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I begged my mom to let me make cookies by myself. Even though I had never attempted baking before, I was nine years old and my friend Emmie had been baking cupcakes by herself for a year. I was determined to prove that I could make it.
My brother, Caleb, laughed at the idea of me cooking alone, calling it a disaster. Having a big brother can be annoying. Despite his laughing, my mom agreed to let me try. She reminded me to take my time and be careful because I'd had some messy spills before I was nine.
I raced to the kitchen and went to work. I cracked eggs and put a cold stick of butter into the bowl. I turned on the mixer at medium speed -and whoa. Whoa. Whoa! What a disaster! I had to wipe butter off my face, then off the table and floor.
Caleb made fun of me again, calling me a mess. I chased him away with a spoon and turned back to the mixing bowl. I started again with softer butter. Referring to the recipe, I poured everything needed into the bowl and mixed it. After that, I put round batter(面糊) onto the cookie sheet and put it into the oven(烤箱). Within a minute, a fantastic smell filled the kitchen--the smell of cookie success!
I was going to prove that I was responsible. No more eye-rolling from my brother. No more “You're too young" from my parents. I was grown up and in control.
I stared into the oven, and my heart sank. The neat, little balls had melted (融化) and overflowed to the edges of the cookie sheet. I pulled the pan out just as Caleb wandered back into the kitchen.
“What in the world " He started to laugh. “Cookie soup ”
"You just be quiet," I whispered, trying not to cry. “Just leave me alone.”“How's it going in there ” Dad called from the living room.
Caleb raised his eyebrows and bit his lip. I responded that everything was fine, pouring the melted batter into the bowl quickly.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I picked up the directions, wondering what had gone wrong.
Paragraph 2: I brought a plate of cookies into the living room for my parents.
文本分析：
故事大意：我九岁了，常看到朋友自己做饼干。受她影响，我求妈妈答应让我独自做饼干。来到厨房，一切按部就班，弟弟在旁边无情地嘲笑我。终于，饼干做好了，我让弟弟试吃，他却皱起了眉头，咬紧了嘴唇。
主题：毅力和决心，我把一场烘焙灾难变成了甜蜜的成功
续写情节发展：
-我努力找到出错的原因--反思错误---再次尝试--焦急等待饼干的出炉
-让家人品尝饼干--十分惊讶--弟弟真诚向我道歉--主旨升华
微场景：
反复查看食谱后，我意识到了自己的错误。(非谓语)原来，我看错了黄油用量的说明.我用了所需用量的两倍，导致饼干糊在烤箱里太容易散开。
After reviewing the recipe repeatedly, I realized my mistake.Originally, I misread the instructions for the amount of butter. I used twice the required amount, which caused the cookies to spread too easily in the oven.
一种可怕的失望笼罩着我，但我决定再试一次。(无灵主语)这一次，我一丝不苟地按照食谱制作，按照要求/指示冷藏面团。(非谓语)
A terrible disappointment enveloped me, but I decided to try again. This time, I meticulously made the dough according to the recipe and refrigerated it according to the requirements/instructions.
当新鲜出炉的饼干的甜香飘满厨房时，我迫不及待地拿出饼干，咬了第一口。我尝到了自己的进步。然而，它们并不是我想象中的完美圆形饼干。尽管不完美，我还是决定与家人分享。
When the sweet aroma of freshly baked cookies filled the kitchen, I couldn't wait to take out the cookies and took the first bite. I have tasted my own progress. However, they were not the perfect round cakes that I had imagined. Although they were not perfect, I decided to share them with my family.
我盯着烤箱，紧张地期待着，心怦怦直跳。(独立主格)时间一分一秒地过去，新鲜出炉的饼干香气弥漫了整个厨房。当我把饼干从烤箱里拿出来时，我发现饼干的形状更均匀了，颜色也变成了金黄色。但仔细观察后，我发现有些饼干的边缘有些焦糊，而有些饼干的中心则没有烤熟。
I stared at the oven, nervously anticipating, my heart pounding. Time passed by minute by second, and the aroma of freshly baked cookies filled the entire kitchen. When I took the cookies out of the oven, I found that the shape of the cookies became more uniform and the color changed to golden yellow. But upon careful observation, I found that some cookies had burnt edges, while others had unripe centers.
他们咬了一口，我屏住呼吸，心跳加速，等待着他们的反应。(非谓语)令我欣慰的是，他们的脸上都洋溢着笑容。"太好吃了!"妈妈赞叹道，爸爸也点头称赞。
They took a bite, and I held my breath, my heart racing, waiting for their reaction. What pleased me was that their faces were all filled with smiles. "It's so delicious!" Mom exclaimed, and Dad nodded in praise.
参考范文一，
I picked up the directions, wondering what had gone wrong. I had seen mom do it hundreds of times and it just seemed like a piece of cake. I really wanted to succeed for once, only to prove that I was capable and that I could be in control. I looked at the direction up and down until one sentence caught my attention, saying that the batter should be put in the refrigerator for one hour before it was baked. So with a mixture of anticipation and anxiety, I put the batter in the refrigerator. When the time was up, I put the solid batter in the oven. Soon, the familiar smell wafted out. I watched closer and to my great relief, these batter began to expand little by little.
I brought a plate of cookies into the living room for my parents. “How delicious!” Dad tasted one and smiled. “Wow. It’s great. Now you can make your own cookies. You’re a grown-up now.” Mom nodded smiling and couldn’t stop praising me. These words were exactly what I had longed for. Now my heart cheered and my eyes shone with satisfaction and pride. “Can I taste it ” The voice of Caleb came from behind. With total confidence, I presented him the plate of cookies. Caleb’s eyes lit up when tasting the cookies and he admitted reluctantly. “Well, you really do a good job!” Now I finally broke into laughters. I knew I made it. It felt great to succeed. Making cookies was a small thing, but it meant that I could be in control.
参考范文二，
I picked up the directions, wondering what had gone wrong. Flipping through the recipe book, I realized my mistake. I had misread the instructions, setting the mixer at the wrong speed. Feeling a mix of frustration and determination, I decided to give it another shot. This time, I carefully followed each step, making sure to double-check everything before proceeding. As the mixer whirred, I kept a close eye on the batter, making sure it reached the right consistency. Slowly but surely, the ingredients blended together seamlessly, and I felt a surge of pride as I poured the smooth batter onto the cookie sheet.
I brought a plate of cookies into the living room for my parents. Their faces lit up with surprise and delight as they saw the perfectly golden-brown treats. "These are for you," I said, beaming with pride. My mom and dad exchanged glances, their eyes filled with pride and admiration. "They look amazing!" my dad exclaimed, reaching for a cookie. As they took their first bites, expressions of delight spread across their faces. "These are delicious!" my mom exclaimed, giving me a warm hug. In that moment, all the effort and frustration felt worth it. I had not only proven myself capable but also brought joy to my family with my newfound baking skills.

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