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万圣节服装比赛（金华十二校第二次联考2024.3.21）
来源 金丽衢十二校2023学年高三第二次联考
话题 万圣节服装比赛 创新精神
文本分析
Every October, my neighborhood has a Halloween costume contest. （后文的铺垫，指出邻居在每年十月会举办万圣节服装比赛）And every October, my neighbor Ollie and I race to the announcement board in the park to find out the theme. （这一句指出主要人物Ollie和我，在阅读续写时要及时标画人物）One year, the theme was “Dress up as your favorite book character.” Another year, it was “Be something scary.” But this year, the theme was kind of, well, themeless. （今年的服装比赛没有主题，留有悬念，这是后文续写的关键，文章在第一段就给出很多信息，要注意！）
“Be creative ”（要创新？这一句给出了写作的灵感，今年的服装比赛要创新） I said, reading the announcement board. “That’s not really a theme, is it ”
Ollie hopped off his skateboards to get a closer look. “You’re right,” he agreed. “I think my favorite theme ever was ‘Superheroes’. I loved my Super-Force Flying Eagles costume so much, I kept that thing hanging in my closet for years!”
“My favorite theme was ‘Farm Animals’.” I giggled. “Remember how you insisted on being a Stegosaurus(剑龙) ”
“When I was five, dinosaurs were my world.” Ollie laughed. “I would have loved to see a Stegosaurus out grazing with the cows.”
“Now that’s the creative spirit we need for this challenge!”（创新精神，是这次比赛的重点，在续写时要注意这一点） I said. “Maybe, since we don’t know exactly what we want to be yet, we should start by choosing some cool costume-making materials.”
“I’ve got it!” Ollie said, scooping up a bunch of fallen leaves.（阅读到这里，续写有了思路，Ollie和我要参与万圣节服装比赛，而今年的重点是创新精神，Ollie想用树叶来制作衣服）
“Really ” I said. “You’re going to make an entire costume out of leaves ”
“Why not ” he said, scooping up some more.
“They’re totally free, and I can guarantee, no one will be a tree as great as me.”
“Don’t you mean, a tree as great as we ” I grinned.
“Um, first, that grammar doesn’t sound right,” said Ollie. “And second, no way! Think of your own creative ideas.”
“Aw, come on,” I said. “You should be flattered that I like your idea so much. Plus, I just thought of the perfect way to make branches.”(我想到制作树枝的完美方法，这是续写的关键，在续写中一定要指明这个方法，并且要应用创新精神！完成这次万圣节服装比赛的服装制作。)
Finally, Ollie said OK.
paragraph1: We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves.
paragraph2: Then the big moment came.
本文的主要特点
本文结构完整，文章多以对话为主，凸显主人公的性格，在文章中对题目要求续写内容作出多次铺垫，在阅读时要注意圈画铺垫，方便在续写是快速准确的抓住关键点，文章开篇指出视角背景是万圣节服装比赛，要注意创新精神，自己在文章结尾对树枝的创新做法要注意到！
写作中可能遇到的问题
本文中的关键点是万圣节服装比赛的服装制作，要用树叶制作服装，并且注意到树枝的创新完美做法，这是写作时学生可能忽略的，写阅读文章时应注意及时圈画关键点和铺垫，方便在续写时及时找到铺垫。在续写时要提前构建好两段的内容，注重细节和心理描写。
生词积累
hop off: 跳下，从一个比较高的地方或物理跳下来
giggle: 咯咯的笑
sregosaurus: 剑龙
a bunch of : 一堆，一群
flatter: 使高兴，使感到荣幸
好词好句积累
1.形容兴奋
①a sense of joy and happiness swept over/flooded over sb.心头满是喜悦。
②bathing us in extreme joy. Everyone was grinning from ear to ear.使我们沉浸在狂喜之中。大家都笑得合不拢嘴。
③A smile lit up his face and his eyes were shining/twinkling/sparkling with great joy/excitement.他脸上露出笑容,双眸闪烁着喜悦/激动的光芒。
④Delighted and thrilled, I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket along with my smiling mother.我高兴地蹦跶了一下,然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟着我微笑着的妈妈进了超市。
⑤It brought to my lips a bright smile, which shone like a diamond.它使我的嘴角露出了钻石般闪耀的微笑。
2.一些动作描写
①Franklin cupped his hands over Tom and began whispering his plan. 富兰克林双手围成杯状在汤姆耳边低声讲起他的计划。
②He leapt/jumped/sprang to his feet/jumped up and rushed out of the room.他一跃而起,冲出房间。
3.环境描写
①(《洛娜·杜恩》)It is a green valley far from any town, surrounded by steep, rocky mountains.这是一个远离市镇、葱葱郁郁的山谷,群山环绕,山势陡峭,岩石林立。
②A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green banks, and murmuring in a soft voice.离这不远,有一条小溪,在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀,声音柔和地吱哝着。
下水文
We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. Excited by our decision to create unique costumes, Ollie and I embarked on our quest to gather materials. We roamed through the park, scouring for objects that could bring our ideas to life. As we collected fallen branches and vibrant autumn leaves, our imaginations sparked with possibilities.
Back at Ollie's place, we spread out our findings on the small wooden table in his backyard. With enthusiasm bubbling inside us, we brainstormed various concepts. Using twine and scissors, we carefully crafted intricate designs. Ollie, with his attention to detail, meticulously adorned the costumes with the colorful leaves we had collected. Each leaf served as a vibrant brushstroke, painting a story of nature's beauty onto our attire.
Then the big moment came. And Ollie and I nervously made our way to the park. As we stepped into the buzzing crowd, we were met with a sea of extraordinary costumes. From superheroes to monsters, the contestants showcased their boundless imaginations. But it was our leaf-adorned attire that caught everyone's attention and win the first prize. Inspired by our success, we promised each other to continue keeping our creative spirits beyond Halloween. From then on, whenever we faced challenges or had a desire to explore something new, we would rely on our bond and the power of imagination to overcome any obstacles that came our way.
本写作思路回顾
首先阅读文章，提取主要人物、故事背景和故事线，文章不难理解，在续写时要注意提前构思好两段的内容结构，在提升内容的同时，也要注意字体的美观，再增加一些高级词汇和句型就更好了.

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