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请根据下列提示的要点，以What will life be like without animals为题，介绍保护珍稀(rare) 动物的意义及必要性。
(1) 动物是人类亲密的朋友，尤其是珍稀动物的存在使整个世界变得丰富多彩；
(2) 最近听到甚至动物园里的珍稀动物都遭到人为伤害，深表震惊。事件的发生源于有些人对保护动物认识不够及对动物漠不关心；
(3) 牢记保护珍稀动物是我们每个人的职责，我们应学习宣传(publicize)其意义，并采取积极有效措施。
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(1) 内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2) 词数100左右。
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以What will life be like without animals为题，介绍保护珍稀(rare) 动物的意义及必要性。
要点内容
1.动物是人类亲密的朋友，尤其是珍稀动物的存在使整个世界变得丰富多彩;
2.最近听到甚至动物园里的珍稀动物都遭到人为伤害，深表震惊。事件的发生源于有些人对保护动物认识不够及对动物漠不关心；
3.牢记保护珍稀动物是我们每个人的职责，我们应学习宣传(publicize)其意义，并采取积极有效措施。
1、审题
动物的好处+动物未受到保护
开头
正文
结尾
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
保护动物的措施（2-3条）
表达美好期望
2、列提纲
动物的好处
Para.1
动物是人类的亲密朋友。它们的存在，尤其是稀有动物的存在，使整个世界变得生动多彩。
连词
成句：
Animals are close friends of human beings. Their existence, especially the existence of rare animals, makes the whole world lively and colorful.
human beings;
existence ;
rare animals
lively/vivid and colorful
动物未受到保护
Para.1
不幸的是，我们最近听到这样的消息，即使是动物园里饲养的稀有动物也无法逃脱被伤害和杀害的命运，对此我们只能感到震惊。之所以会发生这种情况，是因为有些人对这些动物缺乏了解和照顾。
连词
成句：
Unfortunately, we have heard such news recently that rare animals, even kept in the zoo, couldn’t escape being hurt and killed, at which we can feel nothing but shocked. The reason why it happened is that some people lack understanding about these animals and caring for them.
even/even if/though;
at which we can feel nothing but shocked ;
The reason why... is that...
care for
nothing but ;
保护动物的措施①
Para.2
因此，我们应该研究和宣传有关珍稀动物的信息，并牢记保护动物是每个人的责任。
连词
成句：
Therefore, we should study and publicize the information about rare animals, and keep it in mind that protecting animals is the duty of everyone.
therefore/ hence/ consequently/ thus/ for this reason/ so;
publicize;
keep ... in mind;
responsibility/duty
保护动物的措施②
同时，我们应该采取积极有效的措施。毕竟，保护动物就是保护我们自己。
At the same time, we should take active and effective measures. After all, protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
Para.2
连词
成句：
at the same time/simultaneously/meanwhile/moreover/besides
take active and effective measures;
after all
表达美好期望
我相信，只有通过每个人不懈的努力，我们才能在地球这个美丽的家园里与所有动物和谐相处。
I hold a belief that only through the relentless efforts of everyone can we live in harmony with all animals in this beautiful home on Earth.
Para.3
连词
成句：
I believe/I hold a belief/I’m sure/I’m convinced that;
only＋状语，倒装句;
in harmony with
relentless efforts；
成篇翻译：
没有动物的生活会是什么样子？
动物是人类的亲密朋友。它们的存在，尤其是稀有动物的存在，使整个世界变得生动多彩。不幸的是，我们最近听到这样的消息，即使是动物园里饲养的稀有动物也无法逃脱被伤害和杀害的命运，对此我们只能感到震惊。之所以会发生这种情况，是因为有些人对这些动物缺乏了解和照顾。
因此，我们应该研究和宣传有关珍稀动物的信息，并牢记保护动物是每个人的责任。同时，我们应该采取积极有效的措施。毕竟，保护动物就是保护我们自己。
我相信，只有通过每个人不懈的努力，我们才能在地球这个美丽的家园里与所有动物和谐相处。
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连句成篇：
What will life be like without animals
Animals are close friends of human beings. Their existence, especially the existence of rare animals, makes the whole world lively and colorful. Unfortunately, we have heard such news recently that rare animals, even kept in the zoo, couldn’t escape being hurt and killed, at which we can feel nothing but shocked. The reason why it happened is that some people lack understanding about these animals and caring for them.
Therefore, we should study and publicize the information about rare animals, and keep it in mind that protecting animals is the duty of everyone. At the same time, we should take active and effective measures. After all, protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
I hold a belief that only through the relentless efforts of everyone can we live in harmony with all animals in this beautiful home on Earth.
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句
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现
一.使用状语从句、定语从句使句子高级;
不幸的是，我们最近听到这样的消息，即使是动物园里饲养的稀有动物也无法逃脱被伤害和杀害的命运，对此我们只能感到震惊。
Unfortunately, we have heard such news recently that rare animals, even kept in the zoo, couldn’t escape being hurt and killed, at which we can feel nothing but shocked.
Unfortunately, We have recently heard the news. Even rare animals kept in zoos cannot escape the fate of being harmed and killed. We are shocked by this.
之所以会发生这种情况，是因为有些人对这些动物缺乏了解和照顾。
二. 同位语从句、表语从句的运用使表达更地道
The reason why it happened is that some people lack understanding about these animals and caring for them.
This situation occurs because some people lack understanding and care for these animals.
三.使用形式宾语使句子流畅
We should study and promote information about rare animals, and remember that protecting animals is everyone's responsibility.
we should study and publicize the information about rare animals, and keep it in mind that protecting animals is the duty of everyone.
我们应该研究和宣传有关珍稀动物的信息，并牢记保护动物是每个人的责任。
四.使用only的倒装句使表达更丰富
I believe that through the relentless efforts of everyone, we can live in harmony with all animals in this beautiful home on Earth.
I hold a belief that only through the relentless efforts of everyone can we live in harmony with all animals in this beautiful home on Earth.
我相信，只有通过每个人不懈的努力，我们才能在地球这个美丽的家园里与所有动物和谐相处。
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