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I recently went SKYDIVING! It's something I've been talking about doing since last year, but to be honest, it was planned super last minute. …like within a matter of a few weeks.
It all started when I ran into a friend of mine walking home from a local festival earlier this summer. We started chatting about what we'd both been up to this summer and somehow got on the subject of both being interested in going skydiving someday. My friend, Denny, said he'd be on board if I really wanted to schedule a jump and I was so excited to finally have someone to go with!
Later that night, we texted back and forth and decided on our jump date a few weeks in the future. When the very Sunday came, we were both FULL of excitement for our first skydiving experience. He had been bungee jumping before and I'd done my fair share of zip-lining, but neither of us figured that either of those of experiences would prepare us for what we had in store.
The drive there didn't happen without a slight delay. As soon as we got off the through-way on to the exit towards the small town where the skydiving facility was, Denny's car started to make a strange noise, forcing us to pull over on a busy interstate(州际公路).
Only 20 minutes away from WNY Skydiving(the place where we were going), we discovered we had a flat tyre(轮胎). At that point, I felt pretty defeated. Our scheduled time was 4 pm—the last appointment time of the day—so I figured they wouldn't be able to wait for or delay the operations for us since we were racing against the light.
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1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
0.确定人称：第一人称
1. 梳理原文情节 -- 人物：I / Denny；修车人员；Skydiving工作人员？
2. 构思情节
P1: We called American Automobile Association(AAA) and hoped for the best.
The key to continuing this paragraph lies in highlighting the emotional contrast -1. Looking forward to whether the car repair will go smoothly; 2. Looking forward to whether the bungee jumping base will be delayed, combined with the second prompt, we can clearly understand that all the concerns in this paragraph have been satisfactorily resolved.
① 衔接1：告知问题+地点，等待救援
② 电话WNY Skydiving 我们会迟到，行程是否可以延迟 + 同意
③ 15分钟之后，修车人员到了 + 很快修好
④ 感谢 + 飞往WNY Skydiving + 紧张/兴奋
⑤ 衔接2：4点半终于虽迟但到 + 冲到reception
P2: We were informed we were the final jump of the night…the “sunset jump”.
The key to continuing this paragraph lies in how to use Sunset Jump. I naturally combine the theme of "people and society" with the theme of "people and nature" in bungee jumping, so that the content and theme can be enriched in the second paragraph.
① 衔接3：我们的反应：虽然期待很久但是非常紧张
② 等待过程接受训练【细节回应】之前的经历让培训更加简单高效
③ 终于轮到，instructors 和我准备skydiving
④ 接下去的几十分钟，追着落日余晖，紧接着是黑色天空美丽到死
⑤ 结尾：尽管很多小插曲，我和Denny的第一次skydiving 成功
【下水作文1】
P1: We called American Automobile Association(AAA) and hoped for the best.
After informing them of our issue and location, we anxiously awaited rescue. While waiting, we called WNY Skydiving to explain our situation and inquire whether they could delay our jump. Thankfully, they agreed to accommodate us. About fifteen minutes later, the AAA mechanic arrived and quickly got to work, fixing the tire in no time. After repeatedly expressing our gratitude for the timely rescue, we hastily got back on the road, and zoomed towards WNY Skydiving, a mix of nerves and excitement swirling within us along the way. By 4:30 PM, we finally arrived, though late, and rushed into the reception to check in.
P2: We were informed we were the final jump of the night…the “sunset jump”.
Despite our long-awaited anticipation, we couldn't shake off the nervousness of our first skydiving experience. As we awaited our turn, we underwent a smooth and efficient training process, greatly facilitated by our previous adventures with bungee jumping and zip-lining. When it was finally our turn, our instructors helped me get ready for the skydiving leap. Within the next few minutes, we were soaring through the sky, chasing the remnants of the sunset before diving into the beautiful darkness of the night sky. Despite the unexpected hitches along the way, Denny and I successfully completed our first skydiving adventure, an experience that was as thrilling as it was unforgettable.
【下水作文2】
Para 1: We called American Automobile Association (AAA) and hoped for the best.
As we waited on the side of the road, the sun began its slow descent, casting a golden glow over the fields. Time was slipping away; so was our hope. Denny and I looked at each other, a mix of frustration and anxiety evident on our faces. But just when we were about to give up, in the distance we saw the AAA truck approaching. Relief flooded through us as the mechanic quickly changed the tire and got us back on the road. Another 15 minutes flew by when we finally arrived at the jump site. (96 words)
Para 2: we were informed we were the final jump of the night…the sunset jump.
Gone was the frantic worry of the highway breakdown, replaced by renewed anticipation. Geared up and hearts pounding, we boarded the small plane, the ground shrinking below as we climbed towards the embrace of the setting sun. As we dived off board and soared through the sky, the wind rushed past our bodies, taking all the worries and doubts, leaving only pure exhilaration and joy. Bathed in a warm glow, Danny and I screamed at the top our lungs. In that fleeting moment, I saw in his fiery eyes, adventures for a lifetime. (93 words)
【参考范文】
We called American Automobile Association(AAA) and hoped for the best. AAA told us a mechanic would be out in about an hour to fix the tyre. Afraid of our tickets being canceled, we also called WNY Skydiving and let them know our difficulty. Luckily, they were SUPER accommodating and said we could still come despite the delay. Thankfully, the mechanic showed up about 15 minutes later, way ahead of schedule, and we were on out way 10 minutes later. We arrived at WNY Skydiving ar the very moment before the scheduled time.
We were informed we were the final jump of the night…the “sunset jump. I was never really scared during the whole afternoon, but When they told us it was our turn, my heart definitely started to beat a little faster. Knowing my instructor had over 1500 jumps under his belt made me feel incredibly safe throughout the experience. And now to answer the question…“Would I jump again ” Yes. Tomorrow, if I could. In fact, I plan to go back in a few weeks for my second jump. Overwhelmed by wild joy, I shouted out loud, “I made it!”
高分句积累：
When the cabins open, you will instantly feel the wind and waves surrounding you.
Sitting at the door, your feet are suspended at a height of ten thousand feet, and you will unconsciously hold your breath and swallow subconsciously.
Immediately after, the white balance umbrella opens, and the centrifugal force suddenly disappears.
With it comes the perspective of God, you will slowly let go of your body and mind, because at this point, you realize that fear cannot change the fact. It's better to have the courage to experience it well!
5.Until 1600 meters after opening the main umbrella, from a rapid fall to a sudden slowdown, the extreme contrast will make you feel that the world suddenly becomes quiet.

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