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2022年南京中考英语真题与2023年中考一模试题分类解析七书面表达（原卷）
一、2022年南京中考英语书面表达真题
(2022江苏南京中考) 假如你是Amy，请根据以下信息，任选一个问题答复。
Amy works for a website, and her job is to answer questions young people ask about life and study. If you were Amy, how would you answer the questions Choose one and give a reply.
Questions for Amy
注意：
词数80左右(已给出的文开头不计人总词数)
2.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息如校名、人名等
Thank you for your question.
Amy
二、2023年南京中考一模试题书面表达分类
㈠秦淮一模
在英语阅读周，学校校园网开展了"英文名句赏析"的征文比赛。请你根据名句内容和比赛要求，用英语写一篇短文。
Study is like riding a bicycle.To keep our balance，we must keep moving.Life is like a race.We either take the lead or full behind.Success won't come to us until we try our best to run to it.
After reading the sentences above，
what do you think of them？
which person comes to your mind first and why？
what can you do to make yourself better？
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.词数90左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion，these sentences above tell us____________.
㈡ 玄武一模
34．（15分）
Kitty， "I promise to keep secrets for you，Lucy."Tom， "I promise to do the things myself，dad and mum."Ben， "I promise to study harder in the coming term，Miss Wang."
In our growth，we may make promises to our friends，to our parents，to our teachers，and even to ourselves.Please write a passage to talk about an unforgettable promise.
注意：
（1）题目自拟，词数80左右；
（2）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
㈢鼓楼一模
红星中学王校长是一位英语老师，在学校网站的英语栏目"HEAR YOUR VOICE"发帖，了解学生学习和学校食堂两方面的情况。假如你是学生李明，请根据校长的帖子，选择其中一个方面反映问题，并提出建议。
HEAR YOUR VOICEMr.Wang Dear students，How is everything going？Do you have any problems with your study？For example，do you often stay up late to finish your homework？What about our Students' Canteen（食堂）？Are you satisfied with your lunch？Looking forward to your problems and advice.5：20 PM Apr.16，2023
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2.词数80左右（回帖开头和结尾不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Mr.Wang，
I am Li Ming，from Grade Nine.___________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully，
Li Ming
㈣建邺一模
你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到征文启事。请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Amazing festival wanted!we celebrate different festivals at school.We need you to think of an amazing festival.It may be the Art Festival，the Sports Festival and so on.We are looking forward to your ideas!We want you to tell us： what is the name of it when you celebrate it what activities you can organize why it is amazing ……
注意：
1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2.不少于80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
An Amazing Festival
I'm glad to share my ideas about the amazing festival._______________________
㈤联合体一模
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric给你发来电子邮件请求帮助。请根据邮件内容，用英语回复。
Dear Li Hua， How are you going？ Our school will hold a drama festival next month.I tried out for the performance last week.But I'm very unhappy to be chosen to play a role without any dialogue.Should I give up the chance？Could you please give me some advice？Thank you! Yours， Eric
注意：
1）文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范。
3）词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric，
I'm glad to receive your email.Now，I'm writing to tell you about my thoughts.
Yours，Li Hua
No time for me
I'm 15 and my brother is 3.I think my mum and dad love him more than me.They spend all their spare time playing with him.And they don' even have time for my parents' meeting.
Friend lost
My best friend, John, started playing online computer games last year. Since then he has lost all interest in everything else. even me and schoolwork. He gets angry if I talk to him about it What should I do 中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2022年南京中考英语真题与2023年中考一模试题分类解析七书面表达（解析卷）
一、2022年南京中考英语书面表达真题
(2022江苏南京中考) 假如你是Amy，请根据以下信息，任选一个问题答复。
Amy works for a website, and her job is to answer questions young people ask about life and study. If you were Amy, how would you answer the questions Choose one and give a reply.
Questions for Amy
注意：
词数80左右(已给出的文开头不计人总词数)
2.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息如校名、人名等
Thank you for your question.
Amy
【范文一】
Thank you for your question. Here are my advice/suggestions for you.
As a good friend, first, you should be patient. You must talk to him peacefully and patiently. Second, you should invite him to do something interesting. For example you can paly basketball or play football together with other friends. Third, you should tell the truth. You must point out the bad effect of playing computer games. And you should help him become interested in schoolwork. Finally, you can also get advice form your teachers or his parents.
I think my advice is worth taking.
Amy
【范文二】
Thank you for your question. Here are my advice/suggestions for you.
Firstly, you said your brother is only 3 years old. He is really young. So it is common for your parents to love him very much.
Secondly, you are 15 already. A lot of students think they are no longer children. You can take good care of yourself.
Thirdly, at present, you should focus on your study. Make sure to remember that work must come first. Then you have less time to think the unhappy thing.
Fourth, you can talk to your parents patiently. They can spare some time for you.
Finally, you should be happy every day. You don’t have to pay attention to the little thing.
I think my advice is worth taking.
Amy
二、2023年南京中考一模试题书面表达分类
㈠秦淮一模
在英语阅读周，学校校园网开展了"英文名句赏析"的征文比赛。请你根据名句内容和比赛要求，用英语写一篇短文。
Study is like riding a bicycle.To keep our balance，we must keep moving.Life is like a race.We either take the lead or full behind.Success won't come to us until we try our best to run to it.
After reading the sentences above，
what do you think of them？
which person comes to your mind first and why？
what can you do to make yourself better？
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.词数90左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion，these sentences above tell us____________.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Although she has made great achievements，she still continues to work hard and make breakthrough.尽管她取得了巨大的成就，但她仍在继续努力，取得突破。让步状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I believe I will be a better person in the future!我相信我将来会成为一个更好的人！宾语从句。
【解答】In my opinion，these sentences above tell us the importance of moving forward.Only by sticking to your dreams and working hard，can you succeed.（看法） After reading these words，the first person appearing in my mind is the Winter Olympic skiing champion Gu ailing.（第一个人是谁及理由）
Although she has made great achievements，she still continues to work hard and make breakthrough. 【高分句型一】This is worth learning for each of us.Her spirit greatly inspired me.If I meet difficulties，I will try to overcome them instead of avoiding them.I believe I will be a better person in the future!【高分句型二】（怎么做）
㈡ 玄武一模
34．（15分）
Kitty， "I promise to keep secrets for you，Lucy."Tom， "I promise to do the things myself，dad and mum."Ben， "I promise to study harder in the coming term，Miss Wang."
In our growth，we may make promises to our friends，to our parents，to our teachers，and even to ourselves.Please write a passage to talk about an unforgettable promise.
注意：
（1）题目自拟，词数80左右；
（2）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
【分析】【高分句型一】
I used to be very fat，and when I was in physical education class，I was very tired after running for a while.我以前很胖，上体育课的时候，跑了一段时间后很累。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
If I have time on weekends，I often go to the park with friends to play basketball.如果我周末有时间，我经常和朋友一起去公园打篮球。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 In our growth，we may make promises to our friends，to our parents，to our teachers，and even to ourselves.I used to be very fat，and when I was in physical education class，I was very tired after running for a while.【高分句型一】I promised my physical education teacher that I would strengthen physical exercise and make myself healthier.Since then，I have been running for half an hour on my own every day before going to school.I also enjoy playing basketball very much.If I have time on weekends，I often go to the park with friends to play basketball. 【高分句型二】I am very healthy now，and my sports are very good.I just did it.
㈢鼓楼一模
红星中学王校长是一位英语老师，在学校网站的英语栏目"HEAR YOUR VOICE"发帖，了解学生学习和学校食堂两方面的情况。假如你是学生李明，请根据校长的帖子，选择其中一个方面反映问题，并提出建议。
HEAR YOUR VOICEMr.Wang Dear students，How is everything going？Do you have any problems with your study？For example，do you often stay up late to finish your homework？What about our Students' Canteen（食堂）？Are you satisfied with your lunch？Looking forward to your problems and advice.5：20 PM Apr.16，2023
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2.词数80左右（回帖开头和结尾不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Mr.Wang，
I am Li Ming，from Grade Nine.___________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully，
Li Ming
【分析】【高分句型一】
Although exercises and exams help us understand the key points，they take up too much time.虽然练习和考试有助于我们理解要点，但它们占用了太多时间。Although 引导的让步状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I think teachers should improve their teaching methods.我认为教师应该改进他们的教学方法。I think +宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Wang，
I am a student from Grade Nine.I want to tell you something about our study.
First of all，proper exercises help us check what we have learned.Since we have seven subjects，we have to spend more than three hours finishing our homework.Would you make teachers reduce homework？Besides，most of us find lessons boring.（家庭作业情况和感受）Although exercises and exams help us understand the key points，they take up too much time.【高分句型一】（考试的看法）Our cafeteria is very clean and the food is also very delicious.（食堂）Dear headmaster，you can't imagine how boring our school life is.I think teachers should improve their teaching methods.【高分句型二】（建议）
I hope these problems can be dealt with soon.
Yours faithfully，
Li Ming
㈣建邺一模
你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到征文启事。请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Amazing festival wanted!we celebrate different festivals at school.We need you to think of an amazing festival.It may be the Art Festival，the Sports Festival and so on.We are looking forward to your ideas!We want you to tell us： what is the name of it when you celebrate it what activities you can organize why it is amazing ……
注意：
1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2.不少于80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
An Amazing Festival
I'm glad to share my ideas about the amazing festival._______________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
At the same time，we can also share our reading reading responses.同时，我们也可以分享我们的阅读反应。At the same time同时。
【高分句型二】
Reading not only broadens our horizons，but also enriches our knowledge.阅读不仅拓宽了我们的视野，而且丰富了我们的知识。not only...but also...不仅...而且...
【解答】
An Amazing Festival
I'm glad to share my ideas about the amazing festival.I think we can celebrate a reading festival on the first Friday of each term.（什么节日和时间）We can organize students to share their favorite books.At the same time，we can also share our reading responses.【高分句型一】（活动） Through this activity，we can make students interested in reading.At the same time，we also share some good books with our classmates.Reading not only broadens our horizons，but also enriches our knowledge.【高分句型二】（为什么令人惊叹）
㈤联合体一模
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric给你发来电子邮件请求帮助。请根据邮件内容，用英语回复。
Dear Li Hua， How are you going？ Our school will hold a drama festival next month.I tried out for the performance last week.But I'm very unhappy to be chosen to play a role without any dialogue.Should I give up the chance？Could you please give me some advice？Thank you! Yours， Eric
注意：
1）文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范。
3）词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric，
I'm glad to receive your email.Now，I'm writing to tell you about my thoughts.
Yours，Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
First，it's brave of you to try out for the performance during your drama festival.首先，你在戏剧节期间尝试演出真是太勇敢了。It is+形容词+of sb.to do sth.该句型常用描述人物特征的形容词。
【高分句型二】
Although you haven't got the role you wanted，it's still a good chance for you to improve your acting skills and confidence.虽然你还没有得到你想要的角色，但这仍然是你提高演技和自信的好机会。Although 引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】Dear Eric，
I'm glad to receive your email.Now，I'm writing to tell you about my thoughts.
First，it's brave of you to try out for the performance during your drama festival.【高分句型一】
Although you haven't got the role you wanted，it's still a good chance for you to improve your acting skills and confidence.【高分句型二】In fact，characters without any dialogue may be more challenging because you must use more body language to express yourself.So don't give up this opportunity.
What's more，practice hard in order to have a good performance.Practice makes perfect.（具体的建议）
Wish you good luck and look forward to your wonderful performance!
Yours，
Li Hua
No time for me
I'm 15 and my brother is 3.I think my mum and dad love him more than me.They spend all their spare time playing with him.And they don' even have time for my parents' meeting.
Friend lost
My best friend, John, started playing online computer games last year. Since then he has lost all interest in everything else. even me and schoolwork. He gets angry if I talk to him about it What should I do

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