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续写模拟题宝藏女孩
I was moving as fast as I could, stepping cautiously from rock to rock along the uneven jetty (栈桥). Far ahead,I could see the back of my brother’s sandy hair and the bright orange of his shorts.
“Too slow, sister!” I heard Sam yell as he hopped with ease.
“I’ll show him,” I thought, and attempted a double jump. What a mistake! My left foot came down hard between the edges of two gray rocks, scraping my ankle.” “Ouch!” I yelled. I tried to wiggle(扭动) my foot out, but my shoe was stuck. I bent closer to the rock and that’ s when I saw it:a shiny, square shaped stone the color of water, attached to a glittery gold chain. It was just lying there on the wet sand, and a few seconds later it was in my pocket.
Sam squinted(眯着眼睛看) in the sun. Could he tell I was hiding the most perfect discovery of the summer I kept turning the treasure around in my pocket, pushing each corner of the square stone into my finger. I was dizzy, but I didn’t want Sam to notice. He liked to tell everybody my business.
“Ryan saved the mini cola bottle from the carnival! It happened to be perfect for sand art!”
“Ryan wasted her allowance on salt and pepper shakers from the yard sale! They were antique little pig and cost only 50 cents.”
My family calls me their “little collector”. Some mean kids at school call me “trash girl”.
Sam and I walked along the main street, the small buildings giving us a break from the sun. Through the window of the candy shop, I could see tubes of colorful jelly beans.A sign on the window’s glass read LOST: Gold and blue necklace. Very special. If found, call Chrissy at 555-9924.
Chrissy had drawn a crayon version of the necklace at the bottom of the poster.The necklace looked different from the one I clutched in my pocket, I decided. Rounder, bluer. The poster appeared old and weathered. It must have been put up months ago. We continued to walk, and I noticed four more posters. Someone must have returned that necklace by now, I thought.
Paragraph 1: Once home, I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things, lost in thought.
Paragraph 2: Fifteen minutes later, I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.
一、审题思考
1. 续写内容中是否可以省略哥哥的戏份？
文章最终要解决的矛盾是什么
二、续写两段情节设计
根据第一段段首句和第二段段首句确定第一段的故事发展阶段
角色 触发事件 情绪 动作/语言/心理
根据第二段段首句和续写主题确定第二段的故事发展走向
角色 触发事件 情绪 拿出了项链 动作/语言/心理
三、写作
Paragraph 1: Once home, I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things, lost in thought.
我不禁思考它的来源。会是克丽丝的吗 它是一件珍贵的财产吗
I couldn't help but its _________________.Could it be Chrissy's Was it a
(2)这些挥之不去的疑虑让我感到内疚，因为我自私地把项链藏了起来。
These doubts filled me with for hiding this necklace_ .
(3)最后，我决定把它还回去。
I decided to return it.
(4)我把金链子攥在出汗的手掌里，转向山姆，向他透露了这个秘密。With the gold chain_ in my _ ________________________, I turned to Sam and
(5)他对我的决心感到惊讶，但又表示支持我的决定，于是又带我去了糖果店。
Astonished but to my __________________, he took me to the Candy shop again.
鼓起勇气，我打了电话“555-9924”。“是克丽丝吗 我可能找到了你的项链。”小心翼翼地说。
Having_,I called at“555-9924”.“Is it Chrissy, I might have found your necklace.”uttering
Paragraph 2: Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.
(1)当我拿出项链时，她惊讶地睁大了眼睛
Her eyes with surprise as I the necklace.
(2)当她确认那是她丢失的项链时，脸上立刻露出了幸福的微笑。
A smile the instant she its her lost necklace.
(3)她满怀感激地感谢我把它还给了她。
_ ,she thanked me for returning it.
“要不是你，我可能会失去祖母留给我的珍贵礼物。”
_,I might have lost the precious gift my grandmother left with me."
在那一刻，一股满足感淹没了我的心。
In that moment,a surge of overwhelmed my hearts.
(6)蹦蹦跳跳地回家，Sam朝我竖起大拇指，说我是一个诚实的“宝贝女孩”,而不是一个“垃圾女孩”。
I , with Sam me, saying I was an honest "treasure girl"instead of a“trash girl”.
我以前接受的所有偏见都消失了。
All the_______________I previously received-English Planet
四．写作
Paragraph 1: Once home, I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things, lost in thought.
I couldn't help but contemplate its origin. Could it be Chrissy’s Was it a cherished possession These lingering doubts filled me with a bad conscience for hiding this necklace selfishly. Ultimately, I resolved to return it. With the gold chain clutched in my sweaty palms, I turned to Sam and revealed the secret to him. Astonished but sympathetic to my resolution, he took me to the Candy shop again. Having plucked up courage, I called at “555-9924”. “Is it Chrissy, I might have found your necklace.”uttering with great caution.
Paragraph 2: Fifteen minutes later, I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.
Her jaw dropped as I produced the necklace. A blissful smile spread across her face the instant she confirmed its her lost necklace. Brimming with gratitude, she thanked me profusely for returning it.“Had it not been for you, I might have lost the precious gift my grandmother left with me.” In that moment, a surge of fulfillment overwhelmed my hearts.I bounced up and down on my way home, with Sam thumbing up to me, saying I was an honest “treasure girl” instead of a “trash girl”. All the prejudice I previously received dissolved away.

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