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(共25张PPT)
Writing—A Life Story
SUCCESS
UNIT 2
Read the article and choose the best answer.
1.Why was Lang Ping named “Iron Hammer”？
A.Because she played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
B.Because she played volleyball in a strong and powerful style.
C.Because she led her team to win a series of success.
D.Because she played volleyball with a hammer in her hand.
Activity 1　Read for some details.
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2.When Lang Ping was a coach， .
A.she first worked as a coach for China’s national team
B.she went to America in 1995
C.the China women’s national team was very strong in the 1990s
D.the China women’s national team won the gold medal in the 2015
World Cup
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3.Which is NOT the reason why people like Lang Ping
A.She was committed to volleyball career.
B.She has contributed a lot to the volleyball sport.
C.She has improved the relationship between China and Italy.
D.She took a positive attitude to what she met and was ready to take on
challenges.
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4.How does the author introduce Lang Ping
A.By time order.
B.By giving examples.
C.By giving comments.
D.By introducing her contributions.
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Ⅰ.Match the main idea with each paragraph.
Activity 2　Read for the structures.
Ⅱ.Fill in the blanks according to the article.
introduction
Important life
experiences
Major awards/achievements
comments
Ⅰ.To write a life story of a person，we should introduce some special or typical information of him/her in an order of time.Read the passage again and find out the time points and what happened to him/her at that time.
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Activity 3　Read for some good sentences.
答案　①Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
②Lang Ping was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics，the 1982 World Championship and the 1981 and 1985 World Cups.
③After retiring as an athlete in 1986 she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
④In 1995，she returned to become the coach of the women’s national team when the team was struggling.
⑤Under her leadership，the team came back to the top，winning the 2015 World Cup.
⑥That year，Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards.
⑦She was also named “Touching China Personality” of 2016.
Ⅱ.Find out some typical phrases describing Lang Ping in the passage.
答案　①one of China’s most recognised athletes
②the most popular figure
③strong and powerful playing style
④her positive attitude and her ability to take on challenges
⑤successful as a volleyball coach
⑥commitment to Chinese volleyball
⑦the Best Coach
⑧huge influence on the sport of volleyball
写作 指导
本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物传记。在描写人物时，我们可以通过以下三个部分来展开：
第一部分：先总体介绍人物，然后介绍人物的出生年月、地点、家庭背景或外形特征等。
第二部分：列出人物的品质和个性，并以具体的事例进行说明，在选取事例时，应该选取典型事例，抓住人物特征；列举人物的主要经历、事迹或成就。
第三部分：介绍人们对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受。
[常用表达]
1.Born in...，he/she is a...
2.He is a...(外形特征) person with...
3.When he was in...，he was enthusiastic about...and determined to ...
4.He has a talent for...
5.In...(具体年份)，he graduated with honor/won a gold medal for the first time.
6.He applied himself to/was committed to...
7.He made a great contribution to...and was honored as one of the most important...
8.He sets a good example to...and he is respected and admired by many people.
9.Not only is he/she passionate about science，but also he/she is...
10.So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to...
实践 演练
请以“Madame Curie”为题，写一篇英语短文，要点如下：
1.居里夫人(Madame Curie)为世界著名的女科学家，1867年出生于波兰一个教师家庭，卒于1934年。
2.从小爱学习并希望成为科学家，24岁赴巴黎就读于巴黎大学，学习刻苦。
3.一生致力于科学研究，于1903年和1911年两次分别获诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖。
4.居里夫人将作为一位伟大的女性永远为人们所怀念。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
[审题]
写作要求是写一篇人物传记。写作时应注意以下几点：
1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文，写作中应注意常规格式；
2.主体时态：介绍人物经历以一般过去时为主；写评价以一般现在时为主；
3.主体人称：第三人称。
[谋篇]
第一段：介绍居里夫人的身份和生卒时间。
第二段：简单介绍居里夫人的学习经历，重点介绍她的成就。
第三段：人们对于居里夫人的评价。
第二步　遣词造句
[核心词汇]
1.出生于…… ______________
2.下定决心做 ___________________
3.被录取；被接收 __________________
4.取得好结果，取得成功 ________
5.致力于 ___________________________
6.被授予…… _____________
7.被誉为/认可为 _______________________
8.对……做出巨大贡献 _________________________
be born to/into
be determined to do
be admitted into/to
pay off
apply/devote/commit oneself to
be awarded...
be honored/recognised as
make great contributions to
[连词成句]
1.居里夫人是一位世界著名的科学家，她于1867年出生在波兰的一个教师家庭，1934年去世。
Madame Curie is ，and she _______________
_______________in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
2.在她还是一名学生时，她很勤奋，并决心成为一名科学家。
When she was a school girl，she was diligent and___________________
__________.
a world-famous scientist
was born to a
teacher’s family
determined to become
a scientist
3.她一生致力于科学研究，1903年获得诺贝尔物理学奖，1911年获得诺贝尔化学奖。
and was awarded Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and Nobel Prize in Chemistry
in 1911.
4.因为她对科学做出了巨大的贡献，她被誉为最伟大的科学家和女性之一。
Because ，she ____________
______________one of the greatest scientists and women.
She applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research
she has made great contributions to science
is honored/
recognised as
第三步　句式升级
1.用同位语把句1转化为一个简单句。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用过去分词短语作状语改写句2。
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3.用现在分词短语作状语改写句3。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born to a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.
Having applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911.
4.把句4升级为定语从句。
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She has made great contributions to science，for which she is honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
[参考范文]
Madame Curie
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born to a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.At the age of 24，she was admitted to Paris University and studied hard there.Her hard work paid off.Having applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911.
She has made great contributions to science，for which she is honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.

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