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中考英语热点话题作文讲解练习
（一）
【写作任务】
Writing about hobbies
每个人都有自己的业余爱好，假如你是李华，上周你在班里进行了一项问卷调查。请你根据其中一份调查表写一篇英语短文，介绍该同学的业余爱好。
要求：
1.包含所有信息，可适当拓展；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；
3.80词左右。
【思路点拨】
第一步：审题
1.找关键词：业余爱好
2.确定时态和人称：一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时；第三人称
第二步：提炼句型
★ When he was eight, he received a set of stamps from his parents.
★ He received some stamps as a birthday present from his parents.
★ Since then he has been interested in stamps.
★ He has shown great interest in stamps since then.
★He spends lots of time collecting stamps.
★He gets the stamps from… as well as....
★He has collected stamps of different countries.
★ So far, he has collected several books of stamps.
★ So far, he has collected some stamps of different countries, such as...
★His hobby brings him… as well as...
★ As a result, he can learn about different cultures through the stamps.
★ Collecting stamps brings him NOt only many friends but also lots of pleasure.
★ As well as pleasure, collecting stamps has also brought him success.
★ He often shows his stamps on the Internet, and as a result, ...
★ He often shares his stamps with others, and as a result…
第三步：完成写作框架
【参考范文】
Li Kai’s hobby
Li Kai is my classmate.His hobby is collecting stamps.When he was eight, he received a set of stamps as a birthday present from his parents.Since then he has been interested in stamps.He gets the stamps from his friends as well as his parents.So far, he has collected several books of stamps of different countries, such as France and Germany.As a result, he has learned about different cultures through the stamps.As well as pleasure, collecting stamps has also brought him a lot of friends with the same interest.
What an interesting hobby!
（二）
【写作任务】
Describing a person
假如你是李华，即将作为交换生去英国伦敦进行为期一年的学习。下面是你的英国寄宿家庭的小主人Peter发来的邮件，请认真阅读邮件内容，并根据提示内容给Peter回复邮件。
要求：
1.包含所给提示内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；
3.80词左右。
【写作指导】
第一步：审题
1.找关键词：描述人物
2.确定时态和人称：一般现在时；第一人称
第二步：提炼句型
★I’m tall and thin with …hair and wear...
★I’m outgoing and friendly, so I have...
★I’m an outgoing boy and I like making friends.
★I’m helpful and always ready to...
★As for my hobbies, I’m good at...
★As for my hobbies, I enjoy/love/like…
★I have a lot of hobbies, such as…
★I’m interested in…
★I’m good at…
★I also enjoy/like/love…, especially...
★I spend a lot of time...
★When thinking of going to London, I feel...
★I feel nervous when I...
★I’m a bit afraid of … in front of many people.
★ But I can’t tell you how … I am about going to London.
★ I’m always ready to lend a hand to whoever is in trouble.
第三步：完成写作框架
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email.It is great to hear from you.NOw, let me introduce myself to you.You sound just like me! I’m 15, too.I’m tall and thin with short black hair and wear a pair of glasses.I’m outgoing and friendly, so I havemany friends.
As for my hobbies, I’m good at basketball.I spend a lot of time playing basketball with my classmates at school.I also enjoy watching fi lms, especially cartoon films.When thinking of going to London, I feel both nervous and excited.I feel nervous when I speak English and I’m a bit afraid of speaking in front of many people.But I can’t tell you how excited I am about going to London.
I can’t wait to meet you!
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）
【写作任务】
Protecting the environment
环境保护是21世纪人类面临的重大问题之一，为了进一步增强同学们的环保意识，你校环保俱乐部将开展一次以“环境保护”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是参赛者，请你根据以下海报提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
写作要求：
1.条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.100词左右
【思路点拨】
第一步：审题
1.找关键词：环境保护 演讲
2.确定以下内容：
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称
第二步：列出写作提纲
开头部分：讲述地球面临的某种环境问题
主体部分：就此问题，给出几点措施
结尾部分：提出自己的愿望并号召大家行动起来
第三步：选词组句
1.相关的词汇
● waste, pollute, pollution, harm, harmful, recycle,policy, reuse, environmental, create, serious, cause, reduce, protect, protection, awful, plastic, electricity
● be worried about, think of, find out, do with, throw away, take action, take steps, draw up, raise money, cut down, make a NOise, be harmful to, do harm to, in public, provide … with, give off, throw away, stop / prevent … from …, protect … from …,in bad health, run out, be bad for, make full use of, pay attention to, in order to, care about, turn off, pick up, NOt only … but also …, instead of, divide rubbish into …, sort out, pick out
2.提炼可能用到的句型
● Pollution is a danger to all living things on the earth.
● The more serious the pollution is, the worse people’s condition becomes.
● With air pollution becoming more and more serious, our living environment is getting worse and worse.
● Global warming is becoming a serious problem.
● As we all kNOw, rubbish causes a lot of pollution, such as air pollution and water pollution.
● Rubbish NOt only pollutes the environment but also is harmful to our health.
● Though we are only students, we can still do something to save our world.
● Always remember to divide the waste before throwing it away.
● We can collect reusable waste and sell it for recycling.
● Reuse pieces of paper that have been used only on one side.
● And it’s wasteful to throw away paper, metal bottles and glass bottles.They can be recycled.
● It’s a good idea to choose to walk or ride a bicycle if you don’t go far away.
● Don’t throw waste everywhere and that will pollute the environment.
● Don’t forget to turn off the lights when they’re NOt in use.
● Make sure you turn off the tap when you don’t use water.
● The earth is our common home.
● Let’s fight against pollution!
● We have only one earth.So, it is necessary to protect our natural environment.
● Actions are more important than words!
● We should try our best to keep the environment clean.
● Everybody should raise the awareness that it’s our duty (责任) to protect the earth.
● This time I want to call on everyone to pay attention to the problem.
● If everyone can follow these steps above, we will make a difference to our world.
● If everyone could make a contribution to environmental protection, our home will become much more beautiful.
● Building a beautiful China is an important part of the Chinese Dream.The initiative to build a beautiful China will be of benefit to the country’s long-term development, to promoting sustainable global development, and to fulfilling the universal dream of protecting our beautiful earth.
● Well, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to the environment.It’s time for us to start to do something.
● Let’s start a low-carbon life to save our earth.
● NOw it’s time for us to take steps to protect our living environment.
● We must keep on fighting until we find ways to protect our environment from being polluted.
第四步：连句成篇
根据写作提纲连句成篇，力求文章条理清楚，语言流畅。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列或递进的词，把所有句子连接起来，使句与句之间意思连贯，结构衔接。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
As we all kNOw, rubbish causes a lot of pollution.It NOt only pollutes the environment but also is harmful to our health.Therefore, it’s necessary and important to deal with rubbish properly.
As students, what can we do with rubbish First, don’t litter everywhere.Second, always remember to sort rubbish before throwing it away.That is because some can be reused or recycled, such as the old newspapers and bottles.Third, share our old books and clothes with others instead of throwing them away.Fourth, deal with e-waste such as old mobile phones and computers carefully.Everyone should play a part in protecting the earth.Even the simplest everyday activities can make a big difference to the environment.Let’s take action NOw!
That’s all.Thank you!
（四）
【写作任务】
Describing a photo
在本周五的英语活动课上，老师要求大家就话题“The photo that has impressed me most”进行发言。请你根据以下所给提示信息，完成一篇发言稿。
写作要求：
1.仔细观察照片，不要遗漏照片所展示的信息和内容；
2.可适当自由发挥，使文章内容连贯；
3.不少于80词
【思路点拨】
第一步：审题
1.找关键词：照片背后的故事
2.确定以下内容：
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时、一般过去时
人称：第一人称、第三人称
第二步：列出写作提纲
开头部分：引出照片
主体部分：照片背后的故事
结尾部分：照片的意义
第三步：选词组句
1.相关的词
photo, picture, subject, show, because, experience, understand, realise, remind (提醒；使想起), take a photo/picture of, be glad to, take the chance to, take part in, work hard, prepare for, as a result, in order to …
2.提炼可能用到的句型
开头部分：
● Hello, everyone! I’m so glad to share a photo of … with you.
● Hi, everyone! I’m glad to take the chance to share the photo that has impressed me most with you.
● The photo that has impressed me most is the one of a starfish using a tarpaulin as its home.
● The photo that shows a starfish using a tarpaulin as its home has impressed me most.
主体部分：
● This is a photo of …
● This is a photo, which shows …
● In this photo, you can see / there is …
● The photo that I’d like to share with you shows …
● This photo was taken in …
● It is a photo that was taken when …
● When I saw the photo for the first time, it made me greatly upset.
● There is a story behind the photo.
● I’d like to tell you the story behind this photo.
● I’d be glad to share the story behind the photo with you.
● Every time I look at the photo, it makes me think of ...
● This photo reminds me of …
● It shows a starfish using a tarpaulin as its home.
● It shows that human pollution has influenced the deep ocean.
结尾部分：
● This photo tells me that …
● Through this photo, I have learned that …
● Through this photo, I have understood the importance of …
● The photo has impressed me most because I’ve learned a lot from it.
● Photos can change the way we think about things.
● We should do more to prevent further pollution.
● A better environment means a better life.
● The photo is a wake-up call to us.
● The photo has taught me the importance of …
● Because of this photo, I have realised that …
● It’s much better to do something late than never.
● Helping others is helping yourself.
● Each one of us can make a difference.
● Asmall act of kindness canmake a big difference.
● I hope this photo can also touch your hearts and that you can learn something from it.
● All photographers have to do is find and catch the story-telling moment.— Alfred Eisenstaedt, a famous photographer
● The important thing is NOt the camera but the eye.— Alfred Eisenstaedt, a famous photographer
● This picture is of the most important / unforgettable moment I’ve ever experienced.
第四步：连句成篇
根据写作提纲连句成篇，力求文章内容准确生动、条理清楚。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有句子连接起来，使句与句之间意思连贯，结构衔接。
【参考范文】
Hi, everyone!
I’m more than happy to share a photo which has impressed me most with you.It is a photo taken under the water.It shows a starfish, which was discovered living 457 metres under the seawater, using a tarpaulin as its home.How do you feel when you see this photo When I saw it for the first time, it made me greatly upset.It shows that human pollution has influenced the deep ocean.The photo makes me realise the importance of protecting the sea and sea animals.
A better environment means a better life.I hope this photo can also touch your hearts and that you can learn something from it.Each one of
us can make a difference.Let’s work together to protect the earth.
（五）
【写作任务】
A visit to a place in China
今年夏天，来自美国的Lydia参加了大熊猫国际志愿者项目，到四川成都的大熊猫基地与可爱的大熊猫亲密接触。此间，她还游历了成都的许多著名景点，品尝了当地美食。回国后，Lydia打算在某旅行网站上发表一篇标题为“A visit to Chengdu” 的旅行日记。假如你是Lydia，请你根据下面的提示，介绍一下你的成都之行。
写作要求：
1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；
3.不少于100词 。
【思路点拨】
第一步：审题
1.找关键词：旅游日记
2.确定以下内容：
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
人称：第一人称
第二步：列出写作提纲
开头部分：引出旅行地
主体部分：描述旅游经历
结尾部分：旅游心得或感受
第三步：选词组句
1.相关的词
● 介绍地理位置：be in, lie in, be located in
● 介绍交通方式：by bus/plane/car/train, take the bus/plane/car/train
● 介绍景点历史：have a history of … years, a wonder with a long history
● 介绍旅行经历：visit relatives, enjoy the scenery, try the local food, take photos, make friends
● 形容旅行感受：wonderful, unforgettable, have lots of fun, have a good time, enjoy oneself
2.提炼可能用到的句型
开头部分：
● … is a perfect holiday destination (目的地).
● This summer, I had a chance to visit …
● This summer, I visited …, one of the most famous tourist destinations in the world.
● This is my first (second, third, etc) visit to …
● Today is my first (second, third, fourth, last, etc) day in …
● I have been in … for … days.It is really a great place to visit.
主体部分：
● There are many places of interest in Chengdu, such as …
● There’re lots of historic sites in Chengdu for us to visit.
● It is famous for its rich culture and heritage(遗产).
● It is a wonderful place for parents and children to enjoy a comfortable, natural environment.
● The sky is quite blue, the sun is very bright and the air is so fresh.
● It took us … hours to fly from … to …
● We got/arrived/reached here in the morning (at NOon, in the afterNOon, in the evening, at night, etc).
● As soon as we arrived at the airport, we started our journey in …
● There’s so much to see and to do here.And I’ve done so many wonderful things.
● On the first (second, third, etc) day, we went to (visited, climbed, etc) …
● When I first saw the Leshan Giant Buddha, I was surprised at how big (huge, high, etc) it is.
● Sichuan Opera that has a history of over 300 years is famous for its face changing.
● Although Sichuan hotpot is too hot, I still enjoyed it.
● Sichuan hotpot is the spiciest food that I have ever had.
● We went to visit … on the second day,which was the best part of this trip.
● I like pandas more than any other animal.
● Pandas are a symbol of China, so I’m proud of being a volunteer.
结尾部分：
● … left a deep impression on me.
● What an unforgettable trip I had! Chengdu is certainly worth aNOther visit.
● The weather was fantastic! It was neither too hot NOr too cold.
● I was sad to say goodbye to this great place.It’s really worth visiting.
● I have really enjoyed my stay there and I hope I can keep these experiences with me for life.
● My time here has passed so quickly.
● I’ve learnt so much and had so many amazing experiences there.
● I’ve done so many wonderful things, and this trip is definitely one of the best experiences of my life!
● Everything here is going really great.I kNOw it’s been one of the best experiences of my life.
● Travel NOt only brings pleasure but also broadens the mind.
● All in all, it has been a very enjoyable stay.I would like to recommend (推荐) this great place to you.
第四步：连句成篇
本篇习作主要记叙一次旅游经历。在文中，我们要交代此次旅行的时间、地点、人物以及参观的景点，最后表达自己的感受。为了提高表达质量，我们在介绍景点的时候可以适当使用定语从句来表达某个景点以及参观这个景点后你的收获或感受。
【参考范文】
I’m Lydia.This summer, I had a chance to visit Chengdu, China, as a volunteer.
Chengdu is a wonderful place that offers unique experiences to visitors.There’s so much to see and to do there.And I did many wonderful things.On the first day, to learn about the history and culture of Chengdu, I visited some famous historic sites there.Later, I tasted Sichuan hotpot, the food that local people like most.It’s the spiciest food that I’ve ever had.On the second day, I visited the Leshan Giant Buddha.I was surprised at how high it is: 71 metres! I wondered how people built it in ancient times.After that, I enjoyed Sichuan Opera that is famous for magical face changing.When I watched the show, I couldn’t believe my eyes.The last day was also the most interesting day for me.I volunteered at a panda base, collecting bamboo, feeding pandas and cleaning up their yards.I had lots of fun there.
As one of the most popular tourist destinations in China, Chengdu gave me lots of surprises during my three-day stay.I’m looking forward to visiting it again.

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