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邵阳市2024届高三第2次联考读后续写题目：
It was a beautiful sunny morning in early summer, when the world seemed full of sunlight and new green leaves. I was in a good mood as my parents had just given me $300 for my daily expenses during the week that they would be away in Mexico to visit my mother’s sick grandfather. I was extremely overjoyed, thinking hard about the things I could do with the money. If I survived on bread and butter the whole week, I would have an unexpected sum of $200 to buy the latest Kobe Bryant basketball shoes! What a terrific idea!As usual, the physical education class was thrilling. I felt most at ease on the basketball court. After playing several hotly contested games, I could hardy catch my breath as I headed back towards the classroom, sweaty and exhausted. When I entered, I found my classmates gathered around Steven’s desk as he searched through his books and some other personal items anxiously. Steven had always been popular. Not only was he intelligent and well-mannered, but he also came from a well-off family. And he shared everything he had with us.
这是初夏一个阳光明媚的早晨，世界似乎充满了阳光和新的绿叶。我的心情很好，因为我的父母刚刚给了我300美元，作为我一周的日常开支，他们将去墨西哥看望我母亲生病的祖父。我欣喜若狂，苦思冥想着用这笔钱能做些什么。如果我能维持一周的生计，我会有一笔意外的200美元来买最新的科比篮球鞋！多么棒的主意！和往常一样，体育课很精彩。我在篮球场上感到很自在。在打了几场激烈的比赛后，当我汗流浃背、疲惫不堪地朝教室走去时，我终于可以喘口气了。当我进去的时候，我发现我的同学们聚集在史蒂文的桌子旁，他焦急地翻阅着他的书和其他一些个人物品。史蒂文一直很受欢迎。他不仅聪明有礼，而且还来来往往。
Right away, I learned Steven had lost the money he would donate to a children’s welfare institute that afternoon. Then I informed Miss Jones, the class teacher. She rushed over immediately and organized a search around the classroom. We stood by our desks and emptied the contents of our schoolbags onto the desk for inspection.
我马上就知道史蒂文那天下午把捐给儿童福利机构的钱弄丢了。然后我通知了班主任琼斯小姐。她立即冲过去，在教室周围组织了一次搜查。我们站在桌子旁，把书包里的东西倒在桌子上检查。
It was my turn. As Miss Jones took out the $300 from my wallet, the class fell into a shock. I didn’t know the amount lost was exactly $300 until then. I kept proving my innocence, but in vain. Miss Jones confiscated (没收) the $300 and decided I was getting kicked out of the school. I stayed home alone the whole week, living only on bread. I felt wronged, angry, and loss of self-respect.
轮到我了。当琼斯小姐从我钱包里掏出300美元时，全班同学都惊呆了。直到那时，我才知道损失的金额是300美元。我不断地证明自己是清白的，但徒劳无功。琼斯小姐被没收(没收) 300美元，我决定被学校开除。我一个人在家呆了整整一个星期，只靠吃面包为生。我感到委屈、愤怒和丧失自尊。
Finally, my parents returned home and talked with me.
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents’ advice when Steven came.
前文大意：
父母给了我300美元作为一周的生活费。我上完体育课走进教室发现Steven同学把他当天下午要捐给儿童福利机构的钱弄丢了，Jones老师在班里进行搜查，当从我那里搜出300美元时把它没收了。我被赶出学校，一个人在家熬了一个星期，感到委屈、愤怒、失去了自尊。
答题难点：
从学生答题情况看，很多学生在第一段续写中没有提到“我父母的具体建议”，所以跟第二段的首句就没衔接起来。
我的下水作文：
Finally, my parents returned home and talked with me. I suddenly burst into tears. Puzzled, they asked me what had happened. With my eyes swimming with tears, I told them about the injustice I had suffered at school a few days earlier. They kept comforting me. The next morning, they took me to Miss Jones’ office and told her that they had indeed given me $300 for my daily expenses before leaving for Mexico. They advised her to ask Steven to look again, adding that it must have been a misunderstanding. (82 words)
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents’ advice when Steven came. He said he had found the missing $300, which he had left on his bed. So embarrassed was he that his face went brick-red. Steven sincerely apologized to me, and begged for my forgiveness. We hugged each other tightly, a big smile spreading across my face. After the first-period bell rang, Miss Jones announced to the class that I had been wronged. She made a public apology to me, and canceled the punishment decision about me. (76 words)[158 words]
参考译文：
最后，我的父母回到家和我交谈。我突然放声大哭起来。他们感到不解，便问我已经发生了什么。我两眼噙满泪水，告诉他们几天前我在学校所遭受的委屈。他们不断地安慰我。第二天早晨，他们把我带到了Miss Jones的办公室，告诉她他们去墨西哥前的确给了我300美元作为我的日常开销。他们建议她让Steven再找找，并补充说，这一定是一场误会。
Miss Jones刚接受了我父母的建议，Steven就来了。他说他找到丢失的300美元了，原来他把钱落在他的床上了。他尴尬极了，脸涨得紫红紫红的。Steven真诚地向我道歉，并请求我的原谅。我们紧紧拥抱在一起，我的脸上绽开了灿烂笑容。第一节课铃响后，Miss Jones向全班宣布我是被冤枉的。她向我作出了公开道歉，并取消了对我的处罚决定。
官方范文：
Finally, my parents returned home and talked with me. They patiently listened to my side of the story, their understanding and support helping to boost my hurt feelings and self-esteem. I told the whole story of what happened, including the expensive misunderstanding, and the relief of sharing my tough experience was clear in the room. It was during this emotional conversation that I heard about Steven’s admission, which would change the situation. (63 words)
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents’ advice when Steven came. He genuinely looked sorry, with a hint of regret in his eyes. To everyone’s relief, he confessed that he had found the lost money in his backpack. The immense relief and joy I felt were hard to put into words, showing how misunderstandings and hasty judgments can lead to serious problems. Steven’s sincere apology and our collective understanding brought us closer as classmates, restoring the warmth of our friendship. (69 words) [132 words]注：范文第一段与第二段首句似乎没有衔接好。
默写版：
Finally, my parents returned home and talked with me. _________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________他们耐心地倾听我的故事，他们的理解和支持有助于增强我受伤的感觉和自尊. I told the whole story of what happened, including the expensive misunderstanding, and the relief of sharing my tough experience was clear in the room. ______________________________________________
________________________________正是在这场情绪激动的谈话中，我听说了史蒂文的承认，这将改变局面。 (63 words)
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents’ advice when Steven came. _______________________
__________________________________________________________他看上去真的很抱歉，眼里带着一丝遗憾. To everyone’s relief, he confessed that he had found the lost money in his backpack. _____________________________________________________________________
______________________________我感到的巨大宽慰和喜悦难以用语言表达，这表明误解和草率的判断会导致严重的问题. Steven’s sincere apology and our collective understanding brought us closer as classmates, restoring the warmth of our friendship. (69 words)

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