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My story started one autumn morning, at the bend on a path.
I was 13 years old, and was on the way to school. It was the first time I had caught sight of a fox. Fascinated to the point that I forgot all fear, I dared to go up to it. I had never come so close to a wild animal. There was nobody else around, only me and the fox.
“Hey, fox!” I tried to greet it, though my voice was so weak it felt like I was saying hello to myself. It didn’t hear me. It stayed there and I watched it. My heart was beating flat out. It was so cute. For a moment, I thought I might be able to touch it.
Throughout the day at school, I could only think of the fox at the big beech（山毛榉）tree. At my return to the place where we met, I was sure I’d find it there.
And I did. This time I gathered a little bit more courage and called out to it, “Fox!” Of course it escaped. But that only made me long to meet it again. I decided that if I could find its kennel（洞）and catch it, I would try and tame（驯服）it, making it my friend.
Thus, I spent most of my free time in the forests trying to find the fox during the following months. But I never saw it again before winter came. During the winter, I followed its footprints far across the fields. Suddenly I was alarmed by the howling of wolves near me. I ran away frightened, stumbled and hurt my ankle. It healed very slowly, so that I had to stay at home during the winter, reading a book about animals of the forest and foxes.
When spring arrived, I was free again. I looked for fox kennels and waited for my fox. To my amazement, it had got young ones but kept moving because of my observations; therefore I decided to observe the fox from a longer distance.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally, it would let me get close. _______________
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To my surprise, the day after I took it home, it fled. _______________________________________________
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试题分析
1.主要人物:
①I: a 13-year-old child, interested in wild animals
②the fox
2.视角：第一人称
3.主题：人与自然：如何和谐相处（重点），人与自我：如何尊重自然（次重点）
4.前文故事梗概:
13岁那年，去上学的路上，首次遇见狐狸并对其产生了兴趣，试图找到其洞穴，驯服它并与它成为好朋友。但事后好几个月，都不见其踪影。当第二年春天来临的时候，我继续寻找，发现那只狐狸已经有了幼崽，但因为我的接近，它们总是不断地换地方。于是，我决定离它们远一点地去观察。……
5.续写安排:
第一段: Finally, it would let me get close.
①（与前一句衔接）我的心情
②（过渡）接下去做了什么
③（承上启下）最终，把狐狸带回了家
第二段: To my surprise, the day after I took it home, it fled.
①（与前一句衔接）狐狸有怎样的表现
②（过渡）我的想法和心情
③（收尾）对于狐狸回归自然的认识
下水作文
Finally, it would let me get close. To my great joy, my patience paid off. Maybe the fox accepted me as part of nature instead of a threat. As the day went on, our relationship grew steadily. Once I tried to offer it a good feeding service. Without any hesitation, it came over and began to enjoy what I brought. I was quite appreciating such a warm scene, and what made me more exciting was that it even allowed me to pat it on the back gently. A thought came to me that I would take it back home for a better company and caring. (98 words)
To my surprise, the day after I took it home, it fled. Before I knew what had happened, it was out of sight in the distance without any goodbyes. Anything wrong I recalled what I had done to it. Nothing unhappy to the cute fox! But why I was in a great loss. …The book about the animals of the forest and foxes brought me the answer. I suddenly realized that it was the call of the wild that attracted the fox back to where it should belong to. Indeed, though I could provide the food and housing, I couldn’t offer it the natural habitat. Fortunately, we would meet every day later. (100 words)
参考范文
Finally it would let me get close. One day, as I sat quietly under the shade of a tree, the fox cautiously approached, its bright and soft eyes fixed on me. I held my breath, not wanting to startle the little creature. As it came closer, I could see the trust in its eyes, and I knew that it had got accustomed to my presence and that our bond had deepened. Over time, I was able to bring it food and even stroke its fur and occasionally, it would huddle peacefully against me as we sat on the green grass, like two old friends. And just like what I’d do to an old friend who seemed to need help, I took it home, thinking I could better take care of it and we could better enjoy each other’s company.（132 words）
To my surprise, the day after I took it home, it fled. It jumped out of an open window and in no time vanished into the woods. As I watched it slip away, with a nimbleness and grace that was a joy to behold, darting through the underbrush with a fluidity that spoke of its wild nature, I suddenly realized that perhaps the wild called to it more strongly than I ever could. I should never have tried to keep it as a tame pet, because wild creatures were supposed to be roaming in their own home, rather than being confined in mine. I didn’t see it then,—not even with the help of that book about foxes, but now, on looking back, I know that my self-acclaimed “love” for it was not love at all, but possession.（126 words）

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