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【范文学习】
假如你是李华，你校将组织校内留学生参观中国画展，请写一则通知发布在校园网上。内容包括：1.展览的时间和地点；2.展览内容；3.参观时的注意事项。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文赏析
To promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to visit the Chinese Painting Exhibition in the City Museum.
Running from Feb. 20 to March 20, the exhibition centers on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous paintings of exceptional beauty from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm, Feb. 25. Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
【谋篇布局】：从范文中归纳结构
第一段：介绍通知的目的，开始时间和事件。
第二段：活动介绍（可添加细节，如：时间，地点，活动内容）。
第三段：集中时间/开放时间和注意事项。
【功能句式】：尝试改写范文
第一段: 介绍通知的目的，开始时间和事件。
To promote (目的)......, our school is to arrange for sb. to do sth. （主动）To promote(目的)......an exhibition of (活动主题)...... will be held in (地点)...... on(时间).
（被动）改写：1. To promote traditional Chinese culture, an exhibition on Chinese paintings will be held in our City Museum.2.Aiming to/With the purpose of promote/promoting traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
第二段: 活动介绍（可添加细节,如：时间，地点，内容）
改写： (时间)1. As scheduled, the exhibition will be held at the City Museum from Feb.20 to March 20.2.The exhibition will run from Feb.20 to March 20 in the City Museum.
改写：（内容）1. You will have the chance to explore a wide range of traditional Chinese painting including...........2.The exhibition focuses on the history of traditional Chinese paintings, presenting a variety of famous works of extraordinary beauty from different dynasties. Through this exhibition, it is anticipated that students will have a deeper understanding of the evolution and development of Chinese culture.
第三段：开放时间和注意事项
改写：
The exhibition, which is open to the public free of charge, will last a month.
The opening hours are from 9:00 a.m. to 4:00 p.m.
No food or drink is allowed in the museum.
4.Participants/visitors are required to get there before 时间
5.According to the requirements, participants/ visitors should 注意事项
6.Those who take interest in the exhibition/show, please sign up at the Student Union.
习作改写：
Notice
Aiming to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
The exhibition will run from Feb. 20 to March 20 in the City Museum, which is located in the centre of our city. It centers on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous paintings of exceptional beauty from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm Feb. 25 and the school bus will take us there. Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
The Student Union
下水文： Notice
Our school will be organizing a visit to an exhibition of Chinese paintings.
The exhibition, titled "Treasures of Chinese Art," will take place on the upcoming Friday, from 2 pm to 4 pm, at the Art Gallery located in the heart of our campus.This exhibition promises to be a visual feast, featuring a diverse collection of traditional Chinese paintings that reflect the core of Chinese culture and history. From landscapes that capture the serene beauty of nature to portraits that exude elegance and dignity, the paintings are sure to leave a lasting impression on all of us.While visiting the exhibition, please remember to maintain silence and respect the artwork. Avoid touching or getting too close to the paintings to prevent any damage. Additionally, please adhere to the gallery's regulations and follow the instructions of the staff.This is a great opportunity to immerse yourself in the rich artistic heritage of China and enhance your understanding of its culture.
I hope you will seize this chance to attend and enjoy this remarkable exhibition. The Student Union
举一反三
假设你是李华，你校组织了中国美术画展，请你给在校的同学写信，邀请大家观展。
1. 展览时间、地点
2. 推荐观展
3. 注意事项
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I am writing to cordially invite you to attend the upcoming Chinese painting exhibition held by our school. The exhibition will take place from March 15th to March 20th in the school’s gallery.
Featuring some of China’s most renowned artists, it will showcase a wide range of traditional and contemporary Chinese paintings. Additionally, there will be an explanation of each piece to provide us with a deeper insight into Chinese culture. As a friendly reminder, please note that visitors should be respectful and mindful of the artwork. / please be mindful of other visitors and avoid causing any disturbance during your visit. / food and drinks are not allowed inside the gallery. / Please also keep in mind that photography is not allowed during the exhibition. / remember to keep your voice down and avoid touching any of the artwork.
I guarantee this art feast will be rewarding and I am looking forward to seeing you all there!

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