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There once was a stray dog (流浪狗) named Rufus who was the most amazing dog on Kumquat Street. He could hear a ladybug blowing its nose. He could see a pill bug eating a black licorice candy at midnight. Rufus could even smell a caterpillar that hadn’t washed its feet.
You would think that Rufus, being so amazing, was also happy, But he wasn’t, You see, there was one thing that kept Rufus from being adopted by his favorite human. And that was... Rufus barked backward. Here's what he sounded like: “Wob- wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!”
Rufus could stand being laughed at by every squirrel and cat in the neighborhood. What he couldn’t stand was that his bark kept him from living with Janie Johnson.
Janie never laughed at Rufus when he barked. More than anything else, Rufus wanted to be her pet. He wanted to play catch in her yard every day and sleep at the foot of her bed each night.
But Janie's father, Mr. Johnson, wouldn't hear of it, “What A dog that barks backward We'd be the laughing stocks of Kumquat Street! We Johnsons didn't get where we are today by adopting dogs that bark backward. No. Janie. It's out of the question.”
“I’m sorry,” Janie told Rufus one morning as they sat on her front porch. “I keep telling Daddy how great you are. He just won't listen.”
“Krab-krab!” said Rufus.
“Yes, sometimes he is bad-tempered," said Janie “I’ll keep trying, though. Don't worry.”
But Rufus did worry. That evening he talked it over with his friend Bill Bulldog. “I don't think Mr. Johnson will ever like me,” Rufus said, “As long as I bark backward, he'll never let me live in his home.”
“Have you tried treatment ” asked Bill.
Rufus said, “I've tried everything. Nothing helps, It's just the way I bark.”
“You're a great dog Roof, Anyone can see that," said Bill. “It just takes some humans longer to figure it out, that's all, Hey, want to go with me to Succotash Street I've heard that their garbage is fantastic.”
Rufus yawned, “No, thanks," he said, “I'll take a nap.”
When Rufus woke up, it was late afternoon. As he was lying there, his sharp ears heard Mr. Johnson saying, “It's almost suppertime. Is Janie still roller-skating We Johnsons didn't get where we are today by being late for supper.”
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Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie.
At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr. Johnson ran up.
文本分析：
故事大意：
曾经有一只流浪狗叫鲁弗斯，它是金橘街上最神奇的狗。它能听到一只瓢虫擤鼻子的声音，它能看到一只球潮虫在午夜吃一根黑色的甘草糖，它甚至能嗅到一只毛毛虫没有洗脚。但是，纵使鲁弗斯有如此天赋，它也有烦恼：鲁弗斯的叫声永远是反的——相当于我们正常说“小狗”，用它的方式就成了“狗小”。所以，鲁弗斯一叫，经常惹得周围的松鼠、猫咪和黑羽椋鸟嘲笑。只有小女孩珍妮不同，她从不嘲笑它，还想让它做她的宠物。鲁弗斯也非常喜欢珍妮，可珍妮的父亲约翰逊先生却不同意。鲁弗斯很沮丧，但也没有办法，直到一天，珍妮出去滑旱冰，都快到吃晚饭的时间她还没有回家，发生什么意外了吗？鲁弗斯能帮上忙吗？
主要矛盾：
本文的流浪狗Rufus有一个美好的愿望----有一个家，和Janie 住在一起，一起玩游戏，睡在她床边；流浪狗Rufus的困难与阻碍：Janie的父亲不同意；考生要充分利用这个伏笔，进行逆向创作。即：父亲最终会同意的。
本文有两个高光点：
①流浪狗Rufus 有一个特别提到的点：He barked backward. 而且因为这个特点被MrJohnson 拒绝收养。
②Mr. Johnson 有一句口头禅，可以反向进行创作，再次利用这个口头禅，让收养流浪狗Rufus 变得十分地自然。同时文风也可以保持一定的一致性。
根据两个段首句，可以进行各自段落内容的设计；第一段应该是重在描写流浪狗Rufus 凭一己之力与智慧找到了女孩Janie ，而且用的他独有的法器：令人难忘的朝后一叫。第二段则是父亲被Rufus 与 Janie 之间的深情厚谊感动，最终答应女儿的请求。不要忘记父亲有一句口头禅说了一遍又一遍。
下水作文：画面定格结尾
Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie. With his sharp eyes, he looked everywhere along the street, but not even a single sign of Janie and her roller-skating shoes. With his sharp nose, he sniffed for any smell of Janie, but what greeted him was nothing but the unpleasant smell of the caterpillar’s unwashed feet. With his sharp ears, he could only sense the ladybug blowing its nose. With the efforts of all the senses going in vain, Rufus decided to turn to his unique weapon - bark backward. Though it meant that he would be laughed at by his neighbours, he hoped that in this way he could attract Janie’s attention and find her. All his courage summoned up, Rufus barked backward all the way down Kumquat Street. This time luck went with him and it was just a while before Janie heard his bark and roller-skated all the way to him.
At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr. Johnson ran up. This time, instead of saying “We Johnsons didn't get where we are today by...”, he asked Janie what had happened, concern and affection written all over his face. Swelling with pride, Janie explained how she got lost and how Rufus’s unique bark led her back. “I wouldn’t get where I am now without Rufus’ bark. Dad, please!” Janie begged, one hand shaking Dad’s and the other stroking Rufus’ silky fur. Touched by his lovely daughter’s words, Dad felt his heart softened and nodded in approval. And the dog, seeming to understand everything, barked backward merrily, as if announcing his being adopted. Together, the three headed back home, one striding forward, one roller-skating onward, and one wagging his tail and barking backward -“Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!”（画面定格结尾）
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Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to lookfor Janie. He listened for the clickety-click of Janie's skates. He sniffed for her special bubble-gum-and-peaches scent. He looked for her sky-blue helmet. But he didn’t hear, smell, or see her anywhere. Rufus started baking as loud as he could. “Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!” A squirrel giggled in a tree, “I’ve never heard anything so silly in my life!” “You don't even sound like a dog!”, yowled a cat. Rusfus ignored them all and kept on barking. Soon all you heard in the neighborhood was his bark. Suddenly, Janie skated up to Rufus. “Oh,Rufus,I knew I heard you!” cried Janie.
At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr:Johnson ran up. “Janie,” he said. “Where on earth have you been ” Janie explained, “I took wrong tum and got lost, Daddy! Then all of a sudden, I heard ‘Wob-wow, fra-fra-fra’. It was Rufus! I knew if I followed the sound of his bark, I’d find my way back home.” Mr. Johnson knelt in front of Rufus and held out his hand. “Rufus, I owe you an apology,” he said. “We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by not admitting when we’re wrong. I’d like to shake your paw and invite you to come live with us.” Rufus happily gave Mr. Johnson his paw and licked his cheek. “We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by letting dogs lick us on the cheek.” said Mr. Johnson. “Hmph! Well, I guess that wasn't so bad!”

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