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TCEE读后续写情感描写
续写情感分类
按照从正向到负向，我将情感分成了以下19种：
一、真好呀！ 激动/兴奋 正向（6种）
喜悦/满足
欣慰/宽慰
敬佩
感动/感激
二、嗯！ 自信/决心
三、啊？ 好奇 中性（5种）
惊讶
害羞
胆怯
疑惑/困惑
啊！ 紧张/焦虑 负向（8种）
恐惧/惊慌
四、唉…… 自责/内疚
担心/忧虑
失望
悲伤
绝望/无助
五、哼！ 生气/愤怒
用汉语来理解情感表达方式
在实际续写中，情感表达有三种方式：
方式1: 直接描述心理状态
用中文举例：
我感到无比愤怒。（2）一阵喜悦涌上心头。
方式2: 描绘面部神态
用中文举例：
她的眼睛惊讶地睁大了。（2）他脸上露出灿烂的笑容。
一阵喜悦涌上心头。
方式3: 用身体动作间接表达
（1）泪水涌上她的眼眶，她忍不住哭了出来。（2）他握紧拳头，瞪着对方。
需要注意的是，这3种方式是可以结合的，不是说表达1种情感时，只能用1种方式（当然，你也可以直接用1种方式）。比如：他脸上露出灿烂的笑容，透露出他的幸福。这句话就是用了方式1+方式3。
但是，在一开始写情感时，建议老师让学生都写成简单句，就是尽量只有1种方式去表达。因为如果学生不理解非谓语啥的话，很容易犯语法错误。也就是从这个角度出发，我们在给学生情感素材的时候，最好给主语是人的句子，对于主语不是人的无灵主语句，我们可以作为拓展教给学生，几个常用的足够了。
所以，我在设计这份语料库时，每类感情都会按照三种方式，来提供素材。对于基础一般的学生来说，他们只用素材里的简单句就可以了。对于基础比较好的同学，可以背一些有非谓语的，或者学会怎么把简单句用高级句式嵌套进复杂句里。
6种正向情绪素材
心理状态 面部神态 身体动作
激动/兴奋 I feel an unparalleled excitement bubbling within me.我感到一种无与伦比的兴奋在我内心沸腾。 I am seized by a wave of exhilaration.我感到一阵兴奋。 Her eyes sparkled with excitement.她的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 His face broke into a wide, exhilarated smile.他的脸上绽开了欢快的笑容。 进阶： She grinned widely, her face alight with joy.她咧嘴一笑，脸上洋溢着喜悦。 He jumped up and down, unable to contain his excitement.他跳上跳下，抑制不住自己的兴奋。 She clapped her hands together, giggling with delight.她拍着手，高兴得咯咯笑起来。 They hugged each other, jumping in shared exhilaration.他们互相拥抱，兴奋地跳了起来。
喜悦/满足 I felt a profound sense of joy enveloping my heart.我感到一种深深的喜悦笼罩着我的心。 She was filled with a deep satisfaction, knowing her efforts had paid off.她心里充满了深深的满足感，因为她知道自己的努力得到了回报。 He experienced an intense burst of happiness that he hadn't felt in years.他经历了多年来从未有过的一阵强烈的幸福感。 He smiled broadly, his face radiating satisfaction.他笑得很开心，脸上流露出满意的神情。 A grin of pure happiness spread across her face, lighting up the room.她脸上绽开了纯粹幸福的笑容，照亮了整个房间。 His eyes twinkled with pleasure, a soft smile playing on his lips.他的眼睛闪烁着喜悦的光芒，嘴唇上挂着温柔的微笑。 He jumped into the air, his movements expressing uncontainable joy.他跳到了空中，他的动作表达了无法抑制的喜悦。 He pumped his fist in the air, a gesture of triumphant delight.他在空中挥舞着拳头，这是一个胜利喜悦的手势。
欣慰/宽慰 I felt a deep sense of relief washing over me, soothing my worried mind.我感到一种深深的解脱感席卷了我，抚慰了我焦虑的心灵。 He experienced an overwhelming feeling of solace after hearing the good news.听到这个好消息后，他感到了莫大的安慰。 They felt genuinely reassured, their anxiety melting away.他们真的感到放心了，焦虑消失了。 She beamed with a gentle relief.她轻松地笑了。 Her face softened into a smile of relief, her earlier tension gone.她的脸上露出了轻松的微笑，之前的紧张感消失了。 He let out a relieved sigh, a look of contentment spreading across his face.他松了一口气，脸上露出满意的表情。 He relaxed back into his chair, a visible sign of his relief.他放松地坐回椅子上，看得出他松了一口气。 He took a deep breath and let it out slowly, physically releasing his tension.他深吸了一口气，然后慢慢地呼出来，身体上释放了他的紧张。
敬佩 I felt a profound admiration for her courage and determination.我对她的勇气和决心深感钦佩。 She was filled with respect for the artist's skill and creativity.她对这位艺术家的技巧和创造力充满了敬意。 I found myself overwhelmed by admiration for their selfless acts of kindness.我发现自己被他们无私的善良行为所折服。 Her eyes sparkled with admiration as she listened to the speaker.她听演讲人讲话时，眼睛里闪烁着钦佩的光芒。 His face lit up with admiration every time he spoke of the novelist.每次谈到那位小说家，他的脸上就露出钦佩的神情。 They stood up to give a standing ovation, a gesture of immense admiration.他们起立鼓掌，表示极大的钦佩。
感动/感激 I was deeply touched by their generosity and felt a surge of gratitude.他们的慷慨深深打动了我，我对他们充满了感激之情。 He was moved to tears by the selfless act of a stranger.他被一个陌生人的无私行为感动得流下了眼泪。 They were filled with appreciation for the support they received during hard times.他们对在困难时期得到的支持充满感激之情。 A grateful smile spread across his face as he accepted the help.他接受帮助时脸上露出感激的微笑。 She looked up, her eyes shining with unspoken thanks.她抬起头来，眼睛里闪烁着无言的感谢。 He reached out and gave a heartfelt hug, showing his gratitude without words.他伸出手，给了我一个衷心的拥抱，无言地表达了他的感激之情。 She nodded repeatedly, her actions conveying the gratitude she struggled to articulate.她连连点头，她的行为表达了她难以表达的感激之情。
自信与决心 I am filled with unwavering confidence and a firm resolve to succeed.我充满了坚定不移的信心和成功的坚定决心。 He felt a surge of self-assurance, convinced of his path forward.他感到一阵自信，对前进的道路充满信心。 Her eyes sparkled with confidence, a determined smile gracing her lips.她的眼睛里闪烁着自信的光芒，嘴唇上挂着坚定的微笑。 His expression was composed and assured, betraying no hint of doubt.他的表情镇定而自信，没有丝毫的怀疑。 He stepped forward with a stride that spoke volumes of his resolve.他大步向前走，充分说明了他的决心。 With shoulders squared and head held high, she embodied determination.她挺胸，昂着头，体现了她的决心。 He clenched his fists at his sides, a physical manifestation of his inner strength and determination. 他把拳头紧握在身体两侧，这是他内心力量和决心的身体表现。
5种中性情绪素材
心理状态 面部神态 身体动作
好奇 She felt a strong urge to discover what was hidden behind the door.她有一种强烈的冲动，想知道门后面藏着什么。 Her interest in the stranger's story grew with every passing moment.她对陌生人的故事越来越感兴趣。 His eyebrows arched in curiosity as he peered through the microscope.当他透过显微镜观察时，他好奇地拱起了眉毛。 Her eyes widened with intrigue as she overheard the conversation.当她无意中听到谈话时，好奇地瞪大了眼睛。 His gaze lingered on the locked chest, eyes sparkling with curiosity.他凝视着锁着的箱子，眼睛里闪烁着好奇的光芒。 She leaned closer, her head tilting slightly as she listened to the whispering.她靠得更近了，听着窃窃私语，她的头微微倾斜。 He tapped his fingers against the table, pondering the problem before him.他用手指敲着桌子，思考着眼前的问题。 Her hand hesitantly reached out to touch the ancient fabric, drawn by curiosity.她的手被好奇心所吸引，犹豫地伸出去触摸那块古老的织物。
惊讶 He was shocked to find his long-lost friend standing at the door.他吃惊地发现久违的朋友站在门口。 She was astounded by the sudden change in weather.她对天气的突然变化感到吃惊。 His heart skipped a beat when he saw the gift.看到礼物时，他的心猛地跳了一下。 Her mouth dropped open in astonishment at the news.听到这个消息，她惊讶得张大了嘴。 His eyes bulged in disbelief as he witnessed the event.目睹这一事件时，他难以置信地瞪大了眼睛。 A gasp of wonder escaped her lips as the fireworks began.烟火开始时，她惊讶地倒吸了一口气。 Her hands flew to her mouth in shock as she read the letter.她读信时震惊地捂住了嘴。 She jumped back, startled by the loud noise.她被巨大的噪音吓了一跳，往后一跳。 She dropped the book she was holding, taken aback by the person who had just entered the room.她把手里的书掉在地上，被刚刚走进房间的人吓了一跳。
害羞 He felt a wave of shyness wash over him as he entered the room.当他走进房间时，他感到一阵害羞涌上心头。 The young boy experienced a sudden surge of shyness when asked to speak.当被要求说话时，那个小男孩突然感到一阵害羞。 Her cheeks turned a deep red, revealing her shyness.她的脸涨得通红，显出她的羞怯。 A faint blush spread across her face, betraying her shyness.她脸上泛起淡淡的红晕，显出她的羞怯。 His eyes darted away, hiding his shyness.他的目光移开，掩饰着他的羞怯。 She lowered her head, a physical representation of her shyness. 她低下了头，这是她害羞的身体表现。
胆怯 He felt a profound sense of timidity facing the audience.面对观众，他感到一种深深的胆怯。 She was consumed by timidity when it was her turn to speak.轮到她发言时，她胆怯得要命。 Her confidence was overshadowed by a sudden timidity.她的自信被突如其来的胆怯蒙上了一层阴影。 He swallowed hard, his face pale with timidity.他使劲咽了一口唾沫，脸色因胆怯而苍白。 His expression was tense, masking his underlying timidity.他的表情很紧张，掩盖了他潜在的胆怯。 His voice trembled, betraying his physical response to timidity.他的声音颤抖着，暴露出他对胆怯的身体反应。
疑惑/困惑 He felt utterly confused by the unexpected question.他被这个意想不到的问题弄糊涂了。 She was puzzled by the complex instructions given to her.给她的那些复杂的指示把她弄糊涂了。 The sudden change in plans left him bewildered.计划的突然改变使他不知所措。 Her eyes widened with bewilderment at the news.听到这消息，她惊愕地瞪大了眼睛。 A puzzled frown appeared on her face as she listened to the explanation.当她听着解释时，脸上露出困惑的皱眉。 She bit her lip in confusion, trying to make sense of the map.她困惑地咬着嘴唇，试图弄清地图的含义。 He scratched his head in confusion while looking at the assembly instructions.他一边看组装说明，一边困惑地挠着头。 He paced back and forth in the room, lost in a maze of thoughts.他在房间里踱来踱去，思绪如迷宫一般。 He stopped mid-step, overcome with bewilderment at the unexpected sight.他走到一半就停了下来，对这意外的景象感到十分困惑。
8种负向情绪素材
心理状态 面部神态 身体动作
紧张/焦虑 He felt an intense wave of anxiety washing over him.他感到一股强烈的焦虑浪潮涌上心头。 She was overwhelmed by a sense of nervousness that clouded her thoughts.一种紧张的感觉使她不知所措，使她的思想蒙上了阴影。 She found herself consumed by worry, unable to shake the feeling.她发现自己被忧虑所吞噬，无法摆脱这种感觉。 Her eyebrows knitted together in a clear display of anxiety.她的眉毛皱成一团，显然是焦虑的表现。 She bit her lip, a subtle sign of her growing unease.她咬着嘴唇，这是她越来越不安的微妙迹象。 A frown took over his face as the weight of his worries became apparent.当他的忧虑变得很明显时，他皱起了眉头。 She paced back and forth, her movements a testament to her restless anxiety.她来回踱步，她的动作证明了她不安的焦虑。 Overwhelmed with nervousness, the boy felt his palm sweating and legs trembling.由于紧张，男孩感到手掌出汗，双腿颤抖。 His breath quickened, and he could feel his pulse racing with anxiety.他的呼吸加快了，他感到自己的脉搏因焦虑而加速跳动。
恐惧/惊慌 He felt a deep sense of fear engulfing him.他感到一种深深的恐惧感把他吞没了。 She was terrified at the thought of speaking in front of the crowd.她一想到要在众人面前讲话就害怕。 She was seized by panic when she realized she was lost.当她意识到自己迷路时，她惊慌失措。 Her eyes widened in horror at the sight.看到这情景，她惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。 His face turned pale with fear.他的脸因害怕而变得苍白。 She held her breath, her expression frozen in a moment of terror.她屏住呼吸，她的表情在恐惧中凝固了。 He ran as fast as he could, his heart pounding in panic.他拼命地跑着，他的心在恐慌中怦怦直跳。 He jumped back in fright at the sudden noise.他被突如其来的噪音吓得向后跳了跳。
自责/内疚 He felt a deep sense of regret for his actions.他对自己的行为深感后悔。 She was consumed by remorse for her actions.她对自己的行为深感懊悔。 She found herself overwhelmed with remorse for not speaking up.她发现自己因没有大声说出来而悔恨不已。 His eyes were downcast, a clear sign of his guilt.他的眼睛低垂着，这是他内疚的明显迹象。 His face turned pale, the guilt washing over him visibly.他的脸变得苍白，明显地感到内疚。 She bit her lip, her face etched with remorse.她咬着嘴唇，脸上满是悔恨。 He slumped his shoulders under the weight of his guilt.他在内疚的重压下耷拉着肩膀。 She nervously twisted her fingers, a sign of her remorse.她紧张地扭动着手指，表示悔恨。
担心/忧虑 She was consumed by worry, unable to focus on anything else.她忧心忡忡，无法把注意力集中在其他任何事情上。 He felt a deep sense of unease that clouded his thoughts all day.他感到一种深深的不安，整天笼罩着他的思想。 His brows furrowed deeply as he pondered over the troubling news.当他考虑到这个令人不安的消息时，他深深地皱起了眉头。 She bit her lip nervously, her gaze fixed on the floor.她紧张地咬着嘴唇，眼睛盯着地板。 He paced back and forth, each step heavy with worry.他来回踱步，每一步都充满了忧虑。 He leaned heavily against the wall, overwhelmed by his anxious thoughts.他沉重地靠在墙上，焦虑的思绪使他不堪重负。
失望 She felt a sharp sting of disappointment.她感到一阵失望的刺痛。 I was besieged by a wave of disappointment.我被一股失望的情绪包围着。 His smile faded into a frown of disappointment.他的笑容消失了，失望地皱起了眉头。 He dropped his head in defeat, letting out a sigh.他失败地低下头，叹了口气。 They slouched, their energy sapped by disillusionment.他们无精打采，幻想破灭耗尽了他们的精力。
悲伤 She felt a deep sadness enveloping her heart.她感到一种深深的悲伤笼罩着她的心。 He was consumed by a sense of sorrow that wouldn't fade.他被一种挥之不去的悲伤所吞噬。 Tears streamed down his face, silently telling of his sorrow.泪水从他的脸上流下，无声地诉说着他的悲伤。 A look of despair settled on the girl’s face.那女孩脸上露出绝望的神情。 I noticed a shadow of grief darken his features.我注意到他的脸上蒙上了悲伤的阴影。 She slumped into a chair, drained by her sadness.她跌坐在椅子上，伤心得被抽干了。 He walked with a heavy heart, his steps slow and unsteady.他心情沉重地走着，脚步缓慢而不稳。 I found myself wandering aimlessly, lost in my sorrow.我发现自己漫无目的地徘徊，迷失在悲伤中。
绝望/无助 She felt an overwhelming sense of despair.她感到一种压倒性的绝望。 Feeling a profound despair, she saw her dreams crumbling before her eyes.她感到深深的绝望，她看到她的梦想在她眼前破碎。 The news plunged him into a deep state of helplessness, leaving him speechless and defeated.这个消息使他陷入深深的无助状态，他说不出话来，被打败了。 Her expression was blank, the hopelessness in her eyes was palpable.她毫无表情，眼神中充满了绝望。 His smile faded, replaced by a look of despair as he heard the news.听到这个消息后，他的笑容消失了，取而代之的是绝望的表情。 She slumped into the chair, her body language screaming of defeat and helplessness.她瘫倒在椅子上，她的肢体语言充满了失败和无助。 Dropping her head into her hands, she embodied the ultimate image of helplessness.她把头埋在双手里，表现出极度的无助。
生气/愤怒 He felt a surge of anger boiling inside him.他感到一股怒火在他心中沸腾。 He found himself feeling increasingly irritated by the noise.他发现自己越来越被噪音惹恼了。 She was consumed by fury when she discovered the lie.当她发现那个谎言时，气得要命。 His eyebrows knitted together in a clear sign of displeasure.他的眉毛皱成一团，明显表示不高兴。 Her eyes narrowed, flashing with unspoken anger.她眯起眼睛，闪烁着说不出的愤怒。 He slammed the door behind him with a loud bang.他砰的一声关上身后的门。 He clenched his fists tightly, trying to control his urge to lash out.他握紧拳头，试图控制自己发泄的冲动。 She threw the book across the room in a fit of rage.她一怒之下把书扔到房间的另一边。

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