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2024高考英语冲刺三轮考前写作训练专项03 求助信
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书信写作
1．假定你是高一学生李华，最近你遇到了一些学习压力问题和睡眠问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师 Bob写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1)存在的问题；
2)希望得到帮助；
3)表示感谢。
注意：1)词数80左右；
2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假定你是李华，你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob 帮助润色．请根据提示，用英语给 Bob 写一封求助信．内容包括：
1. 求助事由;
2. 求助内容;
3. 表达感激．
注意：1．词数 100 左右;
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、书面表达
3．根据下面两幅图片，请你以北极熊的身份向人类写一封求助信。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Humans,
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Your forever friend,
a polar bear
三、书信写作
4．假定你是李华，下周一你校将组织以“梦想”为主题的“英文诗歌创作”比赛。请你给外教老师Jim写一封求助信，请求批改相关语法和诗歌规则的内容。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假如你是李华, 高考后想报考英语专业，但你对自己的英语口语缺乏信心。偶然的一个机会你从网上得知外籍教师Anna在线辅导英语口语。请你写一封求助信，内容包括：
1．介绍自己的情况；
2．向外教求助；
3. 表示感谢并期盼回复。
注意:1. 词数80左右；
2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答。
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6．假定你是红星中学的学生李华，你校来自美国的交换生John在学校网站上发布了一份求助信，称自己由于中文不好，与同学们的日常交流存在障碍，想求助大家如何学好中文。请你给他发一封邮件，给他一些学习中文的建议，内容包括：
1.自我介绍并表明写信目的；
2.提出学习中文的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是高一(1)班的李华，刚升入一所新的学校，你在生活和学习方面遇到了一些困难和挑战，请给English Weekly的编辑写一封求助信。要点如下：
1. 自我介绍； 2. 遇到的困难； 3. 希望得到的建议和帮助。
注意： 1. 词数 80 词左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，本期你校开设了英语口语课，由于你不太适应外教Chris的授课，你决定给她写一封求助信。主要内容包括：
1.告诉她你的困难；
2.求助的内容；
3.希望得到帮助。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．假设你是校英文报编辑李华，近期收到一封署名为Anxiety的求助信，在信中Anxiety同学表示由于期中考试临近，压力剧增，吃不好睡不香，导致课堂无法集中精神，苦恼。如何缓解焦虑，走出困境。请用英文给该同学回信，内容要点如下：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Anxiety,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封电子邮件。内容要点如下：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意：词数80左右。参考词汇：脾气，情绪temper
Hi Worried，
I’ m sorry to know that you’ re having such a had time at the moment.
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Yours，
Jamie
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参考答案：
1．Dear Bob,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 1 student. I’m writing with the intention of asking for some help, for I can’t devote myself to study for a long time, which confuses me a lot. I’ve met some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, I have to spend so much time on my tons of homework that I hardly have time to do exercise. Additionally, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me feel stressed because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the problems above, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some suggestions on how to solve these problems I’d appreciate it if you could offer me some constructive proposals.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍心理老师 Bob写一封求助信，就最近遇到的一些学习压力问题和睡眠问题导致无法集中精力学习向他求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：intention→aim
除此之外：additionally→besides
困难的：difficult→tough
建议：suggestion→tip
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Could you please offer me some suggestions on how to solve these problems
拓展句：Could you please offer me some suggestions on how I should solve these problems
【点睛】【高分 句型1】I’m writing with the intention of asking for some help, for I can’t devote myself to study for a long time, which confuses me a lot. （运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. （运用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句）
2．Dear Bob,
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. When it comes to paper-cutting, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. For a long time I have been longing to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction.
As far as I’m concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍教师Bob写一封求助信，请他帮助润色一篇有关于家乡的剪纸艺术的英文宣传稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望做：long to do → be eager to do
发觉：find → perceive
就我而言：As far as I’m concerned → from my perspective
去拜访你：pay you a visit → visit you
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As far as I’m concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot.
拓展句：As far as I’m concerned, what impresses me a lot is that you have a good command of written English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction.（运用了倒装句，that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.（运用了虚拟语气）
3．Dear humans,
I’m a polar bear, your big and white friend in the north. Facing the challenge of losing precious ice land, I am writing to ask you for some ways out.
With the development of industry and cities, climate has been worsening. As the planet warms, it becomes harder for us to get food. Thus, recent years have witnessed many of my peers’ death. The loss of our species is the loss of yours. I sincerely beg for your immediate actions to protect our common home — the Earth. Only if you take strong measures, can wild animals, like me, be preserved and it is not until then that we will make a better home together.
Thanks for reading!
Your forever friend,
a polar bear
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求根据两幅图片，请以北极熊的身份向人类写一封求助信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
面对：face→be faced with
保护：preserve→protect
宝贵的：precious→valuable
困难的：hard→difficult
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m a polar bear, your big and white friend in the north.
拓展句：I’m a polar bear, who is your big and white friend in the north.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Facing the challenge of losing precious ice land, I am writing to ask you for some ways out. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] As the planet warms, it becomes harder for us to get food. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
4．Dear Jim,
Our school will organize an “English Poetry Creation” competition with the theme of “Dream” for our students next Monday. Being the organizer of this competition, I have difficulty in formulating the rules and evaluating entries. I hope you can help me out of your busy schedule.
Because of your professionalism, you can not only take responsibility for modifying the grammar and poetry rules of entries, but also give me some suggestions. I believe with your help, this competition will be a complete success.
I would greatly appreciate it if I could get your help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为了你校下周一组织的以“梦想”为主题的“英文诗歌创作”比赛给外教老师吉姆写一封求助信，请求他批改相关语法和诗歌规则的内容。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难： difficulty→ trouble
负责：take responsibility for → be responsible for
比赛：competition→match
真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
主动语态变被动语态
原句：Our school will organize an “English Poetry Creation” competition with the theme of “Dream” for our students next Monday.
拓展句：An “English Poetry Creation” competition with the theme of “Dream” will be organized by our school for our students next Monday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I believe with your help, this competition will be a complete success.（运用了省略从属连词that引导的宾语从句作动词believe的宾语）
【高分句型2】Being the organizer of this competition, I have difficulty in formulating the rules and evaluating entries.（运用了现在分词作状语和动名词作宾语）
5．Dear Miss Anna,
More than delighted to learn on the Internet that you offer professional help to students online with oral English, I am writing to ask you for help.
When I was first exposed to English, I found it fascinating and beautiful. During the past 11 years, my interest has never failed to spark my passion for learning English, as a result of which I’ve acquired a basic knowledge of grammatical usage and some writing skills. However, what troubles me most is my poor oral English. For lack of practice in authentic language environment, I am not confident enough to strike up a conversation. In every English class, I rack my brain for words to express myself appropriately but in vain. I am wondering whether you could help me with my oral English. I’m considering choosing English as my major in university and furthering my education related to English. Consequently, fluency in English is of great significance to my future learning.
I would appreciate it if you could give me some practical advice to improve my oral English and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书名表达为一篇应用文。要求学生写一封求助信，因自己口语不好，但又想要报考英语专业，故向网上的外教老师写一封信，寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
有吸引力的：fascinating→attractive/charming
相关的：related→relevant/connected
建议：advice→proposal/suggestion
结果：consequently→as a consequence/result
2.句式拓展：
原句：Consequently, fluency in English is of great significance to my future learning.
拓展句：As a consequence, what is of great significance to my further learning is my fluency in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
However, what troubles me most is my poor oral English.（运用了what引导的主语从句。）
【高分句型2】
During the past 11 years, my interest has never failed to spark my passion for learning English, as a result of which I’ve acquired a basic knowledge of grammatical usage and some writing skills.（运用了of which引导的定语从句。）
6．Dear John,
I’m your schoolmate Li Hua. I have learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, and I would like to give you some advice on this.
Firstly, listen to Chinese as often as possible. The first step in learning a new language is to get accustomed to the pronunciation. Secondly,devote time to memorizing characters. Characters are to Chinese what words are to English. Spend at least half an hour memorizing characters every day. Thirdly, read a lot. You can read Chinese newspapers and magazines that interest you.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的身份给你校来自美国的交换生John发一封邮件，给他一些学习中文的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知：learn→ be informed of
建议：advice →recommendation
听：listen→ lend an ear to
有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I have learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, and I would like to give you some advice on this.
拓展句：Having learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, I would like to give you some advice on this.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The first step in learning a new language is to get accustomed to the pronunciation.（介词短语做后置定语）
【高分句型2】You can read Chinese newspapers and magazines that interest you.（that引导的定语从句，先行词为newspapers and magazines）
7．Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a new student of senior high school. I have some trouble in the study and life. I hope you can give me some useful advice.
The problems I am facing now are as follows. I have plenty of new knowledge to learn, so I have no time to do sports. I think it’s not good for our health or study. I don’t know how to make good plans for my study and how to make use of time reasonably. I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in the class, which will eventually prevent me from going to college. Besides, I find it difficult to get on well with new classmates. How can I make friends at school
Could you help me, please I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的求助信。要求考生给English Weekly的编辑写一封求助信，求教如何应对进入高中后所遇到的生活和学习方面的困难和挑战。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→ suggestion
许多：plenty of → a large amount of
对……有好处：be good for→ be beneficial to
担忧的：worried→ concerned
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have plenty of new knowledge to learn, so I have no time to do sports. I think it’s not good for our health or study.
拓展句：I have plenty of new knowledge to learn, so I have no time to do sports, which, I think, is not good for our health or study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The problems I am facing now are as follows.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in the class, which will eventually prevent me from going to college.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
8．Dear Chris,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class. I am writing to seek help from you.
As you know, I come from a middle school in the countryside, where teachers don’t speak much English in class. That is the reason why I am not good at listening or speaking. At present, I find it really difficult to adapt myself to your class. Faced with the above problem, I wonder if you can recommend some listening materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class. Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time I think it can help me improve my spoken English.
I would be grateful if you could spare time to do me a favour.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。针对考生不太适应外教Chris的英语口语课，要求给她写一封求助信。
【详解】词汇积累
寻求：ask for→ seek
适应：fit →adapt
感激的：thankful →grateful
帮助：help→ do a favour
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time
拓展句：Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends when it is convenient for you
【点睛】[高分句型1]As you know, I come from a middle school in the countryside, where teachers don’t speak much English in class. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] That is the reason why I am not good at listening or speaking. (运用了why引导的定语从句)
[高分句型3]Faced with the above problem, I wonder if you can recommend some listening materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class.(运用了过去分词作状语，if引导的宾语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句)
9．Dear Anxiety,
Learning that you are burdened with intense pressure due to the coming mid-term exam, I could completely relate to you as this is fairly common for senior high school students. Don’t worry too much and I will share you some effective tips to cope with stress.
In my opinion, sharing your feelings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions when communicating with your peers. Additionally, it is strongly recommended that you take physical exercise for an hour or so after school, which can lift your spirits and thus help get you stay focused in class. Also, keep an optimistic attitude towards life about your future since you will become more strong-willed after going through all the challenges.
With the suggestions above I firmly believe you will cope with the intense pressure well. I would be more than happy to see you have an extraordinary performance in the exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Anxiety同学写封回信，对考试前的压力造成的焦虑给予安慰、建议和祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→tip
压力：pressure→stress
聪明的：clever→wise
帮助：assist→help
保持：keep→stay
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Don’t worry too much and I will share you some effective tips to cope with stress.
拓展句：Don’t worry too much and I will share you some effective tips to cope with stress, which I hope will help you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, sharing your feelings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions when communicating with your peers. (运用了非谓语动词动名词作主语)
【高分句型2】Additionally, it is strongly recommended that you take physical exercise for an hour or so after school, which can lift your spirits and thus help get you stay focused in class. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10．Hi worried,
I'm sorry to know that you 're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise, which is an effective way to get rid of your anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours，
Jamie
【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求按照Worried的求助信写一封回信，根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和安慰，提出建议并说明理由。所以考生在写作的时候，要围绕来信的问题一一给与解答。但是光翻译要点肯定不行，还要求考生自己拓展发挥，关键的是，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句、倒装句等，让文章更上档次。也要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，同时在列举建议和理由的时候要使用合适的连接词，如：first, second, besides, what’s more等，使文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。
【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：a good way of……的好方法；let out释放；get rid of消除；carry on继续进行。句式上体现多变的特点，如：I'm sorry to know that you 're having such a bad time at the moment.这句话运用了宾语从句；The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don t have to worry so much.这句话运用了表语从句和时间状语从句；Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise, which is an effective way to get rid of your anger.这句话运用了定语从句。文章还使用了合适的连接词first, second, besides, what’s more等，使文章很连贯。
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