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英语试题讲评
2024年山西省高考考前适应性测试
一、语法填空部分讲评
试题分析
主题语境：人与自然---自然科学研究成果
语篇类型：说明文
语篇内容：人类从自然界获取灵感进行设计。
选择性必修第三册 Unit 5 Learning from nature
Animals and plants can teach humans a lot about design and engineering.As a result,many engineers,scientists,and designers spend time studying them.When they have a problem,nature often has the answer.This science 56 (call)biomimetics.Bio means“living things”and mimetics means “copying”. It involves 57 (draw)inspiration from nature's designs and processes 58 (solve) human problems or improve technology.
For example,engineers in Canada are studying whale flippers(鳍)because they move so effectively through water.The engincers believe the shape can improve the movement of wind turbines(涡轮机).Similarly,engincers at Mercedes Benz in Germany are using the shape of the boxfish 59 one of their new cars because it makes the car 60 (fast) and more fuel efficient.
Velcro (粘扣)is 61 (probable)the most famous example of biomimetics.Most people have some Velcro on 62 item of clothing.It was invented by the Swiss engineer George de Mestral in 1948.He was walking in the countryside. 63 he pulled a burr(毛刺)off his trousers.He noticed how well the burr stuck to his clothes so he studied its design.The result was Velcro,which became an 64_____ (afford) alternative to the traditional zipper.
In conclusion,biomimetics not only has helped to design our world but promises many more 65 (possibility).Unfortunately,they might take a long time to develop.This isn't really surprising:it took nature millions of years to design its animals and plants.
topic： biomimetics
examples
the most famous example
Conclusion
Animals and plants can teach humans a lot about design and engineering.As a result,many engineers,scientists,and designers spend time studying them.When they have a problem,nature often has the answer.This science 56 _____ (call)biomimetics.Bio means“living things”and mimetics means “copying”. It involves 57 _____ (draw)inspiration from nature's designs and processes 58 (solve) human problems or improve technology.
is called
谓语动词：时态与语态;主谓一致
drawing
非谓语动词：involve doing sth 包含/需要做某事
非谓语动词：目的状语
to solve
For example,engineers in Canada are studying whale flippers(鳍)because they move so effectively through water.The engineers believe the shape can improve the movement of wind turbines(涡轮机).Similarly,engineers at Mercedes Benz in Germany are using the shape of the boxfish 59 one of their new cars because it makes the car 60 (fast) and more fuel efficient.
in
介词： in 在......里
faster
形容词比较级
for？use ...for... （常做被动 “把.....用于......”）
Velcro (粘扣)is 61 (probable)the most famous example of biomimetics.Most people have some Velcro on 62 item of clothing.It was invented by the Swiss engineer George de Mestral in 1948.He was walking in the countryside 63 he pulled a burr(毛刺)off his trousers.He noticed how well the burr stuck to his clothes so he studied its design.The result was Velcro,which became an 64 _____ (afford) alternative to the traditional zipper.
probably
副词：作状语，修饰动词“is”
an
冠词：an item of （clothing） 一件（衣服）
连词：was/were doing ...when 正在做......这时（突然）...
when
形容词：词性转换
n. choice
affordable
-able，-ible 能够......的；可......的
后缀 词义 examples 后缀 词义 examples
-able，-ible 能够.....的；可......的 vis(see)ible 可视的 recognizable 可认出的；可认可的 -ly -al/-ical 有......性质的 deadly 致命的
functional 功能的；实用的
econom(y)ical 节约的；经济实惠的
-ful 充满.....的 eventful 充满大事的；多变故的 fruitful 丰硕的 -ish stylish 时髦的
bookish 书呆子气的
-ate considerate 考虑周到的 passionate 热情的 -like 像......的 lifelike 逼真的
childlike 孩子般的
-y 充满.....的;有.....倾向的 foggy 有雾的 worthy 值得的 -ary/-ory 与......有关的 imagin(e)ary 想象的
contradictory 对立的
-less 没有......的 priceless 无价的 wireless 无线的 -ic ......的 heroic 英雄的
alcoholic （含）酒精的
-ive adaptive 适应的 addictive 让人上瘾的 -some 令人.......的 awesome 令人敬畏的
bothersome 令人讨厌的
有.....倾向的； -ous 具有.....特性的 mountainous 多山的 poisonous 有毒的
形容词后缀
In conclusion,biomimetics not only has helped to design our world but promises many more 65___________ (possibility).Unfortunately,they might take a long time to develop.This isn't really surprising:it took nature millions of years to design its animals and plants.
possibilities
名词复数：以y结尾的名词变化规则
考点设置：
有提示词（7个） 无提示词（3个）
n. v. adj/adv. prep. conj. art. pron. num.
1 3 3 1 1 1
复数 1谓 2非谓 比较级 adj.→adv. 并列连词when
第二部分 阅读理解-A篇
主题语境：人与社会
语篇类型：应用文
语篇内容：Fareshare国家慈善机构致力于减少食品浪费，将剩余食物分给需要帮助的人，同时捐款者可能有资格货的税金退款。
考查题型：细节理解题（21、22）
推理判断题（23）
第二部分 阅读 – A篇
人与社会
主题语境：人与社会 - 社会服务- 慈善服务
语篇类型：应用文
语篇内容：Fareshare致力于减少食品浪费，
将剩余食物分给需要帮助的人，
同时捐款者可以获得部分税金退
款。
考查题型：细节理解题（21、22）
推理判断题（23）
人与社会
1 The cost of living crisis is causing suffering ...... Families are struggling and don’t know where to turn. Yet while people go hungry, three million tonnes of surplus(剩余的) food is being wasted every year.
2 A FareShare is a national charity working to get that food to people who are struggling — but we need your help. A gift of 90 could provide three meals a day to a family of four for a whole month. Plus, you may be entitled to recover 25p of tax on every 1 you give as gift money.
3 Your gift will help us redistribute food to our network of 8,500 local charities and community groups across the UK. You’ll also help people to access other services and support through these groups, strengthening communities and easing loneliness through food.
21. What is the primary focus of FareShare
A. Providing gifts for families. B. Redistributing surplus food.
C. Organizing festival events. D. Offering tax recovery services.
细节理解题
gift money
在国外的慈善捐赠中，“gift money”并不是一个特定的术语，因为慈善捐赠通常涉及更广泛的概念，包括现金捐赠、物品捐赠、时间捐赠等。当提到“gift money”时，它通常指的是以现金形式进行的慈善捐赠, 这是慈善捐赠中最直接和最简单的方式之一。捐赠者可以直接将现金捐给慈善组织，这些组织通常将这些资金用于支持他们的项目和计划，帮助那些需要帮助的人群。
2 A FareShare is a national charity working to get that food to people who are struggling — but we need your help. A gift of 90 could provide three meals a day to a family of four for a whole month. Plus, you may be entitled to recover 25p of tax on every 1 you give as gift money.
22. What additional benefit will FareShare donors receive
A. They will receive a tax refund.
B. They will help run the local charities.
C. They will be recognized as organizers.
D. They will receive free meals for themselves.
be entitled to (do) sth
to give someone the official right to do or have something 使享有权利，使有资格
Full – time employees are entitled to receive health insurance. 全职雇员都有资格享受健康保险。
recover v.
to get back an amount of money that you have spent or lost 重新获得，收回
Legal action is being taken to recover the money.
正在采取法律措施来收回那笔钱。
细节理解题
1 The cost of living crisis is causing suffering for millions this winter. One in five people are worried about where their next meal will come from. Parents who live near you are burdened with anxiety ......
2 A FareShare is ……
3 Your gift ...... local charities and community groups across the UK. You’ll also help people to access other services and support through these groups, strengthening communities and easing loneliness through food.
4 We’d love to keep you up to date ......
5 To give online, please visit fareshare.org.uk /community1. For more information please scan the QR code.
23. Where does this text probably come from
A. A travel blog. B. A news report.
C. A community noticeboard. D. An entertainment magazine.
推理判断题
文章出处
文章内容标志信息
第二部分 阅读理解-B篇
主题语境：人与自然 - 人与动物 - 弹钢琴疗愈大象 语篇类型：记叙文
语篇内容：音乐家为被救助的大象弹奏钢琴，疗愈
曾经被人类奴役的大象，安抚它们的心
灵，通过音乐再次让大象感受到世界的
美好。
考查题型：细节理解题（24）
推理判断题（25、26）
主旨大意题（27）
Play the piano for rescued Elephants
1 In the 1970s, a new supermarket selling LPs arrived in my hometown and I began devoting my pocket money to acquiring records. I swiftly developed an affection for Beethoven’s Moonlight Sonata, harboring dreams of performing that music myself. Despite the absence of a piano at home, there was one at my grandmother’s care home, where I learned to play Beethoven by ear, with pigeons cooing and farmers working in the fields. It was truly magical.
24. What motivated the author’s early affection for music
A. Exposure to Beethoven’s music.
B. Employment at Elephants World.
C. Attendance at the Royal Academy of Arts.
D. Piano teaching at his grandma’s care home.
细节理解题
expose v. → exposure n.
to make it possible for someone to experience new ideas, ways of life etc 使接触；使体验
expose sb to sth
Some children are never exposed to classical music.
→ exposure to classical music
有些孩子从来没有接触到古典音乐。
harbor v.
to keep bad thoughts, fears, or hopes in your mind for a long time 怀有，心存（不好的想法、恐惧或希望）
He harbored dreams of opening an online shop.
他想上网开店蓄念已久。
She began to harbored doubts over the wisdom of their journey.
她开始对她们的旅行是否明智产生了怀疑。
2 Entering the Royal Academy of Arts at 16 marked the beginning of my artistic journey. In my 30s, I took another significant step in life — marriage. My wife worked at Elephants World, a reserve dedicated to the care of rescued domestic elephants. These elephants have worked for humans all their life and many are blind or disabled from being treated badly, so I wanted to make the effort to carry something heavy myself. For my 50th birthday, my wife successfully persuaded the manager to allow us to bring a piano into the reserve, bringing music to the elephants’ lives.
25. What did the author’s 50th birthday celebration symbolize
A. Personal achievements in music.
B. A combination of music and care.
C. Successful fundraising for the reserve.
D. Recognition for the author’s artistic journey.
细节推断题
奉献
be dedicated to ( doing ) sth
be devoted to ( doing ) sth
be addicted to ( doing ) sth
be committed to ( doing ) sth
be passionate about doing sth
contribute to (doing)sth
......
4 I continue to play for these elephants that run freely in the reserve, despite the constant potential danger. Surprisingly, it’s the moody male elephants who show the most fascination with the music. I firmly believe it has a calming effect. These elephants’ breathing actually slows down when I play, which tells me they are relaxed and happy. I’ve even witnessed elephants seemingly dancing to Beethoven’s tunes. With their exceptional hearing and the ability to sense vibrations(震 动) through their feet, I am convinced that elephants grasp the language of human expression. This serves as a powerful illustration that music serves as a universal language, connecting us all.
26. What role did music play in the lives of the elephants in the reserve
A. Emotional recovery. B. Physical exercise.
C. Financial support. D. Artistic expression.
推理判断题
moody: annoyed or unhappy 情绪不好的，郁郁寡欢的
1 In the 1970s, a new supermarket selling LPs arrived in my hometown and I began devoting my pocket money to acquiring records. I swiftly developed an affection for Beethoven’s Moonlight Sonata, harboring dreams of performing that music myself. Despite the absence of a piano at home, there was one at my grandmother’s care home, where I learned to play Beethoven by ear, with pigeons cooing and farmers working in the fields. It was truly magical.
2 Entering the Royal Academy of Arts at 16 marked the beginning of my artistic journey. In my 30s, I took another significant step in life — marriage. My wife worked at Elephants World, a reserve dedicated to the care of rescued domestic elephants. These elephants have worked for humans all their life and many are blind or disabled from being treated badly, so I wanted to make the effort to carry something heavy myself. For my 50th birthday, my wife successfully persuaded the manager to allow us to bring a piano into the reserve, bringing music to the elephants’ lives.
3 Initially, when I started playing, it was hard to hear the piano above the sounds of nature and the elephants chewing grass. However, everything changed when a blind elephant ceased eating and tuned into my playing. It struck me that this elephant, trapped in a world of darkness, had a profound love for music. From that moment on, there was no longer any concern about disturbing their peace. We occasionally film these performances, and now, we proudly have nearly 700,000 YouTube subscribers.
4 I continue to play for these elephants that run freely in the reserve, despite the constant potential danger. Surprisingly, it’s the moody male elephants who show the most fascination with the music. I firmly believe it has a calming effect. These elephants’ breathing actually slows down when I play, which tells me they are relaxed and happy. I’ve even witnessed elephants seemingly dancing to Beethoven’s tunes. With their exceptional hearing and the ability to sense vibrations(震 动) through their feet, I am convinced that elephants grasp the language of human expression. This serves as a powerful illustration that music serves as a universal language, connecting us all.
27. Which of the following can be a suitable title for the text
A. Save the Mistreated Elephants B. Male Elephants: Moody and Musical
C. Play the Piano for Rescued Elephants D. Elephants: Animals of Sharp Hearing
主旨大意题
play the piano
bring music to the elephants’ lives
have a calming effect on elephants
a reserve dedicated to the care of rescued domestic elephants
music connects us all and elephants
定位主题句
提炼关键词
扩 范围
缩
阅读理解-C篇
主题语境：人与自然
语篇类型：科普说明文
语篇内容：讲述了在农业实践中，农民将磁铁放入牛的胃里，防止“硬件病”发生。
考查题型：细节理解（2）
推理判断（2）
细节理解题
While we aim to avoid any appearance of baseless theories, it is noteworthy to observe the long standing practice of putting magnets(磁铁) in cows, a phenomenon that has been carefully unfolding for years. Why are farmers putting magnets in cows
Known as cow magnets, the devices are placed inside cattle to deal with “hardware disease”. Hardware Disease occurs after an animal eats a metallic object that then makes a hole in the wall of the reticulum, the second stomach room in ruminant animals(反刍动物). This issue arises from the natural eating behaviors of these ruminants, similar to a person at an unlimited food event—quickly and eagerly large bites without sufficient chewing. This fast paced feeding approach makes them tend to unintentionally consume metal pieces in their food, including broken farm machinery parts, nails and wires used in fencing, for instance.
Metal objects entering the reticulum may result in infections, increased body temperatures, digestive problems, and unease for the animals. To address hardware disease, the main strategy is to prevent metal from entering the cattle’s diet. Farmers have also adopted the method of placing cow magnets into the stomach using either a stomach tube or a balling gun. The cow magnet attracts such objects and prevents them from becoming fixed in the animal’s tissue. These magnets, once positioned, remain within the animals throughout their lifespan, only being removed after death when the cows pass away or are processed for meat.
28. Why are magnets fed to cows
A. To change feeding habits.
B. To prevent hardware disease.
C. To improve the milk quality.
D. To enhance digestive system.
细节理解题
While we aim to avoid any appearance of baseless theories, it is noteworthy to observe the long standing practice of putting magnets(磁铁) in cows, a phenomenon that has been carefully unfolding for years. Why are farmers putting magnets in cows
Known as cow magnets, the devices are replaced inside cattle to deal with “hardware disease”. Hardware Disease occurs after an animal eats a metallic object that then makes a hole in the wall of the reticulum, the second stomach room in ruminant animals(反刍动物). This issue arises from the natural eating behaviors of these ruminants, similar to a person at an unlimited food event—quickly and eagerly large bites without sufficient chewing. This fast paced feeding approach makes them tend to unintentionally consume metal pieces in their food, including broken farm machinery parts, nails and wires used in fencing, for instance.
29. What is the main cause of hardware disease in ruminant animals
A. Eating without chewing.
B. Taking magnets by mistake.
C. Sufficient chewing hard food.
D. Swallowing metals accidentally.
30. What is the author’s purpose in writing the passage
A. To describe the historical practice of putting magnets in cows.
B. To deny the adoption of cow magnets to enhance cattle health.
C. To discuss the influence of a mild magnetic field on milk quality.
D. To explain the reason for using magnets to prevent hardware disease.
推理判断题
W While we aim to avoid any appearance of baseless theories, it is noteworthy to observe the long standing practice of putting magnets(磁铁) in cows, a phenomenon that has been carefully unfolding for years. Why are farmers putting magnets in cows
Known as cow magnets, the devices a replaced inside cattle to deal with “hardware disease”. Hardware Disease occurs after an animal eats a metallic object that then makes a hole in the wall of the reticulum, the second stomach room in ruminant animals(反刍动物). This issue arises from the natural eating behaviors of these ruminants, similar to a person at an unlimited food event—quickly and eagerly large bites without sufficient chewing. This fast paced feeding approach makes them tend to unintentionally consume metal pieces in their food, including broken farm machinery parts, nails and wires used in fencing, for instance.
Metal objects entering the reticulum may result in infections, increased body temperatures, digestive problems, and unease for the animals. To address hardware disease, the main strategy is to prevent metal from entering the cattle’s diet. Farmers have also adopted the method of placing cow magnets into the stomach using either a stomach tube or a balling gun. The cow magnet attracts such objects and prevents them from becoming fixed in the animal’s tissue. These magnets, once positioned, remain within the animals throughout their lifespan, only being removed after death when the cows pass away or are processed for meat.
Moseley, a Veterinary Medicine professor, states in a hardware disease resource, “The magnet gathers foreign metallic objects, reducing the risk of making a hole in the reticulum.” Research shows a mild magnetic field affects a cow’s small blood pathways, improving circulation and aiding recovery without significant impact on the cow or milk quality.
31. What might be a logical continuation of the passage
A. Exploring more potential benefits of cow magnets.
B. Investigating the broader applications of magnets.
C. Discussing the alternative methods of caring for cows.
D. Evaluating the long-term effects of magnets on animals.
推理判断题
W Metal objects entering the reticulum may result in infections, increased body temperatures, digestive problems, and unease for the animals. To address hardware disease, the main strategy is to prevent metal from entering the cattle’s diet. Farmers have also adopted the method of placing cow magnets into the stomach using either a stomach tube or a balling gun. The cow magnet attracts such objects and prevents them from becoming fixed in the animal’s tissue. These magnets, once positioned, remain within the animals throughout their lifespan, only being removed after death when the cows pass away or are processed for meat.
Moseley, a Veterinary Medicine professor, states in a hardware disease resource, “The magnet gathers foreign metallic objects, reducing the risk of making a hole in the reticulum.” Research shows a mild magnetic field affects a cow’s small blood pathways, improving circulation and aiding recovery without significant impact on the cow or milk quality.
阅读理解-D篇
主题语境：人与社会
语篇类型：说明文
语篇内容：格拉斯哥大学研究人员结合人工智能和量子技术，成功研发激光相机，用于远程检测心跳。
考查题型：细节理解（2）
段落主旨（1）
词义猜测（1）
32. What can the laser camera be used for
A. Improving the usage of stethoscope.
B. Measuring blood pressure remotely.
C. Recording images of the human throat.
D. Detecting a person’s heartbeat from a distance.
细节理解题
Glasgow University researchers have created a laser(激光) camera using AI and quantum technologies to remotely detect a person’s heartbeat, potentially changing health monitoring. Professor Faccio imagines various applications, such as setting up this technology in shopping malls or fixing laser heart monitors in homes. These monitors could be part of an extensive system tracking different health aspects, such as blood pressure and slight changes in movement, indicating early signs of conditions like Alzheimer’s.
33. What does paragraph 3 focus on as for this system
A. How it works.
B. Where it is used.
C. Whom it benefits.
D. What it is composed of.
段落主旨题
The system developed by Faccio and his team involves high-speed cameras which can record images at speeds of 2, 000 frames per second. A laser beam is shone on to the skin of a person’s throat and the reflections are used to measure exactly how much their skin is rising and falling as their main artery(动脉) expands and contracts as blood is forced through it. These changes involve movements of only a few billionths of a metre.
be made up of
34. Which is closest in meaning to “acuity” in paragraph 4
A. Consistency. B. Complexity
C. Sensitivity. D. Intensity.
词义猜测题
The system developed by Faccio and his team involves high-speed cameras which can record images at speeds of 2, 000 frames per second. A laser beam is shone on to the skin of a person’s throat and the reflections are used to measure exactly how much their skin is rising and falling as their main artery(动脉) expands and contracts as blood is forced through it. These changes involve movements of only a few billionths of a metre.
Such acuity is striking, though on its own the tracking of these tiny changes would not be enough to track a heartbeat. Other, much larger movements occur on a person’s chest—from their breathing, for example—which would flood signals from their heartbeat.
35. What role does AI play in this system
A. To measure skin movements.
B. To recognize heartbeat vibrations.
C. To record images at high speeds.
D. To shine a laser beam on the skin.
细节理解题
“That is where AI comes in,” Faccio said. “We use advanced computing systems to separate out everything except the vibrations caused by a person’s heartbeat. We know the frequency range of the human heartbeat, and the AI focuses on that. The prime use of this technology—which we hope to have ready next year—will be to measure heartbeats easily and quickly outside hospitals. The benefits could be considerable.”
第三部分 语言运用--第一节 (完型填空)
主题语境： “人与自我——做人与做事——优秀品行与正确的人生态度”
语篇类型：记叙文
语篇内容：本文讲述作者母亲的一次与卖菜小贩讨价还价的往事，母亲采用的价格谈判策略强硬且坚持，但是当小贩身体不适时，母亲又善意地给予帮助。母亲前后在处理问题上不同的方式与态度，给作者传递了不一样的处世哲学。
Structure:
Para 1---2 “tough in bargaining ”
Para 3 “kind in offering food ”
Para 4 “the philosophy of trading and kindness”
(去)拿来;找来
提议，建议;求婚
bid:an offer by a person to pay money for ...（买方的）出价
counter-: against; opposite反对;相反
counter-bid: 还价
price；开价;出价;报价
处理;照料,关怀
适应
get back the money收回钱
焦虑;忧虑地
贪婪地
因绝望而不顾一切地
坚持;固守
谈及;涉及;查阅
理论;原理;原则
strategy: a planned series of actions to achieve sth....(为实现某目标的)计谋;策略;行动计划
theory: a set of ideas; the principles on which sth. is based 理论;原则
make a deal 达成交易
plan or organize 安排;筹备
check or inspect
check: to look at sth. closely to make sure it is in good condition or acceptable 查看;检查
inspect: for a professional/official to check sth. as a job (官员出于职责) 检查;检验
审查;重新考虑
making careful judgements
审慎判断的;有判断力的,挑剔的
with a critical eye 用挑剔的眼光
合乎情理的;符合逻辑的
as soon as 一..就....;一旦...
not able to balance 眩晕
(应对问题的)方式;态度
姿势;表明意图的姿态,表示
介入;干涉
承诺;献身,奉献
while 时间状语从句内需使用延续性动词
第四部分 写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节 (满分15分)
你校英文报正在开展以“The Understanding of Going to School”为题的讨论。请根据图片写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.简要描述图片；
2.你的看法。
“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything ”
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第四部分 写作-第一节 应用文写作
体裁：
人称：
要点及时态：
审 题
应用文—— 投稿
第一人称 第三人称

The Understanding of Going to School
漫画（图片）作文
2022 全国乙卷
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．学习活动状况描述；
2．简单评论；
3．你的建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently a survey about how to learn English beyond the classroom has been conducted. As can be clearly seen from the statistics, appreciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50% who choose to watch movies as a way of English learning. Reading English books proves to be the less popular ways making up 18%, together with visiting English learning websites, taking up 12% .
It turns out that students attach greater importance to interest and entertainment instead of traditional approaches such as reading books when learning English.
However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it is one of the best ways to increase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding of grammar. Therefore, students become best English learners quickly.
描述图表（图片）
简单评论
个人建议
第四部分 写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节 (满分15分)
你校英文报正在开展以“The Understanding of Going to School”为题的讨论。请根据图片写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.简要描述图片；
2.你的看法。
“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything ”
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第四部分 写作-第一节 应用文写作
体裁：
人称：
要点及时态：
审 题
应用文—— 投稿
第一人称 第三人称
描述图片——一般现在时
（简单评论）——一般现在时
个人看法——一般现在时 一般将来时
The Understanding of Going to School
漫画（图片）作文
描述图片
1. From the cartoon/picture we can see that…
2. As is vividly shown/indicated in the picture, …
3. This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…
4. Look at the picture. It is (a picture) about…
简单评论
1.What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society./ What it illustrates is the problem of …, which is a common phenomenon in today’s society.
2. Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.
3. After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today’s society, …
4. It reveals a shocking truth that ...
个人看法
In my opinion/view, /As far as I’m concerned,/ From my point of view,/From my perspective, ...
列 纲
Reference：英语学习｜新高考英语漫画作文写作技巧讲解+范文模板 Milly的知识加油站
a mother is sending her son to go to school. However, the youngster responds,"Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything ”
a pupil asks his mother why he is going to school since his phone already knows everything．
个人看法
√上学的意义
√ 与使用手机相比上学的优势
× 单纯列举使用手机的弊端
A possible version:
The Understanding of Going to School
As is vividly shown in the picture, a mother is sending her son to go to school. However, the youngster responds,"Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything "
Apparently，the picture illustrates that some students highly depend on their phones，overlooking the importance of school study.
As far as I am concerned,despite great convenience brought by phones, we need cope with various situations without phones at hand. Besides, It’s the real face-to-face interaction that matters, as well as knowledge.Therefore, going to school is of great benefit to us. (96 words)
描述图表（图片）
简单评论
个人看法
英语试题读后续写讲评
太原市2023～2024学年第二学期山西省一模
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I recently went SKYDIVING! It's something I've been talking about doing since last year, but to be honest, it was planned super last minute... like within a matter of a few weeks.
It all started when I ran into a friend of mine walking home from a local festival earlier this summer. We started chatting about what we'd both been up to this summer and somehow got on the subject of both being interested in going skydiving someday. My friend, Denny, said he'd be on board if I really wanted to schedule a jump and I was so excited to finally have someone to go with!
Later that night, we texted back and forth and decided on our jump date a few weeks in thefuture. When the very Sunday came, we were both FULL of excitement for our first skydiving experience. He had been bungee jumping before and I'd done my fair share of zip-lining, but neither of us figured that either of those of experiences would prepare us for what we had in store.
The drive there didn 't happen without a slight delay. As soon as we got off the through-way on to the exit towards the small town where the skydiving facility was，Denny's car started to make a strange noise, forcing us to pull over on a busy interstatc(州际公路).
Only 20 minutes away from WNY Skydiving (the place where we were going), we discovered we had a flat tyre(轮胎). At that point, I felt prelly delealed. Our scheduled time was 4 pm—the last appointment time of the day — so l figured they wouldn 't be able to wait for or delay the operations for us since we were racing against the light.
We called American Automobile Association (AAA) and hoped for the best.
We were informed we were the final jump of the night...the “sunset jump”.
第四部分 写作-第二节 读后续写
主题语境：人与自我 --生活与学习
--丰富自我，积极的生活态度
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时、过去完成时
关键能力：读写能力
评价标准：
·续写内容：创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。
·语言表达：使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
·篇章结构：上下文的衔接性和全文的连贯性。
1：落点：浏览所给信息，确定大意与主题
2：重点：梳理已知段落，确定故事线和情感线
3：突破点：借助段落开头，确定续写内容
4：亮点：刻画细节冲突，使语言表达连贯
5：基本点：做到前后呼应，使文章衔接自然，逻辑合理顺畅
1：落点：浏览所给信息，确定大意与主题
I recently went SKYDIVING! It's something I've been talking about doing since last year, but to be honest, it was planned super last minute... like within a matter of a few weeks.
It all started when I ran into a friend of mine walking home from a local festival earlier this summer. We started chatting about what we'd both been up to this summer and somehow got on the subject of both being interested in going skydiving someday. My friend, Denny, said he'd be on board if I really wanted to schedule a jump and I was so excited to finally have someone to go with!
Later that night, we texted back and forth and decided on our jump date a few weeks in thefuture. When the very Sunday came, we were both FULL of excitement for our first skydiving experience. He had been bungee jumping before and I'd done my fair share of zip-lining, but neither of us figured that either of those of experiences would prepare us for what we had in store.
The drive there didn 't happen without a slight delay. As soon as we got off the through-way on to the exit towards the small town where the skydiving facility was，Denny's car started to make a strange noise, forcing us to pull over on a busy interstate(州际公路).
Only 20 minutes away from WNY Skydiving (the place where we were going), we discovered we had a flat tyre(轮胎). At that point, I felt pretty defeated. Our scheduled time was 4 pm—the last appointment time of the day — so l figured they wouldn 't be able to wait for or delay the operations for us since we were racing against the light.
who what when where why how
文章大意：I went SKYDIVING with my friend. But our car was broken on the way to WNY Skydiving and we would be late. 表达主题：We finally made it and had an unforgettable experience after twists and turns.
on the way to WNY
Skydiving
Our car was broken and we would be late.
2：重点：梳理已知段落，确定故事线和情感线
Beginning
Rising
Climax
Ending
Falling
I planned to go SKYDRIVING. And my friend, Denny, decided to be on board.
We decided on our jump date and sef off.
We pulled over on a busy interstate and we had a flat tyre.
We called AAA and hoped for the best.
We were informed we were the final jump of the night...the “sunset jump”.
excited and full of expectation
expected
and planned
defeated


conflict
solution
negative
positive
Our car was broken.
We would be late.
Our car was well-repaired.
We went to WNY Skydiving in time.
We finished Skydiving successfully.
I was defeated.
I was excited and joyful.
I made it.
I was a bit afraid and nervous.
Action
Response
We called AAA.
AAA came to us and helped us repair our car.
We were informed we were the final jump...
We called WNY Skydiving and told them our situations.
伏笔： I recently went SKYDIVING!（para1）
but neither of us figured that either of those of experience would prepare us for what we had in store...（para3）
The drive there didn’t happen without a slight delay. i（para4）
3：突破点：借助段落开头，确定续写内容
We called American Automobile Association (AAA) and hoped for the best.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We were informed we were the final jump of the night...the “sunset jump”.________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
①AAA told us they would send a mechanic to help us to repair the car.
②We arrived at WNY Skydiving at the very moment before the scheduled time.
③Full of joy and appreciation, I finished skydiving under the help of the workers.
④I made it. What an unforgettable experience I had.
①
②
④
③
I recently went SKYDIVING! It's something I've been talking about doing since last year, but to be honest, it was planned super last minute... like within a matter of a few weeks.
It all started when I ran into a friend of mine walking home from a local festival earlier this summer. We started chatting about what we'd both been up to this summer and somehow got on the subject of both being interested in going skydiving someday. My friend, Denny, said he'd be on board if I really wanted to schedule a jump and I was so excited to finally have someone to go with!
Later that night, we texted back and forth and decided on our jump date a few weeks in thefuture. When the very Sunday came, we were both FULL of excitement for our first skydiving experience. He had been bungee jumping before and I'd done my fair share of zip-lining, but neither of us figured that either of those of experiences would prepare us for what we had in store.
The drive there didn 't happen without a slight delay. As soon as we got off the through-way on to the exit towards the small town where the skydiving facility was，Denny's car started to make a strange noise, forcing us to pull over on a busy interstatc(州际公路).
Only 20 minutes away from WNY Skydiving (the place where we were going), we discovered we had a flat tyre(轮胎). At that point, I felt pretty defeated. Our scheduled time was 4 pm—the last appointment time of the day — so l figured they wouldn 't be able to wait for or delay the operations for us since we were racing against the light.
语言地道
动作链
情感描写准确而丰富
be up to 做某事或参与某事 on board参与某个特定活动或计划
get on the subject of谈论……的话题 in store即将到来别的，准备好的
pull over靠边停车 flat 没气的，瘪的
4：亮点：刻画细节冲突，使语言表达连贯
风景描写
5：基本点：做到前后呼应，使文章衔接自然，逻辑合理顺畅
We called American Automobile Association(AAA) and hoped for the best. AAA told us a mechanic would be out in about an hour to fix the tyre. Afraid of our tickets being canceled, we also called WNY Skydiving and let them know our difficulty. Luckily，they were SUPER accommodating and said we could still come despite the delay. Thankfully, the mechanic showed up about 15 minutes later, way ahead of schedule, and we were on our way 10 minutes later. We arrived at WNY Skydiving at the very moment before the scheduled time.
We were informed we were the final jump of the night... the“sunset jump" . I was never really scared during the whole afternoon, but when they told us it was our turn, my heart definitely started to beat a litle faster. Knowing my instructor had over 1500 jumps under his belt made me feel incredibly safe throughout the experience. And now to answer the question...“Would l jump again ”Yes. Tomorrow, if I could. In fact I plan to go back in a few weeks for my second jump. Overwhelmed by wild joy, l shouted out loud, "I made it!”
solution
positive
5：基本点：做到前后呼应，使文章衔接自然，逻辑合理顺畅
We called American Automobile Association(AAA) and hoped for the best. AAA told us a mechanic would be out in about an hour to fix the tyre. Afraid of our tickets being canceled, we also called WNY Skydiving and let them know our difficulty. Luckily，they were SUPER accommodating and said we could still come despite the delay. Thankfully, the mechanic showed up about 15 minutes later, way ahead of schedule, and we were on our way 10 minutes later. We arrived at WNY Skydiving at the very moment before the scheduled time.
We were informed we were the final jump of the night... the“sunset jump" . I was never really scared during the whole afternoon, but when they told us it was our turn, my heart definitely started to beat a litle faster. Knowing my instructor had over 1500 jumps under his belt made me feel incredibly safe throughout the experience. And now to answer the question...“Would l jump again ”Yes. Tomorrow, if I could. In fact I plan to go back in a few weeks for my second jump. Overwhelmed by wild joy, l shouted out loud, "I made it!”
语言地道
动作链
情感描写准确而丰富
形容词作状语，动名词作主语，非谓语作状语
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