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应用文写作:建议信
建议信
第1段:(自我介绍+问候)写信背景+写信目的
第2段:具体的建议+建议的理由（好处）
第3段:希望对方考虑你的建议+期待回信
写2-3行
最少3点建议，5~6行
写1-2行
写作框架
第一段万金油句子：
（1）收到别人诉说问题的来信，你进行回信：
1. 很抱歉知道你在……方面有困难，我要给你一些如何……的建议。
2.我很开心收到你的信，信里面问我一些关于……的建议。因此我……。
3.很难过知道了你最近……，我想提供一些我关于……的
建议。
Sorry to hear that you have difficulty in…, I would like to provide you with some practical suggestions concerning xxx.
I’m delighted to receive your letter where you ask me for some suggestions regarding xxx so I’m writing to offer my advice to you.
I’m upset to know that you xxx.Therefore, I would like to xxx.
第二段万金油句子：
1. 在我看来，对你来说采取以下措施是很聪明的。（可写可不写）
2.首先，我强烈建议你……，这样的话……。
3.其次，你应该……。这很重要，因为……。
4.最后，我相信如果你能……那会非常有好处。只有这样你才能……。
As far as I’m concerned, it is wise of you to adopt the following suggestions.（朋友之间）
The suggestions are as follows.
To begin with, I strongly recommend that you should +V.原，which enables you to xxx.
Moreover, you are supposed to xxx. It is important because… .
In addition/Last but not least, it would be beneficial to you if you could xxx. Only in this way can you xxx.
If I were you, I would…for the reason that xxx.
如果我是你，我会……因为……。
第三段万金油句子：
1.我希望你能考虑我的建议。
2.我希望我的建议对你有好处。
3.我确信只要你采纳我的建议，你的处境很容易改变。
4.如果你能成功克服困难，我会很高兴。
5.如果你能够考虑我的建议的话，我会很感激的。
Hopefully, you could take my recommendations into consideration.
Hopefully, my suggestions would be great benefit/help to you.
I’m certain that if you follow my advice, your suitation is easy to change.
I would be extremely delighted if you could overcome the difficulty.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.
写作模板参考：
Dear XXX, Sorry to hear that you have difficulty in__________, I would like to provide you with some practical suggestions concerning__________. I think the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, It's important for you to __________(建议一). If you do this, you can__________(好处). Secondly, you are supposed to__________(建议二). That way,__________(好处). Thirdly, it would be a good idea if__________(建议三).By doing this, __________(好处). Hopefully, my suggestions would be of great benefit/help to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, __________
Dear XXX， I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice concerning / with regard to __________. I think you can make it if you follow the suggestions below. To begin with, When it comes to such a situation, I would like to recommend that you should__________(建议一), which enables you to__________(好处). Moreover, it would be better/a good idea if you __________. (建议二) By doing this, __________(好处). In addition/Last but not least, it would be beneficial to you if you could __________(建议三). Only in this way can you __________(好处). In the end, I do hope you will find these suggestions / recommendations practical. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, ______
模板二
应用文写作:旅行计划
旅行计划
第1段:（简单问候）开门见山指出旅行
目的地和时间
第2段:简单介绍旅游景点+交通工具和动身
时间
第3段:询问对方计划+期待回信
写2-3行
写5~6行
写1-2行
写作框架
第一段参考句式：
旅行计划的开头：交代时间和目的地。
（1）This month, I will travel to...with xxx, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip.
这个月，我要和两个朋友去XXX旅游，这是一次七日之旅。
（2）I'm planning to travel to XXX, a city which is worth visiting.
我计划去XXX旅游——一个值得参观的城市。
（3）The May Day is coming, and I am going to travel to XXX to see its beautiful scenery.
五一劳动节要来了，我打算去XXX欣赏美景。
旅行计划的主体：介绍旅游景点、交代动身时间、乘坐的交通工具等。
（1）There are a lot of tourist attractions in XXX. What attracts me most is XXX.
XXX有很多旅游景点，最吸引我的是XXX.
（2）It is such an amazing sight that I can’t wait to go to visit.
它是个令人惊叹的景点, 所以我迫不及待想去参观。
（3）We will set out on 10 June. 我们6月10日出发。
（4）I'm planning to go there by train and come back by bus.
我计划乘火车去那儿，然后乘公共汽车回来。
第二段参考句式：
旅行计划的结尾：询问对方计划+期待回信
（1）Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？
对于即将到来的假期，你有计划吗？
（2）I am looking forward to your reply soon /hearing from you soon.
我期待尽快收到你的回复/回信。
第三段参考句式：
Dear XXX， How is everything I am going to travel to__________（地点）to see its beautiful scenery with my parents this holiday . We are planning to go there __________（例如by train ）and come back __________. We intend to stay in _________for about _________ days. There are a lot of tourist attractions in _________. During the trip, we will visit _________ on the first day. On the second day, we will see_________ , which are the places of interest I am crazy about. On the third day, we will enjoy ourselves in_________. It is such an amazing sight that I can’t wait to go to visit. And then we will go shopping and enjoy the traditional food. Anyhow, I believe that we will have a great time on this exciting trip! How about you Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, __________
写作模板参考
应用文写作
活动/新闻报道
报道
第一段(导语): 交代活动/事件的目的、原因以及活动时间、地点、人物等相关信息。
第二段(主体): 描写活动/事件的具体内容、过程。
第三段(结语): 对活动/事件的评价、总结活动/事件的收获以及个人感想。
写2-3行
写6~7行
写1-2行
写作框架
1.举办活动/竞赛/比赛____________________
2.为了；目的是_____________________________
3.更好地了解...______________________
4.提供一个机会给我们去...__________________
5.丰富我们的校园生活_________________
6.拓展我们的视野__________________________
7.提高我们关于...的意识___________________
常用短语
hold the activity/contest/competition
in order to do.../ with the purpose/ aim of doing...
To get a better understanding of...
To provide/offer a good chance/ opportunity for us to...
enrich our school/campus life
broaden our horizons
raise our awareness of
8.激发我们对...的兴趣______________________
9.缓解我们的学习学习压力__________________
10.增进同学之间的友谊_____________________
11.积极参加 ____________________
12.收获良多________________________________
13.使某人身心收益 ________________________________
14.强身健体 _____________________________
15.增强某人的毅力 _____________________________
arouse our interest in
relieve us from study pressure
promote the friendship between students
take an active part in/ actively participate in
learn a lot from/ benefit a lot from/ gain greatly from
benefit sb both physically and mentally
build up one’s health/body
strengthen one's perseverance
第一段参考句式：
第一段：交代活动/事件的目的以及时间、地点。1. In order to/with the purpose of... / with the aim of.../ 为了...2. To make the teenagers learn more about...
为了让青少年了解更多的...3. To provide/offer a good chance/opportunity for students to ...
为了提供一个机会给学生去...4. In order to let students have a better understanding of…
为了让学生更好地了解...5. With intention of doing sth, our school held ....
旨在...我们学校举行了...
第一段参考句式：
6. Aiming to...,our school held an activity/ a contest...
为了...我们学校举办了...活动/比赛7. The activity/lecture/contest/game was held in the lecture hall/on the playground in our school last Friday.
这个活动/讲座/竞赛/比赛上周五在我们学校的报告厅/运动场举行...8. Many students actively participated in/ took part in this activity/ contest/game....
很多学生积极参加了这次活动/竞赛/比赛...
第二段参考句式：
第二段：介绍活动过程（需要自己根据要点去构思）
【相关衔接词】
1.first and foremost / first of all / in the first place /in the beginning2.besides / additionally/in addition/ what’s more / furthermore / more importantly 3.Last but not least / at last / most importantly
第三段参考句式：
第三段：总结活动/事件的收获以及个人感想。
1.Tired as we were, we all thought that it was quite meaningful to take part in this activity.
尽管我们很累，我们都认为参加这个活动十分有意义。
2.I really appreciated the activity, through which we had a better understanding about...
我很感谢这次活动，通过这次活动，我们更好地了解到...
3.This activity turned out to be a great success. Not only did it...，
but also it...
这次活动是一个巨大的成功，它不仅...而且...
4.The activity was of great importance, which provided us with a chance to...
这次活动非常重要，为我们提供了一个机会……
5. Both of us thought highly of this activity...
我们都高度评价这次活动...
6. Not only did the activity broaden our horizons, but also made us realize the importance of environmental protection.
这次活动不仅开阔了我们的视野，而且让我们意识到保护环境的重要性。
7. Although we were so tired, we all thought that it was really an unforgettable, meaningful and rewarding activity, which left a deep impression on everyone.
尽管我们很累，但我们都认为这是一次难忘的、有意义的和收获满满的活动，它给大家留下了深刻的印象。
8. Undoubtedly, not only did the competition provide the competitors with a chance to show their talents, but also it enriched our campus life.
毫无疑问，这次比赛在提供给选手们一次展示才艺的同时，也丰富了我们的校园生活。
收获和感想：1. feelings: exhausted but excited, delighted, relaxed...2. activities: interesting, meaningful, rewarding, successful, beneficial, unforgettable...3. what I got: friendship, teamwork, relaxation,fun ...
写作模板参考一： With the aim of enriching our school life and broadening our horizons, our school organized/held an activity called _________ in the lecture hall/on the playground last Sunday或者on+日期. Many students took an active part in this activity. We started from the morning, and arrived at our destination. On arrival, we________. During this activity, we_________. （具体介绍事件的过程）We all had a great time, and________. （总结事件） This activity left a deep impression on all the students. What we did has brought great joy for us as well as enriching our life. This activity turned out to be a great success！
模板二：
Aiming to enrich students’ school life and let them have a better understanding of________, an activity / a competition whose topic was concerning _________ was successfully held in our school last week或者on+日期.
Representatives (代表) / students who are interested in _________ actively participated in the activity / competition. In the beginning, ________.In addition, _________. Last but not least, ________. （总结事件）
Tired as we were, we all thought that it was really an unforgettable, meaningful and rewarding activity, which left a deep impression on everyone. Not only did the activity broaden our horizons, but also made us realize the importance of_________.
应用文写作
地点介绍
地点介绍
第一段: 开篇表意，指明推荐/介绍的地点
第二段: 详细介绍该地点（基本情况与特色）
第三段: 片尾点题，寄托祝福。
写3-4行
写6~7行
写1-2行
写作框架
It is located/lies in...，with an area of...
It covers an area of...，with a history of...
X，located in...and covering an area of...，is one of China’s most famous scenic spots.
◆常用表达
1．地理位置/面积
X has a (large/small) population of...
The population of X is...
X is a city with a (large/small) population of...
2．人口
① X有…的历史：
X has a (long) history of...
It has become the most popular tourist attraction since...
② X追溯到……：
X dates/goes back to...
The history of X dates back to...
3．历史
4．气候特征
be (very/quite/extremely) cold/hot/warm/dry/humid/
sunny/stormy/rainy/mild all year round
①X交通便利：
It is very convenient for you to go to X.
X is within easy reach.
②可乘……去X:
You can take a bus/a train/a plane to X.
You can go to X by bus/train/plane.
The best way to visit X is to take a bus tour.
5．交通
6．名胜景观、特产特色
① 盛产… /在…方面丰富：
be rich in (natural resources/tourist attractions/..., such as/like...)
② 因……而著名： be famous/well-known for...
1．I feel it a great honour to be your tour guide today．
2. Wish you have a good time and enjoy yourself．
3....is well worth visiting.…… 非常值得一游。
4....is a place you have to visit, whose extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.……
是一个你一定要去游玩的地方，它那令人惊奇的风景会让你流连忘返。
开头/结尾参考句式
写作模板参考一：
DearXXX，
I’m writing to tell you something about _________(地点) that you asked in the last email.
Located in the ________（地理位置）, ________(地点) is a fascinating city. Dating back to more than ________ years, _________(地点) has a population of ________（人口）. ________（列举旅游景点）, a
well-known tourist attraction, attracts many tourists at home and abroad. Besides, you can appreciate the excellent Chinese traditional culture and enjoy the local snacks which visitors think highly of.
_________(地点) is well worth visiting. I would be happy to guide you around our city if you would pay a visit here.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板参考二：
Learning that you’re keen to travel to China, I’m more than delighted to recommend that you pay a visit to _________(地点) .
_________(地点) ，located in________（地理位置）and covering an area of _________(面积) ，is one of China’s most famous scenic spots. First of all, _________(地点) is not only a city with a long history but also a place with plenty of tourist attractions, among which the ________（列举旅游景点）is what you can never miss. In addition, people in _________(地点) are friendly, kind and willing to offer anyone in need of help, which can really make your visit comfortable and pleasant.
I’ll be extremely glad if you can consider my recommendation. May you all have a good time during your stay in China! If there still exist further questions, please contact me without hesitation.
应用文写作
演讲稿
演讲稿
第一段: 问候观众+自我介绍+演讲主题
第二段: 过渡句+陈述主题+列举观点/解决
方案
第三段: 总结+致谢听众
写3-4行
写6~7行
写1-2行
写作框架
1. Good morning, everybody! My name is XXX . I am honoured to be here on such a special occasion. The topic of my speech is.../What I am going to talk about today is..
我很荣幸来到这样一个特别的场合。我演讲的主题是...
2. It's my honour to stand here to make a speech with the title of “...”．
我很荣幸站在这里发表题为“...”的演讲。
3. It's my great honour to have this chance to deliver my speech on...
我很荣幸有机会做关于......的演讲。
4. I am very glad to stand here to share … with you.
我很高兴站在这里和你们分享...
第一段参考句式：
1. That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
谢谢倾听。这就是全部。
2. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to express myself today. Thank you for your listening.
真心感谢给我这么一个机会来表达我自己的观点，感谢倾听！
第三段参考句式：
写作模板参考一：
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen/ Honorable judges,
Good morning/afternoon/evening! Nice to see all of you here. I am _________.It is a great pleasure for me to make a speech. Today I will talk about ________________. (演讲的主题)
First of all, __________________. Besides,_______________. What’s more, __________________(具体内容). As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, _____________. From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that ____________. (再次强调演讲的主题)
That’s all. Thanks for your attention/listening.(总结演讲)
写作模板参考二：
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen/ Honorable judges,
Good morning/afternoon/evening! It’s a great honor/privilege for me to stand here and give / deliver / make my speech. My name is ____________. The topic of my speech is ___________.
As we all know/ As is known to us all，_________. To begin with, many people suggest that _______. What I want to stress is that_______ For one thing,_________ For another,________In addition/ moreover / furthermore /Besides/ __________. （原因/建议/措施）
In a word, ___________.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to express myself today. Thanks for your listening.（ 感谢 ）
PART.1
Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s a great honor for me to stand here and deliver my speech. My name is Li Hua.The topic of my speech is “Music changes our life”.
As we all know, everyone has hard times and feels stressed. To begin with, many people suggest that music can help us feel better. What I want to stress is that music really changes our life. For one thing, music can give us encouragement.For another, it can help heal both physical and mental conditions. In addition, Walter Haddon said,”music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” It gives us strength and brings people relief.
In a word, music is a part of our life.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to express myself today. Thank you for your listening！
假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride
Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请你就此主题写一篇演讲稿，
内容包括：
1．汽车带来的空气污染和交通拥堵等问题；
2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。
Good morning, everyone,
It’s a great honor/privilege for me to stand here and give/deliver my speech. I'm Li Hua, from Xinhua Middle School .The topic of my speech is“Let's Ride Bicycles”．
As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems, such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they don't give off waste gas. What's more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let's take the responsibility to build a low-carbon city by riding e on and join us.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.

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