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续写题目来源：赣州市2024年高三年级摸底考试/2024赣州一模
续写：假发女孩重获新生
Donna is my sister, and I had always considered her beautiful. Our father called her his princess, and in high school, she was known as the school babe. Our parents were protective of us, particularly our father, who kept close watch over the friends she made.
One Saturday in April, a boy invited Donna to a park with four other friends. Unfortunately, on their way to the park, their car crashed into a guardrail and flipped over three times before it came to a stop on its roof. Donna was pulled from the car and rushed to the hospital without delay.
Donna was in the hospital for two weeks. Many of her friends went to see her, especially Claudia, who was there a lot. However, Mom and Dad never liked Claudia. I don't really know why. They just didn't like her being around.
Donna returned home with the entire top half of her head shaved. She had hundreds of stitches （缝线）, some of which came across her forehead and between her left eye and eyebrow. Knowing Donna's concern for her appearance, Mom found her a human hair wig （假发） that perfectly matched her hair.
Donna finally recovered and went back to school. But she never felt good in school. There was a very loud-mouthed, self-centered girl in Donna's class who took great pleasure in teasing her. This girl, seated behind Donna, would pull slightly on Donna's wig and mockingly said, "Hey, Wiggy, let's see your scars（伤疤）". Then she would laugh.
Donna endured this mistreatment in silence until the day she told Claudia. From then on, Claudia kept a close eye on my sister, preventing anyone from bothering her. There was something about Claudia that was frightening, even to the worst kids in school. Nobody messed with her. Unfortunately, though, Claudia wasn't always around, and the teasing and name-calling continued.
Paragraph1: One day, Claudia came to our home with a special surprise.
Paragraph2: Donna and Claudia wore their wigs for over a year.
一、已知情节填空
1. Donna is considered beautiful by her family and peers, and her father is particularly protective of her.
2. One Saturday in April, Donna goes to a park with a boy and four other friends.
3. Their car crashes into a guardrail and flips over, ending up on its roof.
4. Donna is rushed to the hospital immediately after being pulled from the car.
5. She spends two weeks in the hospital, where many friends, especially , visit her.
6. Her parents do not like Claudia, for reasons not specified.
7. Donna returns home with the top half of her head shaved and wears a wig.
8. Back at school, Donna is teased by a classmate who mocks her wig.
9. Claudia becomes protective of Donna, deterring others from teasing her.
10. Despite Claudia's protection, the teasing continues when she is not around.
续写思路引导
教师在向学生呈现续写范文前，应先引导学生进入正确的续写思路中，这也是我设计下列问题的目的所在。大家可以根据自己学生的实际水平，决定是用中文还是英文呈现这些问题；并根据自己预留的续写讲解时间，决定是否要对下列问题进行删减。
中文问题汇总：
1. Donna戴假发说明了她什么心态？
2. 第一段的惊喜是什么？为什么Claudia要准备这个惊喜？
3. 那个女孩还会趁Claudia不在的时候嘲笑Donna吗？为什么？
4. 续写第二段中，如果Donna决定不再戴假发，表明她的心态发生了什么变化？
5. 这次经历会对Donna产生什么影响？对她们的友谊产生什么影响？
对应英文及解释：
1. Why does Donna wear a wig
Donna wears a wig because she is conscious about her appearance, especially after the accident that resulted in her having hundreds of stitches and the top half of her head shaved. The wig helps her feel more comfortable and maintain a sense of normalcy in her school and social life.
唐娜戴假发是因为她很在意自己的外表，尤其是在那次导致她缝了几百针、头发被剃光的事故之后。假发让她感觉更舒适，在学校和社交生活中保持一种正常的感觉。
2. What is the special surprise Claudia brings, and why
The special surprise Claudia brings is likely her own head shaved, showing solidarity with Donna. Claudia decides to prepare this surprise to show Donna she is not alone, to boost her confidence, and to send a powerful message to others about friendship and support.
克劳迪娅带来的特别惊喜可能是她自己的光头，以示对唐娜的支持。克劳迪娅决定准备这个惊喜，向唐娜展示她并不孤单，增强她的信心，并向其他人传递一个关于友谊和支持的强有力的信息。
3. Will the girl who teases Donna continue to do so in Claudia's absence Why or why not
No, the girl will likely stop teasing Donna even when Claudia is not around. The act of Claudia shaving her head in solidarity might create a shift in the school's social dynamics, demonstrating strong support for Donna. This could deter the girl and others from continuing their teasing due to increased awareness and potentially due to fearing Claudia's influence or repercussions.
即使克劳迪娅不在身边，这个女孩也可能会停止戏弄唐娜。克劳迪娅为了团结而剃光头的行为可能会改变学校的社会动态，显示出对唐娜的强烈支持。这可能会阻止女孩和其他人继续他们的戏弄，因为意识提高了，可能是因为担心克劳迪娅的影响或后果。
4. If Donna decides not to wear the wig anymore, what does it indicate about her mental state
If Donna decides to stop wearing the wig, it indicates a significant growth in her self-confidence and acceptance of her appearance. It shows that she is no longer letting the accident define her or her beauty and is embracing her true self, scars and all. This decision also reflects her resilience and the strength she has developed through her recovery and the support of friends like Claudia.
如果唐娜决定不再戴假发，这表明她的自信和对自己外表的接受。这表明她不再让事故定义她或她的美丽，而是拥抱真实的自我，包括伤疤和一切。这个决定也反映了她在康复过程中以及像克劳迪娅这样的朋友的支持下所积累的韧性和力量。
5. How will this experience affect Donna and their friendship
This experience will likely have a profound impact on Donna, teaching her about resilience, self-acceptance, and the value of true friendship. For Donna and Claudia's friendship, this ordeal will strengthen their bond significantly. Their shared experiences, Claudia's act of solidarity, and their mutual support during challenging times will deepen their connection and trust in each other, making their friendship even more meaningful and lasting.
这段经历可能会对唐娜产生深远的影响，教会她什么是适应力、自我接纳和真正友谊的价值。对于唐娜和克劳迪娅的友谊来说，这次磨难将大大加强她们的关系。他们共同的经历以及他们在困难时期的相互支持，将加深他们之间的联系和相互信任，使他们的友谊更加持久。
三、续写思路概述
第一段：
（1）惊喜就是Claudia也剃光了自己的头发。
（2）我们一家人，尤其是Donna的反应。
（3）Claudia向Donna解释自己这么做的原因。
（4）第二天她们俩带着假发去上学后，大部分同学和老师的反应。
（5）那个一直嘲笑Donna的女孩停止了自己的行为，解释一下原因。
第二段：
Donna在这段时间心态上的改变，即重获自信，更加坚强。
终于有一天，Donna鼓起勇气不戴假发进了校园，坦然接受其他人的目光。
我父母对Claudia认知的转变。
经过这件事Donna和Claudia的友谊更加深厚。
四、TCEE独家范文
Paragraph1:
One day, Claudia came to our home with a special surprise. She had shaved her head completely, revealing a smooth, bald surface that mirrored Donna's condition beneath her wig. Our family, especially Donna, was speechless at first, then moved to tears. "It's just hair. It will grow back," Claudia said with a reassuring smile. The next day, they went to school together, wearing their wigs. The majority of their classmates and teachers were supportive, expressing admiration for their courage. The girl who had once delighted in teasing Donna ceased her behavior. Perhaps seeing Claudia's bold gesture made her realize the gravity of her actions and the pain they caused.
一天，克劳迪娅带着一个特别的惊喜来到我们家。她把头发剃光了，露出光滑的光秃秃的表面，这与戴着假发的唐娜的情况一模一样。我们的家人，尤其是唐娜，一开始说不出话来，后来感动得流下了眼泪。“只是头发。它会长回来的。”克劳迪娅带着安慰的微笑说。第二天，他们戴着假发一起去上学。大多数同学和老师都支持他们，对他们的勇气表示钦佩。那个曾经以取笑唐娜为乐的女孩停止了她的行为。也许看到克劳迪娅的大胆举动让她意识到自己行为的严重性和造成的痛苦。
Paragraph2:
Donna and Claudia wore their wigs for over a year. During this time, Donna's confidence blossomed. She became more resilient, embracing her scars as symbols of her survival and strength. Finally, the day came when Donna decided to go to school without her wig, confidently facing the gazes of her peers. This marked a significant moment in her journey towards self-acceptance. Our parents' perception of Claudia underwent a profound change, recognizing her not just as a friend, but as a guardian angel who stood by Donna in her darkest times. The ordeal they went through together cemented their friendship, forging a bond that was deeper and more meaningful than ever before.
唐娜和克劳迪娅戴了一年多的假发。在这段时间里，唐娜变得更自信了。她变得更有韧性，把伤疤当作她活下来和力量的象征。终于有一天，唐娜决定不戴假发去上学，自信地面对同龄人的目光。这标志着她走向自我接纳的重要时刻。我们的父母对克劳迪娅的看法发生了深刻的变化，他们不仅把她当作朋友，而且把她当作守护天使，在唐娜最黑暗的时刻陪伴着她。他们一起经历的磨难巩固了他们的友谊，建立了一种比以往任何时候都更深刻、更有意义的纽带。
官方范文
Paragraph1:
One day, Claudia came to our home with a special surprise. Knowing how awful Donna felt about her hair, she had shaved off her own beautiful long brown hair. The next day, they went wig shopping, selecting identical blond and brown wigs. When they went to school that Monday, Claudia was ready for the teasers. In a vocabulary not allowed inside school walls, she set them straight so that anyone ready to tease my sister knew they would have to mess with Claudia. It didn’t take long for the message to get through.
一天，克劳迪娅带着一个特别的惊喜来到我们家。知道唐娜对自己的头发有多不满意，她剃掉了自己美丽的棕色长发。第二天，他们去买假发，选了一模一样的金色和棕色假发。那个星期一，当他们去学校的时候，克劳迪娅已经准备好了。她用学校里不允许使用的词汇纠正了他们的错误，这样任何想要戏弄我妹妹的人都知道，他们必须去惹克劳迪亚。没过多久消息就传开了。
Paragraph2:
Donna and Claudia wore their wigs for over a year. They waited until they felt comfortable revealing their natural hair. Donna, having developed a stronger self-confidence and acceptance, eventually went to school without the wigs. With Claudia’s strong support, Donna got through the toughest moment in school, graduated from high school, got married, and is now a mother of two. Twenty-eight years after the accident, Donna and Claudia remain good friend, sharing happiness and facing the storms in life together, embracing a beautiful future together.
唐娜和克劳迪娅戴了一年多的假发。他们一直等到他们觉得露出自己自然的头发很舒服的时候。唐娜变得更自信，也更能接受别人了，她终于不戴假发去上学了。在克劳迪娅的大力支持下，唐娜度过了学校最艰难的时刻，从高中毕业，结婚，现在是两个孩子的母亲。事故发生28年后，唐娜和克劳迪娅仍然是好朋友，共同分享快乐，共同面对生活中的风暴，共同拥抱美好的未来。

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