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Unit 3 Welcome to Sunshine Town!
单元话题满分范文必背
1．为了激发同学们热爱家乡的情感，学校英语角开展题为”My hometown”的征文活动。假如你是李文，请根据以下表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇文章参加活动。
概述 现代化城市，空气清新，每天听到鸟语；
位置 我家离市中心不远，乘坐地铁到市中心只要20分钟；
在三楼，有自己的卧室；最爱……，因为……
邻居 ……
评价 ……
注意：
1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My hometown
I’m Li Wen. I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown.
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【答案】例文
My hometown
I’m Li Wen. I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is a modern city, which has a long history. There the air is fresh, and we can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers every day. My home is not far from the city center, and it only takes 20 minutes to get to the city center by subway. On the third floor, I have my own bedroom. My favorite thing to do is reading books because I can learn a lot of knowledge from it. My neighbors are very friendly and helpful. I love my hometown. I hope you can come and visit here one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题：介绍自己的家乡；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从环境、地理位置、邻居等方面展开说明；
第三步，书写结语。评价并表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth乐意做某事
②not far from离……不远
③a lot of许多
[高分句型]
①My hometown is a modern city, which has along history.（定语从句）
②I hope you can come and visit here one day.（宾语从句）
2．假如你是王强，你打算邀请你的英国笔友Ryan来你的家乡扬州游玩。请根据以下要点提示用英语写一封邀请信。要点如下：
1. What is your hometown like （至少两点）
2. What do you think of the people in your hometown （至少举两例）
3. What can you and Ryan do together in your hometown （至少两点）
注意：
1. 参考要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得透露校名、姓名等信息。
3. 词数100左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yangzhou.
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Hope to see you soon in Yangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【答案】例文：
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yangzhou.
Yangzhou is a modern city with a long history. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
The people in Yangzhou are very nice and helpful. There’re many volunteers in the park, and they are always ready to help you. If I’m not at home, my neighbours will help me to look after my house.
I’ll show you around the city when you come here. I’ll take you to visit the gardens and try some delicious food in Dongguan Street. We can also go shopping and buy some presents. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Yangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍扬州是什么样的；
第二步，介绍你觉得扬州的人怎么样；
第三步，最后表达你和Ryan在家乡能一起做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest风景名胜
②be ready to do sth乐意做某事
③show sb around带某人参观
[高分句型]
①If I’m not at home, my neighbours will help me to look after my house.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I’ll show you around the city when you come here.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．假如你是Jason，请你向刚来无锡的外教Nick介绍下这座城市。请根据下面导图中的信息，用英语写一篇介绍无锡的短文。
要求：1.内容须包括所有要点，条理清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯，省略号处请适当发挥；
2.词数70个左右，文章的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nick,
Welcome to Wuxi. I would like to tell you something about this wonderful city.
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I hope you will enjoy your life here.
Yours,
Jason
【答案】Dear Nick,
Welcome to Wuxi. I would like to tell you something about this wonderful city.
Wuxi is near shanghai and has an area of 4,600 square kilometers. It is a garden city. Every day, you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. In Wuxi, you can go to any place you like by underground. A lot of families also have their own cars. You can try different kinds of food here. I love steamed buns best. I think Wuxi is really a good place.
I hope you will enjoy your life here.
Yours,
Jason
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍无锡的地理位置和环境；
第二步，介绍无锡的交通和饮食；
第三步， 介绍自己的感受，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②by underground坐地铁
③A lot of许多
[高分句型]
① I love steamed buns best.（形容词最高级）
②I think Wuxi is really a good place.（宾语从句）
4．假设你是Lisa，想邀请交流生 Sandy来你家。依据下面表格提供的信息，写一篇邀请信，介绍你的城市、社区。
城市 1. 古老城市，历史悠久，鸟语花香，…… 2. 旅游胜地，参观园林，品尝美食，……
社区 1. 离市中心不远，乘公交只要10分钟 2. 邻居善良友好，各有技艺，乐于助人（举例……）　
感受 ……
1. 文章内容必须包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 对省略部分作1-2句话的合理发挥；
3. 词数不少于 100 词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sandy,
How are you going I’m writing to invite you to my hometown, Yangzhou. ________________
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Welcome to my hometown! I think you’ll have a good time here.
Yours,
Lisa
【答案】例文
Dear Sandy,
How are you going I’m writing to invite you to my hometown, Yangzhou. Now let me introduce my city and community. Yangzhou is an ancient city with a long history. It is a very beautiful city with clean water and green trees. Every day, you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are many places to visit. When you come to Yangzhou, I will take you to visit the gardens and enjoy the delicious food.
My community is not far from the city center. It only takes 10 minutes by bus to get there. My neighbor is kind and friendly. They each have their own skills and are willing to help others. Once, my bike broke down. A neighbor volunteered to help me repair it. If you come to our city, you will feel at home.
Welcome to my hometown! I think you’ll have a good time here.
Yours,
Lisa
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。邀请Sandy来我的家乡，让我介绍我的城市和社区；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，分别介绍我的城市和社区，最后写住在这个城市的感受。
第三步，结尾。欢迎来到我的家乡！我想你在这里会玩得很开心。（文章已给出）
[亮点词汇]
Let’s do sth.让我们做某事
an ancient city with a long history有着悠久历史的古城
take sb. to do sth.带领某人做某事
be willing to help others乐于助人
break down发生故障，出毛病
[高分句型]
When you come to Yangzhou, I will take you to visit the gardens and enjoy the delicious food.（时间状语从句）
It only takes 10 minutes by bus to get there.（it固定句型）
If you come to our city, you will feel at home.（if引导的条件状语从句）
Now let me introduce my city and community.（祈使句）
5．请根据提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你的家乡。
要求：
1）文中不能出现真实姓名；
2）必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥。句子通顺，语法正确，书写整洁；
3）80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My hometown
I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Welcome to my hometown!
【答案】例文：
My hometown
I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown is Yancheng. It’s in the north of Jiangsu. It’s a beautiful and modern city. People here are kind and friendly. There are many flowers and trees in the city so the air is very fresh. In the morning, we can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are also many interesting things to do here. You can do some shopping, eat delicious food and enjoy local opera here. Besides, you can visit some famous places of interest in your spare time.
Welcome to my hometown!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的位置以及居民；
第二步，介绍家乡的环境以及可以做的活动；
第三步，欢迎大家来自己的家乡。
[亮点词汇]
①hear sb do sth听到某人做某事
②place of interest风景名胜
③besides此外
[高分句型]
There are many flowers and trees in the city so the air is very fresh.（there be句型）
6．请根据下列提示，写一篇以“My hometown”为题的宣传稿，让更多的人了解我们美丽的家乡。
家乡总体情况 1. 沭阳一个美丽的现代化城市，因花而闻名。 2. 城市干净，空气清新，到处是鲜花和绿树。
个人住所 1. 住在城中心的一所新公寓。 2. 城区有几个大型购物中心，可以买到各种各样的东西。 3. 公寓附近有一个公园，可以晨跑锻炼。 4. 人们友善，互相帮助
感受 ……（自拟）
注意：词数70左右；不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My Hometown
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【答案】例文
My hometown
Shuyang is a beautiful modern city. The city is clean, the air is fresh, and there are flowers and green trees everywhere.
I live in a flat in the centre of the city. There is a big shopping center nearby. I can buy all kinds of things. There is a park near my flat where I can run and exercise in the morning. The people here are friendly and help each other.
I am very happy to live in Shuyang.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为宣传稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据表格内容写一篇关于家乡的宣传稿。学生不要遗漏表格中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍家乡总体情况；
第二步，具体介绍个人住所；
第三步，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①live in住在
②all kinds of各种各样的
③each other互相
[高分句型]
①There is a park near my flat where I can run and exercise in the morning.（定语从句）
7．Mary是一位来自英国的交换生，她将在你们学校待半个月，你打算趁“五一”假期带她参观一下苏州。请根据下面所给的要点介绍苏州：
要点：
①苏州占地8000多平方公里，离上海不远，乘火车需要一个小时左右；
②这里空气新鲜，能闻到花香，听到鸟叫；
③在这里你可以参观园林，吃到美味的食物，还能欣赏精彩的昆曲（Kunqu opera）；
④人们喜欢生活在这里，我觉得……
要求：
①文章内容要包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
②对第4要点的省略号部分作1 - 2句话的合理发挥；
③词数在90词左右，开头给出的内容不算字数。
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou. Suzhou is an old city. It is near Shanghai. Suzhou covers an area of more than 8000 square kilometers and is not far from Shanghai. It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.
There’re a lot of parks in it. The air here is fresh, you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. A lot of visitors come to visit Suzhou every year and they have great fun here. You can visit the gardens. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. You can also enjoy wonderful Kunqu opera.
People all enjoy living here. I think you will like staying here too. I hope Suzhou will get more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要在文中介绍自己的家乡苏州的相关信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍苏州的地理位置和面积；
第二步，介绍苏州的景点、环境、美食以及特色昆曲；
第三步，总结全文，讲述自己对苏州的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cover an area of... 占地……
②It takes sb time to do sth 花费某人多少时间做某事
③all kinds of 许多种
④have great fun 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.（动词不定式作主语）
②I think you will like staying here too.（think后跟省略that的宾语从句）
8．假如你是Dustin，打算向你的朋友Lily介绍你的家乡苏州。请根据下面内容提示和要求，写一篇英语书信，词数约90词，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
1. 介绍家乡苏州的地理位置和风土人情。
2. 赞美苏州的自然和人文环境。
3. 分享你在苏州可以做的一些有意义的事情。
4. 可以适当发挥，信中不得提及个人真实姓名及校名。
Dear Lily,
I'm glad to tell you something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my hometown!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Dustin
【答案】 Suzhou is my hometown. It’s one of the biggest cities in Eastern China. It is in the southeast of Jiangsu Province. It has over 2,500 years of rich history. It is a famous ancient capital, where people live by rivers with the bridges everywhere. So it’s called “Venice of the East” or “Venice of China”. It’s famous for the canals, stone bridges and beautiful scenery. It has also been an important center for China’s silk industry. You can come here to visit Suzhou Museum and Taihu Lake. You can also enjoy Kunqu Opera here. Suzhou is a good place to go shopping. There are many big supermarkets and famous e here and enjoy yourself. I am looking forward to your coming and I will show you around it.
【详解】题干解读：本文需要介绍苏州的地理位置、风土人情、以及自然和人文环境。一定抓住它的特点。本文还要写出苏州可以做的一些有意义的事情。这些有意义的事情也要结合它的上述特点。
写作指导：1. 明确文章结构。先介绍苏州的地理位置、风土人情、以及自然和人文环境，再介绍可以做的一些有意义的事情。2. 明确人称时态。介绍苏州用第三人称“it”，介绍在苏州可以做的一些有意义的事情时，可以用第二人称。时态就用一般现在时。3.常用的短语或句式：in the southeast of, it’s called…, It’s famous for…, You can+动原。
9．请以“My hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点如下：
1. 我的家乡是一座美丽的现代化城市，占地约26万平方英里；
2. 开车到上海只需1个小时，每天都有公交车到市中心；
3. 安静，空气新鲜，能听到鸟叫，闻到花香；
4. 这里的博物馆有许多艺术品可看，游客可以全面了解中国历史；
5. 我很幸运能够住在这个城市，如果你来，我将会很开心地带你参观家乡。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语言规范；
2. 80词左右
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【答案】例文
My hometown
My hometown is a modern and beautiful city. It has an area of about 260,000 square miles. It takes us only one hour to drive to Shanghai. There are buses to the city centre every day.
It is quiet and has fresh air. We can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers. There are lots of works of art to see in the museums here. Visitors can learn all about China’s history.
I am lucky to live in this city. I will be very happy to show you around my hometown if you come here.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My hometown”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍家乡的概况，包括面积和交通等；第二段介绍家乡的环境，景点等；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．假如你是王林，想要邀请李平来你的家乡镇江游玩。请根据以下表格中所提供信息，写一封英文信并向他介绍你的家乡。
概况 占地面积超过3800平方公里。
环境 青山绿水，鸟语花香，是一座美丽且现代化的城市。
风土人情 1. 有许多名胜古迹，如金山、焦山和北固山。 2. 市中心有许多大型购物中心、电影院等。 3. 也以美食而闻名，……
个人住所 一个城镇的小区里，高楼耸立，邻里友好。
附近设施 一个公园，几家超市和餐馆。
闲暇活动 散步、购物、享受美食。
个人感受 ……（一至两点）
注意事项：
1. 信中需包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数在80字左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ping,
I’m writing to invite you to my hometown. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to see you soon.
Yours
Wang Lin
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Li Ping,
I’m writing to invite you to my hometown. I live in a city named Zhenjiang. It has an area of more than 3,800 square kilometers. Also, it is a beautiful and modern city with green mountains and clear water. And there are many colorful flowers and all kinds of birds. Besides, there are many famous places of interest such as Jinshan mountain, Jiaoshan Mountain and Beigu Mountain. There are also many big shopping malls and theatres in it. The food here is famous too, especially the vinegar which is famous around the country.
I live in a community of a town, where there are many tall buildings and neighbors here are very kind. There is a park, several supermarkets and some restaurants. When I’m free, I often go for a walk in the park, go shopping in the supermarket and enjoy nice food in the restaurants.
It is really a good place to live and I feel happy to live here.
I hope to see you soon.
Yours
Wang Lin
【详解】题干解读：题目要求给李平写一封信介绍你的故乡——镇江，要求包含表格中所有要点，可适当发挥。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用4段落格式，第一段：介绍家乡的环境和风土人情；第二段：介绍自己居住环境和平时的休闲活动；第三段：讲述自己的感受；第四段：客套话语，期盼很快见到李平。

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