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选择性必修三三单元写作
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假设你是李华，你的英国好友Leslie发来电子邮件询问你所在社区周围的环境状况，请你给他回一封电子邮件。
邮件主要包括以下内容：(1)社区环境状况和存在的问题；(2)建议采取的措施；(3)可能的结果。
注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Leslie,
Now, I'm writing to introduce the state of the environment in our community,
Yours, Li Hua
写作思路（一审、二定、三明确、四分段）
一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——回复邮件
主题：介绍社区的环保问题
二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关）
时态：以一般现在时为主
人称：以第三人称为主，第一人称为辅
三明确
明确写作要点：给Leslie回复电子邮件→社区环境状况和存在的问题（总体很好，但是有人乱扔垃圾）→建议采取的措施→可能的结果。
四分段
黄金分段法则：结合文章内容分三段。第一段现状和问题；第二段采取的措施；第三段可能出现的结果。
(1)关键词语
introduce, generally speaking, be worthy of, garbage,dozens of, tolerate, take strict measures, carry out,regulation, in the meanwhile, recommend, install, fine,implement, harmonious
(2)完成句子
①总的来说，值得表扬。（be worthy of)
Generally speaking, it is worthy of being praised.
②有强有力的证据表明，一些居民经常到处扔垃圾。(There is evidence... )
There is strong evidence that a few residents frequently drop garbage everywhere.
③情况太差了，很多人都无法忍受它。(so...that,tolerate )
The situation is so terrible that dozens of people can't tolerate it.
④毫无疑问，有必要采取严格的措施，并执行一些规定。（There is no doubt that...)
There is no doubt that it's necessary to take strict measures and carry out some regulations.
⑤那些被抓到乱扔垃圾的人应该被罚款。 ( be caught doing sth., fine )
Those caught throwing away garbage should be fined.
⑥随着这些措施的最终实施，我们相信一个和谐的社区将被建造。（with sth. done, harmonious)
With these measures implemented finally, we're confident that a harmonious community will be built.
范文
Dear Leslie,
Now, I'm writing to introduce the state of the environment in our community. Generally speaking, it is worthy of being praised. But there is strong evidence that a few residents frequently drop garbage everywhere. The situation is so terrible that dozens of people can't tolerate it.
There is no doubt that it's necessary to take strict measures and carry out some regulations. In the meanwhile, some residents strongly recommend that high definition cameras should be installed. Those caught throwing away garbage should be fined.
With these measures implemented finally, we're confident that a harmonious community will be built.
Yours,
Li Hua
generally speaking总的来说
There is strong evidence that... 有强有力的证据表明……
be worthy of值得
so.. that..如此……以至于……
There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问……
in the meanwhile与此同时；在此期间
recommend that... (should) do.推荐……做……
catch sb. doing sth.发现某人正在做某事
with复合结构“with+宾语+过去分词”构

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