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小作文素材/范文
书信-建议信
一、话题词汇
单词：advice [n.] 建议 confused [adj.] 困惑的 beneficial [adj.] 有益的
recommend [v.] 推荐 significant [adj.] 重要的 practical [adj.] 实用的
concerning/ regarding/ with regard to… [prep.] 关于
短语：向某人征求意见：ask sb. for advice
给某人提……建议： give sb. some advice on…
听从某人的建议：follow one’s advice
做某事有困难：have trouble in doing sth.
制定计划并逐步实施：make a plan and carry it out step by step
积极对待……：hold a positive attitude towards…
二、文章结构与话题句型
第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的（套用十大书信之“求助信“写法）
第二段（正文）：定要点，一般为4句话左右
第三段：我希望（你能帮助我）。我相信（大家会喜欢你的文章）。感谢你（读我的信）。请回信！
常用表达：
Para 1----开头引人入胜：说明写信目的。
开头段：
问候语： How is everything going /How is it going
（交代写信目的）
Since/Now that（由于） you are worried about..., I am writing to offer some suggestions about how to.../I would like to provide you with some suggestions on ...
I am sorry to learn that you are now having trouble/difficulty in doing sth, and I am writing to ...
I am writing in reply to…
I am writing with my proposal about…
You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some conducive suggestions（建设性的意见）.
Knowing that you have trouble in… after reading your letter, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.
I am more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on…
You’ve asked me for advice concerning… and I’ll try to make some helpful suggestions.
Para 2----篇中精编细织：提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。
From my point of view, it would be of great wisdom to take the following actions.
Above all, you’d better…, which can not only…but also… Besides, it would be a good idea/a wise choice to do sth. as well as do sth. More importantly, I’d like to suggest that you should…
I believe it would be beneficial if you could…
主体段常用衔接词：
First and foremost/To begin with/To start with（首先）,...
Simultaneously (同时）,...
Besides/In addition/Moreover/Furthermore（而且） ,...
What’s more（更有甚者）,...
More importantly ,...
Apart from that(除此之外）,...
Last but not the least,...
Para 3----收尾简练到位：表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。
I sincerely hope that you will find the advice I share helpful/ beneficial/ useful, and I am looking forward to your early reply.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
I will be more than glad if my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
I am convinced that（确信） with your effort, you can manage to（成功做到） get over/overcome these difficulties.
范文展示
假设你是小明，你的外国朋友John对如何更好地理解中国文化有困惑，向你求助。请你写一封信给与他建议。要点如下：
1. 写信的目的；2. 给他的建议；3. 你的祝愿。
注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you were puzzled about（对...感到迷惑） how to understand Chinese culture better after many years’ study. I know that you‘re a little anxious and here I’d like to give you some advice.
Like any other foreign language learning, it requires great effort to be skillful in（擅长） Chinese, especially something about culture. So don’t lose heart and don’t quit. I’m sure that with hard work, you’ll sooner or later become a master in（擅长） it.
I highly recommend you practice Chinese calligraphy, which is an important means to deepen your understanding of what an amazing language Chinese is and what rich culture it has （感叹句）. What‘s more, you should read more Chinese classics like Journey to the West, Red Chamber and so on. You’ll benefit from （受益于）reading these stories.
If you have time, come to visit China to experience its local culture. You can speak to the Chinese people, taste the food and take part in traditional festivals, which is the best way to learn more about Chinese culture.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
注明： 下划线部分是套句；红色句子是高级句式；黑色加粗部分是高级表达。要求背诵！
话题范文学习：
话题一：music
假定你是李华，你校国际部正在举办主题为“The Power of Music”的征文比赛，请你用英语写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
(1)音乐的重要性； (2)音乐对你的影响。
注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Power of Music
①As we all know, music plays an important part in our daily life. It gives wings to the mind, flight to the imagination, as well as charm and joy to life. Besides, music is a universal language. We've all heard the saying, "Where words fail, music speaks." Without music, the world will become silent and pale.
As a matter of fact, I benefit a lot from music. When I feel upset and down, rock music cheers me up and gives me courage. ②When I am under stress, light music makes me relaxed and comfortable, helping me face the challenges with a peaceful mind.
In a word, music is very powerful. ③I hope everyone can find his or her favorite music and benefit from listening to music.
①play an important part in our daily life在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用
②as a matter of fact事实上 ③cheer up高兴起来 ④in a word简言之 ⑤benefit from得益于 ①have easy access to容易接触到
②with the popularity of随着……的普及 ③significance意义，重要性
①As we all know, music plays an important part in our daily life. (as引导的非限制性定语从句）
②When I am under stress, light music makes me relaxed and comfortable, helping me face the challenges with a peaceful mind. (when引导的时间状语从句；动词-ing形式短语作状语）
③I hope everyone can find his or her favorite music and benefit from listening to music.
①... is the most popular in China, which has made people's daily life more and more...
……在中国最受欢迎，已经使得人们的日常生活越来越……
②... is a way to broaden our horizons, through which we can learn about...
……能拓宽我们的视野，我们可以了解……。
话题二：Cultural Heritage
讨论结果/议论文
假定最近你们班进行了一次题为“保护文化遗产是否很重要”的讨论。根据以下要点用英语向大家介绍一下讨论结果，并谈谈你自己的看法。
1. 80%的学生认为重要及其理由；
2. 20%的学生认为不重要及其理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
①Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether it is important to protect cultural heritage.
80% of the students consider it important to protect cultural heritage. They think that cultural heritage is a symbol of great ancient civilization. Most cultural heritage is related to great people, so protecting it shows respect for them. Cultural heritage is of great value and protecting it can make us feel proud of our nation. ②However, the rest hold the opinion that it doesn't matter whether cultural heritage is protected. They think it won't promote the development of society, so it is a waste of time and money to protect it.
As far as I'm concerned, our country's cultural heritage protection has made great progress, but many problems still exist and need to be solved. Therefore, we should keep our mind clear and take more effective steps to better protect cultural heritage.
【思路点拨】
本篇写作题材是“保护文化遗产是否很重要”的两种不同观点。文章层次比较清晰，要注意的是：
在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；
2. 自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维；
3. 要以一般过去时和第三人称为主。
①had a heated discussion about热烈讨论 ②is related to和……有关
③of great value很有价值的 ④As far as I'm concerned在我看来
①promote促进 ②influence影响 ③contribute to有助于
①Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether it is important to protect cultural heritage.（whether引导宾从）
②However, the rest hold the opinion that it doesn't matter whether cultural heritage is protected.（that 引导同位语从句）
①Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of... 应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到……的重要性。
②Taking proper measures to deal with... is of great importance. 采取适当的措施处理压力很重要。
③The cultural heritage is a symbol of splendid ancient civilization and protecting it can make us feel proud of our nation.
话题三: 文化遗产/风俗介绍
文化遗产是古代辉煌文明的象征，保护文化遗产能让我们为祖国感到自豪。请参照以下信息介绍一种被列为国家非物质文化遗产目录的剧种——秦腔。
(1)秦腔（Qinqiang Opera），是中国汉族最古老的戏剧之一,源于陕西和甘肃的农村地区,流行于中国西北部的陕西、甘肃、青海和宁夏等地；
(2)秦腔剧目丰富：有神话、民间故事等；秦腔的角色也十分众多，表演特色鲜明；
(3)2006年5月20日，经国务院（the State Council）批准列入第一批国家级非物质文化遗产(the Intangible Cultural Heritage)名录。
要求：(1)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯； (2)词数100左右。
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Qinqiang Opera
Qinqiang Opera is one of the oldest operas of the Han nationality. 开门见山提出“秦腔是中国汉族最古老的戏剧之一” It originated from rural areas of Shaanxi and Gansu. Later, it became popular in the northwest areas like Shaanxi, Gansu, Qinghai, Ningxia and so on. Qinqiang Opera tells a variety of stories, like fairy tales and folk tales. Besides, Qinqiang Opera has different kinds of characters and each of them has a unique style of performing.具体介绍秦腔的起源、内容、特色以及被列入第一批国家级非物质文化遗产名录
①In order to protect our traditional culture, on May 20, 2006, Qinqiang Opera was listed as the first Intangible Cultural Heritage with the approval of the State Council.②So it is a must for us to do everything we can to protect it.保护秦腔
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为介绍一种被列为国家非物质文化遗产目录的剧种——秦腔。根据要点确立一般过去时态；写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
①originate from起源于 ②with the approval of在……的支持下
①a wide range of多种多样的 ②enjoy great popularity广受欢迎
①In order to protect our traditional culture, on May 20, 2006, Qinqiang Opera was listed as the first Intangible Cultural Heritage with the approval of the State Council.（In order to引导的目的状语）
②So it is a must for us to do everything we can to protect it.（it是形式主语，不定式是真正的主语）
①As is known, ..., a symbol of traditional Chinese culture/one of the most popular forms of Chinese art, is still attached great importance to in modern China.众所周知，……，中国传统文化的象征/中国最流行的艺术形式之一，在现代中国仍然受到重视。
②In addition/Besides/Additionally, typical of Chinese culture, ... conveys a unique meaning of ...除此之外，典型的中国文化，……传达……的独特意义。
话题四：新闻报道/海报
假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了一次以“Online Safety”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
(1)活动目的； (2)活动过程； (3)活动反响。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右； (2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Online Safety
To promote students' online safety awareness, an English speech contest was held in our school last Friday.
①As is required, each competitor must complete their speech within the given time.②Two hours later, outstanding competitors were announced and accepted prizes with pride from our headmaster, which inspired us greatly. Plus, hearing the various opinions accounted by competitors, students realized the importance of online safety.
In a word, the activity is so successful that we students become aware that online safety is an issue that we must always keep in mind.
①In a word总而言之，简言之 ②keep in mind记住，牢记
①participate in参加 ②contribute to有助于
①As is required, each competitor must complete their speech within the given time.
(as引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Two hours later, outstanding competitors were announced and accepted prizes with pride from our headmaster, which inspired us greatly. (which引导的非限制性定语从句）
①I'd like to tell you some details/information about/concerning/related to...
我想告诉你一些关于……的细节/信息。
②Not only does the activity arouse students' interest in..., but it also cultivates students' love for knowledge. 活动不仅激发了学生对……的兴趣，而且培养了学生对知识的热爱。
亮点表达：
1.喜欢(非常喜欢)…/对…感兴趣
be crazy about
be keen on
be absorbed in
have an appetite for
be addicted to
2.想(要)做某事
be desperate/anxious/eager to do
long for/ be dying for
3.很好
marvelous/outstanding/magnificent /splendid/ excellent/ brilliant/ superb/terrific
. sb认为
sb hold the view that
sb make the assumption that
sb be convinced that
From where sb stand,
5.thank sb—be grateful to sb.
6.consider sth-take sth. into consideration/account
7.to do表目的- with the intention of /for the purpose of
8.非常…
extremely/pretty/desperately/more than
9.越来越多的…An increasing number/amount of…
句式升级：
1、巧用倒装句
You won’t know how much your parents love you only when you are in trouble.
---Only when you are in trouble will you j=know how much your parents love you.
You will succeed only by working hard.
---Only by working hard will you succeed.
2）大胆使用名词性从句
1. I like ...
What I like best is...
2. It is very important to do
What matters most is ....
3. Please remember that...
Please keep (it) in mind that...
4. There is no doubt/a solid fact that...
5. There is high possibility that...
6. Chances are that...
3）恰当使用强调句
正是因为那段经历我明白了乐观的生活态度对于一个人是多么重要。
It was the experience that taught me how important an optimistic attitude is to a person.
是老师和父母的鼓励及爱给了我前进的动力。
It is the encouragement and love from my teachers and parents that give me the motivation to move forward.
4) 发挥非谓语的光和热
Other types of waste flow into our water, killing river and sea life.
Having worked with many environmental consultants, I know that a healthy environment and development should be possible at the same time.
5）比较级句式
1. the +比较级， the+比较级
The more petrol and electricity we consume, the more carbon we are letting off.
小试牛刀：
我们生产的垃圾越多，我们的环境就越糟糕.

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