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假如你是李华，你校将组织校内留学生参观中国画展，请写一则通知发布在校园网上。内容包括：
1.展览的时间和地点；
2.展览内容；
3.参观时的注意事项。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文赏析
To promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to visit the Chinese Painting Exhibition in the City Museum.
Running from Feb. 20 to March 20, the exhibition centers on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous paintings of exceptional beauty from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm, Feb. 25. Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
【谋篇布局】：从范文中归纳结构
第一段：介绍通知的目的，开始时间和事件。
第二段：活动介绍（可添加细节，如：时间，地点，活动内容）。
第三段：集中时间/开放时间和注意事项。
【功能句式】：尝试改写范文
第一段: 介绍通知的目的，开始时间和事件。
To promote (目的)......, our school is to arrange for sb. to do sth. （主动）
To promote(目的)......an exhibition of (活动主题)...... will be held in (地点)...... on(时间).（被动）
改写：
1. To promote traditional Chinese culture, an exhibition on Chinese paintings will be held in our City Museum.
2.Aiming to/With the purpose of promote/ promoting traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
第二段: 活动介绍（可添加细节,如：时间，地点，内容）
改写：
(时间)
1. As scheduled, the exhibition will be held at the City Museum from Feb.20 to March 20.
2.The exhibition will run from Feb.20 to March 20 in the City Museum.
改写：
（内容）
1. You will have the chance to explore a wide range of traditional Chinese painting including...........
2.The exhibition focuses on the history of traditional Chinese paintings, presenting a variety of famous works of extraordinary beauty from different dynasties. Through this exhibition, it is anticipated that students will have a deeper understanding of the evolution and development of Chinese culture.
第三段：开放时间和注意事项
改写：
1. The exhibition, which is open to the public free of charge, will last a month.
2. The opening hours are from 9:00 a.m. to 4:00 p.m.
3. No food or drink is allowed in the museum.
4. Participants/visitors are required to get there before 时间
5. According to the requirements, participants/ visitors should 注意事项
6. Those who take interest in the exhibition/show, please sign up at the Student Union.
Notice
Aiming to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
The exhibition will run from Feb. 20 to March 20 in the City Museum, which is located in the centre of our city. It centers on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous paintings of exceptional beauty from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm Feb. 25 and the school bus will take us there. Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
The Student Union
为了丰富校园生活，你校将组织迎新年音乐会，请你写一则通知，刊登在学校英文网站上。
内容包括：
1.举办时间和地点；
2.活动的内容；
3.活动的意义。
注意：词数80左右。
Notice
In order to enrich the students’ campus life, our school is scheduled to hold a New Year concert in the school Art Building at 7 p.m. next Saturday. There will be a great variety of programs, ranging from folk songs and English pop music, to performances of Chinese and Western musical instruments. The dialogue between Chinese and Western music works and the immersion of stage light and shadow will definitely bring the audience a splendid feast for both eyes and ears.
Looking forward to your attending, and please keep those around you informed. (93 words)
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为通知；
（2）因本文是一则通知，故作者身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分写计划举办的音乐会，故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）be scheduled to计划做某事；
（2）a great variety of各种各样的；
（3）ranging from ... to ...表示列举的表达法；
（4）definitely肯定地；明确地；
（5）bring ... a splendid feast for both eyes and ears给某人带来一场极好的视听盛宴；
（6）keep sb informed使某人知晓。
假如你是李华，正在英国参加交换生活动。你想参加Healthy Life 杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动。
请给杂志社投稿，内容如下：
1.你想要改变哪种生活习惯；
2.为什么你想要改变；
3.你计划如何改变;
4.你希望看到什么样的结果。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(1)What lifestyle habit you would like to change
*Computer Game Addiction
*Overeating Unhealthy Food
*Staying up Late
*Overspending
*have difficulty in waking up early
*be also constantly late
*often snack on unhealthy food
(2) Why you want to change
*be always tired during the day and often feel worn out
*be stressed under time pressure all day long
*be struggling to keep up with my peers
*want to get my life back on track
*want to find the discipline to change my sleeping habits and overcome my phone addiction
*also want to find a healthier eating and exercise and stick to it
(3)How you plan to change
*To change my eating habits, I plan to start by being more mindful of what I eat and how much I consume.
*I will make a conscious effort to eat smaller portions and avoid snacking on unhealthy food.
*Instead, I will stock up on healthy snacks like fruits and nuts.
*Additionally, I will plan my meals ahead of time and make sure to include a balance of proteins, carbohydrates, and fats in each meal.
(4)What result you hope to see
*The result I hope to see from changing my eating habits is a healthier and happier me.
*I want to feel more energetic and have a clearer mind.
*I also hope to achieve a healthier weight and reduce the risk of any potential health issues
*I want to establish a sustainable and enjoyable lifestyle that includes healthy eating habits.
范文赏析
Dear editor,
I was walking past a shop window the other day when I saw my reflection. At first, I didn’ t realize it was me. When I saw it was me, I felt sad as I am overweight. I didn’ t realize how I looked, and I really want to change. I really like eating, but I realize I eat too much, and I don’ t eat good things.
I want to change because I want to be able to look at myself and feel happy with how I look. I also want to be healthy.
My plan is to change my diet and exercise routine. I will stop eating sugar, and only eat at mealtimes rather than eating snacks during the day. I will focus on healthy foods. Then I will exercise every day. I will walk to school and back, and on the weekend, I will go swimming. I have only been doing my plan for a week, but I’m already starting to feel better. I haven’ t lost a lot of weight yet, but to do anything makes me feel positive. I feel confident I will reach my goal!
Yours sincerely,
A . Smith
【谋篇布局】：从范文中归纳结构
第一段：过去的生活习惯和导致问题的出现
第二段：改变的原因
第三段：采取的措施和效果
【功能句式】：尝试改写范文
第一段: 过去的生活习惯和导致问题的出现
1. I am writing to share with you something about my lifestyle.
2. I am writing to you with the purpose of...
3. I’m having some trouble in keeping healthy.
4. I can’t have a good sleep at night, and can’t concentrate on my study either.
5. When it comes to such a situation, I’m at a loss...
改写：
I felt sad because I am overweight. I had been unaware of how I look, and I truly desired to make a change.
I genuinely enjoy eating, but I have come to realize that I consume excessive amounts and do not eat healthily.
第二段：改变的原因
1. So I decided to change the unhealthy lifestyle.
2. Obesity can lead to numerous health issues such as heart disease, diabetes, and joint problems, all of which can significantly impact one’s quality of life.
3. Eating junk food regularly lacks nutrition and can lead to nutritional deficiencies.
改写：
It is important that I (should) lose weight and develop a healthy lifestyle. A good shape makes me extremely happy.
第三段：采取的措施和效果
1. Exercise is beneficial to our health. We’d better run for half an hour every day.
2. A balanced diet is crucial for weight loss. This involves incorporating a variety of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, lean proteins, and healthy fats into one's meals.
改写：
To change my diet and exercise routine is essential for me.
A balanced diet is crucial for weight loss. This involves a variety of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, lean proteins, and healthy fats. Engaging in exercises such as walking, running, or swimming can help increase metabolism, burn calories, and build muscle
习作改写：
I was walking past a shop window the other day when I saw my reflection. At first, I didn’t realize it was me. When I saw it was me, I felt sad because I am overweight. I had been unaware of how I look, and truly desired to make a change.
It is important that I lose weight and develop a healthy lifestyle. A good shape makes me extremely happy.
What I am going to do is to change my diet and exercise routine. A balanced diet involves a variety of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, proteins, and healthy fats. Besides, engaging in exercises such as walking, running, or swimming can help increase metabolism, burn calories, and build muscle. I have only been doing this plan for a week, but I’m already starting to feel better. I haven’t lost a lot of weight yet, but doing sports makes me feel positive. I feel confident I will reach my goal!

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