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专题08提纲作文高分宝典之邀请信、申请信
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，"一式、两头、三写、四关"；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、电子邮件、书信 等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 命题形式 话题
2022年 新高考全国I卷&II卷 提纲式 邀请参加广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”
2019年 全国卷I 提纲式 当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。写一封信申请做志愿者
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：雅—能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)： 信—能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，考生应该注意"有话好好说"：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；"有话慢慢说"：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的"万能模板"并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的"一式、两头、三写、四关"高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住所写书信的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
邀请信结构：开头表明写信意图，发出邀请
主体说明邀请原因和邀请内容
结尾期待对方接受邀请，并表示感谢
邀请信写作模板
Dear....,
How are you Knowing that you are interested in ________________, it ' s my pleasure / a great honor / a privilege for me to invite you to join us .
The following is the detailed information about it . First of all , as scheduled , it will be held in ____________
, lasting from__________ to______________ this Sunday afternoon . What ' s more , if you take active part in the activity , not only can you ____________________but also________________________________.
We would appreciate it so much if you could accept the invitation/You presence is highly expected. /Your presence is sure to make a big difference . Looking forward to your early reply.
邀请信黄金表达：
1.There' s a live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall .I ' m writing to invite you to go with me .这周六晚上在新华音乐厅有一场现场音乐会，我写信是想邀请你跟我一起去。
2. I ' m Li Hua , chairman of the Students ' Union . I am writing to invite you to participate in the
English culture-themed activities in the English corner to be held next Sunday .
我是学生会主席李华，我写信是想邀请你参加下周日将在英语角举行的英语文化主题活动。
The lecture is due on March 25, from 9:00 am to 11:00 am.
讲座预定在3月25日九点至十一点举行。
Participants will gather in the English corner, sharing a knowledge of brilliant English cultures and interesting customs .
参加者将聚集在英语角，分享璀璨的英语文化和有趣的习俗。
The lecture will cover the background of four famous Chinese paintings and some basic techniques in Chinese painting .
讲座将介绍中国私服名画的背景和中国画的一些基本技巧。
6.I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience .
如果你能尽早在你方便时考虑我的邀请，我将不胜感激。
申请信结构：开头点名写信目的，自我介绍，点出信息来源
详述个人优势
表达感谢，简述获准后的打算，期盼批准
申请信写作模板
Dear XXX ,
I am ...from ...... I am writing to apply for .......
I think I am qualified for the position （我认为我能胜任这个职位）， because I am a positive boy （我是一个积极的男孩）. What ' s more , I can speak English fluently .（此外，我说英语很流利） Last but not least , I often use computer so I can type fast .（最后但是至关重要的是我经常使用电脑，我打字快） I am confident that I am suitable / fit for the position (我很自信我可以胜任这个职位）.
I will be much grateful if you will offer me a chance be one of your company ./If given the opportunity to be .... , I ' ll spare no effort to do everything I can .
Yours ,
XXX
申请信黄金表达：
1.I' m Li Hua a Senior 3 student .1 have learn - ed that volunteers for the foreigners from Britain are needed . I am writing to apply for this position .
我是李华，一名高三的学生。我了解到来自英国的外国人需要志愿者。我写信想申请这个职位。
2. My name is Li Hua . I would like to work as a volunteer for Paris Olympics ./ I am writing to apply to be a volunteer .
我叫李华。我想成为巴黎奥运会的志愿者。／我写信是想申请成为一名志愿者。
3.1 do believe that I am qualified for the job . Firstly , I have an extensive knowledge of our school ' s history and culture .
我相信我能胜任这份工作。首先，我对我们学校的历史和文化有广泛的了解。
4.Besides, I have a good command of English , making it easy for me to communicate with foreign guests freely .
此外，我有良好的英语水平，这使我可以轻松自如地与外国客人交流。
5.More importantly , I have been involved in a good deal of reception work .
更重要的是，我参与了大量的接待工作。
6.I' d appreciate it if could you take my application into consideration and I ' m looking forward to your early reply .
如果您考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激，我期待着您的早日回复。
（2022·新高考全国I卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program—Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established.
This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.
I'd appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
参加：attend→participate in
建立：establish→set up
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构)
【2019·全国卷I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
写信目的；
个人优势；
能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【范文赏析】
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Chinese student who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering.
As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
一．邀请信
1．（2023上·广东肇庆·高二肇庆市第一中学校考期中）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim对中国文化很感兴趣，你想邀请他来参加你市举行的国际文化交流节，请你根据以下提示给他写一封邀请信。内容包括：
1．提出邀请；2．简单介绍活动；3．表达你的期望。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Jim,
I'm exceedingly delighted to tell you that an International Cultural Festival is to be held in my city. I wonder if you would like to enjoy it with me.
As scheduled, the festival is to be held in the city hall on October 26th, lasting for three days. Participants from all over the world will show their country's cuisine, costumes, arts and crafts. Chinese painting and calligraphy are also included. I'm sure the festival will promote your understanding of different cultures.
I promise you will learn a lot and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→pleased
告诉：tell→inform
想做某事：would like to do→feel like doing
加深：promote→enhance/deepen
2.句型转换
同义句
原句：As scheduled, the festival is to be held in the city hall on October 26th, lasting for three days.
拓展句：As scheduled, the festival, which will last for three days, is to be held in the city hall on October 26th.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm exceedingly delighted to tell you that an International Cultural Festival is to be held in my city. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I wonder if you would like to enjoy it with me.（运用了if引导的宾语从句）
2．（2023上·海南海口·高二校考期中）假定你是李华，你市大剧院下周末将举行一场民乐演奏会，你打算邀请来自英国的好友Linda一起领略中国音乐之美。请你给她写一封邀请信，内容包括：
1.写信目的;
2.音乐会时间、地点、内容;
3.期待回复。
注意：1.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯;
2.写作词数应为80左右。
参考词汇：folk music concert民乐演奏会
Dear Linda,
————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Linda,
I am writing to invite you to join me at a folk music concert in our city's Grand Theater next weekend. I would be thrilled if you could come and experience the beauty of Chinese music.
The concert will be held on Saturday night, starting at 7:30 PM ,which is really excellent. The concert will showcase traditional Chinese instruments and melodies, and you will be impressed by the richness and diversity of our musical culture.
Please let me know as soon as possible whether you can attend or not. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→ excited
举办：hold→ host
展示：showcase→show
收到你的来信：hear from you→ receive your letter
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to invite you to join me at a folk music concert in our city's Grand Theater next weekend.
拓展句：I am writing to invite you to join me at a folk music concert which will be held in our city's Grand Theater next weekend.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The concert will be held on Saturday night, starting at 7:30 PM ,which is really excellent. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Please let me know as soon as possible whether you can attend or not.（运用了whether引导宾语从句）
3．（2020下·高一校考课时练习）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Alice 对中国茶文化很感兴趣。2022年4月8日将有一个茶艺活动在北京举行，请你根据以下内容，给她写一份邀请信。
1.地点：雨阁茶楼 ( Yuge Tea House )
2.参加人员：来自世界各地 100 多名中学生
3.活动内容：听中国茶介绍，观赏各种茶具和茶艺表演，品茶等
注意：词数 100 词左右
参考词汇： 茶艺活动 tea ceremony 茶具 tea set 茶艺表演 tea art performance
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文赏析】
Dear Alice,
How is everything with you I am writing to tell you that there will be a tea ceremony to be held at Yuge Tea House in Beijing on April 8th, 2022. We will be delighted to have you there with us as you are a devoted fan about Chinese tea culture.
As scheduled, we, together with over 100 middle school students from all over the world, can have a general idea about Chinese tea. Besides, there will be a feast for our eyes which consists of wide ranges of tea sets as well as tea art performances. What's the most attractive part is that we will be given a precious chance to have a taste of tea.
I promise you will get the hang of Chinese tea culture if you can participate in it. Look forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host/launch
此外：besides → what's more
组成：consist of→be made up of
机会：chance→ opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As scheduled, we, together with over 100 middle school students from all over the world, can have a general idea about Chinese tea.
拓展句：As it is scheduled, we, together with over 100 middle school students from all over the world, can have a general idea about Chinese tea.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We will be delighted to have you there with us as you are a devoted fan about Chinese tea culture.（运用了as引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】 Besides, there will be a feast for our eyes which consists of wide ranges of tea sets as well as tea art performances. （运用了which引导的定语从句）
4．（2022上·福建·高二校考期中）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Linda对中国书法(Calligraphy)很感兴趣。2022年11月30日，城市文化中心将举办一个书法文化交流活动，请给她写一封邀请信。
内容包括： 1.时间、地点；
2.活动内容：看展览、听讲座等；
3.活动的意义。
注意： 1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节使行文流畅。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文赏析】
Dear Linda,
Knowing that you have a preference for Chinese calligraphy, I'm writing to invite you to the calligraphy culture exchange activity scheduled on November 30th in the City Culture Center.
All the people present will have chances to enjoy an exhibition of Chinese traditional calligraphy and experience writing in the flesh. Of primary note is that there will be a lecture addressed/ delivered by a famous calligrapher, which can surely help you form a deep insight into Chinese classical culture. I am convinced that you will benefit a lot by participating in this activity.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply. .
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
机会：chance→ opportunity
讲座：lecture → speech
参加：participate in→ take part in
答复：reply→ response
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Knowing that you have a preference for Chinese calligraphy, I'm writing to invite you to the calligraphy culture exchange activity scheduled on November 30th in the City Culture Center.
拓展句：Because I know that you have a preference for Chinese calligraphy, I'm writing to invite you to the calligraphy culture exchange activity that is scheduled on November 30th in the City Culture Center.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Of primary note is that there will be a lecture delivered by a famous calligrapher, which can surely help you form a deep insight into Chinese classical culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.（运用了if引导的宾语从句。）
5．（2022上·北京·高二校考期中）假设你是红星中学英语社李华，你校英语社打算邀请外教Professor Smith 为全校学生做一次主题为保护环境的演讲，请给他写一封邀请信，信的内容包括：
1. 说明写信的目的
2. 告知时间和地点
3. 介绍演讲的内容(如环境保护的原因、后果及措施等)
注意：1. 词数为 80 左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.英语社(English Club)
Dear Professor Smith，
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Professor Smith，
I am Li Hua, from the English club in Hong Xing Middle school. I’m writing to invite you to deliver a speech named “Environmental Protection”, which is scheduled to be given on November 30th, in the school hall.
In your speech, we hope you could introduce the following aspects. To start with, the reasons for environmental protection are including garbage throwing, wasting natural resources, overfishing, among which human activity will be to blame. Meanwhile, the severe consequence should be followed. For example, without better environment, we will have no clear water to drink, no fresh air to breathe. Additionally, it’s better to highlight the solutions for improving environmental pollution, such as setting up natural reserve to save the endangered species, changing the way we work and travel, turning to clean energy.
I would appreciate it much if you could come. Look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
预定做：be scheduled to→be due to
结果：consequence → result
此外：Additionally→In addition
强调：highlight→ emphasize
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For example, without better environment, we will have no clear water to drink, no fresh air to breathe.
拓展句：For example, if there is no better environment, we will have no clear water to drink, no fresh air to breathe.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to deliver a speech named “Environmental Protection”, which is scheduled to be given on November 30th, in the school hall.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】To start with, the reasons are cause for concern, including garbage throwing, wasting natural resources, overfishing, among which human activity will be to blame.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
二、申请信
6．（2023上·重庆·高二重庆实验外国语学校校考期中）假如你是重庆外国语学校的一名高二学生李华，想要报名参加国际高中数学竞赛(International High School Math Competition，简称IHSM)。请你给主办方写一封申请信，内容包括：
1.参加意图；
2.个人优势；
3.……
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear IHSM Organizer,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear IHSM Organizer,
I am writing to express my strong interest in participating in the IHSM. I am currently a second-year student at Chongqing Foreign Language School.
As a math enthusiast, I have always been passionate about solving complex problems and challenging myself.In terms of my personal strengths, I have consistently achieved high grades in mathematics throughout my academic career. I am also proficient in several mathematical software programs, which I believe will be beneficial during the competition.
I am confident that my dedication, hard work, and passion for mathematics will make me a strong contender in the IHSM. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
充满激情的：passionate→impassioned
有益的：beneficial→useful
优势：strength→advantage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a math enthusiast, I have always been passionate about solving complex problems and challenging myself.
拓展句：Because I am a math enthusiast, I have always been passionate about solving complex problems and challenging myself.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am also proficient in several mathematical software programs, which I believe will be beneficial during the competition. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that the IHSM would provide me with an excellent opportunity to test my skills against students from all over the world. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
7．（2023上·吉林长春·高一长春外国语学校校考阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你获悉首都博物馆正在招募于暑假期间做英文讲解的志愿者，向外国游客介绍中国文化。请你用英文给相关负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 申请理由；
2. 个人优势；
3. 希望批准。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle School. Learning that the capital museum is recruiting volunteers to introduce traditional Chinese culture in English during summer vacation, I'm writing to apply for the position.
First of all, I have a good command of both spoken and written English, which enables me to communicate with foreigners fluently. Additionally, I'm outgoing and energetic, willing to help those in need. Most importantly, as a history lover, I'm firmly convinced that I can spread Chinese Culture to foreign friends effectively.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours ,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
首先：First of all→ Firstly
精通：have a good command of → be good at
此外：Additionally→ In addition
申请：apply for→ put in for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm Li Hua, a senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle School.
拓展句：I'm Li Hua, who is a senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I have a good command of both spoken and written English, which enables me to communicate with foreigners fluently.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Most importantly, as a history lover, I'm firmly convinced that I can spread Chinese Culture to foreign friends effectively.（运用了that连接的宾语从句）
8．（2021下·广东深圳·高一红岭中学校考期中）假定你是李华，你所在的市博物馆正在展出中国的文物，为了给来自国外的游客提供良好的服务，需要招聘一些志愿者。请你给相关负责人Sophia写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人能力和优势；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 词数100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：文物 relics
Dear Sophia,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Sophia,
My name is Li Hua. I’m really delighted to learn that some volunteers for the Chinese cultural relic exhibition are required in our city museum and I’m confident that I am truly fit for the position.
My advantage first lies in the fact that I used to be a volunteer in a museum and quite familiar with Chinese relics. Besides, there is no problem with my spoken English, as I used to live in England for almost a year. I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.
I would really appreciate it if you could offer me the chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
需要：require →need
优点：advantage→strength
此外：besides→moreover
2.句式拓展
同意句替换
原句：I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.
拓展句：I have no trouble in communicating with others in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My advantage first lies in the fact that I used to be a volunteer in a museum and quite familiar with Chinese relics. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】I would really appreciate it if you could offer me the chance. (运用了虚拟语气，if引导的虚拟条件状语从句)
9．（2022上·广东揭阳·高三校考阶段练习）你校的美食俱乐部在元旦节临近之际要举行美食品鉴活动，现需美食顾问一名，要求对食物文化有一定的了解，具有一定工作热情，有经验者优先。假如你是李华，请给美食俱乐部写一封申请信。
1.表明写信意图
2.说明自己优势和特长
3.字数100词左右，适当情节可自行添加。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Knowing that with New Year’s approaching, the Food Club is in desperate need of an advisor for the Food taste, I am writing to apply for the position.
I am qualified for the job because I have a good knowledge of both Chinese and foreign food culture, which enables me to have a special ability to make a comment on cuisines. In addition, being energetic and patient, I can deal with all sorts of challenging problems without difficulty. Most importantly, having worked as an advisor for some social events, I have rich experience in offering some useful suggestions.
I would be grateful if you could consider my application and accept me. Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Lihua
1.词汇积累
了解到：knowing that → learning that
此外、另外：in addition → besides
各种各样的：all sorts of → a variety of
最重要的是：most importantly → above all
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I would be grateful if you could consider my application and accept me.
拓展句：I would be appreciated it if you could consider my application and accept me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that with New Year’s approaching, the Food Club is in desperate need of an advisor for the Food taste, I am writing to apply for the position.(运用了with复合结构和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I am qualified for the job because I have a good knowledge of both Chinese and foreign food culture, which enables me to have a special ability to make a comment on cuisines.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10．（2022上·江苏南京·高三南京外国语学校校考期中）假定你是高三学生李华，学校环保社社长。近期，你打算在学校开展一次“减塑”(Less Plastic) 社团活动。请你给王校长写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 社团活动的时间和地点；2. 社会活动的内容。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua, the leader of the Environment Protection Club.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua, the leader of the Environment Protection Club. In order to raise the awareness of protecting the environment among the teachers and students in our school, our association has decided to hold a “Less Plastics” activity, so I am writing to apply for the permission for it.
As we know, using plastics has made great damages to our environment, which contributes to the urgency of improving the awareness of cutting down the usage of plastics. The “Less Plastics” activity which is of great help will be held next Monday along the school path on the left side of the school playground from 10 a.m. to 12 a.m. First, we will design some posters written the information about this activity on the school walls in advance. Then, one of our club members will give a speech about how to reduce plastics next Monday.
What do you think of our activity I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
社团：club→association
导致：lead to→contribute to
减少：reduce→cut down
提前：ahead of time→in advance
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：First, we will design some posters written the information about this activity on the school walls in advance. Then, one of our club member will give a speech about how to reduce plastics next Monday.
拓展句：First, we will design some posters written the information about this activity on the school walls in advance, and one of our club member will give a speech about how to reduce plastics next Monday.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The “Less Plastics” activity which is of great help will be held next Monday along the school path on the left side of the school playground from 10 a.m. to 12 a.m. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Then, one of our club member will give a speech about how to reduce plastics next Monday. (运用了疑问副词how + to do的结构作介词宾语)专题08提纲作文高分宝典之邀请信、申请信
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，"一式、两头、三写、四关"；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、电子邮件、书信 等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 命题形式 话题
2022年 新高考全国I卷&II卷 提纲式 邀请参加广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”
2019年 全国卷I 提纲式 当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。写一封信申请做志愿者
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：雅—能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)： 信—能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，考生应该注意"有话好好说"：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；"有话慢慢说"：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的"万能模板"并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的"一式、两头、三写、四关"高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住所写书信的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
邀请信结构：开头表明写信意图，发出邀请
主体说明邀请原因和邀请内容
结尾期待对方接受邀请，并表示感谢
邀请信写作模板
Dear....,
How are you Knowing that you are interested in ________________, it ' s my pleasure / a great honor / a privilege for me to invite you to join us .
The following is the detailed information about it . First of all , as scheduled , it will be held in ____________
, lasting from__________ to______________ this Sunday afternoon . What ' s more , if you take active part in the activity , not only can you ____________________but also________________________________.
We would appreciate it so much if you could accept the invitation/You presence is highly expected. /Your presence is sure to make a big difference . Looking forward to your early reply.
邀请信黄金表达：
1.There' s a live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall .I ' m writing to invite you to go with me .这周六晚上在新华音乐厅有一场现场音乐会，我写信是想邀请你跟我一起去。
2. I ' m Li Hua , chairman of the Students ' Union . I am writing to invite you to participate in the
English culture-themed activities in the English corner to be held next Sunday .
我是学生会主席李华，我写信是想邀请你参加下周日将在英语角举行的英语文化主题活动。
The lecture is due on March 25, from 9:00 am to 11:00 am.
讲座预定在3月25日九点至十一点举行。
Participants will gather in the English corner, sharing a knowledge of brilliant English cultures and interesting customs .
参加者将聚集在英语角，分享璀璨的英语文化和有趣的习俗。
The lecture will cover the background of four famous Chinese paintings and some basic techniques in Chinese painting .
讲座将介绍中国私服名画的背景和中国画的一些基本技巧。
6.I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience .
如果你能尽早在你方便时考虑我的邀请，我将不胜感激。
申请信结构：开头点名写信目的，自我介绍，点出信息来源
详述个人优势
表达感谢，简述获准后的打算，期盼批准
申请信写作模板
Dear XXX ,
I am ...from ...... I am writing to apply for .......
I think I am qualified for the position （我认为我能胜任这个职位）， because I am a positive boy （我是一个积极的男孩）. What ' s more , I can speak English fluently .（此外，我说英语很流利） Last but not least , I often use computer so I can type fast .（最后但是至关重要的是我经常使用电脑，我打字快） I am confident that I am suitable / fit for the position (我很自信我可以胜任这个职位）.
I will be much grateful if you will offer me a chance be one of your company ./If given the opportunity to be .... , I ' ll spare no effort to do everything I can .
Yours ,
XXX
申请信黄金表达：
1.I' m Li Hua a Senior 3 student .1 have learn - ed that volunteers for the foreigners from Britain are needed . I am writing to apply for this position .
我是李华，一名高三的学生。我了解到来自英国的外国人需要志愿者。我写信想申请这个职位。
2. My name is Li Hua . I would like to work as a volunteer for Paris Olympics ./ I am writing to apply to be a volunteer .
我叫李华。我想成为巴黎奥运会的志愿者。／我写信是想申请成为一名志愿者。
3.1 do believe that I am qualified for the job . Firstly , I have an extensive knowledge of our school ' s history and culture .
我相信我能胜任这份工作。首先，我对我们学校的历史和文化有广泛的了解。
4.Besides, I have a good command of English , making it easy for me to communicate with foreign guests freely .
此外，我有良好的英语水平，这使我可以轻松自如地与外国客人交流。
5.More importantly , I have been involved in a good deal of reception work .
更重要的是，我参与了大量的接待工作。
6.I' d appreciate it if could you take my application into consideration and I ' m looking forward to your early reply .
如果您考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激，我期待着您的早日回复。
（2022·新高考全国I卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【2019·全国卷I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
写信目的；
个人优势；
能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
一．邀请信
1．（2023上·广东肇庆·高二肇庆市第一中学校考期中）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim对中国文化很感兴趣，你想邀请他来参加你市举行的国际文化交流节，请你根据以下提示给他写一封邀请信。内容包括：
1．提出邀请；2．简单介绍活动；3．表达你的期望。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2023上·海南海口·高二校考期中）假定你是李华，你市大剧院下周末将举行一场民乐演奏会，你打算邀请来自英国的好友Linda一起领略中国音乐之美。请你给她写一封邀请信，内容包括：
1.写信目的;
2.音乐会时间、地点、内容;
3.期待回复。
注意：1.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯;
2.写作词数应为80左右。
参考词汇：folk music concert民乐演奏会
Dear Linda,
————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2020下·高一校考课时练习）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Alice 对中国茶文化很感兴趣。2022年4月8日将有一个茶艺活动在北京举行，请你根据以下内容，给她写一份邀请信。
1.地点：雨阁茶楼 ( Yuge Tea House )
2.参加人员：来自世界各地 100 多名中学生
3.活动内容：听中国茶介绍，观赏各种茶具和茶艺表演，品茶等
注意：词数 100 词左右
参考词汇： 茶艺活动 tea ceremony 茶具 tea set 茶艺表演 tea art performance
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2022上·福建·高二校考期中）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Linda对中国书法(Calligraphy)很感兴趣。2022年11月30日，城市文化中心将举办一个书法文化交流活动，请给她写一封邀请信。
内容包括： 1.时间、地点；
2.活动内容：看展览、听讲座等；
3.活动的意义。
注意： 1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节使行文流畅。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2022上·北京·高二校考期中）假设你是红星中学英语社李华，你校英语社打算邀请外教Professor Smith 为全校学生做一次主题为保护环境的演讲，请给他写一封邀请信，信的内容包括：
1. 说明写信的目的
2. 告知时间和地点
3. 介绍演讲的内容(如环境保护的原因、后果及措施等)
注意：1. 词数为 80 左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.英语社(English Club)
Dear Professor Smith，
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、申请信
6．（2023上·重庆·高二重庆实验外国语学校校考期中）假如你是重庆外国语学校的一名高二学生李华，想要报名参加国际高中数学竞赛(International High School Math Competition，简称IHSM)。请你给主办方写一封申请信，内容包括：
1.参加意图；
2.个人优势；
3.……
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear IHSM Organizer,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2023上·吉林长春·高一长春外国语学校校考阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你获悉首都博物馆正在招募于暑假期间做英文讲解的志愿者，向外国游客介绍中国文化。请你用英文给相关负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 申请理由；
2. 个人优势；
3. 希望批准。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2021下·广东深圳·高一红岭中学校考期中）假定你是李华，你所在的市博物馆正在展出中国的文物，为了给来自国外的游客提供良好的服务，需要招聘一些志愿者。请你给相关负责人Sophia写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人能力和优势；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 词数100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：文物 relics
Dear Sophia,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．（2022上·广东揭阳·高三校考阶段练习）你校的美食俱乐部在元旦节临近之际要举行美食品鉴活动，现需美食顾问一名，要求对食物文化有一定的了解，具有一定工作热情，有经验者优先。假如你是李华，请给美食俱乐部写一封申请信。
1.表明写信意图
2.说明自己优势和特长
3.字数100词左右，适当情节可自行添加。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2022上·江苏南京·高三南京外国语学校校考期中）假定你是高三学生李华，学校环保社社长。近期，你打算在学校开展一次“减塑”(Less Plastic) 社团活动。请你给王校长写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 社团活动的时间和地点；2. 社会活动的内容。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua, the leader of the Environment Protection Club.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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