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Snowflake Bentley
In the days when Vermont farmers worked the land and spent time with livestock,there lived a boy Willie Bentley who loved snow more than anything in the world.Vermont is no stranger to snow and Bentley's happiest days were snowstorm days. He watched snowflakes(雪花)on his glove, on the vast farm fields, and on the dark metal handle of the barn(谷仓) door. He said snow was the blessings of Nature. However, he could not share snowflakes because he could not save them.
Later, when his mother gave him an old microscope,he mainly used it to look at snow. While kids of his neighbors chased hens and had snowball fights, Willie was catching snowflakes. Day after stormy day he studied the icy crystals(冰晶).
Their delicate patterns were even more beautiful than he had imagined.Willie decided he must find a way to save snowflakes so others could see their wonderful designs.For three winters he tried drawing snow crystals.They always melted in the black tray(托盘) that he used to catch them before he could finish the drawings.
When he was sixteen, Willie read of a camera with its own microscope. "If I had that camera I could photograph snowflakes,” he told his mother. Willie's mother knew that he would not be happy until he could share what he had seen.
“Spending time on snow is just foolishness,” his mother said. Still, she loved his son. When Willie was seventeen his parents spent their savings and bought the camera.It cost as much as ten cows.Willie was sure it was the best of all cameras.
Even so,his first pictures were failures—no better than shadows.Yet he would not quit. Mistake by mistake, snowflake by snowflake, Willie worked through every storm. Winter ended, the snow melted, and he had no good pictures.He waited for another season of snow. One day, in the second winter,he tried a new experiment. And it worked! Willie had figured out how to photograph snowflakes! "Now everyone can see the great beauty in a tiny crystal," he said.
Nevertheless, in those days no one cared....
Despite the new-found fame, Snowflake Bentley simply made up his mind to produce a perfect photo....
No two snowflakes are alike.But you might not know the man who discovered it. Actually, it can be traced back to Wilson Bentley, a farmer from Vermont,the USA, who in 1885 became the first person to successfully photograph an individual snow crystal —the ice that makes up snowflakes. After years of trial and error,Bentley was able to capture the intricate details of snow crystals by using a compound microscope attached to his bellows camera.He went on to photograph more than 5,000 of these "ice flowers" during his lifetime — never finding any duplicates — and the images still shine to this day.
故事解读
在那个人们只是农耕土种、饲养家畜的时代，美国佛蒙特州的人们对自然现象的美丽和奥秘并不感兴趣，更不用说去欣赏那些微不足道的雪花了。然而，对于威利·本特利来说，雪花的美丽和独特性却是无法抗拒的。他先是试图把雪花画下来，但每次都是雪花融化了，他还没画完。有一天，他与他母亲说，“如果我有那台相机，我就可以拍雪花了。”他母亲不理解地对他说：“把时间花在雪地上是愚蠢的”。但尽管如此，威利的父母还是在孩子十七岁的那一年用可以买上石头奶牛的钱给他买了仪态当时最好的相机（多米感言：父母对孩子的爱真是超级伟大！）。从此，威利痴迷于拍摄雪花，尽管周围的人都对他的努力嗤之以鼻，但他从未放弃过。他明白，自己的任务是将这些自然界中最微小、最脆弱的美丽展现给世界。因此，他继续投身于拍摄雪花的工作中，不断地尝试、改进、完善，终于有一天，他找到了拍摄的窍门。
续写审题
第一段：提示句“然而，在那些日子里，没有人在乎。” 我们的续写应该马上接着写威利自己的想法和反应是什么（自然，他会继续钻研技术，突破自己，拍出了更多更好的雪花来了）。结合下一段的首句提示，在该段段末应该写他因为小有名气，从而得到了“雪花本特利”的美誉。
第二段：提示句“尽管刚刚成名，雪花·本特利还是下定决心要拍出一张完美的照片。” 我们的续写应该马上接着写本特利因为执着追求完美主义，终于成为了众人关注的焦点，但他并未因此而沾沾自喜拍出了绝美的雪花。他的努力和细致让他捕捉到了那些令人叹为观止的细节。他成功了！故事告诉我们：一个人不但要生活，还要会生活。只有你的全力付出才会发现生活中处处是美景。
支架句子
He captured the perfect snowflake image, a masterpiece of clarity and beauty that would be remembered for generations.
Through countless efforts, Bentley's perseverance began to pay off.
Snowflake Bentley's contribution lies not just in his photographs but in his unshakable dedication to perfectionism.
4.He taught us that true success lies not in the success and status we receive, but in the achievement and satisfaction we gain from knowing that w have tried all out.
参考答案1
Nevertheless,in those days no one cared.However hard Bentley worked on his photography, everyone still referred his work to a joke or a silly stuff.Though encountering failure after failure,Bentley never gave up.With each new snowfall, Willie would set out to capture the unique shapes and patterns of snowflakes.He spent hours huddling over his microscope and camera,capturing the delicate beauty of each snowflake.As the years went by,his photos became more and more detailed and lifelike. People began to notice his work and understand him.Slowly,he got the nickname of Snowflake Bentley. (92 words)
Despite the new-found fame, Snowflake Bentley simply made up his mind to produce a perfect photo.In later years, he pushed the boundaries of his photography skills and eventually developed a special technique that allowed him to capture snowflakes in three dimensions, revealing their intricate and often surprising structures. His work is recognized as a pioneering contribution to the field of snowflake photography. Today, Snowflake Bentley's photos continue to inspire people around the world. His story reminds us that even the smallest and most overlooked objects in nature can hold immense beauty and wonder. Love it and just do it! (84 words)
参考答案2
Nevertheless, in those days no one cared. The outside world might have been indifferent to the beauty of snowflakes, but for Bentley, each one was a masterpiece of nature, unique and irreplaceable. He saw in them not merely the patterns and shapes but also the stories of their formation, the secrets of the atmosphere they had traveled through. His passion for his craft was so intense that it excelled the indifference of the era, making him a pioneer in a field that was yet to be recognized. He soon got the title of Snowflake Bentley. (88 words)
Despite the new-found fame, Snowflake Bentley simply made up his mind to produce a perfect photo. As the days turned into weeks and the weeks into months, Bentley's perseverance began to pay off. His photographs, though initially dismissed, slowly began to gain recognition. People were amazed by the intricate details he captured, the beauty he had gotten from the simplest of natural forms. His photography became an inspiration to all who sought to capture the essence of the natural world, reminding us that true beauty often lies in the most unexpected and overlooked places. (78 words)

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