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After a very meaningful conversation with my dad about the old days, we came up with an object that we both remembered clearly. It was my very first bicycle. My mind told me I got it when I was seven, who was cheated to ride it for fifty yards alone the first time I tried!
My dad put together all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called, “Your own car." Of course I knew he had some magical ability, but I didn't think he could make such an awesome object. He added the seat and the pedals(踏板)so that I would not have any problems. My dad recalled the bicycle was the smallest he could find while I remember how huge it was. I was so afraid of it and there was no way that I was going to control that monster-sized material. The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month because l refused to ride it. Honestly, I was scared to try it.
After a month, my dad gave me a lecture to teach me what being a man was all about. I was finally determined to try it. My dad was proud of me and I felt very manly. He and I went to the park to see what we could do there.
The park was empty when we arrived. I had no doubt that my dad told everybody not to be there because we had to use it. I felt sorry for other people,but I was proud to have such an omnipotent(全 能的)person as my dad.
We found a smooth and open space. My dad was holding the back part of the seat to make sure I didn't fell. He promised me that I was not going to fall because he would be running right behind, holding the bicycle.
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I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.
I turned around and found my dad was not behind.
【前文分析】
文体为personal narrative writing,叙述的是个人第一次的骑行经历。文本较为简单。具体情节为作者我在爸爸的鼓励和帮助下第一次学习骑自行车,在爸爸再三承诺会扶着自行车后座后我不知不觉地骑了50yards,转头却发现爸爸早就放开了手...
【续写框架】
Para1: I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.
1. How did I feel once the bicycle moved
2. How would dad respond
3. Why would I turn around
Para2: I turned around and found my dad was not behind.
1. What would happen to me when I turned around
2. What would I say to my dad
3. What about my first riding experience Did I make it eventually
【优美句子展示】
1. Contrary to the first time I rode, I changed my attitude to it and made up to be brave. It was not unexpected that I kept my balance and rode smoothly on my own. Challenging though it was, I eventually overcome it and had a good command of it.
2. Feeling a litter scared but confident, I tired my best to control the bicycle and moved at a low pace.
3. However tough it would be, the thought of being a real man forced me to practice it again. With some trial and error, I finally had a good command of it.
4.Fearful and aimless though I was, I still tried to balance myself.
5. The feeling of scary took up my mind completely.
6. Bearing my dad’s words in my mind, I was gradually familiar with the bicycle and seemed to get the hang of it.
7. Never had I anticipated that my father didn’t hole the handle of my bicycle.
8. I was frustrated that my father didn’t keep his promise to keep me accompanied.
9. Anxious and desperate, I cried at the top of my lungsin an attempt to make myself heard by my father. Then, I recharged myself and gave a second try.
10. Immediately, I was enveloped in panic with my heart beating violently.
11. Not knowing what to do next, I got sucked in the fearand felt my knees weak and my throat tighten. There is no doubt that I fell from the bike and dropped to the floor terribly.
12.I succeeded in conquering my inner anxiety and riding. From this unforgettable experience, I alter a great deal. I am always willing to try new things.
13. A sense of scare took hold of me, making me lose my balance.
14. Instead, my father stared at me in the distance.
15. My father encouraged me to try again, which boosted my morale and helped me return to normal.
16. Immediate, I slowed down my pace, searching for my father here and there, but in vain.
17. After several minute's try, I made it. This my first bicycle trip was a turning point for me, showing that I grew into a brave boy.
18. Incredible, it didn’t take long before I could control my bicycle more practically.
19. It was the first time that I had manged my bicycles freely.
【范文展示】
范文 1:
I started to pedal and the bicycle moved. Sweat welling on my forehead, I tried my utmost tokeep the balance by controlling the handle. Sort of afraid as I was, I made myself calm down because I knew my dad would keep protecting me. What I needed to do was holding the bars and keeping pedaling. With it moving, I felt it wasn't as difficult as I had expected and even began to speed up. So delighted was I that I wanted to yell out and share my feelings with my dad.
I turned around and found my dad was not behind. A great sense of shock and scare seized me and my mind suddenly went blank. My body began shaking and I fell off the bicycle. Lyingon the ground, I felt great pains on my legs. Then Dad approached and said, “Be manly.” Regaining my courage, I climbed onto the bicycle again. I held the bars tightly and made efforts to balance my body. My father commented I was one of the quickest learners he had ever seen. But he didn't realize it was the almighty sense of security and trust from him that played the best part.
范文 2:
I started to pedal and the bicycle moved. “Look straight forward and keep hold of the handle tightly!” My father emphasized. With palms sweating and legs trembling, I made every effort to keep the balance and the bike was winding forward slowly. Deeply convinced that my dad was holding my back seat, I was much in relief and wobbled off down the road. All of a sudden, I stumbled on the uneven ground and fell flat on my face. A sharp pain swept across my whole body and I couldn't help bursting into tears.
I turned around and found my dad was not behind. In a fit of anger, I blurted out, “Dad, you promised to hold my back seat, why did you let it go ” My dad ran up to me, carefully checked my situation and comforted, “Dear, actually you have pedaled for about 50 yards, by yourself!” Rooted to the spot, I almost couldn’t believe my ears. Everything is difficult before they are easy. Try again ” Inspired by his words, I picked up my courage and had a second try, finally realizing what being a man was all about.
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