2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项:读后续写模拟紧急迫降 讲义素材

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2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项:读后续写模拟紧急迫降 讲义素材

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续写模拟紧急迫降
一、原文
Taylor Hashwanted to be a career pilot. She had just started building up hours of flight time when disaster struck. As she guided the Diamond Star plane off the runway at Oakland County International airport, on her third-ever independent flight, the front tyre (轮胎) of her plane fell off.
Taylor was unaware at that point that she had just lost crucial landing equipment. “I didn’t feel anything on the takeoff roll (起飞滑跑).” she said.
Experienced pilot Chris Yates, though, saw something on the takeoff roll and immediately took action. He knew that Taylor would have to make a difficult emergency landing. He radioed the control tower and said, “The Diamond Star that just took off lost its nose (头部) wheel tyre on the runway.”
But the control tower operators didn’t know what to do. They’d never seen such a thing happen before. Yates asked them to put him through to Taylor so he could help her.
When Taylor learned what had happened, she was in panic. With only 57 total fight hours under her belt, she didn’t know what her options were and could only imagine how this was going to end.
“I didn’t know what to do in that moment,” said Taylor later. “I’m just panicking and figuring out how I’m going to land this plane safely.”
But Yates knew what to do. He knew that the most important thing would be to keep Taylor calm so that she could follow his instructions effectively.
Yates started by reassuring (使安心) Taylor that everything was going to turn out just fine: “Taylor, this is Chris Yates. My daughter’s name is Taylor, and I taught her to fly! We’re gonna be just fine. Just take your time.”He told her that she could circle the field until she was ready to land. “When you touch down, I just want that stick (操纵杆) all the way back. You’re gonna hold that stick back like you don’t want that nose to touch,” he coached her.
泰勒·哈希想成为一名职业飞行员。她刚开始积累飞行时间,灾难就来了。当她在奥克兰县国际机场驾驶钻石之星飞机离开跑道时,她的飞机的前轮胎掉了。
泰勒当时并没有意识到她刚刚失去了关键的着陆设备。“我在起飞时没有感觉到任何东西。她说。
然而,经验丰富的飞行员克里斯·耶茨(Chris Yates)在起飞时看到了一些东西,并立即采取了行动。他知道泰勒必须进行一次艰难的紧急降落。他用无线电向塔台报告说:“刚起飞的钻石之星号在跑道上失去了前轮。”
但是控制塔的操作员不知道该怎么办。他们以前从未见过这样的事情发生。耶茨让他们帮他接通泰勒,这样他就可以帮助她。
泰勒得知所发生的事情后,惊慌失措。她总共只有57小时的战斗经验,她不知道自己的选择是什么,只能想象这将如何结束。
“那一刻我不知道该怎么办,”泰勒后来说。“我很恐慌,想知道怎样才能让飞机安全着陆。”
但耶茨知道该怎么做。他知道最重要的是让泰勒保持冷静,这样她才能有效地听从他的指示。
耶茨一开始就向泰勒保证,一切都会好起来的:“泰勒,我是克里斯·耶茨。我女儿叫泰勒,是我教她飞的!我们会没事的。慢慢来。”他告诉她,她可以绕着田野转一圈,直到准备着陆。“当你触地的时候,我只想要那根球棒一路回来。你要把那根棍子往后拿,好像你不想让鼻子碰到一样,”他指导她。
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1: Despite feeling scared and unsure, Taylor trusted Yates and followed his instructions.
Para2: Taylor went up to Yates after she stepped out of the plane safely.
二、前文情节梳理
1.Chris Yates和Taylor Hash是父女吗?
2.Taylor听从了Yates什么样的指令(followed his instructions)?
3.结尾如何设计?
三、微情节设计
根据第一段段首句和第二段段首句确定第一段的故事发展阶段
角色 触发事件 情绪 动作/语言/心理
Taylor 听从指令
Taylor Yates镇定的指令
Taylor 做好准备降落
Taylor 成功着陆
根据第二段段首句和续写主题确定第二段的故事发展走向
角色 触发事件 情绪 动作/语言/心理
Taylor 着陆后去找Yates
Yates Taylor的迫降
Taylor Yates的鼓励
Taylor 离开机场
四、连词成篇
Para1: Despite feeling scared and unsure, Taylor trusted Yates and followed his instructions.
(1)她按照指示在场地上转圈,深呼吸以安抚她的神经.
She circled the field as instructed, taking deep breaths to soothe her nerves.
(2)在Yates平静而令人安心的声音的引导下,泰勒设法恢复了镇静
With Yates' calm and reassuring voice guiding her, Taylor managed to regain her composure.
(3)她耐心地在跑道上绕了一圈又一圈,专心地听着Yates的指示,为前方令人望而却步的紧急迫降做好准备。
She made repeated circuits of the field patiently, listening intently to Yates' words and readying herself for the daunting emergency landing ahead.
(4)最终,当她准备好时,她走近跑道,紧紧抓住操纵杆,按照Yate’s的指示回拉操纵杆到底。
Ultimately, when she was in readiness, she approached the runway, clutching the stick firmly and pulling it all the way back on Yate’s instructions.
(5)她的心激动得怦怦直跳,她设法驾驶飞机安全着陆,避免了一场潜在的灾难。
With her heart thumping with thrill, she managed to navigate the plane to a safe landing, avoiding a potential catastrophe.
Para2: Taylor went up to Yates after she stepped out of the plane safely.
(6)“非常感谢。”宽慰和感激的泪水涌出了她的眼睛。泰勒流着泪,感谢耶茨在这段伤脑筋的经历中给予她的指导和支持。
“Thank you so much.” Tears of relief and gratitude spilled out of her eyes. Brimming with tears, Taylor thanked Yates profusely for his guidance and support during the nerve-wracking experience.
(7)耶茨带着安慰的微笑,温柔地拍了拍她的背,对她镇定自若的表现表示自豪。
Yates, with a reassuring/humble smile, patted her tenderly on the back, expressing his pride in her calm and collected performance.
(8)泰勒受到耶茨分享的专业知识和智慧的启发,加强了她成为一名专业飞行员的决心
Taylor, inspired by the expertise and the wisdom shared by Yates, reinforced her resolve to become a professional pilot.
(9)当泰勒向耶茨告别并离开跑道时,她每迈一步都充满自信,她确信自己在追求航空事业的道路上取得了实质性的进步。
As Taylor bid farewell to Yates and walked away from the runway, with each confident stride she was convinced that she had made substantial progress in her pursuit of a career in aviation.

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