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人教版（新课标）必修三UNIT1festivals and celebrations +单元话题写作（含解析 高分句型 词汇）
考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号 一 总分
得分
注意事项:
1.答卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。
2.回答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡对应题目的答案标号涂黑；如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时，将答案写在答题卡上，写在试卷上无效。
3.考试结束后，本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
一、书面表达：本大题共12小题，共300分。
1.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric发来邮件，向你询问你和家人是如何欢度春节的。请参考以下提示给Eric回复邮件，并谈谈你对春节的感受。字数50个左右。邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。
go to grandparents' house
attach Fu to the front door
talk about the past year
make jiaozi
watch fireworks
...
Dear Eric,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese Spring Festival. I will share my experiences during Spring Festival with you.


Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
①I am glad that you are interested in Chinese Spring Festival. I will share my experiences during Spring Festival with you.
Spring Festival is a great time for family reunions. This year, my parents and I went to grandparents' house, enjoying the festival together. ②On that eve, we stayed at home to make jiaozi, after which we went outside to watch fireworks. Then we talked about the past year while watching the Spring Festival Gala. On the morning of the New Year's Day, we all got up very early to attach Fu to the front door, on which all good wishes are presented.
I hope you will come to China someday and experience Spring Festival in person. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，话题为给英国笔友Eric回复一份邮件，告诉他你和家人是如何欢度春节的，并谈谈你对春节的感受。写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。
【亮点词汇】
①be interested in对……感兴趣；
②family reunions家庭团聚
③attach...to...附……于，把……放在。
【高分句型】
①I am glad that you are interested in Chinese Spring Festival.（that引导的宾语从句）
②On that eve, we stayed at home to make jiaozi, after which we went outside to watch fireworks.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写邮件的目的
中心：描述你和家人是如何欢度春节的；
结尾：谈谈你对春节的感受。
【拓展词汇】
①in celebration of庆祝
②enjoy great popularity广受欢迎
【拓展句型】
①The Spring Festival is a time Chinese look forward to all year around, because it is the happiest time, when we can enjoy the pure happiness of family reunion.（春节是中国人全年期盼的日子，因为这是一年中最快乐的时候，合家团圆，幸福快乐。）
②In addition to/apart from these traditional activities, a wide range of entertainments will be held throughout the country.（除了这些传统的庆祝活动，全国各地还会举行各种娱乐活动。）
2.假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Jack发邮件向你咨询当地即将举办的民间美食节（the Folk Food Festival）的情况，请给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1.举办时间和目的；
2.活动内容（展示传统美食，品尝美食等）；
3.邀请他参加。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I'm glad to tell you something about the Folk Food Festival.
It will last one week from Jan. 20th to 26th. Various traditional food will be on show. Meanwhile, visitors can enjoy the food, appreciate the food culture and experience the folk life. ①Besides, visitors can also take part in a wide range of activities related to food. I sincerely invite you to the festival and I will accompany you. ②I am sure you will have fun.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一封电子邮件，话题为向留学生朋友介绍当地即将举办的民间美食节的情况。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be on show展出
②take part in参加
③a wide range of各种各样的
④be related to与……有关
【高分句型】
①Besides, visitors can also take part in a wide range of activities related to food.（动词的-ed形式短语作后置定语）
②I am sure you will have fun.（省略that的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写邮件的目的
中心：具体说明活动内容并邀请他参加
结尾：表达愿望，期待回复
【拓展词汇】
①inform sb. of sth.告诉某人某事
②confirm one's participation确认参加
③have a better understanding of对……有一个更好的了解
【拓展句型】
①I'd like to tell you some details/information about/concerning/related to...（我想告诉你一些关于……的细节/信息。）
② I'm convinced that you can have a better understanding of...through the activities.（我相信通过这项活动你会对……有个更好的了解。）
③I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.（如果您能尽早在您方便时确认参加，我将不胜感激。方面的基本方法和技巧．）
3.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim计划今年来中国过春节，发邮件向你询问有关春节的习俗。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.介绍春节的习俗（大扫除、看春晚、吃饺子、收红包等）；
3.建议他准备保暖衣物。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
①Knowing from your last letter that you have planned to spend the Spring Festival in China, I am so delighted and can't wait to say welcome to you.
There are some interesting customs during the Spring Festival. We do a thorough cleaning before the festival and put paper cutting on windows to decorate the room. Usually, we stay up to watch the Spring Festival Gala. Children will receive red-bags and family will eat dumplings together. There are also some other activities, such as dancing or setting off fireworks. Normally, the weather during the festival is rather cold, so you'd better take some warm clothes.
I'm sure you will have a good time and spend a wonderful festival. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。话题为你的英国笔友Jim计划今年来中国过春节，发邮件向你询问有关春节的习俗，请你给他回复邮件。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①can't wait to迫不及待地去
②stay up不睡觉，熬夜
【高分句型】
①Knowing from your last letter that you have planned to spend the Spring Festival in China, I am so delighted and can't wait to say welcome to you.（动词的-ing形式作状语）
【结构布局】
引言：表示欢迎
中心：介绍春节的习俗及建议他准备保暖衣物
结尾：表达期盼
【拓展词汇】
①broaden one's horizons开阔眼界
②with the purpose/aim/intention of目的是
③date from/date back to追溯到
【拓展句型】
①As is known, …, a symbol of traditional Chinese culture/one of the most popular forms of Chinese art, is still attached great importance to in modern China.（众所周知，……，中国传统文化的象征/中国最流行的艺术形式之一，在现代中国仍然受到重视。）
②In addition/Besides/Additionally, typical of Chinese culture, ...conveys a unique meaning of...（除此之外，典型的中国文化，……传达……的独特意义。）
4.假定你是李华，中国农历正月14—16日你市将举办元宵节文化活动。你校外教John对中国传统文化很感兴趣，请用英语写一封信，邀请他一起参加活动，内容包括：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 活动的时间和地点；
3. 活动的内容和意义。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
①Since you're keen on Chinese traditional culture, I'd like to invite you to the Lantern Festival activities, which will take place in the Culture Square from February 14 to February 16 of Chinese lunar calendar.
The activities involve some fascinating performances like lion dances, stilt walking and land boat rowing. We can also appreciate various handmade lanterns and guess the riddles on them or taste yuanxiao, a typical food for the festival. ② All the activities will help preserve and promote Chinese traditional culture and I believe it will be a rewarding experience.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为邀请外教John参加元宵节文化活动。人称为第二、第三人称为主，时态为一般将来时为主。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的；
中心：介绍活动的时间和地点以及活动的内容和意义；
结尾：表达期盼。
【亮点词汇】
①be keen on喜爱
②take place发生
③look forward to期盼
【高分句型】
①Since you're keen on Chinese traditional culture, I'd like to invite you to the Lantern Festival activities, which will take place in the Culture Square from February 14 to February 16 of Chinese lunar calendar.（since引导的原因状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②All the activities will help preserve and promote Chinese traditional culture and I believe it will be a rewarding experience.（省略that引导宾语从句）
【拓展词汇】
①confirm one's participation确认参加
②privileged感到荣幸的
【拓展句型】
①It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to join us in ...我非常高兴/荣幸的邀请您和我们一起……
② Knowing/Learning that you're interested in ..., I'm delighted to invite you to ...知道您对……很感兴趣，我非常高兴地邀请您……
5.假定你是李华，你的留学生同学Smith对中国传统文化很感兴趣，想要了解端午节。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日端午节。主要内容包括：
(1)端午节的时间及起源(农历五月初五)；
(2)端午节的习俗；
(3)邀请他端午节那天和你一起过节。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
Knowing that you are interested in a traditional Chinese festival, which is called Dragon Boat Festival by Chinese, I am writing to introduce it to you.
The Dragon Boat Festival is in honor of the great poet, Qu Yuan, who sacrifices his life to jump into the Miluo River in order to warn the king. People were touched by his behavior and set the day he died as a festival to show honor to him. On that day, we often eat rice-dumplings and drink a special wine. Besides, what should be stressed is the dragon-boat racing, which is very interesting and exciting. People gather on the both sides of the river to watch the participators spare no effort to make for the finishing line.
The Dragon Boat Festival is approaching. Would you like to join us to spend it I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求根据所给提纲内容写一封信，向Smith介绍中国的传统节日——端午节，所以首先要求格式正确。提纲式作文通常为考生提供一个简单的写作提纲，将考生的写作控制在一定范畴。它要求考生紧扣题目主题，并根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。因此，提纲中所列举的要点：(1)端午节的时间及起源(农历五月初五)；(2)端午节的习俗；(3)邀请他端午节那天和你一起过节。要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。同时，为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。考生还需要注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样。
【亮点词汇】
1.be interested in对......感兴趣；
2.on the both sides of在…的两边。
【高级句型】
1.Knowing that you are interested in a traditional Chinese festival，which is called Dragon Boat Festival by Chinese， I am writing to introduce it to you．句中which is called Dragon Boat Festival by Chinese为非限制性定语从句。
2. Besides, what should be stressed is the dragon-boat racing, which is very interesting and exciting．句中what should be stressed 为主语从句；which is very interesting and exciting为非限制性定语从句

6.假定你是李华，母亲节临近，你校外籍教师Peter打算邮寄给母亲可以代表中国文化特色的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐礼物。内容包括：
1.推荐礼物；
2.推荐原因；
3.表达祝福。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,


Yours,Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
①Gladly learning that you intend to send your mother some gifts representing Chinese culture, I am writing to give you some advice.
Personally, I think you should buy the following two gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. I am sure your mother will like it very much. ②Besides, it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot, which illustrates good luck for you all.
Please give my best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，话题为母亲节临近，你校外籍教师Peter打算邮寄给母亲可以代表中国文化特色的礼物，请你给他写一封邮件向他推荐礼物。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：推荐礼物
中心：推荐原因
结尾：表达祝福
【亮点词汇】
①intend to打算做……
②represent代表
③illustrate说明
【高分句型】
①Gladly learning that you intend to send your mother some gifts representing Chinese culture, I am writing to give you some advice.（动词的-ing形式作状语，动词的-ing形式作定语）
② Besides, it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot, which illustrates good luck for you all.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【拓展词汇】
①take...into consideration/account考虑……
②have a great fancy for喜爱
③enjoy increasingly high popularity越来越受欢迎
【拓展句型】
①Glad/Pleased/Delighted to know that..., I think it a good choice to do sth.（很高兴得知……，我认为做某事是个不错的选择。）
②I'm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that..., and I'd like to offer my recommendation.（得知……，我想向您提议。）
7.假定你是李华，你的留学生同学Smith对中国传统文化很感兴趣，想要了解端午节。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日——端午节（Dragon Boat Festival）。包括以下要点：
(1)端午节的时间及起源（农历五月初五）；
(2)端午节的习俗；
(3)邀请他端午节那天和你一起过节。
注意: (1)词数80个左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
①Knowing that you are interested in a traditional Chinese festival, which is called Dragon Boat Festival by Chinese, I am writing to introduce it to you.
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month in honor of the great poet, Qu Yuan. ②As is known to us, in order to warn the king, Qu Yuan sacrificed his life to jump into the Miluo River. People were touched by his behavior and set the day he died as a festival to show honor to him. On that day, we often eat rice-dumplings and drink a special wine. ③Besides, what should be stressed is the dragon-boat racing, which is very interesting and exciting. People gather on the both sides of the river to watch the participators spare no effort to make for the finishing line.
The Dragon Boat Festival is approaching. Would you like to join us to spend it Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为介绍传统节日，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①in honor of向……致敬，向……表示敬意
②spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力地做某事
③make for向……前进
【高分句型】
①Knowing that you are interested in a traditional Chinese festival, which is called Dragon Boat Festival by Chinese, I am writing to introduce it to you.（动词-ing结构作状语；that引导的宾语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②As is known to us, in order to warn the king, Qu Yuan sacrificed his life to jump into the Miluo River.（as引导的非限制性定语从句）
③Besides, what should be stressed is the dragon-boat racing, which is very interesting and exciting.（what引导的主语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：介绍端午节
结尾：发出邀请
【拓展词汇】
①date from/date back to追溯到
②a wide range of多种多样
【拓展句型】
①The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, which is a traditional holiday observed annually over 2,000 years in China in memory of Qu Yuan, an ancient Chinese poet.农历五月初五是端午节，是已有两千多年历史的中国传统节日，为了纪念中国古代诗人屈原。
②With the Dragon Boat Festival approaching, I'd like to invite you to my family get-together on 25th June if you are available.端午节快到了，如果你有时间，我想邀请你参加6月25日的家庭聚会。
8.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对中国的重阳节感兴趣。请给他写一封电子邮件介绍重阳节的相关情况，主要内容包括：
(1)重阳节的日期和活动；
(2)你对重阳节的看法。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
①You told me in your last email that you are interested in the Double Ninth Festival. Now, I'll tell you something about it.
It falls on the ninth day of the ninth month of the Chinese lunar calendar. ②During that day, we usually climb mountains and pay a visit to the elderly to show respect for them. Nowadays we're too busy to stay with our parents at home, so I think we'd better try to spare time to spend quality time with them.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，要求向英国朋友介绍重阳节的相关情况。写作要点已给出，注意写作时要涵盖基本信息点，同时需要注意添加细节，以使行文流畅。此外，高级词汇和复合句的灵活运用，会让文章增分添彩，注意避免拼写等基础性错误。
【亮点词汇】
①Chinese lunar calendar中国农历
②show respect for sb尊敬某人
③spare time to腾出时间做某事
【高分句型】
①You told me in your last email that you are interested in the Double Ninth Festival.（that引导的宾语从句）
②During that day, we usually climb mountains and pay a visit to the elderly to show respect for them.（不定式作目的状语）
【结构布局】
引言：引出重阳节的话题
中心：具体介绍节日情况
结尾：表达看法
【拓展词汇】
①express a keen interest in表达对……的浓厚兴趣
②do some voluntary work做志愿活动
③be of great significance很重要
【拓展句型】
①Knowing that you express a keen interest in Chinese culture, I'm more than glad to tell you something concerning the Double Ninth Festival.（知道你对中国文化表现出浓厚的兴趣，我非常高兴告诉你一些关于重阳节的事情。）
②In my opinion, this festival is of great significance because it reminds the young to have a sincere respect for the aged.（在我看来，这个节日意义重大，因为它提醒年轻人要真诚地尊敬老人。）
9.假设你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒贴的，感到很好奇并写信向你询问此事。请给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意。同时邀请他来你家过端午节。
注意：
(1)词数120左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Brown,
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Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Brown,
①Hearing that you are curious about the strange way in which Chinese put up the character Fu. I am more than glad to share the reason and profound meaning of this traditional activity with you.
②The Spring Festival is to Chinese what Christmas is to westerners. It is one of the typical ways to welcome it by turning the character Fu upside down, for Fu means happiness and down sounds like the Chinese character Dao, which means happiness has come into their houses and they will lead a better life in the new year.
By the way, the Dragon Boat Festival is approaching. With pleasure, I sincerely invite you to celebrate it with my family and enjoy the traditional food Zongzi composed of meat and rice wrapped in reed leaves. I'm sure you will love it and we can keep on sharing culture differences.
Looking forward to your coming.
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一封邀请信。主要内容为假设你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒贴的，感到很好奇。写信向你询问此事。请给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意。同时邀请他来你家过端午节。主要用一般现在时和第一人称。
【亮点词汇】
①put up张贴
②by the way顺便说一下
【高分句型】
①Hearing that you are curious about the strange way in which Chinese put up the character Fu. I am more than glad to share the reason and profound meaning of this traditional activity with you.（动词的-ing形式作状语；介词in+which引导的定语从句）
②The Spring Festival is to Chinese what Christmas is to westerners.（A is to B what C is to D固定句型）
【结构布局】
引言：写信目的
中心：福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意并邀请他来你家过端午节
结尾：期待回复
【拓展词汇】
①enjoy great popularity广受欢迎
②a wide range of多种多样的
③in the hope of希望
【拓展句型】
①In addition to/apart from these traditional activities, a wide range of entertainments will be held throughout the country.除了这些传统的庆祝活动，全国各地还会举行各种娱乐活动。
②Hopefully, you will come to China to enjoy the authentic traditional festival.希望你能来中国体验真正的传统节日。
10.假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Bill在春节期间给你发了一封节日问候，并在信中问及红色在中国春节的使用，请你给他回封邮件介绍下红色在春节中的使用情况。内容包括以下几点：
(1)红色在中国的象征；
(2)春节期间红色的使用（至少列出两点）；
(3)可以适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
(4)信的开头和结尾已经为你写好。
参考词汇：paste/post red couplets贴对联；firecracker鞭炮
Dear Bill,



Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bill,
I'm glad to receive your letter. Thanks for your best wishes! In the letter you asked me about the color red used in our Spring Festival. I'm writing to tell you something interesting about that.
Red is a symbol of happiness and good fortune in our traditional culture. ①Therefore, you can see people wear red new clothes and paste red couplets on doors against evils, hoping good fortune in the new year.② The firecrackers set off to scare away a monster named "Nian" are red as well. Meanwhile, people hang red lanterns, creating the atmosphere of festival. Additionally, our senior citizens give their children lucky money in red packets.
Welcome to China to experience our unique Spring Festival.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为介绍红色在春节中的使用情况，写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。
【亮点词汇】
①set off引爆，点燃
②scare away吓跑
【高分句型】
①Therefore, you can see people wear red new clothes and paste red couplets on doors against evils, hoping good fortune in the new year.（动词-ing结构作状语）
②The firecrackers set off to scare away a monster named "Nian" are red as well.（动词-ed结构作定语）
【结构布局】
引言：表明主题
中心：介绍红色在春节中的使用情况
结尾：表达期盼以及欢迎
【拓展词汇】
①Chinese knot中国结
②in celebration of庆祝
【拓展句型】
①Chinese do like red, for red stands for happiness and good fortune in Chinese culture.中国人确实喜欢红色，因为红色在中国文化中象征着幸福和好运。
②Hopefully, you will come to China to enjoy the authentic traditional festival.希望你能来中国体验真正的传统节日。
11.假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：
出发及返回时间；
活动：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：(1)可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；(2)词数100左右。
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【答案】Dear Lucy,
I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture.
Some details about this activity are as follows. We'll go and make dumplings with the elderly there.①In addition, this will be followed by some activities such as singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will keep them amused. We are supposed to be back at around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience and we'll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. ②We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.
I am looking forward to your early reply. /An early reply is highly appreciated.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求写一封邀请信。要点已经给出。写作时要注意信件的格式，紧扣主题。写作时，可以适当增加一些细节内容，以使行文连贯充实。准确使用一些连接词，让文章更紧凑，层次结构清晰。尽量运用自己熟悉的词汇和句型准确而得体地表达。可以使用一些高级词汇和复合句，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点词汇】
①be supposed to do sth.理应做某事
②at early convenience尽早
【高分句型】
①In addition, this will be followed by some activities such as singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will keep them amused.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.（that引导宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：介绍活动具体信息
结尾：表达愿望，期待回复
【拓展词汇】
①privileged感到荣幸的
②attach great importance/significance to重视
【拓展句型】
①Knowing/Learning that you're interested in ..., I'm delighted to invite you to ...知道您对……很感兴趣，我非常高兴地邀请您……
②I'm convinced that you can have a better understanding of ... through the activities.我相信通过这项活动你会对……有个更好的了解。
12.假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。
内容包括：
(1)到达时间；
(2)合适的礼物；
(3)餐桌礼仪。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Terry,
I learn from your last letter that you are going to pay a visit to your Chinese friend. Here are several relevant details you have to pay attention to.
First, you are supposed to arrive at your friend's house ten minutes earlier. Additionally, bringing a suitable present is a good choice. You can take some fruit or flowers. ①Last but not least, you had better eat the food in front of you in that putting your chopsticks in front of others is considered a bad manner.②Always keep in mind that you can't be too talkative when you are eating.
I hope these suggestions would be beneficial to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇告知类的应用文。根据提示可知，文章人称主要用第一人称和第二人称，时态主要用一般现在时。要点提示已给出，动笔前应明确写作要点，不能遗漏，并对要点做适当的思路拓展，以充实文章内容。写作时，要注意词汇的使用和句式的选择.
【亮点词汇】
①relevant相关的
②be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
③in that因为
④be beneficial to对……有益
【高分句型】
①Last but not least, you had better eat the food in front of you in that putting your chopsticks in front of others is considered a bad manner.（in that引导的原因状语从句）
②Always keep in mind that you can't be too talkative when you are eating.（that引导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：具体陈述告知的内容
结尾：表达祝愿或期待对方的回复
【拓展词汇】
①behave oneself举止得体
②dress up盛装
③inform sb. of sth.告诉某人某事
【拓展句型】
①To help you behave well when visiting your Chinese friend, I'd like to offer you some information concerning table manners. 为了帮助你在拜访中国朋友时行为得体，我想给你提供一些餐桌礼仪方面的信息。
②Chinese do like red, for red stands for happiness and good fortune in Chinese culture. 中国人确实喜欢红色，因为红色在中国文化中象征着幸福和好运。

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