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读后续写：雀斑烦恼（教师版）
一、原文
When I was a kid about twelve years old, I had a lot of freckles(雀斑). I had reached the age when I had begun to really look at myself in the mirror, and I was disappointed. Apparently my mother was too, because sometimes she'd look at me and shake her head.
l had a cousin whose name was Janette Elizabeth. She looked exactly like her name sounds. She had a flawless peaches-and-cream complexion (肤色). I couldn't help comparing myself with her and thinking that my life would be a lot different if I had beautiful skin too.
And then, in the back pages of Janette Elizabeth's magazine, I found the answer: an advertisement for freckle-remover cream. I knew that I could afford it if I saved my money, and I did. The ad assured me that the product would work well. For three weeks I went to the mailbox every day precisely at the time the mail was delivered. I knew that if someone else in my family got the mail, I would never hear the end of it. There was no way that they would let me open the box in private.
Three weeks later, my package finally came. I went to my room with it, sat on the edge of my bed, and opened it. I was sure that I was looking at a miracle. When I got up the next morning, I applied the cream all over my body. Then I took my hoe and went with my brother and cousins to hoe the field, where I got rid of some tiger lilies(虎尾百合), seemingly ugly with black and small spots.
The sun was so strong that even my faces started to burn. By the end of the day, when I came back to the house, my family, knowing nothing about the freckle-remover cream, began to say things like, "I've never seen you with that many freckles before." When I saw myself in the mirror, I dissolved into tears and hid in the bathroom.
Paragraph 1: My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her.
Paragraph 2: After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroom.
二、分句练习
Para1：My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her.
（1）她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。【非谓语】
①收到某人的回应 receive response from sb Not receiving any response from me, she quickened her pace anxiously to the bathroom, checking on me.
②加快步伐去… quicken one’s pace to …
③检查… check on …
（2）看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。
①安然无恙 in a whole skin Seeing me in a whole skin, she breathed a sigh of relief and asked me what was going on.
②松了一口气 breath a sigh of relief
（3）她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。
①一记重锤 a hammer blow Her words seemed like a hammer blow, tossing me into deeper sorrow.
②把…扔进… toss sb into …
（4）我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。
①受伤地说 utter in injured tones I uttered in injured tones that I applied the same freckle-remover cream as Elizabeth's, but freckles appeared on my face more and more.
②涂 apply sth
（5）知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”
①也 so +…+sb Knowing my situation, she comforted me, "It is normal that teen girls have more freckles on their faces than usual. So do I at your time, honey!"
（6）我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。
①情绪低落 be down in spirits Down in spirits, I turned a deaf ear to what my mom said, trotting towards my bedroom hysterically.
②对…充耳不闻 turn a deaf ear to sth
③冲向 trot towards …
Para2：After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroom.
（1）当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。
①看到 sth come into one’s sight When I opened the door, beautiful Elizabeth came into my sight with a bunch of tiger lilies in her hand.
（2）她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。
①对…冷漠 be indifferent to / be unconcerned about Finding me indifferent to her coming, she handed the lilies to me and apologized for my "accident".
②把某物递给某人 hand sth to sb
（3）伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我吃惊。用她的话来说，我第一次知道她羡慕我在锄地上的努力，而她却过分注重自己的外表。
①羡慕某人某事 admire sb for sth And what Elizabeth said next surprised me. In her words, I first knew that she admired me for my dedicated endeavors in hoeing while she paid excessive attention to her appearance.
②专心致志的努力 dedicated endeavors
③过度的 excessive / k ses v/
（4）这时，我终于发现自己身上有一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样。
①闪光点 starry points At this moment, I finally found there existed some starry points in me, just like those tiger lilies.
（5）它们虽然有难看的“雀斑”，但却有着不逊于其他花的香气。
①点缀着… be dotted with Though dotted with ugly "freckles", they had an aroma which was not inferior to other flowers.
②香气 aroma / r m /
③不如… be inferior / n f ri (r)/ to
三、最终自测
Jordan nodded, “I let her out last night.”
我几乎用颤抖的声音吼了起来。“她会冻死的。出去找她！”My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her. 她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。
After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroom.
当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我吃惊。用她的话来说，我第一次知道她羡慕我在锄地上的努力，而她却过分注重自己的外表。这时，我终于发现自己身上有一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样。它们虽然有难看的“雀斑”，但却有着不逊于其他花的香气。
最终范文
Para1：My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her.
Not receiving any response from me, she quickened her pace anxiously to the bathroom, checking on me. Seeing me in a whole skin, she breathed a sigh of relief and asked me what was going on. Her words seemed like a hammer blow, tossing me into deeper sorrow. I uttered in injured tones that I applied the same freckle-remover cream as Elizabeth's, but freckles appeared on my face more and more. Knowing my situation, she comforted me, "It is normal that teen girls have more freckles on their faces than usual. So do I at your time, honey!" Down in spirits, I turned a deaf ear to what my mom said, trotting towards my bedroom hysterically.
Para2：After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroom.
When I opened the door, beautiful Elizabeth came into my sight with a bunch of tiger lilies in her hand. Finding me indifferent to her coming, she handed the lilies to me and apologized for my "accident". And what Elizabeth said next surprised me. In her words, I first knew that she admired me for my dedicated endeavors in hoeing while she paid excessive attention to her appearance. At this moment, I finally found there existed some starry points in me, just like those tiger lilies. Though dotted with ugly "freckles", they had an aroma which was not inferior to other flowers.
雀斑烦恼（学生版）
一、原文
When I was a kid about twelve years old, I had a lot of freckles(雀斑). I had reached the age when I had begun to really look at myself in the mirror, and I was disappointed. Apparently my mother was too, because sometimes she'd look at me and shake her head.
l had a cousin whose name was Janette Elizabeth. She looked exactly like her name sounds. She had a flawless peaches-and-cream complexion (肤色). I couldn't help comparing myself with her and thinking that my life would be a lot different if I had beautiful skin too.
And then, in the back pages of Janette Elizabeth's magazine, I found the answer: an advertisement for freckle-remover cream. I knew that I could afford it if I saved my money, and I did. The ad assured me that the product would work well. For three weeks I went to the mailbox every day precisely at the time the mail was delivered. I knew that if someone else in my family got the mail, I would never hear the end of it. There was no way that they would let me open the box in private.
Three weeks later, my package finally came. I went to my room with it, sat on the edge of my bed, and opened it. I was sure that I was looking at a miracle. When I got up the next morning, I applied the cream all over my body. Then I took my hoe and went with my brother and cousins to hoe the field, where I got rid of some tiger lilies(虎尾百合), seemingly ugly with black and small spots.
The sun was so strong that even my faces started to burn. By the end of the day, when I came back to the house, my family, knowing nothing about the freckle-remover cream, began to say things like, "I've never seen you with that many freckles before." When I saw myself in the mirror, I dissolved into tears and hid in the bathroom.
Paragraph 1: My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her.
Paragraph 2: After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroom.
二、分句练习
Para1：My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her.
（1）她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。【非谓语】
①收到某人的回应 receive response from sb
②加快步伐去… quicken one’s pace to …
③检查… check on …
（2）看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。
①安然无恙 in a whole skin
②松了一口气 breath a sigh of relief
（3）她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。
①一记重锤 a hammer blow
②把…扔进… toss sb into …
（4）我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。
①受伤地说 utter in injured tones
②涂 apply sth
（5）知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”
①也 so +…+sb
（6）我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。
①情绪低落 be down in spirits
②对…充耳不闻 turn a deaf ear to sth
③冲向 trot towards …
Para2：After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroom.
（1）当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。
①看到 sth come into one’s sight
（2）她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。
①对…冷漠 be indifferent to / be unconcerned about
②把某物递给某人 hand sth to sb
（3）伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我吃惊。用她的话来说，我第一次知道她羡慕我在锄地上的努力，而她却过分注重自己的外表。
①羡慕某人某事 admire sb for sth
②专心致志的努力 dedicated endeavors
③过度的 excessive / k ses v/
（4）这时，我终于发现自己身上有一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样。
①闪光点 starry points
（5）它们虽然有难看的“雀斑”，但却有着不逊于其他花的香气。
①点缀着… be dotted with
②香气 aroma / r m /
③不如… be inferior / n f ri (r)/ to
三、最终自测
Jordan nodded, “I let her out last night.”
我几乎用颤抖的声音吼了起来。“她会冻死的。出去找她！”My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her. 她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。
After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroom.
当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我吃惊。用她的话来说，我第一次知道她羡慕我在锄地上的努力，而她却过分注重自己的外表。这时，我终于发现自己身上有一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样。它们虽然有难看的“雀斑”，但却有着不逊于其他花的香气。

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