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话题1 个人情况、家庭与周围的人 答案版
假如你是李明，你校打算组织一次以“My Hobby and Dream”为题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。
My Hobby and Dream
Good morning, teachers and fellow students! My name is Li Ming. Today I'd like to talk about my hobby and dream.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
分步写作：
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: 演讲稿 ②定人称:第一人称 ③定时态:一般将来时和一般现在时为主
*Step2 短语荟萃
1 be born in出生于 2.in one’s free/spare time在..的业余时间里 3.grow up长大 4. be good at 擅长
5.be able to do sth. 能够做某事 6 .at the age of 在...岁时
7.be strict with sb in sth. 对...严格 8.try one’ s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
9.have the ability to do sth 有能力做某事 10.keep exercising保持锻炼
11.study hard努力学习 12.as long as只要
13. stick to my dream坚持我的梦想 14.from now on 从现在开始
14.want to do sth./would like to do/feel like doing 想要做某事
15. realize my dream/achieve my dream/make my dream come true实现我的梦想
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:引出主题
1.I like reading books. I like medical knowledge.(用which 定语从句改写句子)
I like reading books which are always about medical knowledge.
2.我的梦想是成为一名医生。
My dream is to be a doctor in the future.(用My dream is造句)
I want to be a doctor in the future.( 用want to 造句)
I would like to be a doctor in the future.(用would like to造句 )
正文:如何实现梦想
1.为了实现我的梦想，从现在开始我将努力学习所有学科。(In order to...)
In order to realize my dream, I should work hard on all subjects from now on.
2.好的医生必须掌握各种知识(be necessary for)
A good master of all kinds of knowledge is necessary for a good doctor.
健康对每个人很重要，我应该要每天保持锻炼。(be important for...)
good health is important for everyone. I should also keep exercising every day.
4.最重要的事情是我应该要保持梦，想坚持我的梦想
①The most important thing is that I should hold my dream and stick to my dream. (the most important thing is that )
②it’s important for me to hold my dream and stick to my dream. (it’s important for me to do...)
结尾:收获和感受
1.I can save lots of lives.I help my parents when they grow older. (用not only ... but also ..改写句子)
I can not only save lots of lives but also help my parents when they grow older.
2.我会尽我最大能力实现我的梦想
I will try my best to make my dream come true.(try one’s best to; make... come true)
I will make grate efforts to realize/achieve my dream.(make grate efforts to;achieve)
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
My Hobby and Dream
Good morning, teachers and fellow students! My name is Li Ming. Today I'd like to talk about my hobby and dream. I like reading books which are always about medical knowledge. My dream is to be a doctor in the future.
In order to realize my dream, I should work hard on all subjects from now on because a good master of all kinds of knowledge is necessary for a good doctor. Secondly, good health is important for everyone. I should also keep exercising every day. But the most important thing is that I should hold my dream and stick to my dream.
If so, I feel I can not only save lots of lives but also help my parents when they grow older. So I will try my best to make it come true.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
（红色字体的是写作要点，蓝色字体是补充细节，橙色字体是连贯性表达）
自评：（1）文章是否三段；（2）第一段是否说明爱好和梦想；（3）第二段是否有三点建议；（4）是否采用不同的句型来描述建议；（5）建议后是否有补充内容；（6）建议之间是否有衔接词或过渡句连接；（7）句子结构、单词形式、拼写是否正确；（8）书写是否端正清晰。话题1 个人情况、家庭与周围的人 写作纸
假如你是李明，你校打算组织一次以“My Hobby and Dream”为题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。
My Hobby and Dream
Good morning, teachers and fellow students! My name is Li Ming. Today I'd like to talk about my hobby and dream.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: ②定人称: ③定时态:
*Step2 短语荟萃
1 出生 2. 在..的业余时间里3. 长大 4. 擅长 5. 能够做某事 6 在...岁时
7. 对...严格 8. 尽某人最大努力做某事
9. 有能力做某事 10. 保持锻炼
11. 努力学习 12. 只要13. 坚持我的梦想 14. 从现在开始15. 想要做某事
16. 实现我的梦想
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:引出主题
1.I like reading books. I like medical knowledge.(用which 定语从句改写句子)
2.我的梦想是成为一名医生。
.(用My dream is造句)
.(用want to造句)
.(用would like to造句)
正文:如何实现梦想
1.为了实现我的梦想，从现在开始我将努力学习所有学科。(In order to...)
2.A good doctor must master all kinds of knowledge(用be necessary for 改写句子)
健康对每个人很重要，我应该要每天保持锻炼。(be important for...)
4.最重要的事情是我应该要保持梦，想坚持我的梦想
① . (用the most important thing is that 造句)
② . (用it’s important for me to do...造句)
结尾:收获和感受
1.I can save lots of lives.I help my parents when they grow older. (用not only ... but also ..改写句子)
2.我会尽我最大能力实现我的梦想
.(try one’s best to; make... come true)
.(make grate efforts to;achieve)
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
My Hobby and Dream
Good morning, teachers and fellow students! My name is Li Ming. Today I'd like to talk about my hobby and dream.
That's all. Thank you for listening.

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