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Catherine had stayed at home all her life to look after her three children, but now, she, who lost her husband in a car accident, had to step out and earn money to make ends meet. Catherine一直待在家里照顾她的三个孩子，但现在，她在车祸中失去了丈夫，不得不出去赚钱维持生计。
With zero work experience and no professional degree, her chances of getting hired for a well-paid job were next to zero. 因为缺乏工作经验，也没有专业学位，她很难找到一份报酬高的工作。
One day, after dropping her children at school, Catherine spotted（母亲spot工作，孩子spot母亲） a construction site. "I think I can work here," she thought and approached the manager. 一天，在送孩子们上学后，Catherine看到了一个建筑工地。“我也许可以在这里工作，”她想了想，便去找工地经理。
"Hi, are you hiring " she asked. "Yes, we are," the manager looked at Catherine from head to toe. "Are you sure you can work here This job requires a lot of hard work." “你好，你们在招人吗？”她问。“是的，我们在招，”经理从头到脚打量了Catherine一番。“你确定你能行么？在工地工作很辛苦的。”
"I'm ready for it," she told the manager and signed a contract to work a 12-hour shift.（工作轮班倒，孩子与妈妈的观念也应该发生一种转换变化） “我可以，”她告诉经理，签了工作合同，拿下了这个12小时轮班倒的工作。
However, Catherine kept her new job a secret from her children. She thought they would feel embarrassed after learning their mother worked at a construction site. 然而，Catherine没敢和孩子们说她去工地打工的事。她认为，一旦孩子们知道他们的妈妈在工地工作，会让孩子们在同学间“抬不起头”。
Every morning, after dropping her children to school, she would go to the construction site and work until her shift ended. She would pick up heavy bricks on her shoulder to transport them from one part of the site to the other. 每天早上，送完孩子上学后，她就会去工地工作。她从工地的一头把建筑材料砖头等运到另一头。
One evening, Catherine's son, Peter, told her about an upcoming contest in school that required mothers to participate. In the competition, students will wear blindfolds and have to recognize their mothers without looking at them.（粗糙的手，伤口是识别妈妈的方式，是妈妈为了家庭和孩子的付出，是爱） 一天晚上，Catherine的儿子Peter告诉她学校即将举行一个需要亲子活动。在比赛中，学生们会被蒙上眼睛，要在不看的情况下认出自己的妈妈。
"That sounds like such a cool event, Peter!" Catherine said excitedly. "I can't wait for it!" “那听起来是个很酷的活动！”Catherine兴奋地说。“我太想去参加这个活动了！”
"I won't go there with you, mom," Peter replied. "But why " What her son said next was something Catherine wasn't prepared to hear. “我不会和你一起去那儿，妈妈，”Peter回答。“但是为什么？”她儿子接下来说的话让Catherine陷入了沉默。
"Mom, I would have to touch your hands to recognize you, and everyone would look at them," Peter explained. “妈妈，我得摸你的手才能认出你，而且每个人都会看着它们，”Peter解释道。
"Your hands are so ugly. They're so hard and rough," he added. “你的手好丑。它们又硬又粗糙，”他补充道。
"I will feel so embarrassed when my classmates look at your hands," the boy said. “当我的同学们看到你的手时，我会感到非常尴尬，”男孩说。
"I won't attend the event." Catherine felt terrible but couldn't say anything in her defense. 续写第一段： A few weeks later,Peter was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. 续写第二段： On his way back home,he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. “那我就不去参加活动了。”Catherine感到非常难过，但她找不到合适的语言为自己辩解。 几周后，当Peter走在回家的路上时，他突然看到了什么。 走在回家的路上，他一直在思考该如何向母亲道歉。
Analysis before writing:
Introduction scenario: Firstly, we need to continue the plot from the previous text, where Catherine works on a construction site to earn money to support her family, but her children are unaware of this.
Emotional turning point: In the first paragraph of the continuation, we can describe Peter's accidental discovery of the truth about his mother working on a construction site, which was both an accident and an emotional turning point for him.
Inner Struggle: After learning the truth, Peter may feel shocked, guilty, or admired for his mother. This paragraph needs to describe Peter's inner activities and showcase his emotional changes.
Apology and Understanding: In the second paragraph of the continuation,Peter decides to apologize to his mother and express his understanding and respect for her. This section can describe how Peter musters up courage and expresses his feelings to his mother.
Emotional sublimation: Finally, we can demonstrate the emotional sublimation between Catherine and Peter by describing their interaction, such as Catherine's tolerance and understanding, as well as Peter's growth and maturity.
参考范文1：
续写第一段：
A few weeks later, Peter was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. Amid the bustle of the afternoon crowd, he spotted his mother, covered in dust and sweat, working at the construction site he passed every day. Hidden from view, he stood rooted to the spot, watching his mother lift heavy bricks beneath the scorching sun. He had no idea his mother was doing such back-breaking work to support the family. Guilt washed over him as he recalled his earlier words and the look of hurt they had brought to mother's face.
续写第二段：
On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. Peter decided that he would prepare a heartfelt dinner with his siblings for his mother, tell her how much they loved her, and thank her sincerely for everything she did for the family. As Catherine arrived home, her hands still carried the marks of the day's toil. With a choked voice, Peter wrapped his arms around her, and whispered an apology, expressing their deep admiration for their mother. Catherine was surprised by the sudden embrace initially, but she quickly responded with a heartfelt warmth, saying:" Thank you, my dear. Mom is always with you." From then, Peter was determined to support his mother in every way he could, starting with the upcoming school event.
参考范文2
A few weeks later, Peter was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. There, covered in dust and sweat, was his mother, lifting bricks with her strong hands. He hid behind a tree, watching her work tirelessly, his eyes opened wide in shock. He felt a mix of disbelief and admiration. His mother, whom he thought delicate and fragile, was performing physical labor that even grown men found challenging. Guilt washed over him as he realized how much she had been sacrificing for their family.
On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. He walked through the door, his heart heavy with remorse. He found his mother in the kitchen, preparing dinner. She looked up and offered him a tired smile, her rough hands busy with the food. “Mom,” Peter started, his voice barely a whisper. He walked over and took those worn hands in his own, tears brimming in his eyes. “I saw you today at the construction site. I’m so sorry for what I said about your hands.” Catherine was silent for a moment, then she pulled her son into a tight embrace. “It’s okay, Peter. These hands,” she said, lifting them up, "are proof of my love and dedication to our family. They may be rough, but they are also strong and capable. They’re hands of a mother who would do anything for her children.” From that day on, Peter no longer saw his mother’s hands as ugly; instead, they were the most beautiful and honorable hands he had ever known.

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