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Citywalk
2024届温州二模应用文写作
假定你是李华，暑期想在家乡（杭州）寻找外国友人结伴“城市漫步”. 请通过社交媒体发布一篇帖子，内容包括：
1. 相关介绍；
2. 旅伴要求。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Join Me for a City Walk
审题
1. 相关介绍：介绍自己+说明发帖目的+介绍城市漫步的相关内容
介绍自己+说明发帖目的
Liu Hua, a senior high school student/ a travel lover/ enthusiast
look/ seek for a foreign partner/ friend to take a leisurely citywalk together in my hometown Hangzhou this summer vacation.
同位语+定语从句
如何把这两个点的内容用一句话表达出来，需要用到什么成分或结构呢？
介绍citywalk的相关内容（详细或笼统）
介绍行程计划（详细）：什么时候开始（kick off/ fall/ start/ begin），行程持续多久(last)，从哪里开始(start/set off/ out from)，去哪些地方(tourist attractions & reasons or a brief introduction)
介绍在citywalk中可以做的事---针对citywalk这个概念本身进行介绍（笼统）
wander/ roam/ stroll through bustling streets
sample local cuisine/ street snacks/ a sip of Longjing tea
visit tourist attractions
We’ll______________ Canal Square,...
______________is Gongchen Bridge,...
Then, ______________ is Qiaoxi cultural street and Xiaohe Street,...
Finally, we’ll___________ Xinyi Square,...
start from
Our first stop
our next stop
reach
reasons or a brief introduction 加在哪里呢？需要用到什么成分或者句子结构呢？
We’ll start from Canal Square, __________________
_____________________________________________
_____________________________________________
a fantastic place
hangzhou Grand Canal Museum
where you can have a visual feast in the Beijing-
同位语 & 定语从句
Then, we'll set our feet on Xiaohe Street,__________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
a picturesque place where we can expose
ourselves to its intense cultural atmosphere and take photos there.
We can _____________ along the ________________ West Lake or ________________ the ______________ Qiantang River ________________.
roam
picturesque
look far into
majestic
on the bank
When tired, we can choose a __________ for a ______ of _______________ or just _________ a cool ______ to have a ____________________, ___________how ____________ the citizens’ life is.
teahouse
sip
Longjing tea
walk into
cafe
heat-beating cold drink
experiencing
convenient
2. 旅伴要求：
language：speak English and, if possible, a little Chinese
a native English speaker
gender&age：boy/ girl aged...
和写作主题有关的：an enthusiast of citywalk
有深度的要求：interested in Hangzhou
an explorer of culture
我希望你是一个热爱城市漫步的人，也是一个渴望更多了解杭州的文化探索者。
Preference will be given to those with relevant experiences but not a must. Good fitness and great passion to explore the city are also highly appreciated.
有相关经验者优先（give preference/ priority to...），但非必须。良好的身体素质（good fitness）和探索城市的热情也受到高度赞赏。
I hope that you are an enthusiast of citywalk as well as an explorer of culture who is eager to learn more about Hangzhou.
3. 结尾
再呼吁一下快来加入你+体现帖子的交际功能
join me
if you’re interested, please send me a message
Hey everyone! This is Li Hua, a travel enthusiast from Hangzhou. I'm on the lookout for some foreign friends to join me in exploring the fascinating city of Hangzhou this summer. Our citywalk will take us into the heart of Hangzhou, where we'll wander through bustling streets (熙熙攘攘的街道) and unfrequented alleys（人迹罕至的小巷）, sample must-try local cuisine, and even try our hand at time-honoured handicrafts （尝试制作历史悠久的手工艺品）. If you're a native English speaker with an appetite for adventure, join me and we'll see a blend（混合物）of tradition, modernity and endless discoveries. I can assure you that exploring a city with a local will be the last decision you'll come to regret. If interested, send me a message and let's together hit the road!（让我们一起上路吧）
Hello everyone! I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student who is looking for a foreign partner to take a leisurely citywalk together in my hometown Hangzhou this summer vacation. It is sure to be a rewarding trip where you can have a glimpse of this elegant and vibrant city combining profound history with modernity. We can roam along the picturesque West Lake or look far into the majestic Qiantang River on the bank. When tired, we can choose a teahouse for a sip of Longjing tea or just walk into a cool cafe to have a heat-beating cold drink, experiencing how convenient the citizens’ life is. My friend, I hope that you are an enthusiast of citywalk as well as an explorer of culture who is eager to learn more about Hangzhou. Plus, to communicate fluently, you’re expected to speak English and, if possible, a little Chinese.
I’ m here waiting for you to join me and start an incredible and memorable citywalk!
Are you seeking for a perfect citywalk in Hangzhou Please focus your eyes on this post and it will definitely catch your appetite!
As an experienced citywalker, I’m scheduling for a citywalk in Hangzhou during the summer vacation, ideally with foreigners. Kicking off in the morning, the citywalk is supposed to last over 3 hours at least, covering several tourist attractions, ranging from the West Lake to the Hangzhou Art Museum. Not only does the whole process refresh you physically and mentally, but it also provides a special platform to gain more insights into this ancient city, which is far beyond your expectations.
Preference will be given to those with relevant experiences but not a must. Good fitness and great passion to explore the city are also highly appreciated. It’s of importance for me to have a talkative company.
Contact me by phone 96330 if you’re interested.

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