactive as the students on the ground were able to communicate with the three Chinese astronauts in real time during the class. You know, science education has always been one of the important functions of China's space missions, which I believe is of great significance. ②More young generations watching these lectures will be inspired to explore the unknown space.
What do you think of this event Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为回复一封电子邮件讨论太空探索。主要以第一人称和一般现在时。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：感谢来信
中心：观看的方式及感受
结尾：太空授课的意义
【亮点词汇】
①be of great significance意义重大
②be inspired to do sth.受到启发去做某事
【高分句型】
① I was so proud when I saw the live science lecture delivered from the Tiangong space station via the Internet, which was interactive as the students on the ground were able to communicate with the three Chinese astronauts in real time during the class.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②More young generations watching these lectures will be inspired to explore the unknown space.（动词-ing形式作后置定语）
【拓展词汇】
①be faced with stress面对压力
②keep a good state保持良好的心态
③a positive attitude积极的态度
【拓展句型】
①Not only does the activity broaden my horizons, but also inspires me to work harder.这次活动不仅让我大开眼界而且激励我更努力的学习。
② On the way to success, one should bring his patience as well as perseverance.在成功的道路上，一个人需要耐心和毅力。
5.中国首个火星探测器(Mars Probe) “天问一号” (Tianwen 1）于2020年7月23日成功发射；2021年5月，“天问一号”将抵达火星。请你以“China sends up first Mars Probe”为题为校报英文版写一篇英文报道，内容包括：
(1)“天问一号”成功发射；
(2)发射的影响；
(3)你的感想。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】China sends up first Mars Probe Hearing that the first Chinese Mars Probe Tian Wen 1 launched on July 23th, 2020 aims to land on Mars around May, 2021,I am honored to be here to congratulate beforehand on the success. ①Without doubt, had it not been for the hard work, we Chinese couldn't have gain such great achievements.②As a student of my generation, I firmly believe it is a time with both challenges and opportunities, when we could achieve whatever we fight for if we spare no effort to attain the goal. At the same time, the more I know about my country, the deeper love I have for her. Wish China, my motherland, all the best.
【解析】略【思路点拨】
本文是一篇英文报道，话题为“天问一号”成功发射。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①aim to do sth.打算做某事
②without doubt毫无疑问地
③gain such great achievements取得如此巨大的成就
④spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力地做某事
【高分句型】
①Without doubt, had it not been for the hard work, we Chinese couldn't have gain such great achievements.（虚拟语气）
②As a student of my generation, I firmly believe it is a time with both challenges and opportunities, when we could achieve whatever we fight for if we spare no effort to attain the goal.（省略that的宾语从句；when引导的非限制性定语从句；whatever引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：“天问一号”成功发射
中心：发射的影响
结尾：表达感谢
【拓展词汇】
①exploration探测，探究
②manned spaceflight载人航天
【拓展句型】
①The reusability of this next wave of spacecraft will help develop commercial markets, which is believed to be space tourism.下一波宇宙飞船的可重用性将用于商业市场，也就是太空旅行。
②Once the cost of putting something into space goes down, the number of things you can afford to do goes up greatly.一旦进入太空的成本下降，人们可以做的事情就可以极大地增加。
6.假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom来信和你讨论他对太空探索的看法，他认为花巨资探索太空是没有必要的，请你据此给他写一封回信。内容包括：
(1)你对他的观点的看法；
(2)你对太空探索的看法和理由。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I have known your ideas about exploring space. _______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】 DearTom,
I have known your ideas about exploring space. ①I don't agree that exploring space is a waste of time and money. Actually, it's more important than you can imagine.
The space technology can help to improve the techniques in other fields. ②With the help of satellites, GPS is widely used all over the world. Besides, space technology represents a country's scientific and technological level. ③ Last but not least, exploring space helps us to think about the future of mankind.
In closing, exploring space is so important that we should continue this great project.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是应用文写作。要求给笔友Tom写一封英文信，陈述对Tom的观点的看法和自己对太空探索的看法和理由。要求文章脉路清晰，格式整洁，尽量运用自己熟悉的词汇，也要用一些高级词汇来提高文章的档次。
【亮点词汇】
①a waste of time and money浪费时间和金钱
②With the help of satellites在卫星的帮助之下
③In closing总而言之
【高分句型】
①I don't agree that exploring space is a waste of time and money. (that引导的宾语从句）
②With the help of satellites, GPS is widely used all over the world. (一般现在时的被动语态)
③Last but not least, exploring space helps us to think about the future of mankind. (动词的-ing形式作主语）
【结构布局】
引言：对Tom观点的看法
中心：介绍自己对太空探索的看法和理由
结尾：发出倡议
【拓展词汇】
①play an increasingly important part in在……中起越来越重要的作用
②have good/bad/positive/negative effects on对……有好的/坏的/积极的/消极的影响
【拓展句型】
①There is no doubt that modern science and technology bring us convenience and comfort in life.毫无疑问，现代科学技术给我们的生活带来了方便和舒适。
②Future is actually like a secret, some areas of which are beyond the reach of our imagination.未来事实上就像一个谜，有些领域我们简直无法想象。
7.假如你是李华，你校打算进行英语演讲比赛，请你以学生会的名义，根据以下内容，写一则英文书面通知：
(1)时间、地点；
(2)活动要求。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Notice The Student Union is planning to hold an English speaking contest in our school. ①It will be held on the playground from 3:30 to 6:00 on the afternoon of November 14th. ②One speaker from each class is to take part in the activity. The speaker will have to pick up the topic 30 minutes earlier and make a speech of five minutes.
Some English teachers and foreign teachers from our school will be judges. The final results will be announced on the scene. ③Anyone interested in the events is welcome.
The Student Union
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文应以第一人称的角度描述，时态必须以一般现在时为主。注意把提示内容描写清楚，要点要全，可适当发挥。要做到层次清晰，表达准确、流畅。同时，为了提高文章档次，应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。
【亮点词汇】
①take part in参加
②pick up挑选
③on the scene在现场
【高分句型】
①It will be held on the playground from 3:30 to 6:00 on the afternoon of November 14th.(一般将来时的被动语态)
②One speaker from each class is to take part in the activity.(be to do结构表将来)
③Anyone interested in the events is welcome.(动词的-ed形式短语作后置定语)
【结构布局】
引言：介绍写作目的，交代比赛时间，地点
中心：介绍活动的要求
结尾：呼吁参加比赛
【拓展词汇】
①express my congratulations to表达我的祝贺
②To be honest老实说
③share with和……分享
【拓展句型】
①Your performance is perfect, especially your excellent spoken English, which leaves a deep impression on all the teachers and students. 你的表现是完美的，尤其是你出色的英语口语，给老师和同学们留下了深刻的印象。
②Besides, what surprises us most is that you are confident and brave on the stage when facing plenty of audience. 此外，最让我们惊讶的是你在舞台上面对众多观众时的自信和勇敢。
8.2020年11月24日，“嫦娥五号”探测器在海南被成功发射，嫦娥五号的任务是“探月工程”的第六次任务。请你就此话题写一篇文章给校英语报刊“科技”专栏投稿。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：探月工程lunar exploration program
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【答案】 The Chang'e 5 spacecraft was successfully launched in Hainan on November 24, 2020. It was the sixth mission of China's lunar exploration program. There is no doubt that the new mission will take us one step further to studying and understanding the moon.
①To explore the vast universe and develop the space industry is a dream we have always been pursuing. ②As students, we should study hard to make new and greater contributions to the realization of the dream.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本题要求写一篇有关“嫦娥五号”探测器在海南被成功发射的文章，故时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。尽量使用自己熟悉的句式，注意衔接词的使用，以使行文连贯。注意高级词汇和复合句的使用，来为文章增色。注意书写工整。
【亮点词汇】
①There is no doubt that毫无疑问
②make contributions to...对……作出贡献
【高分句型】
①To explore the vast universe and develop the space industry is a dream we have always been pursuing.（动词不定式作主语；省略that或which的限制性定语从句）
②As students, we should study hard to make new and greater contributions to the realization of the dream.（动词不定式作目的状语）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍嫦娥五号探测器在海南发射成功
中心：介绍我们探索太空的梦想
结尾：号召大家努力学习，为祖国作贡献
【拓展词汇】
①breakthrough突破
②play an increasingly important part in在……中起越来越重要的作用
【拓展句型】
①Future is actually like a secret, some areas of which are beyond the reach of our imagination.（未来事实上就像一个谜，有些领域我们简直无法想象。）
②Using WeChat is a relatively cheap way of communication, which cut down a great deal of the cost of making phone calls.（利用微信是相对便宜的交流方式，很大地减少了打电话的成本。）
9. 假定你是高中生李华，你的外教老师David上学期去了上海的一所学校任教，请你给他写一份电子邮件。内容包括：
(1)询问外教老师近况；
(2)回忆外教老师曾经对自己的帮助；
(3)介绍自己近期的英语学习情况；
注意：
(1)词数：100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)开头结尾给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
It s been several months since you left my school. How is everything with you lately I have just heard from my class teacher that you are teaching in a key high school in Shanghai now. Are you enjoying your life in your new school
I am busy with my study as usual. ①Even if you are not here, I can t help thinking about you from time to time, for you ve taught me a lot in your classes. What you led me to do is not only learning English, but also building up my confidence in speaking English. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have made great progress in English. ② Best of all, I participated in an English speech contest the other day and won the first prize, which again reminds me of all your kind help.
I am thankful for you and the year when you taught me. I do hope that you can continue having fun in your teaching career. I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为询问外教老师David的近况，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①as usual像往常一样
②from time to time偶尔
③thanks to多亏
④made great progress取得巨大进步
⑤participate in参加
【高分句型】
①Even if you are not here, I can t help thinking about you from time to time, for you ve taught me a lot in your classes.（even if引导的让步状语从句）
②Best of all, I participated in an English speech contest the other day and won the first prize, which again reminds me of all your kind help.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的，询问老师近况
中心：介绍自己近期的英语学习情况
结尾：表达愿望，期待回复
【拓展词汇】
reminiscence about...关于……的回忆

【拓展句型】
Every time I read English books, they called up memories of the previous days. 每次看英文书都勾起了我对往日的回忆。
10.假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
(1) 作业多，没有时间运动；
(2) 压力大，难以入睡；
(3) 希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 参考词汇：高考College Entrance Exam
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【答案】Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I've been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I'm writing to ask you for help.
①I'm encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don't want to let them down.②What troubles me most is that it's difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
Faced with the above problems, I'm anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
全文主要采用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主。为了提高文章档次，应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。注意词汇的准确运用、句子之间的衔接和逻辑，同时要适当使用高级词汇和句式，为文章添色。
【亮点词汇】
①be busy doing sth 忙于做某事
②concentrate on 集中注意力于
③faced with 面对
【高分句型】
①I'm encountering some problems which trouble me a lot.(which引导的定语从句)
②What troubles me most is that it's difficult for me to fall asleep every night.(What引导的主语从句；that引导的表语从句)
【结构布局】
引言：介绍写作目的
中心：介绍遇到的问题
结尾：希望得到帮助
【拓展词汇】
①inform sb. of sth.告诉某人某事
②arouse one's interest激发某人的兴趣
③desire to do渴望做
【拓展句型】
①I can't concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot.这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这让我很着急。
②Not only does the activity broaden my horizons, but also inspires me to work harder.这次活动不仅让我大开眼界而且激励我更努力的学习。
11.假如你是李华，上个月你校组织观看了来自中国空间站宇航员的一堂直播科普课（live science lecture）。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动时间、地点及参与人员；
2.活动内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 ①Last month, a live science lecture given by Chinese astronauts from the space station was presented in our lecture hall.
All the students from Grade One attended the lecture, watched the astronauts' living and working conditions and gained insight into their magical daily life and challenging routine missions. Also, those lucky ones even interacted with the astronauts through the video call.
②The lecture enjoyed great popularity among the students, keeping their thirst for space knowledge alive and fueling their enthusiasm for science as well.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇报道。话题为上个月你校组织观看了来自中国空间站宇航员的一堂直播科普课（live science lecture)。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。同时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①living and working conditions生活和工作环境
②gain insight into深入了解
【高分句型】
①Last month, a live science lecture given by Chinese astronauts from the space station was presented in our lecture hall.（动词的-ed形式作后置定语）
②The lecture enjoyed great popularity among the students, keeping their thirst for space knowledge alive and fueling their enthusiasm for science as well.（动词的-ing形式作状语）
【结构布局】
引言：活动时间、地点及参与人员
中心：活动内容
结尾：活动反响
【拓展词汇】
①play an increasingly important part in在……中起越来越重要的作用
②with the popularity of随着……的普及
【拓展句型】
①Future is actually like a secret, some areas of which are beyond the reach of our imagination. 未来事实上就像一个谜，有些领域我们简直无法想象。
②I have always dreamed of visiting it ever since I heard that Mars is most like the earth and there could have been life on this planet. 自从我听说火星和地球很像，可能有生命存在，我就一直梦想着去火星看看。
12.假设你是李华，是一名高三年级的学生，自从进入高三以来你妈妈不允许你上网，她认为上网不仅浪费时间而且还耽误学习。你不同意她的看法，为此你感到很苦恼。请你用英语写一封信向校英语报的编辑王老师求助。
注意：
(1)词数100左右。
(2)适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Wang,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in our school. ①I'm sorry to disturb you, but I have to ask a favor of you in the hope that you will be so kind to help me.
Ever since last month, my mother hasn't allowed me to surf the Internet. In her opinion, it is a waste of time surfing the Internet and it also affects my study. However, I don't agree with her. With the Internet I can easily find the information I need; ②I can compare notes with my classmates if I meet with problems in my study, which helps me a lot. Also I can share something that worries me with my friends, which reduces my stress. Faced with my mother's rigid attitude, what should I do
I really need your help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封求助信。根据要点提示确立一般现在时态为主；写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
1.ask a favor of sb.寻找某人的帮忙
2.compare...with比较
3.rigid attitude固执的态度
【高分句型】
①I'm sorry to disturb you, but I have to ask a favor of you in the hope that you will be so kind to help me.（that引导的同位语从句）
②I can compare notes with my classmates if I meet with problems in my study, which helps me a lot.（if引导的条件状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
③Faced with my mother's rigid attitude, what should I do （动词的-ed形式结构作状语）
【结构布局】
开头：提出请求对方帮个忙
中心：描述自己遇到的问题
结尾：希望得到对方的帮助
【拓展词汇】
1.in need of需要
2.at a loss茫然，不知所措
【拓展句型】
1.Owing to the fact that I don't have an excellent command of Chinese, I am usually at a loss about what my classmates are talking.（由于我的中文不是很好，我常常不知道我的同学在说什么。）
2.Hard as I tried, I still find it challenging to integrate into the new group.（尽管我很努力，但我还是觉得融入这个新的团队很有挑战性。）

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